Hisashiburi ne, minna! I have now updated 4 my 3rd chap and have just recently taken rest from the HELL my Chinese lessons give me. Tnx for d reviews and pls. review more because you dont know what kind of hell I am experiencing everytime I try to type english fics. So here's the 3rd chap...
Chapter3: Minna o shirase, futastu no shounen o mayotteiru.
(morning came) (at Jun's room)
Pai Long: Jun-sama!!! Jun-sama!!!!! Wake up!!!!!! Jun-sama!!!!!! (wakes Jun)
Jun: (pulls blanket over her body and sits up, rubbing her eyes) Pai long what is it?!!! Cant you see it so early in the morning?
Pai Long: Jun-sama THERE IS A BIG PROBLEM!!!
Jun: Why?!! (goes out of the bed)
Pai Long: Ren-sama is not yet home!!!
Jun: WHAT!!!! So where is otosama?
Pai Long: Dont ask about him... If I were to ask about him I would say DANGER!!!!!
(door opens)
En: JUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pai Long: Uh-oh...
(at the train)
Ren: (wakes up) Where am I? (looks around) STILL IN THE TRAIN??? (looks for Trey and feels something wet and heavy on his lap) WHAT THE!!!!!! (sees Trey lying on his lap drooling in sleep) EEEWWWWWEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! Get off me DUMB-ASS!!!!!!!! (pushes Trey, Trey falls down)
Trey: WHAT'S YOUR PROBLEM?!!! CANT YOU SEE A PERSON SLEEPING???!!!!!!
Ren: You drooled on me idiot!!!!!! (wipes shit w/ hankie) And besides are you a PERSON?!
Trey: GRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!! (eyes on the hankie)
Ren: What's ...your problem?!
Trey: WHAT'S MY SISTER'S HANKIE DOING W/ YOU????!!!!!!!!
Ren: ? (looks at the hankie) why are you asking!!!!!???? (glares at Trey)
Trey: Tell me, are you screwing w/my sister???!!!!!!
Ren: HELL NO!!!!! WHY SHOULD I SCREW UP W/ AN IMBECILE'S SISTER????!!!!!
Trey: WHO ARE YOU CALLING AN IMBECILE, HOT-HEADED SHARK HEAD!!!!!
Ren/Trey: GGGGRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!
so they fought each other and started to break the train little by little due to their tremendous attacks (you know how wild they fight so it's for u to imagine what will happen to the train)
Ren: CHUUKA-ZANMAI!!!!!!!!! (Trey avoids attack, attack hits the train)
Trey: (sticks tounge out)
Ren: Look behind you...
Trey: (looks behind) Uh-oh.... (train debris fall on Trey but unluckily....)
Train: BOOOMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (exploded)
Ren/Trey including people inside: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!
(at the Asakura residence)
Door: knock knock knock!
Anna: (eyes on the TV) Yo, open d door...
Yo: (ears on the headphone) ...
Anna: Open the door!!!
Yo: ....
Anna: YO OPEN THE DOOR!!!!
Yo: ....
Anna: (throws haru-same on Yo's head)
Yo: Ouch!!!!! Why do you have to do that???!!!! Cant you just simply call me if you wnat something???!!!! (removes headphone)
Manta: She called you a million times...
Door: knock knock knock!
Yo: (stands up) COMING..... (opens the door) Pirika?
Pirika: Is onii-chan here?
Yo: Sorry, he isnt. Come in...
(inside the Asakura residence)
Anna: What will be our problem if he's not coming back yet? It's better this way, no idiots around.
Yo, Manta, Amidamaru, Tamao, Ryuu: ANNA!!
Pirika: I am begging you (bows down) please help me look for my brother.
Yo: Ok, I understand you. Fine we will help you look for your brother... (interrupted)
Anna: In one condition, DONT EVER LET THAT IMBECILE ENTER THIS HOUSE.
Yo: Anna, may I ask you, If I will get lost would you do the same?
Anna: Better you get lost w/ the imbecile too... (walks away) I dont want to hear useless speech anymore...
Yo: ..... Dont mind her Pirika, we will look for Horo Horo.
Telephone: RINGGGGGGGGG!!!
Yo: Ryuu get the phone...
Ryuu: (answers the phone) Hello... what?! Really? So what happened???Ok, ok, I will just tell Yo-sama, yes we will be there... ok, ok, bye. (puts the phone down)
Yo: Who is it?
Ryuu: It is ms.Jun and it is an emergency. Ren is also lost and ms.Jun also needs our help!
Yo: I guess I sense some coincidence in here...
Tamao: Yo-sama dont tell me...
Amidamaru: hontou ni gozaru...
Manta: It is possible...
Anna: Somebody's spying...
Everyone: Anna?? I thought you dont want to hear useless speech anymore?
Anna: Did I say such things?!
Yo: Come out over there! You dont need to hide!!! (slashes the sliding door)
Everyone: Bason???!!!!!!
Bason: I know where is Horo-Horo-sama and Ren-bochama. They have been lost together.
Pirika: Where is nii-chan and Ren???!!!!!
Amidamaru: So my senses are right...
Yo: I sensed it first!
Bason: They are stranded in a an....
(hahahaha!!!! cliff-hanger!!!! dont worry I would add chapter 4 immediately!)
(to Ren and Trey)
Ren: (wakes up) Where..am I... (rubbing nape feeling some pain due to the recent explosion) What the!!! (wkaes up Trey) Hey, imbecile wake up!!!
Trey: (wakes up) Ouch! dont touch me!!! My bones hurts!! (looks around) WHERE THE HECK IS THIS!!!!!
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