ok guys heres more

"OK dudes get into possistion! And who are you?"Dewey asked poiting at Megan
"I'm Megan."Megan said
"I brought her,we have to hang out after practice."Zack said
"In other words his father set him up adn wouldn't let him go to practice unless he brought her."Summer said glaring at Megan
"What did I do to make her glare at me?"Megan whispered to Zack
"I think shes just mad I brought someone with out telling her first."Zack whispered back
"I could just wait for you at the pizza place, I don't have to stay here."Megan said eyeing Freddy, Zack didn't seem to notice
"No you don't have to leave."Zack said"You can just sit on the couch over there,practice isn't very long."
"Alright."Megan said walking over to the couch and sat down, still looking at Freddy. Freddy had noticed this,but was ignoring her.

After practice Summer walked over to Katie and Marta.
"Can you believe her?"Summer asked
"Believe who?"Katie asked
"Megan."
"Yeah what about her,she seems nice."Marta said
"Didn't you see her look at Freddy? And Zack looks like he really likes her."Summer said
"You know her and Zack aren't going out Summer you can still go out with him."Katie said
"I never said I wanted to go out with him!" Summer said
"Oh come on we saw how you were glaring at Megan when they walekd in."Marta said
"I just don't like her."
"Cause she was with Zack."Katie said,finsihing Summer's sentence
"Uhh."
"You know we're right."Marta said in a sing-song voice
"BAND SLEEPOVER TONIGHT!"Alicia yelled"MY HOUSE!"
"YOU DON'T HAVE TO YELL!!!!"Freddy yelled"We can here you loud and clear."
"Oh right, sorry ewll you all hear what I said see you all tonight."She said walkng out of the apartment
Katie shook her head and bid goodbye to everyone and walked out the door past Megan and Zack who were talking.
"Katie wait up!"Summer,Marta,Michelle and Eleni yelled and ran out after her, Tomika shook her head and followed the girls.
"ALright uh lady adn gents I'm outta here,see you guys tonight,bye Megan."Freddy said
"Yeah liek we're gonan miss you."Frankie said
"OF COURSE YOU'LL MISS ME!"Freddy yelled
They all laughed and Zack and Megan walked out of teh apartment.

"Freddy is that you?"Mrs.Jones said quietly scared it might be Mr.Jones
"Yeah ma its me."Freddy said
SLAM!
"Freddy go up stairs."Mrs.Jones said instantly
"But-"
"Go upstairs!"She yelled
Freddy walked upstairs just as his father stomped into the kitchen.
"Was that dad?"His little brother,Andy asked
"Yeah that was dad."
"Freddy."Andy said poiting to his Freddy's arm.He looked at his arm, his shirt sleeve had come up a little and you could see a bruise.He pulled his sleeve back down.Freddy heard his fahter comming upstairs,
"Andy go back in your room."Freddy said quietly, Andy nodded nd walked back into his room,shut the door and locked it.
Freddy was now alone in the hallway. He looked at the stairs and saw his father's shadow.He gulped and turned adn walked into his room and locked the door.

"Alright lets go to my room."Alicia said ot the girls, none have the guys had showed up for the party.
"Hey I didn't know you could see inside Freddy's room from here."Katie said
"Yeah but usually hes got the blinds shut, so I never see anything."Alicia said
"Now his blinds are open."Marta said walking over to the window, Katie right behind her. the rest of teh girls came over too
"Oh my god."Katie said.
"Freddy!"Summer,and Marta yelled, he couldn't hear them since his window was shut and locked
(yes there shall be a little violence but not a lot,but i think i'll add more in here on )
"I didn't know Mr.Jones was so violent."Tomika said
"He never was."Alicia said, Katie nodded
Every once in a while they heard faint yells in pain comming form Freddy's room.They saw Mr.Jones lift a bloddy peice of wood and then lowered it harshly, they haer another yell of pain. Then Mr.Jones left,walked downstairs and passed out in the basment."
"I'm going over there."Katie said instanly
"Are you mad?!"Summer asked "After what you just saw?"
"Yeah he needs help."Katie said,then she turned and walked out of teh room and they saw her out the window walk next door and knock. Mrs.Jones let her in.