Ignore this chapter...
Disclaimer: Naruto is not mine. If it were I'd make sure it'd never get licensed...
A/N: okay I know this is like illegal on fanfiction but I reeaaally needa know... I'll put some previews in it just so I don't get in trouble...
Would you like for me to rewrite the chapter?? After reading one of the reviews, I've become sorta skeptical about the chapter... hahaha and maybe the curse thing... =X I'll let you guys choose though... either way I'll prob rewrite the ending for chapter 6...
Choice 1 leave it be but change the ending a little
Choice 2: Change the curse... if it were choice 2, instead of a curse, it'd be a poison... I think it might be more believable... but that would require me to go back and actually change some of the story line in the other chapters...
Also something I'd like to know is if you guys want me to add in Kyuubi... I know a lot of stories have Kyuubi corresponding with Naruto and if you guys REALLY want him in the story that badly, I'll add him in, but otherwise... Kyuubi wont be around for a while (if I decide to add him in at all) errr... if you go with choice 1, I'll add Kyuubi in like this chapter or something, but choice 2 I'd have to look harder for a spot where I could add the fox demon in... in other words, I really don't know if Kyuubi will talk w/ Naruto yet... so yea... add this in your response please!
.:sigh:. This is driving me nuts..
please email me your choice at twisteddreamah [just remove the space between the h and ] or you could just put it in a review...
--- CHOICE 1 PREVIEW! --- What's in store....
Naruto couldn't say anything... The words were ringing through his head. The two older men were silent, not sure what to say.
"Is there any possible way to stop the curse or find more information on it?" he asked quietly.
Sandaime thought about it.
"You'd have to go to the Grass country," he began, "but under the pretense of a mission. I believe there was a man who asked a team from Konoha to assist with a problem in Hidden Grass. There, you could look for information on the curse and if a remedy was found."
"A team?" Naruto muttered, "but we aren't a team yet..." The blonde looked up to the jounin, who was standing idly, listening in on the conversation.
Sandaime turned to Kakashi as well, expecting a response.
Naruto picked up a flier that flew to his feet. Sasuke and Sakura looked at him, curious to see what he had in his hands. The blonde's eyes widened as he read the words on the ad.
"COME ONE, COME ALL TO THE GRAND OPENING OF...
THE AOKUSA DELUXE BATHHOUSE AND SPA
WITH NEW TREATMENTS TO MAKE YOU FEEL RELAXED AND WILL BRING OUT A NEW YOU THAT YOU NEVER KNEW WAS INSIDE!
::Picture of a few young girls::
WE GUARENTEE YOU WILL ENJOY YOUR EXPERIENCE HERE OR YOUR MONEY BACK!"
Beneath the words was a map of the spa's location.
'Looks like I've found you...' Naruto thought to himself.
"Ow!!! What are you doing that for! Na-Na-Naruto-kun!"
Naruto looked at the person gravely, glaring as if expecting the person to blow up any minute.
"I've been looking all over for you! I need your help!"
--- Choice 2 Preview ---
A/N: well I don't want to write a preview yet... but I'll give you guys a summary of the changes...
I'd have to change some of the dreams... and the scenes after... like Naruto hearing voices will be gone... plus the end of chapter six will mostly be changed too... I'll try to make it more believable... hahah...
I'll just rewrite the end right now and let you guys choose...
--- New ending for chapter 6 with poison instead of curse --- I'll start off where the flashback ended
"We went to talk to the Raikage and collected our pay after. But ever since that day, I've been having these pains. I don't know where they're from but..." he hesitated for a moment.
"But... The pain has been spreading to my arm muscles a bit... The pain won't go away anymore with just the pain killers. I think I'm going crazy." The young boy looked down to his hands clasped on to the sheets. "What's going on with me?"
The two adults were silent for a moment. They were severely concerned with this "tattoo."
"Naruto?" the Third said.
"Mn?"
"When did you start getting the pains? Do you remember an exact day or anything?"
Naruto thought hard and silently, trying to recall the night his pains begun. His eyes widened and lit up.
"It was that night. A day or two ago. I wasn't able to sleep and had a nightmare. The pain was unbearable."
"I see.. It all fits in. Just one more piece. Naruto?"
"Hn?"
"Was there a full moon that night?" the Third asked solemnly.
"Yea, yea there was. Why? I don't see what a full moon has to do with my tattoo?"
Kakashi frowned and spoke up.
"You were the one who assassinated the missing Grass-nin, Akimomo Miyu weren't you? Naruto, she wasn't just any normal S-class criminal. She was from the Akimomo Clan, and they have been known to have a mysterious power."
"Hn? Care to explain?" Naruto asked confused.
"You see, Naruto-kun, the Akimomo Clan of Grass Country was one to be feared because of their strange power," the older man explained. "The women at least. The men didn't carry this power. Their power affects their kills and was a weapon for the female members of this clan. When they were killed, an Akimomo would do something but their murderer would die all from a small tattoo, in the form of a crescent moon with a small circle next to it. It was a bloodline ability, but only for one gender of the family. I'm not sure how it is transferred for sure... but there have been rumors of this."
"...."
"Akimomo was the only female member left in the family with the pure blood of an Akimomo. Even I do not know of a way to stop the curse."
"What happens if I don't stop it?" the blonde asked, worriedly.
"I do not know..." the Sandaime paused reluctantly. "But there is a very large chance that you may die."
A/N I don't know if this ending or whatever is better but its up to you guys... btw if u still want choice 2 but u don't like this ending, just say so and hopefully I'll think of a better way to end it... there will be a chapter seven but I want your responses first... I'll give you guys until Friday, because I'm going to want to start on the next chapter...
=) hope to hear from you all.