BlueRMillie: Thank you so much! Sorry to keep you and everyone waiting for...lets see...48 days. I am SO sorry.
Sarah: I don't care what you think about my story. Just don't read it. And I hate to admit it but the first thru five chapters were pretty sucky!
Taylor: I have no idea what you are talking about. The charmed ones dad? Oh, you're only on chapter 5! It's not him its Barbus. Thanx!!!!!
Charmboy4: Calm down, boy! Their okay if you want to strangle me right now, but just remember this: if you do, who would finish this amazing story (and you wouldn't find out what's gonna happen next)? Anyways (oh no) don't you remember Barbus took Phoebe? And Paige isn't in this story dummy (I could always put her in it though)! Of course I could tell some stuff about Phoebe in this chapter (hint, hint).
Gryffindor620: My whole life is funny! And I'm so totally a poet (NOT!) THANX!!!!!!
P3charmed4eva: I'm a blonde what'd you expect? And Barbus is comin back a lot cause if he don't he'd be in my room scarin the bejesus out of me!
lil-whitelighter111488: How dare you use my word! (just playin) It's not even a word. It's actually anyway but I can't say a lots of stuffs in reality without putting an "s" on it. Examples: peoples, anyways, carefuls, craps, stuffs, and a lots!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AN: Only 7 reviews on the latest chapter... you guys are mean tear dropping on key-board. But hey, life sucks so I'm just gonna keep writin reviews or not! But I'm still gonna say: REVIEW! REVIEW! REVIEW! (you can't see Sarah's review because I made it go away "magically") I just realized in chapter 1 that I put room 247 as Piper and Leo's homeroom. Now that I think about I think I copied off my own pen name: LeoPiper24/7
Chapter 8: Revenge Or Something Like It
Phoebe: Okay, Phoebe think. How can you contact your sisters? How?
As she was thinking this Barbus and a woman dressed in a store clerk uniform appeared.
Barbus: Trying to contact someone?
Phoebe: Maybe. Who's she?
Nikki: Your worst nightmare
Phoebe: You don't look like elevators to me
Nikki: Sorry, I just always wanted to say that.
Phoebe: Well, I've always wanted to say—
Barbus: Enough female bonding! It's getting time to actually kill a charmed one.
Phoebe: Which one?
Barbus: You'll find out soon.
Leo: Phoebe?! Where are you?!
Phoebe: Leo?!
Barbus: And that would be now. (switches to Phoebe's voice) In here!
Phoebe: Wait! Don't come in here Leo!
Nikki: Shut up!
Leo: Why, Phoe—Barbus.
Phoebe: What's wrong with Piper?!
Leo: No time to explain. Make up a spell to get us out of here
Phoebe: But—
Leo: Now!
Nikki then telekinetically flinged Leo into a wall. Piper fell out of his arms lying unconscious on the ground. Nikki grabbed a knife out of her pocket and started towards Piper but then stopped.
Nikki: (whispers) Phoebe, hurry.
Barbus: Nikki, why'd you stop!
Phoebe:
Let us go Back to San Francisco Only piper, Leo, and me And not Barbus and Nikki!
Phoebe, Piper, and Leo then disappeared in a piercing white light.
Barbus: I knew I should have hired a darklighter!
JAMIACA
Andy: Prue, don't we have to get to the manor?
Prue: Yup.
Andy: Then why are we still here?
Prue: Shhh. I'm trying to concentrate.
Andy: Why?
Prue: I'm trying to make up a spell
Andy: Those poetry classes would've helped
Prue: Oh, be quiet!
MANOR
Phoebe: Thank you so much boys. You can put the boy on the floor and the girl on the couch.
Jason: Sure, Pheebs
Phoebe: Here you go. 10 bucks each
Miles: Thanks
Phoebe: No thank you. Buh bye now.
Cole: see ya.
Phoebe: (to herself) Boys just love me.
Cole: Phoebe?
Phoebe: What?
But the next thing she saw was complete darkness
ONE HOUR LATER
Woman: Hey guys!
Prue: Phoebe, you're back!
Prue ran over to her and gave her a big hug.
Phoebe: Actually (voice gets deeper) I'm not
Andy: This can't be good
Prue: Who are you?! Where's Phoebe?!
Faux Phoebe changes into an older (an: I mean really older) man figure
Prue: (an: she says this in a pleasant voice btw.) Andy, why don't you go home?
Andy: But, Prue...
Prue: Now!
Andy left leaving Prue to fend for herself.
Prue: Who are you?
Man: Leo may recognize me
Prue: What does Leo have to do with this?
Man: Everything
He then flinged Prue out the window and vanished in thin air.
AN: Well...what did Leo do o piss off this guy? And does anyone but me see that Nikki may be getting a little soft? What happened to Phoebe? Does anyone think I should put Paige in this? Should I get back to the high school stuff? Will I update soon? Am I asking too many questions? Don't know. Just stick around! (Now click that attractive purple button down there in the lower left corner and write me a review) REVIEW! REVIEW! REVIEW!
Sarah: I don't care what you think about my story. Just don't read it. And I hate to admit it but the first thru five chapters were pretty sucky!
Taylor: I have no idea what you are talking about. The charmed ones dad? Oh, you're only on chapter 5! It's not him its Barbus. Thanx!!!!!
Charmboy4: Calm down, boy! Their okay if you want to strangle me right now, but just remember this: if you do, who would finish this amazing story (and you wouldn't find out what's gonna happen next)? Anyways (oh no) don't you remember Barbus took Phoebe? And Paige isn't in this story dummy (I could always put her in it though)! Of course I could tell some stuff about Phoebe in this chapter (hint, hint).
Gryffindor620: My whole life is funny! And I'm so totally a poet (NOT!) THANX!!!!!!
P3charmed4eva: I'm a blonde what'd you expect? And Barbus is comin back a lot cause if he don't he'd be in my room scarin the bejesus out of me!
lil-whitelighter111488: How dare you use my word! (just playin) It's not even a word. It's actually anyway but I can't say a lots of stuffs in reality without putting an "s" on it. Examples: peoples, anyways, carefuls, craps, stuffs, and a lots!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AN: Only 7 reviews on the latest chapter... you guys are mean tear dropping on key-board. But hey, life sucks so I'm just gonna keep writin reviews or not! But I'm still gonna say: REVIEW! REVIEW! REVIEW! (you can't see Sarah's review because I made it go away "magically") I just realized in chapter 1 that I put room 247 as Piper and Leo's homeroom. Now that I think about I think I copied off my own pen name: LeoPiper24/7
Chapter 8: Revenge Or Something Like It
Phoebe: Okay, Phoebe think. How can you contact your sisters? How?
As she was thinking this Barbus and a woman dressed in a store clerk uniform appeared.
Barbus: Trying to contact someone?
Phoebe: Maybe. Who's she?
Nikki: Your worst nightmare
Phoebe: You don't look like elevators to me
Nikki: Sorry, I just always wanted to say that.
Phoebe: Well, I've always wanted to say—
Barbus: Enough female bonding! It's getting time to actually kill a charmed one.
Phoebe: Which one?
Barbus: You'll find out soon.
Leo: Phoebe?! Where are you?!
Phoebe: Leo?!
Barbus: And that would be now. (switches to Phoebe's voice) In here!
Phoebe: Wait! Don't come in here Leo!
Nikki: Shut up!
Leo: Why, Phoe—Barbus.
Phoebe: What's wrong with Piper?!
Leo: No time to explain. Make up a spell to get us out of here
Phoebe: But—
Leo: Now!
Nikki then telekinetically flinged Leo into a wall. Piper fell out of his arms lying unconscious on the ground. Nikki grabbed a knife out of her pocket and started towards Piper but then stopped.
Nikki: (whispers) Phoebe, hurry.
Barbus: Nikki, why'd you stop!
Phoebe:
Let us go Back to San Francisco Only piper, Leo, and me And not Barbus and Nikki!
Phoebe, Piper, and Leo then disappeared in a piercing white light.
Barbus: I knew I should have hired a darklighter!
JAMIACA
Andy: Prue, don't we have to get to the manor?
Prue: Yup.
Andy: Then why are we still here?
Prue: Shhh. I'm trying to concentrate.
Andy: Why?
Prue: I'm trying to make up a spell
Andy: Those poetry classes would've helped
Prue: Oh, be quiet!
MANOR
Phoebe: Thank you so much boys. You can put the boy on the floor and the girl on the couch.
Jason: Sure, Pheebs
Phoebe: Here you go. 10 bucks each
Miles: Thanks
Phoebe: No thank you. Buh bye now.
Cole: see ya.
Phoebe: (to herself) Boys just love me.
Cole: Phoebe?
Phoebe: What?
But the next thing she saw was complete darkness
ONE HOUR LATER
Woman: Hey guys!
Prue: Phoebe, you're back!
Prue ran over to her and gave her a big hug.
Phoebe: Actually (voice gets deeper) I'm not
Andy: This can't be good
Prue: Who are you?! Where's Phoebe?!
Faux Phoebe changes into an older (an: I mean really older) man figure
Prue: (an: she says this in a pleasant voice btw.) Andy, why don't you go home?
Andy: But, Prue...
Prue: Now!
Andy left leaving Prue to fend for herself.
Prue: Who are you?
Man: Leo may recognize me
Prue: What does Leo have to do with this?
Man: Everything
He then flinged Prue out the window and vanished in thin air.
AN: Well...what did Leo do o piss off this guy? And does anyone but me see that Nikki may be getting a little soft? What happened to Phoebe? Does anyone think I should put Paige in this? Should I get back to the high school stuff? Will I update soon? Am I asking too many questions? Don't know. Just stick around! (Now click that attractive purple button down there in the lower left corner and write me a review) REVIEW! REVIEW! REVIEW!