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WARNING! VERY GRAPHIC DEATH SCENE!

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Eternal Pain Of A Broken Soul
Chapter two:
To Live and Die

Ray's eyes closed. The small hotel room wasn't cleaned since the murder. He had read the report and just about ordered the Majestics and All Starz to stay. Knowing they wouldn't be able to handle it.

The smell of blood reached him outside, making him stop at the door; others not being able to go in. "I'll give you all fair warning. There's... a hell of a lot of blood in here. I think Gary, Kevin, Ian and Spencer should stay outside for right now… They said four at a time anyway."

Kai nodded as the others took their position on the nearby wall.

Walking inside, even the Demolition boys scrunched their nose with disgust. Blood was everywhere. And a body was hanging from the ceiling fan. It was Mr. Kelsey, he was naked and it was obvious that he had been tortured, then killed, and finally ripped open. It was only when Ray noticed what hung him did he turn away, unable to see his friend like that.

"Ray?"

"Fine."

Kai gave him a disbelieving look but dropped it, Ray tried to calm himself as the Others walked off, searching for clues. He took a deep breath but immediately regretted it as he smelled the blood, lingering traces of fear, and the slow rotting of the intestine; which were spilling onto the floor from the gaping hole that went completely through his lower torso.

Thinking of who could have possibly done such a hideous act made his hands clench subconsciously, drawing small drops of blood, but before they could drop, someone had grabbed his hands and suddenly they were wrapped by what looked like a scarf.

He looked up to see Bryan, staring at him blankly; Weird. He didn't even hear him approach.

Figuring that his gaze on the old man's once relaxed kind face (Which now had empty eye sockets and a caved in nose) he had lost track of his surroundings.

Staring confusedly at Bryan, he immediately felt like an idiot when he simply replied.

"if you get your blood on the carpet you'll mess up the, needed, DNA testing we're going to do later." Ray nodded, his eyes slit and felt something warm and wet run down his cheek. It was only then that he realized that he had been crying while he was in his trance.

Bryan sighed, "Look you can't handle this; you were too close to this old man and you'll-"

"Kelsey. Mr. Kelsey. That was his name so use it. Don't disrespect the dead. I'll take a few of the things you've found now and take the others with me down to the BBA Labs. Tell Kai."

Without another word, Ray wordlessly took the case, which Bryan had been holding, that held a few of the already found 'Could-be-clues' and walked out the door; not even waiting for a reply.

Bryan sighed softly as the door closed, shaking his head he looked up at the old—Mr. Kelsey, who was hanging from a ceiling fan by his own spine.

Ray walked past the others without looking at them, wordlessly they followed; even Ian knowing enough not to say a word as further tears slipped down Ray's cheeks. Though as soon as they got outside, he bottled it up, and bore it. Putting on his usual expression he walked down the street.

Remaining tears drying rapidly in the strong wind and fast pace.

Revised it a bit.

Well? Hope none of you tossed de cookies. Sorry but it had to be done. I tried to make it not TOO sick.

I also made this one a lil short because I didn't want to give away TOO much in one chapter and I thought that was a nice way to end.

Sorry, XX again.

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The Dark Huntress Cara