How Mary Sue Effects Commoners

In this casual city where the cast of Yu Yu Hakusho lives, we can see what effects Mary Sue has on their daily lives and the lives of others that inhabit this town.

Case Two :: A Love to Fight

Now that we have seen the dreadful effects on Kurama, let us visit the second most wounded, Hiei.

Here we are viewing an average day. Hiei sits in a tree in the mid afternoon. The weather is fair as he keeps alert, yet still restful.

Now, watch closely as a girl makes her way through the park. She wears her schoolgirl uniform, which is that of neither Kurama, Yusuke, or Kuwabara's schools, and is not the most fashionable uniform ever to exist, either. Her dark brown hair hair is tied back in an average ponytail with bumps in it, and her eyes are dark brown. She definately looks like she's from Japan, as she should. She walks by Hiei, and catches his eye. She seems to not even notice him. Now, he jumps down fromt he tree, in her path.

The unnamed girl is taken aback! She gasps as she steps backwards, feeling threatened by this bizarrly dressed and shot man. Hiei turns upon her and grins. "I'd like a rematch, now."

The girl looks clueless. "Rematch?" she asks, stepping away from the person she suspects as crazy. He smirks.

"Yes. This time I will not go easy on you," Hiei says. He pulls out his katana, and glances at the girl as if expecting her to make some snide remark. However, she takes another step back, in fear.

"I don't want to fight!" She screams as steps backwards even faster. Hiei approaches her as she continues to step back, yet he encloses the distance. Then, he takes a strike at the girl, who ducks and screams as she throws her hands over her head. The tree behind her is shreaded into thousands of tiny splinters, several of them pricking her as she is not experienced enough to know what to do to avoid them. She uncovers her head as the fire demon turns upon her again, smirking, very pleased with his demonstration of power. The girl now attempts to crawl away like a crab.

But alas, Hiei is determined to fight this girl. He takes his sword and strikes the ground in which had she not stopped moving would have marked the end of her life. Her eyes widen in fear as she jumps onto her feet, screaming again, and starts running in the other direction. Hiei glares, enraged by the girl who is not fighting back.

"Why do you not fight back?" he scowls. The girl still apppears scared out of her wits.

"Because I don't want to fight! Just leave me alone, you creep!" She turns to run off, but then Hiei speaks again.

"Wait!" he calls out to her. She stops in her tracks, and turns to look at him.

"What?" He approaches her, sheathing his sword.

"I'm sorry for trying to make you fight," he says, looking ashamed. The girl raises an eyebrow at his odd behavior.

"Okay..." she says in disbelief as she starts to back away, again. Hiei takes a step forward, not letting the distance between the two grow.

"And one more thing," Hiei says. The girl pauses, obviously afraid of whatever he may say. "I love you." The girl looks very dumbstruck, and pulls out her cell phone, ready to call the police on this madman who she now believes to be an escaped patient of a mental hospital.

Hiei looks very hurt to her reaction. He looks up at her. "What, do you not love me back?" he asks her, a desperate tone in his voice. She shakes her head.

"No!" she yells at him. "I don't even know you!" At this, she takes off. Hiei now jumps back onto his tree, resting again like nothing at all has happened.