Meta-Knight's Apprentice
Chapter 4: Into the Mountain
A/N: Ah, my first flame for this story! Let's see it... Ah, from Neo- Moon27. Here is as follows.
God I hate obvious Garu Stus and self inserts. The mere fact that you have an OC appearing in such a manner means your story is crap. If you want to write your damned personal fantasies keep them on your own fucking hard drive.
Well, Neo-Moon27, I'll tell what I thought of this flame. This proved to be pretty pointless if you ask me. You put no reason why its crap other than an OC is in it. Try reading the other chapters. Just because a character I made is putted into the story doesn't make it crap. He's one of the main characters, sure. But he isn't the most important character in the story. And this isn't a personal fantasy. It's a story I thought of. I really dislike these short flames with absolutely no description whatsoever.
And thank you for the kind as always reviews, Joe97. You make actually want to work on my stories.
But yeah, onward to chapter 4!
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Meta-Knight, Kirby, and Chris went off the ship and near the mountain cave entrance. The others stayed to guard the Halberd II.
"Should we enter, sire?" Chris asked.
"That's the only reason why we came here." Meta-Knight replied. The trio went inside the mountain. It's was dark, cold, and creepy looking.
"Meda, lets go quickly." said Kirby.
Meta-Knight nodded. "Yes. We will."
The trio continued walking, but then saw demons appear!
"Ah! There's surrounding us!" Chris yelled and drew out his blue saber. Meta-Knight drew out his crimson sword. Kirby did not have a weapon, but got into a battle pose. The demons began the assault. Meta-Knight slashed at one in the chest, mortally wounding it while Chris jumped into the air and breathed out icy breath, freezing three demons instantly. Kirby sucked in one and got the "Dark" ability. Kirby had two horns on his head, had a tail, bat wings, and a saber arm on his right arm. Kirby ran up to one demon and slashed its head clean off and blew the other one away with a dark energy ball. The trio was taking down many in a matter of minutes, but they were getting weakened.
"We can't keep this up much longer, sire!" Chris breathed heavily, but fought on.
"I know, but we'll take as many of them as we can!" Meta-Knight stated, fighting fiercely.
Kirby was getting tired. He breathed heavily and shot many dark energy balls at demons further away. The trio was now surrounded and tired. One demon went over to Chris and was about to kill him, but half his body was chopped off and a gunshot was heard. A demon fell down with a bullet hole in its head.
"What the?" said Meta-Knight.
A yellow Kirby wearing a red trench coat, black pants, a leather belt, and a scouter on his right eye was seen behind them. He had long black hair. One of his bangs covered his right cheek. In his right hand was a large claymore while his left had a steaming pistol. He smirked at Chris.
"Do I always need to protect you, little brother?" the yellow dreamlander stated.
Chris had shock and anger in his eyes. "Regulus?! What are you doing here?!"
Regulus smirked. "Is that anyway to thank your eldest brother?"
"You know this guy?" Meta-Knight asked Chris.
"He's my older brother." Chris sighed in disgust.
Regulus began charging up for an attack. The demon charged at him, but Regulus jumped into the air and began firing many bullets down at the demons, and then swiped downward with his claymore, releasing a large sword beam. Instantly, all the demons were slain. Regulus somehow put his claymore into his trench coat and went up to the trio.
"Are these your bodyguards?" Regulus said to Chris. Chris shook his fist in anger.
"They are my friends! Meta-Knight here hospitalized me when my Shadow Star crashed!" Chris explained to his brother. Regulus laughed afterwards.
"I told you Shadow Stars suck! You didn't listen though!" Regulus laughed some more. Meta-Knight and Kirby blinked.
'They're related? They act nothing like each other.' Meta-Knight pondered.
Chris was starting to get really sick of Regulus. "Regulus, what are you doing here?"
"I came to look for a fight, of course!" Regulus stated as he put his pistol in his trench coat. Chris shook his head in pity. "Now what are you doing here?"
"We're looking for the Star Stones. There's one in this cave supposedly." Chris replied.
"If that's the case, let me help you. I guessing that we'll have to fight guys to get the stones." suggested Regulus.
'He never changed. He still only wants to fight.' Chris thought. "I'm going to regret this, but I guess you can help us." Chris stated.
Regulus laughed. "Don't worry, little bro. We'll get them stones."
The two greatest treasure hunters in the world, T.A.C. and a Sword Knight named Slaz were meeting with King Dedede. King Dedede offered the two 50 grand to get the Star Stones for him.
T.A.C. pondered. 'If I get those stones, I'll be famous! Everyone will remember me as the greatest treasure hunter in the world! It will be a difficult task though.'
'If I get those stones, everyone will want me to find treasures for them! I'll get tons of cash!' Slaz thought to himself.
"We'll do it." T.A.C. and Slaz stated at the same time.
"Excellent!!! My men and I will assist you and protect you from any harm!" King Dedede replied. The two treasure hunters nodded as they went inside the biggest armored ship King Dedede bought. King Dedede and Rash also went inside the ship. 4 other ships accompanied the giant ship. King Dedede sat in the captain's chair, eating a cake that he told a Waddle Dee to steal and ordered for the ship to take off. The ships began heading off.
"Where's the closest stone?" King Dedede asked the treasure hunters.
"I heard that there's one in Mt. Frigon." Slaz replied. "Mt. Frigon is 46 miles northeast from here."
"Alright then! To Mt. Frigon! Get me another cake!" King Dedede yelled. A Waddle Dee ran over to King Dedede and gave him another cake.
Chris, Meta-Knight, Kirby, and Regulus walked deeper into the cave which slowly became a cavern. Waterfalls fell into nothingness and water dripped from the ceiling to the ground. Kirby liked the wonderful sight and so did Meta-Knight and Chris, but Regulus didn't seem to care. Chris looked at his older brother. He never seemed to like beautiful sights like these. He didn't care where he was unless it was the battlefield. Chris sighed.
"This certainly is a beautiful area." Meta-Knight stated, Kirby and Chris agreed. Regulus showed no emotion at all.
The foursome saw a shiny light ahead of them. Regulus looked through his scouter.
"It's a stone. Perhaps it's a Star Stone?" Regulus suggested.
"We'd best check it out." Meta-Knight replied as the group went towards the stone. Suddenly, a metallic being that has rust in many areas came out from the ground. It was equipped with an arm cannon on its right arm, laser eyes, rocket arms and legs, and a plasma barrier on its left arm.
Regulus smirked. "Wow! It's a guardian to protect the stone! This should be fun!" Regulus stated as he drew out his pistol and claymore. Chris and Meta-Knight drew out their swords as Kirby got into a battle stance.
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Oh no! A robot is going to attack our heroes! Will Kirby and friends get the Star Stone? Is the robot going to crush them into fluff? Oooohhhh, the suspense! Review if you wish to.
And if you're reading this Neo-Moon27 and/or other readers who might want to flame me, if you flame me, put in more details into your flames. Like why my story sucks or whatever, just saying that its crap doesn't exactly help me on how to improve my stories. Believe me, if it's unintelligent to me, then its rubbish to me. Call me what you wish, from wiseass to retarded fool for I am nether. Insulting me won't do you a thing.
Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm off to do other things. See you later. (disappears)
A/N: Ah, my first flame for this story! Let's see it... Ah, from Neo- Moon27. Here is as follows.
God I hate obvious Garu Stus and self inserts. The mere fact that you have an OC appearing in such a manner means your story is crap. If you want to write your damned personal fantasies keep them on your own fucking hard drive.
Well, Neo-Moon27, I'll tell what I thought of this flame. This proved to be pretty pointless if you ask me. You put no reason why its crap other than an OC is in it. Try reading the other chapters. Just because a character I made is putted into the story doesn't make it crap. He's one of the main characters, sure. But he isn't the most important character in the story. And this isn't a personal fantasy. It's a story I thought of. I really dislike these short flames with absolutely no description whatsoever.
And thank you for the kind as always reviews, Joe97. You make actually want to work on my stories.
But yeah, onward to chapter 4!
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Meta-Knight, Kirby, and Chris went off the ship and near the mountain cave entrance. The others stayed to guard the Halberd II.
"Should we enter, sire?" Chris asked.
"That's the only reason why we came here." Meta-Knight replied. The trio went inside the mountain. It's was dark, cold, and creepy looking.
"Meda, lets go quickly." said Kirby.
Meta-Knight nodded. "Yes. We will."
The trio continued walking, but then saw demons appear!
"Ah! There's surrounding us!" Chris yelled and drew out his blue saber. Meta-Knight drew out his crimson sword. Kirby did not have a weapon, but got into a battle pose. The demons began the assault. Meta-Knight slashed at one in the chest, mortally wounding it while Chris jumped into the air and breathed out icy breath, freezing three demons instantly. Kirby sucked in one and got the "Dark" ability. Kirby had two horns on his head, had a tail, bat wings, and a saber arm on his right arm. Kirby ran up to one demon and slashed its head clean off and blew the other one away with a dark energy ball. The trio was taking down many in a matter of minutes, but they were getting weakened.
"We can't keep this up much longer, sire!" Chris breathed heavily, but fought on.
"I know, but we'll take as many of them as we can!" Meta-Knight stated, fighting fiercely.
Kirby was getting tired. He breathed heavily and shot many dark energy balls at demons further away. The trio was now surrounded and tired. One demon went over to Chris and was about to kill him, but half his body was chopped off and a gunshot was heard. A demon fell down with a bullet hole in its head.
"What the?" said Meta-Knight.
A yellow Kirby wearing a red trench coat, black pants, a leather belt, and a scouter on his right eye was seen behind them. He had long black hair. One of his bangs covered his right cheek. In his right hand was a large claymore while his left had a steaming pistol. He smirked at Chris.
"Do I always need to protect you, little brother?" the yellow dreamlander stated.
Chris had shock and anger in his eyes. "Regulus?! What are you doing here?!"
Regulus smirked. "Is that anyway to thank your eldest brother?"
"You know this guy?" Meta-Knight asked Chris.
"He's my older brother." Chris sighed in disgust.
Regulus began charging up for an attack. The demon charged at him, but Regulus jumped into the air and began firing many bullets down at the demons, and then swiped downward with his claymore, releasing a large sword beam. Instantly, all the demons were slain. Regulus somehow put his claymore into his trench coat and went up to the trio.
"Are these your bodyguards?" Regulus said to Chris. Chris shook his fist in anger.
"They are my friends! Meta-Knight here hospitalized me when my Shadow Star crashed!" Chris explained to his brother. Regulus laughed afterwards.
"I told you Shadow Stars suck! You didn't listen though!" Regulus laughed some more. Meta-Knight and Kirby blinked.
'They're related? They act nothing like each other.' Meta-Knight pondered.
Chris was starting to get really sick of Regulus. "Regulus, what are you doing here?"
"I came to look for a fight, of course!" Regulus stated as he put his pistol in his trench coat. Chris shook his head in pity. "Now what are you doing here?"
"We're looking for the Star Stones. There's one in this cave supposedly." Chris replied.
"If that's the case, let me help you. I guessing that we'll have to fight guys to get the stones." suggested Regulus.
'He never changed. He still only wants to fight.' Chris thought. "I'm going to regret this, but I guess you can help us." Chris stated.
Regulus laughed. "Don't worry, little bro. We'll get them stones."
The two greatest treasure hunters in the world, T.A.C. and a Sword Knight named Slaz were meeting with King Dedede. King Dedede offered the two 50 grand to get the Star Stones for him.
T.A.C. pondered. 'If I get those stones, I'll be famous! Everyone will remember me as the greatest treasure hunter in the world! It will be a difficult task though.'
'If I get those stones, everyone will want me to find treasures for them! I'll get tons of cash!' Slaz thought to himself.
"We'll do it." T.A.C. and Slaz stated at the same time.
"Excellent!!! My men and I will assist you and protect you from any harm!" King Dedede replied. The two treasure hunters nodded as they went inside the biggest armored ship King Dedede bought. King Dedede and Rash also went inside the ship. 4 other ships accompanied the giant ship. King Dedede sat in the captain's chair, eating a cake that he told a Waddle Dee to steal and ordered for the ship to take off. The ships began heading off.
"Where's the closest stone?" King Dedede asked the treasure hunters.
"I heard that there's one in Mt. Frigon." Slaz replied. "Mt. Frigon is 46 miles northeast from here."
"Alright then! To Mt. Frigon! Get me another cake!" King Dedede yelled. A Waddle Dee ran over to King Dedede and gave him another cake.
Chris, Meta-Knight, Kirby, and Regulus walked deeper into the cave which slowly became a cavern. Waterfalls fell into nothingness and water dripped from the ceiling to the ground. Kirby liked the wonderful sight and so did Meta-Knight and Chris, but Regulus didn't seem to care. Chris looked at his older brother. He never seemed to like beautiful sights like these. He didn't care where he was unless it was the battlefield. Chris sighed.
"This certainly is a beautiful area." Meta-Knight stated, Kirby and Chris agreed. Regulus showed no emotion at all.
The foursome saw a shiny light ahead of them. Regulus looked through his scouter.
"It's a stone. Perhaps it's a Star Stone?" Regulus suggested.
"We'd best check it out." Meta-Knight replied as the group went towards the stone. Suddenly, a metallic being that has rust in many areas came out from the ground. It was equipped with an arm cannon on its right arm, laser eyes, rocket arms and legs, and a plasma barrier on its left arm.
Regulus smirked. "Wow! It's a guardian to protect the stone! This should be fun!" Regulus stated as he drew out his pistol and claymore. Chris and Meta-Knight drew out their swords as Kirby got into a battle stance.
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Oh no! A robot is going to attack our heroes! Will Kirby and friends get the Star Stone? Is the robot going to crush them into fluff? Oooohhhh, the suspense! Review if you wish to.
And if you're reading this Neo-Moon27 and/or other readers who might want to flame me, if you flame me, put in more details into your flames. Like why my story sucks or whatever, just saying that its crap doesn't exactly help me on how to improve my stories. Believe me, if it's unintelligent to me, then its rubbish to me. Call me what you wish, from wiseass to retarded fool for I am nether. Insulting me won't do you a thing.
Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm off to do other things. See you later. (disappears)