Author's note: I'm gonna revise chapter 5 and delete the chapter five I
have now. That star wars stuff is just.dumb. Melissa and poty-bag have the
right idea of what should be going on in this story. So basically, parts of
the revised chapter five belong to poty-bag because they suggested the
idea. I'm sorry to disappoint some of you that this isn't chapter six...
But I still need ideas! Please, tell me your ideas! So in a way, it's not
my story but my reviewers' story! That'd be cool.
