Authors Note: Oh wow! Thanks loads pickle-queen! Your Review was lovely!
That's the first review I've had and it made me feel really happy *does
really happy dance*!(Ask my friends, I wouldn't shut up about it!!!) Well
here's the update for the story and I'd love more of the positive reviews
and would appreciate some help with names. It is Kruger who is the cop that
Deacon Bites at the Party at his place isn't it? If anyone knows if it
isn't and knows his name would you tell me please?!!!
"I can hear him Deacon." She said longingly. Deacon stopped and Raven stopped beside him. "What do you want?" Deacon asked loudly, not directing the question to anyone in particular. A loud rustling came from behind them and a low husky voice said "Give me your wallet man" Deacon smiled at Raven and turned around to face the shabbily clothed man behind him. "Hey, I'm sorry man but I don't carry my wallet on me. I find it stops people like you getting what you want from me. Hey but maybe we could come to a bit of a compromise." He said, letting go of Raven's hand. The man looked at Deacon "What sort of compromise?" he asked suspiciously. "Well, how about this." He said moving forwards with astonishing speed and forcing the man's head back with one hand and holding onto his jaw with the other. He sank his fangs into the man's neck, neatly severing his jugular and causing blood to spurt across his face and neck, he growled savagely as he forced his fangs deeper, causing more of the blood to pour into his throat. Raven was at his side instantly. Deacon moved his mouth from the man's neck and allowed Raven to kiss the blood from his lips and tongue before she sank her own fangs into the neck of the still struggling man while Deacon held him firmly. Blood trickled from the man's mouth down Deacon's hand. Deacon dropped the now dead man and turned to Raven. He smiled as he saw her face, blood trickling down her jaw onto her neck, her fangs still dripping blood. He kissed her, licking the blood from her lips and neck as she growled lightly. "I want more Deacon." She said, smiling so her fangs glinted in the darkness. Deacon kissed her again. "I know you do," he said breathlessly, lifting his blood-covered hand to his mouth and swiftly licking the blood from it. "Nicely done boss" came a young sounding voice. Deacon whipped around to face the speaker "Kruger?" he said vacantly "Well put me out at sunrise and call me a pureblood. The bastard turned." Raven growled deep in her throat as the young man dressed in police gear walked to Deacon "Hey cutie." He said to Raven, who glared at him in utter disgust and hissed a warning to him. Deacon put an arm around Raven "What do you want? I gave you what you wanted, what now." He said, a threat hidden in his steely voice. Kruger backed off a pace "Hey man, I just wanted to thank you, and serve you again." He dropped to his knees before Deacon "Istae corva est La Magra" he said keeping his eyes rooted to a spot somewhere off to Deacon's right. Deacon sighed impatiently "Will you get up and get lost you stupid f**k" he said threateningly. Kruger got to his feet hastily and stood to the side of the alley to let Deacon and Raven pass. He took a swipe at Raven who turned swiftly and grabbed him by his wrist, sinking her nails into his flesh. She growled at him angrily. Deacon stopped when he heard a loud snapping noise, he turned looking puzzled and saw Kruger hissing at Raven and cradling his arm, which was dripping blood from long, deep scratches and seemed to be hanging at a very odd angle. "You stupid bitch." Kruger said "You broke my arm". Raven looked at Deacon, who was smiling viciously. "You know Kruger, you're even a pain in the ass as a vampire." He said, walking to stand next to Raven again and sneering. "Let me guess, you've been eating vermin to stay alive." Kruger looked at him, fear in his eyes "I've bitten humans." He said unconvincingly. "You're a pathetic excuse for a vampire" Deacon said putting an arm around Raven "Now look here, this is a real vampire. She has the bloodlust the ferocity that a vampire should have. You on the other hand, live off rats and cower before another vampire. You're worse than the vermin you eat." He looked at Raven, "Do you want to finish him or should I?" he asked her. Raven looked at him, smiling as viciously as he, and extended her fangs. Deacon dropped his arm from her shoulders. "You're in for a tough end." He said to Kruger. He kissed Raven briefly "Go get him then sweet heart" he said softly to her. Raven walked forwards three steps to bring her closer to Kruger. He stood and looked her over. His arm had stopped bleeding and the scratches were healing rapidly. They stood facing each other in silence until Raven grew impatient "Are we gonna do this or not?" she said venomously. Kruger reached a hand inside his jacket and pulled out a gun. Raven glanced at it and smiled, flashing her fangs. "Is that all you're gonna use?" she laughed. Kruger pulled the trigger, causing the semi-automatic pistol to spray the area before him with bullets. Raven was no longer there. Kruger looked around and didn't notice a dark figure drop silently from the metal bar above his head. He felt a hand on his shoulder and twisted sharply. He found himself face to face with Raven, who lashed out at him with her nails. He staggered back, his own blood dripping into his eyes from deep scratches across his face. He lifted the gun again and Raven didn't move.
"I can hear him Deacon." She said longingly. Deacon stopped and Raven stopped beside him. "What do you want?" Deacon asked loudly, not directing the question to anyone in particular. A loud rustling came from behind them and a low husky voice said "Give me your wallet man" Deacon smiled at Raven and turned around to face the shabbily clothed man behind him. "Hey, I'm sorry man but I don't carry my wallet on me. I find it stops people like you getting what you want from me. Hey but maybe we could come to a bit of a compromise." He said, letting go of Raven's hand. The man looked at Deacon "What sort of compromise?" he asked suspiciously. "Well, how about this." He said moving forwards with astonishing speed and forcing the man's head back with one hand and holding onto his jaw with the other. He sank his fangs into the man's neck, neatly severing his jugular and causing blood to spurt across his face and neck, he growled savagely as he forced his fangs deeper, causing more of the blood to pour into his throat. Raven was at his side instantly. Deacon moved his mouth from the man's neck and allowed Raven to kiss the blood from his lips and tongue before she sank her own fangs into the neck of the still struggling man while Deacon held him firmly. Blood trickled from the man's mouth down Deacon's hand. Deacon dropped the now dead man and turned to Raven. He smiled as he saw her face, blood trickling down her jaw onto her neck, her fangs still dripping blood. He kissed her, licking the blood from her lips and neck as she growled lightly. "I want more Deacon." She said, smiling so her fangs glinted in the darkness. Deacon kissed her again. "I know you do," he said breathlessly, lifting his blood-covered hand to his mouth and swiftly licking the blood from it. "Nicely done boss" came a young sounding voice. Deacon whipped around to face the speaker "Kruger?" he said vacantly "Well put me out at sunrise and call me a pureblood. The bastard turned." Raven growled deep in her throat as the young man dressed in police gear walked to Deacon "Hey cutie." He said to Raven, who glared at him in utter disgust and hissed a warning to him. Deacon put an arm around Raven "What do you want? I gave you what you wanted, what now." He said, a threat hidden in his steely voice. Kruger backed off a pace "Hey man, I just wanted to thank you, and serve you again." He dropped to his knees before Deacon "Istae corva est La Magra" he said keeping his eyes rooted to a spot somewhere off to Deacon's right. Deacon sighed impatiently "Will you get up and get lost you stupid f**k" he said threateningly. Kruger got to his feet hastily and stood to the side of the alley to let Deacon and Raven pass. He took a swipe at Raven who turned swiftly and grabbed him by his wrist, sinking her nails into his flesh. She growled at him angrily. Deacon stopped when he heard a loud snapping noise, he turned looking puzzled and saw Kruger hissing at Raven and cradling his arm, which was dripping blood from long, deep scratches and seemed to be hanging at a very odd angle. "You stupid bitch." Kruger said "You broke my arm". Raven looked at Deacon, who was smiling viciously. "You know Kruger, you're even a pain in the ass as a vampire." He said, walking to stand next to Raven again and sneering. "Let me guess, you've been eating vermin to stay alive." Kruger looked at him, fear in his eyes "I've bitten humans." He said unconvincingly. "You're a pathetic excuse for a vampire" Deacon said putting an arm around Raven "Now look here, this is a real vampire. She has the bloodlust the ferocity that a vampire should have. You on the other hand, live off rats and cower before another vampire. You're worse than the vermin you eat." He looked at Raven, "Do you want to finish him or should I?" he asked her. Raven looked at him, smiling as viciously as he, and extended her fangs. Deacon dropped his arm from her shoulders. "You're in for a tough end." He said to Kruger. He kissed Raven briefly "Go get him then sweet heart" he said softly to her. Raven walked forwards three steps to bring her closer to Kruger. He stood and looked her over. His arm had stopped bleeding and the scratches were healing rapidly. They stood facing each other in silence until Raven grew impatient "Are we gonna do this or not?" she said venomously. Kruger reached a hand inside his jacket and pulled out a gun. Raven glanced at it and smiled, flashing her fangs. "Is that all you're gonna use?" she laughed. Kruger pulled the trigger, causing the semi-automatic pistol to spray the area before him with bullets. Raven was no longer there. Kruger looked around and didn't notice a dark figure drop silently from the metal bar above his head. He felt a hand on his shoulder and twisted sharply. He found himself face to face with Raven, who lashed out at him with her nails. He staggered back, his own blood dripping into his eyes from deep scratches across his face. He lifted the gun again and Raven didn't move.