Author: I do not own Inuyasha or any of its characters. And I would like to
say that I just got a reviewer to apologize to me for cursing me out and
calling a slut. Also saying I should rot in hell, but don't let that stop
any other authors out there get any harsh criticism from other people about
you. They are only there to review your work not judge you. If they do
email them back and just apologize yourself for something you didn't do and
tell them that really hurt you and you are only young for a short time.
Cause when my family read that they puffed out and emailed the reviewer and
cursed her out in Japanese, Spanish, Spanglish, Gibberish, and Tanglese. So
trust me. Thanx a bunch. Really hope you like the fic if you don't know bad
criticism please I'm only 12 ok. Ja ne
Dark Savor
In every generation, there is a chosen one to save and protect the
defenseless against demonic monsters. She is that one.
Dark clouds formed arousing in the foggy mist sky causing little Rin's uneasiness to continue. Sleep was not the answer to her problem as she shook crouching under her bed. Shadows rose when the cars passed in the night street. Someone or something lurked around the small one-floored home. Rin's bed corner was a founded place by the intruder. Tap-tap-tap-tap droplets of hail and rain pounded on the glass window. Slowly its slide gaped open giving the kidnapper a free entrance toward somewhat. He barged in with a loud thump of his muddy boots trudging in the direction of the bedpost. She clutched her knees tightly holding on for dear life. Claws pinned her to him as blood trickled down her ankle. Her cries for help could not be heard while she was carried to an empty warehouse. Silence
On the other side of master crime its champion came on to crime' tail. Gliding over the city's buildings and skyscrapers heading for innocence. The moonlit storm continued barely drizzling as he jumped atop structures.
He and his crew handcuffed the child to the basement heater. She tugged to move yet it was no use: her strength was lost. Leader of the pack licked his lips dry at the slayer.
Champion scanned the area of demons. Wolf demons he thought. He sniffed the air sensing a young girl. Unprotected
Rin whimpered and moaned as he neared closer to her. Kicking was not a strong impact on his face but her banshee like calls did harm.
Overhearing the pack's plot he jet forward in for the kill. "Now that the bitch is dead we don't have to worry about the slayer." With all torture with gone she is left none.
Sesshomaru clenched his fist dropping down toward the pack clan ripping each and every one of them a part. Reaching Rin's body he terrorized the chains with his sharp claws holding the dead girl in his arm. The night dragged as he watched the girl lay emotionless. He knew what was to be done. Tensaiga He must revive her without question.
Morning sunshine rays reflected off the window. Waking seven-year-old Rin. She rubbed her eyes opening to see a glimpse of her champion.
Dark Savor
In every generation, there is a chosen one to save and protect the
defenseless against demonic monsters. She is that one.
Dark clouds formed arousing in the foggy mist sky causing little Rin's uneasiness to continue. Sleep was not the answer to her problem as she shook crouching under her bed. Shadows rose when the cars passed in the night street. Someone or something lurked around the small one-floored home. Rin's bed corner was a founded place by the intruder. Tap-tap-tap-tap droplets of hail and rain pounded on the glass window. Slowly its slide gaped open giving the kidnapper a free entrance toward somewhat. He barged in with a loud thump of his muddy boots trudging in the direction of the bedpost. She clutched her knees tightly holding on for dear life. Claws pinned her to him as blood trickled down her ankle. Her cries for help could not be heard while she was carried to an empty warehouse. Silence
On the other side of master crime its champion came on to crime' tail. Gliding over the city's buildings and skyscrapers heading for innocence. The moonlit storm continued barely drizzling as he jumped atop structures.
He and his crew handcuffed the child to the basement heater. She tugged to move yet it was no use: her strength was lost. Leader of the pack licked his lips dry at the slayer.
Champion scanned the area of demons. Wolf demons he thought. He sniffed the air sensing a young girl. Unprotected
Rin whimpered and moaned as he neared closer to her. Kicking was not a strong impact on his face but her banshee like calls did harm.
Overhearing the pack's plot he jet forward in for the kill. "Now that the bitch is dead we don't have to worry about the slayer." With all torture with gone she is left none.
Sesshomaru clenched his fist dropping down toward the pack clan ripping each and every one of them a part. Reaching Rin's body he terrorized the chains with his sharp claws holding the dead girl in his arm. The night dragged as he watched the girl lay emotionless. He knew what was to be done. Tensaiga He must revive her without question.
Morning sunshine rays reflected off the window. Waking seven-year-old Rin. She rubbed her eyes opening to see a glimpse of her champion.