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Spanish Cove

Erika looked at her watch, it was 7:00. She and Jay had been at Spanish Cove for over 3 hours. She needed to get home and change before going to dance lessons. Erika knudged Jay and told him she was leaving.

Later at the community center

Erika walked into the community center dressed in a baby pink sundress. When she walked in, she noticed Bradin was already there and waiting by the wall.

Smiling, she walked up to Bradin, taking his hand.

If only Jay was here, Erika thought to herself.

Slowly her thoughts of Jay faded as she and Bradin gracefully drifted across the floor.

"I never knew you could dance so well," Erika said.

"There are a lot of things you dont know." Bradin said as mysteriously as he could.

"Smooth Kansas, very smooth." Erika teased.

Suddenly, there was a tap on Bradin's shoulder.

"Can I cut in?" There was Jay, giving Bradin a playfully evil stare.

Erika was overjoyed to see Jay. She leaned in and gave him a passionate kiss.

"I thought you didn't dance?" Erika asked as they held each other close.

"I'm full of surprises," Jay whispered. He didnt like the thought of another guys arms around his woman, even if it was Bradin.

Bradin had walked off and found a girl his age to dance with.

The dance teacher instructed them through the dance, but Jay and Erika found that they were both terrible at mamboing. They decided to sit out for a bit.

"You wanna blow this joint?" Jay asked.

Erika nodded in agreement, then smirked, "There's another thing I'd definitely like to blow..."

"Dirty woman," Jay teased, very turned on by Erika's words.

"You love it," Erika said as her hand grazed Jay's growing erection as she reached for her sweater.

Jay quickly took Erika up in his arms, and she let out a yelp of surprise. He carried her out to his car and put her in. Jay got in his side, started the car and drove back to his place. Bradin watched them leave, and since he was no longer needed, he decided to head home too.

After stopping at a drive thru for some dinner, Jay helped Erika out of the car and to his place. Before making it to the door, something fell and hit Jay square on the head, making him soaking wet. Jay looked up to see Johnny and Bradin sitting on the balcony with water balloons, laughing. Soon, another balloon came flying at them and hit Erika on the chest.

"This is war!!!!!" Jay yelled.

He took Erika's hand and led her into his room, where he kept his SuperSoakers.

He handed one to Erika and they filled them up. The two crept back outside with the waterguns. Jay spotted Bradin with his back to him. After taking aim, he fired the entire SuperSoaker's contents all over him.

"Gotcha, mate!" Jay yelled and did a victory dance.

"Aaah! Crap!" Bradin exclaimed. He was soaking wet.

While Jay was attacking Bradin, Erika went to look for Johnny. He was nowhere to be found. Erika sat on the steps with the SuperSoaker dangling from her hands. Suddenly she felt two pops and a huge gush of cold water going down her shirt. There standing behind her was Johnny. He was grinning like a Cheshire cat, trying not to laugh.

"You surrender?"

"NEVER!" Erika replied.

As Johnny started to turn away, she pelted him in the back with water. He tackled Erika and they fell into the sand. Erika pinned Johnny's hands down and got the remaining water balloons from him. For just a moment too long, they stayed in this position, looking into one another's eyes. There was a long silence. Then Erika spoke.

"You wanna go get Jay and Bradin," Erika asked, slightly uncomfortable.

"Yeah," Johnny said, "let's go!"

Erika and Johnny set forth and drenched Bradin and Jay, emptying their guns on each other, laughing hysterically.

Soon Johnny and Bradin went inside to get dry, leaving Jay and Erika on the sand.

"You know, you look pretty sexy all wet," Jay whispered as he moved his hand up her flat stomach.

Erika grinned and pulled him into a deep kiss.

"How about we go in my room," Jay said, taking a breath.

The two hurried, sopping wet, into his room. Erika brought him into a steamy kiss and they both collapsed on the bed.

Jay's hands caressed Erika's damp skin, helping her shed her top. His tongue explored her breasts as he felt her nipples harden from arousal. He traveled back to her mouth exploring every inch. Erika undid Jay's board shorts and slipped her hands beneath the fabric onto his sensitive skin. She could feel his erection on her hands as she stroked his member, making him groan. Knowing he could come in a matter of seconds, Erika slipped out of her shorts and thong. Jay's fingers crept down in the depths between her legs, stroking and teasing, helping her toward orgasm.

"Jay!" Erika screamed in ecstacy as orgasm took over her body.

Jay smiled at his handywork and positioned himself on top of Erika and pushed into her. Erika moaned in pleasure as she grinded and writhed beneath him. He began to thrust harder and harder, and she clutched the sheets as they peaked together. Exhausted, they relaxed and slowly drifted to sleep.

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