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Review and Response
Dark-Sephy Says:
Wow... this chapter was really cool! ^_^ You really did a GREAT job on the fight, you know. Liked it a lot, it was rather suspending to the end. Good OC with Guy and his background story too, by the way. So Mihoshi is now really falling in love with Raditz ^_^ was indeed rather heroic how he saved her. (for chap 7)
Hm, yeah, was really quite a chapter too ^_^ this just keeps getting better and better. Yes! They finally admitted to each other. The bath part was nice ^_^" and the bed part even more of course, lol. Really great. And cool, looking forward to the new chapter of Raditz Muyo! ^_^" and of this one too of course. (for chap 8)
Dear Dark-Sephy,
Yay, I'm happy that the fight scene was good! And I'm happy to hear that you liked the events of the last two chapters. I really enjoyed writing those chapters too, hehe.
Anonymous Says:
What a story! The lemon scene could've been bigger. Also, is Radditz going to go SSJ?( Almost did last chapter)
Dear Anonymous,
Yay, a new reviewer! Thanks! Yeah, the lemon scene could have been bigger, but seeing that I'm a little inexperienced in writing them, I decided not to make it too detailed. Perhaps in the future I'll get to write more in depth lemons. Good question, I was wondering if someone would notice that part. To answer your question, I put that in there to add more drama, and to foreshadow what's going to happen in the sequel to this story that I plan on doing. But is he going to go SSJ in this story? No. I'm glad you like the story and I hope you continue to read and enjoy. Now, on to the filler chapter!
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Chapter Nine: Ginyu Tattles, Nappa Thinks
Raditz woke up to a cool, refreshing feeling after the eventful night he spent with Mihoshi. She was still sleeping with her head rested on some of his long soft hair. A genuine smile of content tugged at his lips as he watched her breath quietly from her mouth. Her blonde hair looked like a golden sea when she it down. Raditz's first thought was to get up and start training but the longer he watched her sleep, the more he wanted to stay with her until she woke up.
It didn't take long for her to open her blue eyes and give the Saiyan warrior a warm smile. She felt a soreness between her thighs, but it was barely noticeable. "How come you're not up and training already?" she asked while sitting up.
"Because I chose to stay with you until you woke up." He answered simply just before a small growl came from his stomach.
Mihoshi smiled as she removed the sheet that covered her body, which was clad in her silk nightgown. "I'll make something for us to eat."
Raditz slightly frowned as he watched her leave while covering herself with her robe. 'I hope she isn't planning on making Ramen for breakfast again...'
Elsewhere, on Frieza's space ship, Ginyu just asked Frieza why Raditz had gotten to participate in the tournament on Choob. "WHAT!?!" the small alien who was the strongest being in the universe yelled, causing the Ginyu Force and his two henchmen, Didoria and Zarbon to cringe.
"Y-you mean you didn't know Lord Frieza?" Ginyu stuttered as he grew a sweat drop.
"THAT MONKEY BASTARD!" Frieza screamed again, his eyes burned with his fury and hatred. "He thinks he can pull some stunt to get two months of vacation on me?!? As soon as I get my hands on him, I'm throwing his low level ass into a galactic zoo! That is if I don't kill him first!"
"P-please Lord Frieza, calm down. Remember your blood pressure?" Zarbon reminded, sounding concerned about Frieza's health.
"Y-yes," Didoria added for good measure, "You wouldn't want to get a heart attack because of some dumb Saiyan, like Raditz."
This seemed to work, as Frieza replied in his normal tone, "Yes, you're both right. I can't kill him if I am dead, right?"
"Yes sire," his henchmen said without hesitation.
"Raditz was with a woman too." Ginyu added as he showed Frieza an issue of the "Chooban Times" newspaper. On the front page, big bold letters read, "Foreigner Wins Shimumadetatakau Tournament!" and there were three separate snapshots that went along with the article. One was a picture of Guy and Raditz when they transformed into their beast forms, the second was of Raditz holding Guy's detached tail and the last one showed a blonde woman hugging him.
"Hum..." Frieza mused as he looked at the pictures. "Kuwi!"
A tall purple fish like alien stepped forward, "Yes sire?"
"Look up the Galaxy Police staff profiles. Find the officer whose picture matches the one of the girl in the newspaper."
"At once sire!" Kuwi responded as he took the newspaper then began to press the keys on the highly advanced computer. Hundreds of pictures of Galaxy Police officers flashed on the screen until they found Mihoshi's. "Here she is!" Kuwi announced while the others turned their attentions to the screen. Kuwi began to read Mihoshi's profile out loud, "Mihoshi Karamitsu. Age: 23. Height: 5'8. Rank: First Class Detective. Partner: Kimono..."
"That says 'Kiyone' stupid!" Reccome's voice boomed as he corrected Kuwi.
Kuwi growled and muttered, "Who taught you to read..." under his breath.
"Please continue reading Kuwi." Frieza said, beginning to lose his patience.
"Sorry Lord Frieza! I shall continue at once!" Kuwi responded in fear before he cleared his throat and continued. "It appears that this Mihoshi is the granddaughter of the Grand Marshal of the Galaxy Police."
"Hack into her service records." Frieza ordered curtly.
Kuwi pressed a number of buttons and Mihoshi's service records appeared. "Damn, her service records are really bad...looks like she's done more damage on her assignments that actually catching criminals."
"Can you find her last assignment?"
"Yes Lord Frieza, just a moment..." Kuwi scrolled down her files, "Here! Her last mission was to capture the space pirate working for Frieza: Raditz..." he trailed off to scroll down and read the rest. "...mission was completed..."
"So...that hot woman that was the prize in the tournament is the officer who captured Raditz on Yarh?"
"Yes." Frieza answered calmly, making everyone else nervous. "So, it seems what Nappa and Vegeta said wasn't a lie after all."
Outside of the room Frieza and his company were in, Nappa pressed his ear against the door and listened quietly. Vegeta came walking down the hall and spotted his much older cohort. "Nappa!" he whispered in a hiss like tone. "What the hell are you doing eavesdropping? You know what Frieza would do if he caught us right outside of this room!"
The giant of a Saiyan turned to Vegeta and boldly shushed him. "Shhh! You don't think I know that? Quiet or they'll hear us! They're talkin' 'bout Raditz in there."
Vegeta raised a brow, "Why do you give a rat's ass about him anyways?"
Nappa seemed a little surprised by Vegeta'' words. "'Cause he's our partner...one of the last warriors of the proud Saiyan race..."
"He's a weakling!" Vegeta yelled, forgetting that they could get into trouble because they appeared to be listening to Frieza's private conversation. "He's nothing but a third class! We're better off without him slowing us down! Besides, the bastard is probably at some other planet enjoying himself while we have to go off and destroy planets for Frieza!"
"What's going on out there?" a voice yelled from inside the room, causing Vegeta and Nappa to jump. It was Frieza who spoke.
"Sounded like Vegeta to me..." stated Zarbon.
"Shit!" hissed Vegeta with wide eyes and a sweat drop falling down the side of his face. Both Saiyans ran down the hall as they heard Zarbon's feet coming towards the door.
Zarbon opened the door and looked out into the deserted hallway curiously. "Odd...I could have sworn I heard that arrogant tone of voice out here."
Once Vegeta and Nappa were far away from Frieza and the others, Vegeta glowered up at Nappa, "Fool!" he berated, "Look what you made me do! We're lucky that we didn't get caught!"
Nappa looked down at his boots, "Sorry Vegeta...I guess I wasn't usin' my head..." Vegeta scoffed at him, then left to train in a room full of Sibamen.
Before Mihoshi captured Raditz, Nappa hadn't realized how much Raditz actually was apart of their team. He also never knew how much he considered Raditz as a sort-of friend. Vegeta would never be considered his friend, since he had been his bodyguard since the day the prince lost his mother at a young age. Nappa served Vegeta for probably twenty-five years now, so of course the prince would only of him as a loyal servant. Raditz might have been closer to Vegeta's age, but it seemed that he and Nappa had an unknown bond that Vegeta did not share. Perhaps it was because they were the last Saiyans left, or maybe it was because Nappa got along with Raditz better than Vegeta did. Whatever the reason was, it made Nappa wonder why Raditz hadn't returned by now. Surely he could have easily escaped the Galaxy Police officer on that planet where the tournament was. So why did he choose to stay under her arrest? Nappa decided to stop dwelling on this matter because he got a headache form thinking so much.
Back in another part of space, in the G.P. ship, Yukinojo, Raditz and Mihoshi ate breakfast, which turned out to be Ramen again. Raditz was displeased but ate without complaint. It was unusually quiet during breakfast. Usually Mihoshi would be telling Raditz stories of her childhood and past experiences. In the silence, Mihoshi thought, 'I've told him so much about me, yet he's never mentioned anything about himself.' She cleared her throat, "Hey Raditz, I was wondering; what was your childhood like?"
He wasn't expecting her to ask such a thing, but he figured that it wouldn't hurt to tell her. "Well, there isn't much to say. I was sent to planets as an infant. So from an early age I was trained to become the warrior I am now."
"Do you remember your parents?" she asked. "You said when your planet was destroyed you were only a boy right?"
"Yes, I was, and I do remember my parents. My father was Bardock, my little brother Kakarrot looked just like him. I guess I take more of my mother's physical traits though. From what I remember she was probably a little shorter than I am, and her hair was longer by a few inches I guess. I don't miss them as much as you would think because I didn't really know them. They were usually busy on a mission or I had one." He stopped for a second, "I wonder if my brother Kakarrot could still be alive..."
Suddenly, Yukinojo entered the kitchen, "Mihoshi, we are entering planet Hikka territory, do you whish to stop for more provisions or fuel?"
Mihoshi thought for a moment, but Raditz answered for her, "Yes. Set course to land on the planet."
"Is that alright with you Mihoshi?" the A.I. robot asked.
"Well, I guess it's okay. So set the auto pilot controls to land on Hikka." She replied and the robot took its leave. Turning to Raditz again, she asked, "How come you want to go there?"
"It's one of the planets Frieza owns, so I can get some new armor. Remember, mine got broken during the tournament?"
"Oh yeah!" Mihoshi realized, "I guess that's why you haven't been wearing your armor."
Raditz smirked, "Well, that's one reason..."
Mihoshi smiled, and felt glad that she didn't have to worry about his flirtatious ways any more. "What are some of the other reasons?" she asked, trying to play dumb.
Raditz leaned back in his chair and placed his hands behind his head. "I think you know a few of them already." He grinned when she got out of her seat and came over to him and sat in his lap. He kissed her as he wrapped both arms around her. She replied by caressing his face with her soft hands and kissed him back. Mihoshi didn't expect his tongue to slip into her mouth and gasped against his lips at the strange sensual feeling. Raditz smiled when she contributed to the French kiss by using her tongue to shyly play with his while his hands found her breasts and began to rub them.
Realizing what this could lead to, she placed her hand on his writs and he stopped. He raised a brow before she said, "We shouldn't be doing this so soon..."
He growled in annoyance, but respected her wish. He brought his hands down to rest on her hips and just held her while she snuggled against his exposed chest. "Damn you, you're making me soft..." Her arms wrapped around him and the Saiyan sighed.
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Raditz: Hey readers! I'm making this quick since stupid Kuwi already told you about the next chapter, which is called "Pit Stop on Planet Hikka". Keep on Reading and Reviewing! Now I gotta go help Sydney rewrite the ending of Romeo and Juliet so that they run off to Vegas, and open up the Casanova Casino...don't ask, it's all her idea.
Review and Response
Dark-Sephy Says:
Wow... this chapter was really cool! ^_^ You really did a GREAT job on the fight, you know. Liked it a lot, it was rather suspending to the end. Good OC with Guy and his background story too, by the way. So Mihoshi is now really falling in love with Raditz ^_^ was indeed rather heroic how he saved her. (for chap 7)
Hm, yeah, was really quite a chapter too ^_^ this just keeps getting better and better. Yes! They finally admitted to each other. The bath part was nice ^_^" and the bed part even more of course, lol. Really great. And cool, looking forward to the new chapter of Raditz Muyo! ^_^" and of this one too of course. (for chap 8)
Dear Dark-Sephy,
Yay, I'm happy that the fight scene was good! And I'm happy to hear that you liked the events of the last two chapters. I really enjoyed writing those chapters too, hehe.
Anonymous Says:
What a story! The lemon scene could've been bigger. Also, is Radditz going to go SSJ?( Almost did last chapter)
Dear Anonymous,
Yay, a new reviewer! Thanks! Yeah, the lemon scene could have been bigger, but seeing that I'm a little inexperienced in writing them, I decided not to make it too detailed. Perhaps in the future I'll get to write more in depth lemons. Good question, I was wondering if someone would notice that part. To answer your question, I put that in there to add more drama, and to foreshadow what's going to happen in the sequel to this story that I plan on doing. But is he going to go SSJ in this story? No. I'm glad you like the story and I hope you continue to read and enjoy. Now, on to the filler chapter!
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Chapter Nine: Ginyu Tattles, Nappa Thinks
Raditz woke up to a cool, refreshing feeling after the eventful night he spent with Mihoshi. She was still sleeping with her head rested on some of his long soft hair. A genuine smile of content tugged at his lips as he watched her breath quietly from her mouth. Her blonde hair looked like a golden sea when she it down. Raditz's first thought was to get up and start training but the longer he watched her sleep, the more he wanted to stay with her until she woke up.
It didn't take long for her to open her blue eyes and give the Saiyan warrior a warm smile. She felt a soreness between her thighs, but it was barely noticeable. "How come you're not up and training already?" she asked while sitting up.
"Because I chose to stay with you until you woke up." He answered simply just before a small growl came from his stomach.
Mihoshi smiled as she removed the sheet that covered her body, which was clad in her silk nightgown. "I'll make something for us to eat."
Raditz slightly frowned as he watched her leave while covering herself with her robe. 'I hope she isn't planning on making Ramen for breakfast again...'
Elsewhere, on Frieza's space ship, Ginyu just asked Frieza why Raditz had gotten to participate in the tournament on Choob. "WHAT!?!" the small alien who was the strongest being in the universe yelled, causing the Ginyu Force and his two henchmen, Didoria and Zarbon to cringe.
"Y-you mean you didn't know Lord Frieza?" Ginyu stuttered as he grew a sweat drop.
"THAT MONKEY BASTARD!" Frieza screamed again, his eyes burned with his fury and hatred. "He thinks he can pull some stunt to get two months of vacation on me?!? As soon as I get my hands on him, I'm throwing his low level ass into a galactic zoo! That is if I don't kill him first!"
"P-please Lord Frieza, calm down. Remember your blood pressure?" Zarbon reminded, sounding concerned about Frieza's health.
"Y-yes," Didoria added for good measure, "You wouldn't want to get a heart attack because of some dumb Saiyan, like Raditz."
This seemed to work, as Frieza replied in his normal tone, "Yes, you're both right. I can't kill him if I am dead, right?"
"Yes sire," his henchmen said without hesitation.
"Raditz was with a woman too." Ginyu added as he showed Frieza an issue of the "Chooban Times" newspaper. On the front page, big bold letters read, "Foreigner Wins Shimumadetatakau Tournament!" and there were three separate snapshots that went along with the article. One was a picture of Guy and Raditz when they transformed into their beast forms, the second was of Raditz holding Guy's detached tail and the last one showed a blonde woman hugging him.
"Hum..." Frieza mused as he looked at the pictures. "Kuwi!"
A tall purple fish like alien stepped forward, "Yes sire?"
"Look up the Galaxy Police staff profiles. Find the officer whose picture matches the one of the girl in the newspaper."
"At once sire!" Kuwi responded as he took the newspaper then began to press the keys on the highly advanced computer. Hundreds of pictures of Galaxy Police officers flashed on the screen until they found Mihoshi's. "Here she is!" Kuwi announced while the others turned their attentions to the screen. Kuwi began to read Mihoshi's profile out loud, "Mihoshi Karamitsu. Age: 23. Height: 5'8. Rank: First Class Detective. Partner: Kimono..."
"That says 'Kiyone' stupid!" Reccome's voice boomed as he corrected Kuwi.
Kuwi growled and muttered, "Who taught you to read..." under his breath.
"Please continue reading Kuwi." Frieza said, beginning to lose his patience.
"Sorry Lord Frieza! I shall continue at once!" Kuwi responded in fear before he cleared his throat and continued. "It appears that this Mihoshi is the granddaughter of the Grand Marshal of the Galaxy Police."
"Hack into her service records." Frieza ordered curtly.
Kuwi pressed a number of buttons and Mihoshi's service records appeared. "Damn, her service records are really bad...looks like she's done more damage on her assignments that actually catching criminals."
"Can you find her last assignment?"
"Yes Lord Frieza, just a moment..." Kuwi scrolled down her files, "Here! Her last mission was to capture the space pirate working for Frieza: Raditz..." he trailed off to scroll down and read the rest. "...mission was completed..."
"So...that hot woman that was the prize in the tournament is the officer who captured Raditz on Yarh?"
"Yes." Frieza answered calmly, making everyone else nervous. "So, it seems what Nappa and Vegeta said wasn't a lie after all."
Outside of the room Frieza and his company were in, Nappa pressed his ear against the door and listened quietly. Vegeta came walking down the hall and spotted his much older cohort. "Nappa!" he whispered in a hiss like tone. "What the hell are you doing eavesdropping? You know what Frieza would do if he caught us right outside of this room!"
The giant of a Saiyan turned to Vegeta and boldly shushed him. "Shhh! You don't think I know that? Quiet or they'll hear us! They're talkin' 'bout Raditz in there."
Vegeta raised a brow, "Why do you give a rat's ass about him anyways?"
Nappa seemed a little surprised by Vegeta'' words. "'Cause he's our partner...one of the last warriors of the proud Saiyan race..."
"He's a weakling!" Vegeta yelled, forgetting that they could get into trouble because they appeared to be listening to Frieza's private conversation. "He's nothing but a third class! We're better off without him slowing us down! Besides, the bastard is probably at some other planet enjoying himself while we have to go off and destroy planets for Frieza!"
"What's going on out there?" a voice yelled from inside the room, causing Vegeta and Nappa to jump. It was Frieza who spoke.
"Sounded like Vegeta to me..." stated Zarbon.
"Shit!" hissed Vegeta with wide eyes and a sweat drop falling down the side of his face. Both Saiyans ran down the hall as they heard Zarbon's feet coming towards the door.
Zarbon opened the door and looked out into the deserted hallway curiously. "Odd...I could have sworn I heard that arrogant tone of voice out here."
Once Vegeta and Nappa were far away from Frieza and the others, Vegeta glowered up at Nappa, "Fool!" he berated, "Look what you made me do! We're lucky that we didn't get caught!"
Nappa looked down at his boots, "Sorry Vegeta...I guess I wasn't usin' my head..." Vegeta scoffed at him, then left to train in a room full of Sibamen.
Before Mihoshi captured Raditz, Nappa hadn't realized how much Raditz actually was apart of their team. He also never knew how much he considered Raditz as a sort-of friend. Vegeta would never be considered his friend, since he had been his bodyguard since the day the prince lost his mother at a young age. Nappa served Vegeta for probably twenty-five years now, so of course the prince would only of him as a loyal servant. Raditz might have been closer to Vegeta's age, but it seemed that he and Nappa had an unknown bond that Vegeta did not share. Perhaps it was because they were the last Saiyans left, or maybe it was because Nappa got along with Raditz better than Vegeta did. Whatever the reason was, it made Nappa wonder why Raditz hadn't returned by now. Surely he could have easily escaped the Galaxy Police officer on that planet where the tournament was. So why did he choose to stay under her arrest? Nappa decided to stop dwelling on this matter because he got a headache form thinking so much.
Back in another part of space, in the G.P. ship, Yukinojo, Raditz and Mihoshi ate breakfast, which turned out to be Ramen again. Raditz was displeased but ate without complaint. It was unusually quiet during breakfast. Usually Mihoshi would be telling Raditz stories of her childhood and past experiences. In the silence, Mihoshi thought, 'I've told him so much about me, yet he's never mentioned anything about himself.' She cleared her throat, "Hey Raditz, I was wondering; what was your childhood like?"
He wasn't expecting her to ask such a thing, but he figured that it wouldn't hurt to tell her. "Well, there isn't much to say. I was sent to planets as an infant. So from an early age I was trained to become the warrior I am now."
"Do you remember your parents?" she asked. "You said when your planet was destroyed you were only a boy right?"
"Yes, I was, and I do remember my parents. My father was Bardock, my little brother Kakarrot looked just like him. I guess I take more of my mother's physical traits though. From what I remember she was probably a little shorter than I am, and her hair was longer by a few inches I guess. I don't miss them as much as you would think because I didn't really know them. They were usually busy on a mission or I had one." He stopped for a second, "I wonder if my brother Kakarrot could still be alive..."
Suddenly, Yukinojo entered the kitchen, "Mihoshi, we are entering planet Hikka territory, do you whish to stop for more provisions or fuel?"
Mihoshi thought for a moment, but Raditz answered for her, "Yes. Set course to land on the planet."
"Is that alright with you Mihoshi?" the A.I. robot asked.
"Well, I guess it's okay. So set the auto pilot controls to land on Hikka." She replied and the robot took its leave. Turning to Raditz again, she asked, "How come you want to go there?"
"It's one of the planets Frieza owns, so I can get some new armor. Remember, mine got broken during the tournament?"
"Oh yeah!" Mihoshi realized, "I guess that's why you haven't been wearing your armor."
Raditz smirked, "Well, that's one reason..."
Mihoshi smiled, and felt glad that she didn't have to worry about his flirtatious ways any more. "What are some of the other reasons?" she asked, trying to play dumb.
Raditz leaned back in his chair and placed his hands behind his head. "I think you know a few of them already." He grinned when she got out of her seat and came over to him and sat in his lap. He kissed her as he wrapped both arms around her. She replied by caressing his face with her soft hands and kissed him back. Mihoshi didn't expect his tongue to slip into her mouth and gasped against his lips at the strange sensual feeling. Raditz smiled when she contributed to the French kiss by using her tongue to shyly play with his while his hands found her breasts and began to rub them.
Realizing what this could lead to, she placed her hand on his writs and he stopped. He raised a brow before she said, "We shouldn't be doing this so soon..."
He growled in annoyance, but respected her wish. He brought his hands down to rest on her hips and just held her while she snuggled against his exposed chest. "Damn you, you're making me soft..." Her arms wrapped around him and the Saiyan sighed.
~*~ Next Chapter Preview ~*~
Raditz: Hey readers! I'm making this quick since stupid Kuwi already told you about the next chapter, which is called "Pit Stop on Planet Hikka". Keep on Reading and Reviewing! Now I gotta go help Sydney rewrite the ending of Romeo and Juliet so that they run off to Vegas, and open up the Casanova Casino...don't ask, it's all her idea.