A/N- Thanks for all your reviews, It has taken me a while to put this up
because school is ending and I was on a class trip for 4 days. Here are
the messages to those who reviewed for the 5th, 6th and 7th chapter.
Aks100- Yes, you are partially right. However, I am trying to make this a bit different than what you expect............thanks for reviewing! Update on your stories too, I love them!
pyroprincess4rmeverwood- Thanks for reviewing! You flatter me again..........glad you like it!
MaraudersIce05- Yes, Peter is a traitor. I rarely make him say anything. Evil..... You Flatter me too! I am sure that I am not that good.........
Rubberduker- Yes, I know. I do need to add more detail. This is my first fic, and I think that the first 2 chapters were a bit rough. Hopefully, the description and detail will be better as it goes along and I get more into the plot. Yes.......JK is amazing with her writing. I will never be as good as her..............sigh.
dobbyfan18- As you can see, (guilt) I am a horrible speller. I know, I need to pay more attention to the stupid spell checker, But before, I used to and all the stupid stuff like my last name came up......Thanks for the review though, I will try harder. Glad you like it!
Candidus-Astrum- Yes, Sirius's plan is going to backfire, but his is not the only one............
Chapter 8- A Final Breakthrough !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ari and Cat slipped down the corridor towards the kitchens. "Salt should do the trick," Cat whispered. Inside the brightly lit kitchens, thousands of house elves were working as if there life depended on it. It probably did, thought Ari to herself. Fireplaces and stoves were lined up along the wall. Tables in all different shapes and sizes filled the room which was bathed in a thick golden glow.
"Can I help you Misses? " Came a dozen voices from the curious line of waiting elves. The girls had been here many times, so they new who to ask.
"Could I speak to Twizzle?" Ari requested kindly. A short house elf wearing a pillowcase for his shirt and hat stepped up. His feet which were wrapped up in someone's old underwear.
"Yes Misses?" Twizzle replied. His face showed curiosity, but alarm when they relayed there request.
"We need 10g of salt."
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! At lunch time, they all met back at the Gryffendor table. The final preparations had been made, and all there was left was to introduce the subject to the victims.
"I feel like skating!" Ari announced, eyes sparkling. This request was greeted with enthusiasm.
"I'll get my skates!" Lily said. "I love skating." Watching everyone go, Cat turned to Torii and admitted, "I am starting to think this wasn't such a good idea." Torii watched Cat go. She seemed to be thinking about something deeply. Biting her lip, it looked to a few people who were passing by, that she was fighting some inner battle.
They met again back at the lake. Lily's eyes were sparkling as she tied on her skates and slid onto the ice. "C'mon you guys!! The weathers beautiful!" Frolicking in the afternoon sunlight, they laughed and sang old songs at the top of their lungs.
"I'll race you to the end of the lake Cat!" Lily challenged. For a moment, Cat stared at the end of the lake to which Lily was skating. Shaking her head quickly, she said a bunch of things very fast. Only a bit of it was decipherable. "...Can't do it. It's all wrong.........loves skating to much......be afraid for ever......" Cat skated as fast as her legs could carry her towards Lily.
"Lily! Wait!" She cried.
The desperation made her fly at Lily, pushing Lily away from the salted ice. "What?!?" Lily screamed. Falling, cat slid across the ice fell through the think sheets.
"Oh My GOD!!!" Lily was hysterical. James grabbed her waist as she had almost thrown herself after Cat. "We can't leave her!" The girls were screaming, James had grabbed both Lily and Torii, Remus held Ari. Peter and Sirius watched helplessly. Raising his wand, Sirius chose the first spell that came to his mind.
"Wingardium Leviosa!" His wand was pointed to the hole in the ice randomly. Water blew everywhere.
"Wingardium Leviosa!" He tried again. Nothing but water.
"Wingardium Leviosa!!!!" He cried desperately. Cat shot out of the water, lifeless and unmoving.
The others rushed towards her instantly. "We have to get her to the hospital wing!" James said hurriedly. The party was moved inside as she was taken to Madam Pompfry.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Back in the common room, Lily was sobbing quietly on James shoulder. Ari and Sirius explained a rather vague and untrue version of the salted ice to both James and Lily which involved a prank on Snape or something.
"I can't believe she saved my life again." Lily sobbed. His arms around her, James held her silently against his side. Tears trickled down Ari's and Torii's cheeks and they cried. Clinging to Remus, Ari told him, "We should never have done that."
Sirius hugged Torii and Lis with his two arms and even Peter looked mournful. The group then slept, awaiting the mourn. Thus, the third day ended.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry that was short. I wanted to leave you all with a thought or two. Hope you liked it! Review and tell me your favorite character! I will write much more now that I am on Holiday!
Rhia
Review ((
Aks100- Yes, you are partially right. However, I am trying to make this a bit different than what you expect............thanks for reviewing! Update on your stories too, I love them!
pyroprincess4rmeverwood- Thanks for reviewing! You flatter me again..........glad you like it!
MaraudersIce05- Yes, Peter is a traitor. I rarely make him say anything. Evil..... You Flatter me too! I am sure that I am not that good.........
Rubberduker- Yes, I know. I do need to add more detail. This is my first fic, and I think that the first 2 chapters were a bit rough. Hopefully, the description and detail will be better as it goes along and I get more into the plot. Yes.......JK is amazing with her writing. I will never be as good as her..............sigh.
dobbyfan18- As you can see, (guilt) I am a horrible speller. I know, I need to pay more attention to the stupid spell checker, But before, I used to and all the stupid stuff like my last name came up......Thanks for the review though, I will try harder. Glad you like it!
Candidus-Astrum- Yes, Sirius's plan is going to backfire, but his is not the only one............
Chapter 8- A Final Breakthrough !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ari and Cat slipped down the corridor towards the kitchens. "Salt should do the trick," Cat whispered. Inside the brightly lit kitchens, thousands of house elves were working as if there life depended on it. It probably did, thought Ari to herself. Fireplaces and stoves were lined up along the wall. Tables in all different shapes and sizes filled the room which was bathed in a thick golden glow.
"Can I help you Misses? " Came a dozen voices from the curious line of waiting elves. The girls had been here many times, so they new who to ask.
"Could I speak to Twizzle?" Ari requested kindly. A short house elf wearing a pillowcase for his shirt and hat stepped up. His feet which were wrapped up in someone's old underwear.
"Yes Misses?" Twizzle replied. His face showed curiosity, but alarm when they relayed there request.
"We need 10g of salt."
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! At lunch time, they all met back at the Gryffendor table. The final preparations had been made, and all there was left was to introduce the subject to the victims.
"I feel like skating!" Ari announced, eyes sparkling. This request was greeted with enthusiasm.
"I'll get my skates!" Lily said. "I love skating." Watching everyone go, Cat turned to Torii and admitted, "I am starting to think this wasn't such a good idea." Torii watched Cat go. She seemed to be thinking about something deeply. Biting her lip, it looked to a few people who were passing by, that she was fighting some inner battle.
They met again back at the lake. Lily's eyes were sparkling as she tied on her skates and slid onto the ice. "C'mon you guys!! The weathers beautiful!" Frolicking in the afternoon sunlight, they laughed and sang old songs at the top of their lungs.
"I'll race you to the end of the lake Cat!" Lily challenged. For a moment, Cat stared at the end of the lake to which Lily was skating. Shaking her head quickly, she said a bunch of things very fast. Only a bit of it was decipherable. "...Can't do it. It's all wrong.........loves skating to much......be afraid for ever......" Cat skated as fast as her legs could carry her towards Lily.
"Lily! Wait!" She cried.
The desperation made her fly at Lily, pushing Lily away from the salted ice. "What?!?" Lily screamed. Falling, cat slid across the ice fell through the think sheets.
"Oh My GOD!!!" Lily was hysterical. James grabbed her waist as she had almost thrown herself after Cat. "We can't leave her!" The girls were screaming, James had grabbed both Lily and Torii, Remus held Ari. Peter and Sirius watched helplessly. Raising his wand, Sirius chose the first spell that came to his mind.
"Wingardium Leviosa!" His wand was pointed to the hole in the ice randomly. Water blew everywhere.
"Wingardium Leviosa!" He tried again. Nothing but water.
"Wingardium Leviosa!!!!" He cried desperately. Cat shot out of the water, lifeless and unmoving.
The others rushed towards her instantly. "We have to get her to the hospital wing!" James said hurriedly. The party was moved inside as she was taken to Madam Pompfry.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Back in the common room, Lily was sobbing quietly on James shoulder. Ari and Sirius explained a rather vague and untrue version of the salted ice to both James and Lily which involved a prank on Snape or something.
"I can't believe she saved my life again." Lily sobbed. His arms around her, James held her silently against his side. Tears trickled down Ari's and Torii's cheeks and they cried. Clinging to Remus, Ari told him, "We should never have done that."
Sirius hugged Torii and Lis with his two arms and even Peter looked mournful. The group then slept, awaiting the mourn. Thus, the third day ended.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry that was short. I wanted to leave you all with a thought or two. Hope you liked it! Review and tell me your favorite character! I will write much more now that I am on Holiday!
Rhia
Review ((