Authors note: honest to god. I'm really running low on inspiration and motivation. I need ideas. Please give a review with any ideas. And sorry about having Koenma out of character. I just couldn't resist it before!
Part16
"SUGER HIGH!!!!!" I said screaming and ran out of Koenma's office. I ran past everyone squealing and laughing, but amazingly enough, not terrorizing anyone. (in case you didn't remember last time, I got mad sugar high and was terrorizing everyone in sight. I soon did stop running and laughing once I ran into a pillar and , man, did it hurt! I mean, running into a pillar would naturally hurt, but was this a natural pillar that would hurt if you ran into it naturally? NOOO!!!! I know you won't believe me, but it was made out of foam….. Uh yeah….. You know….. Maybe I shouldn't have told you that….. A bit embarrassing.
Foam pillars shouldn't hurt, should they? I thought I must have imagined it and so I punched the darn pillar…..really hard.
"OUCH!!! GOD DAMNIT!!!! THAT HURT!!!" I don't know where on earth I picked up those words, being brought up in an asylum…wait a sec… oh yeah. I remember now!
//Flashback within this story of a flashback and yes, this whole story is a flashback//
I was sitting on the one side of the door to my room. I heard a man try to get in. Like I said, it's like running into a brick wall. I heard him yell out.
"OUCH!!! GOD DAMNIT!!! THAT FUCKING HURT!!!" I heard him and blinked. Then I yelled back.
"THEN WHY'D YOU RUN INTO IT?!!" There was a pause.
"I must have hit my head REALLY HARD." I heard him mutter. "The WALL is TALKING to me. Maybe I'm supposed to be here….."
//end flashback//
"Oh…." I said while remembering and ignored the workers staring at me. It's not like I did anything…..well, besides running into a pillar and screaming out swears after punching it…..But besides that I didn't do anything. I sat and thought for a bit. 'Then again maybe people running around like crazed loonies isn't normal here.' I thought. Jeez… I don't know how they survived.
A bit after sitting on the floor, I got up and resumed my daily activities- after posting a sign on the pillar telling people not to run into it. My normal daily activities included running around like a sugar high freak, which I was, and sometimes being normal. Normal= not-so-sugar-high.
During my running around the palace, I came to a set of stairs going down. I had a couple of choices.
A) go down them
B) go down them
C) not go down them
D) go down them
So, which one was I to do? I thought it all out. 'A! yes! that's good! But wait- B is just as good! So is D! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO? A, B, or D? I CAN'T CHOOSE!!! WAHHHHHH!!!!' Notice how choice C never even crossed my mind. I don't know how I survived back then. So simple, naive- well….. Does knowing where to kick a guy and make it really hurt count? Nah… So back to where I was before. My life was so simple, naïve, sugary….. Yes. Certainly the last one.
All of a sudden I heard a call. I came from down the stairs. What was down the stairs? A voice. A voice was calling me down the stairs. The voice down the stairs was beckoning. I knew what I had to do! I shouted back,
"Fox could not come to the phone right now, please leave a message after she runs for her life!" I said and ran off. Little did I know, that it was only…
"Fox!" The voice called.
"You will never catch me alive COPPER!!! AEEEE!!!" I said running as fast as possible. I did hear the person sigh.
"Oh not this again." In case you didn't figure it out, it was Kurama. I was so surprised at finding out that it was only him, and not some unknown stalker, that I ran into something. Hard. I bet you will never guess what it could possibly be.
"OUCH!!! GOD DAMNIT!!! THAT HURT!!!" I yelled at the foam pillar. Kurama stopped running, I could tell.
"I did not know that you swore." He said calmly, but his eyes were big and full of surprise.
"I learned how from a guy that ran into my door at the asylum."
"Really?"
"Yeah. Sad, isn't it."
"Are you ready to go?"
"Go where?" I asked. Then it hit me. Hard.
"OUCH!!! GOD DAMNIT!!! THAT HURT!!!" I yelled. I looked at the thing that hit me. It was a rock with a piece of paper tied to it.
"OHHH!!!! A PRETTY PIECE OF PAPER TIED TO A ROCK!!!! I KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!" I said squealing. I grabbed it. "There will be a ransom note or a threat!!! This sort of thing always happens in fairy tales!!" I unraveled it. "Lets see…"
"Yes?" Kurama asked. He was obviously curious too. I sweat dropped once reading it. Well, it's more like it didn't have anything on it.
"Read it yourself." I handed it to him.
"….." He stared at it. "This is interesting. A rock and a piece of paper flew out of nowhere to hit you on the head. There aren't any windows near by. The paper is also blank."
"Or is it?" I asked.
"You have an idea?" He asked me.
"No.. I just always wanted to say that." Kurama sweat dropped.
"Well, maybe it is written in invisible ink. I will hold onto it." He told me and I yelled out again.
"OUCH!!! GOD DAMNIT!!! THAT HURTS!!" Another rock and message hit my head. I just handed it to Kurama and told him to read it. I started grumbling as he unfolded it. He stared at it for a moment. Well, for a long while.
"DOES IT SAY ANYTHING?" I yelled.
"Yes- and you didn't need to shout it." Kurama said and handed it over.
"Yes I did. I needed to show my impatience." I looked the message over and gasped. This was not what I had been expecting at all.
A/N: Sorry if this is a short chapter! But be thankful for having a chapter at all! ^_^
Yeah… and I want to have a vote.
Should Fox go for…
A) Kurama and make a sudden twist in the story
B) Hiei and make the little demon have a love for the first time
C) Both. She'll choose one in the end, but she'll only choose b/c she has to.
This will help out a lot with plot ideas.
Part16
"SUGER HIGH!!!!!" I said screaming and ran out of Koenma's office. I ran past everyone squealing and laughing, but amazingly enough, not terrorizing anyone. (in case you didn't remember last time, I got mad sugar high and was terrorizing everyone in sight. I soon did stop running and laughing once I ran into a pillar and , man, did it hurt! I mean, running into a pillar would naturally hurt, but was this a natural pillar that would hurt if you ran into it naturally? NOOO!!!! I know you won't believe me, but it was made out of foam….. Uh yeah….. You know….. Maybe I shouldn't have told you that….. A bit embarrassing.
Foam pillars shouldn't hurt, should they? I thought I must have imagined it and so I punched the darn pillar…..really hard.
"OUCH!!! GOD DAMNIT!!!! THAT HURT!!!" I don't know where on earth I picked up those words, being brought up in an asylum…wait a sec… oh yeah. I remember now!
//Flashback within this story of a flashback and yes, this whole story is a flashback//
I was sitting on the one side of the door to my room. I heard a man try to get in. Like I said, it's like running into a brick wall. I heard him yell out.
"OUCH!!! GOD DAMNIT!!! THAT FUCKING HURT!!!" I heard him and blinked. Then I yelled back.
"THEN WHY'D YOU RUN INTO IT?!!" There was a pause.
"I must have hit my head REALLY HARD." I heard him mutter. "The WALL is TALKING to me. Maybe I'm supposed to be here….."
//end flashback//
"Oh…." I said while remembering and ignored the workers staring at me. It's not like I did anything…..well, besides running into a pillar and screaming out swears after punching it…..But besides that I didn't do anything. I sat and thought for a bit. 'Then again maybe people running around like crazed loonies isn't normal here.' I thought. Jeez… I don't know how they survived.
A bit after sitting on the floor, I got up and resumed my daily activities- after posting a sign on the pillar telling people not to run into it. My normal daily activities included running around like a sugar high freak, which I was, and sometimes being normal. Normal= not-so-sugar-high.
During my running around the palace, I came to a set of stairs going down. I had a couple of choices.
A) go down them
B) go down them
C) not go down them
D) go down them
So, which one was I to do? I thought it all out. 'A! yes! that's good! But wait- B is just as good! So is D! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO? A, B, or D? I CAN'T CHOOSE!!! WAHHHHHH!!!!' Notice how choice C never even crossed my mind. I don't know how I survived back then. So simple, naive- well….. Does knowing where to kick a guy and make it really hurt count? Nah… So back to where I was before. My life was so simple, naïve, sugary….. Yes. Certainly the last one.
All of a sudden I heard a call. I came from down the stairs. What was down the stairs? A voice. A voice was calling me down the stairs. The voice down the stairs was beckoning. I knew what I had to do! I shouted back,
"Fox could not come to the phone right now, please leave a message after she runs for her life!" I said and ran off. Little did I know, that it was only…
"Fox!" The voice called.
"You will never catch me alive COPPER!!! AEEEE!!!" I said running as fast as possible. I did hear the person sigh.
"Oh not this again." In case you didn't figure it out, it was Kurama. I was so surprised at finding out that it was only him, and not some unknown stalker, that I ran into something. Hard. I bet you will never guess what it could possibly be.
"OUCH!!! GOD DAMNIT!!! THAT HURT!!!" I yelled at the foam pillar. Kurama stopped running, I could tell.
"I did not know that you swore." He said calmly, but his eyes were big and full of surprise.
"I learned how from a guy that ran into my door at the asylum."
"Really?"
"Yeah. Sad, isn't it."
"Are you ready to go?"
"Go where?" I asked. Then it hit me. Hard.
"OUCH!!! GOD DAMNIT!!! THAT HURT!!!" I yelled. I looked at the thing that hit me. It was a rock with a piece of paper tied to it.
"OHHH!!!! A PRETTY PIECE OF PAPER TIED TO A ROCK!!!! I KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!" I said squealing. I grabbed it. "There will be a ransom note or a threat!!! This sort of thing always happens in fairy tales!!" I unraveled it. "Lets see…"
"Yes?" Kurama asked. He was obviously curious too. I sweat dropped once reading it. Well, it's more like it didn't have anything on it.
"Read it yourself." I handed it to him.
"….." He stared at it. "This is interesting. A rock and a piece of paper flew out of nowhere to hit you on the head. There aren't any windows near by. The paper is also blank."
"Or is it?" I asked.
"You have an idea?" He asked me.
"No.. I just always wanted to say that." Kurama sweat dropped.
"Well, maybe it is written in invisible ink. I will hold onto it." He told me and I yelled out again.
"OUCH!!! GOD DAMNIT!!! THAT HURTS!!" Another rock and message hit my head. I just handed it to Kurama and told him to read it. I started grumbling as he unfolded it. He stared at it for a moment. Well, for a long while.
"DOES IT SAY ANYTHING?" I yelled.
"Yes- and you didn't need to shout it." Kurama said and handed it over.
"Yes I did. I needed to show my impatience." I looked the message over and gasped. This was not what I had been expecting at all.
A/N: Sorry if this is a short chapter! But be thankful for having a chapter at all! ^_^
Yeah… and I want to have a vote.
Should Fox go for…
A) Kurama and make a sudden twist in the story
B) Hiei and make the little demon have a love for the first time
C) Both. She'll choose one in the end, but she'll only choose b/c she has to.
This will help out a lot with plot ideas.