Disclamer: I do not own beyblade or the song in chapter one, I got the song
form the cartoon movie Treasure Planet...........gee, you know your kool
when....
For thoese that wanted this to be a one shot........don't read its just that simple
This was my first time at a angest fic or beyblade fic for that, I'm really glad that I got such good feed back, I was sure I would get at least one flame, oh and FYI I am not unstable or depressed, and I am not suicidal (so many times I read fics like this and they stop half way through cause there goning through depression), k?
Clothes: its all from the thrid season since I like the clothes from that season more, gotta luv that scarf.
Reviews kodoku Wolf I decided to write more cause I like were the story is going but I was going to make this a one shot so if anyone has any ideas or sugestions, I'm open. Your not the only one they asked for it to be a yaoi fic, I do read them at like them but I'm afraid that I would mess it up and if would be really really bad, I don't think I'm good enough to be able to pull one off but I might try it.
Girlie G thanks for reviewing this, I didn't think anyone who read my inuyasha fics would like this but I'm glad you liked it
Dancing Wolf again, luv to do yaoi, think I would mess it up, might try it. I did have a beta reader for my inuyasha fics but they were all comedy and I don't think they want to do this one so if anyone would like to be my beta reader I'm looking.
Tai-writer I'm glad you liked it, thats probly the best comment I ever got.
Yana18Mary Kate after this I do have an idea for another beyblade fic with Kai and Tala, thanks for the review, its always nice to hear ppl like ur stories
LAST TIME
Kai lowered his head and let his arms fall to his sides. He gave one last look into the water below and headed back to his team, no, not team, friends.
A figure watched the red eyed teen leave the cliff behind. "Kai.....let us in....."
Chapter 2
The black haired teen jumped down from his hiding place and walked towards the edge of the cliff were his captain stood just seconds before. 'Kai'
The rain had stopped but the water below still crashed against the rock face. 'This has been the fifth time I have caught you trying something like this'
Thunder could be heard in the back round and the clouds moved to reveal the night sky. 'you were so close this time, closer then you have ever been........and, I'm scared'
The moon shone its light on the youth below as he dropped down on his knees to the wet ground. "I'm scared that next time I won't be here to stop you!"
Rei put his hands on the ground to steady himself, his whole body was shaking. He was shaking from a mix of anger and fear. Angry at himself because he felt useless, some many times he had tried to talk to the crimson eyed blader but each time he was shut down. It seemed the harder he pushed the more determined Kai was to keep him out. He had built a wall around himself that even Rei could not even hope to break. Fear, that he would lose him.
'Kai.......why do you push your team away, they only want to help you, why can't you let us help you, why-'
Rei looked up at the moon who's light reflected the tear that appeared on his face. "Why won't you let me help you"
Unable to support himself on his arms he went into a sitting position. The clouds were nearly all gone by now. He sat on the edge of the cliff for a long time just watching the moon reflect on the water. 'I guess I should head back, the guys would freak out if they saw that I wasn't there in the morning, Tyson, Max and Kenny would freak, but Ka-'
Rei was slowly getting up off the grass incase his legs decided to take a little holiday, but he froze in place when his mind went to his captain. "shit"
Rei sprinted towards the hotel as fast as he could. Kai would be at the hotel any minute now. If Kai saw that he wasn't in his bed which he would cause they share the same room Kai would know that Rei followed him. Rei knew that Kai had heard him at the lake, that was the point, and unlike Tyson, Kai could put two and two together. 'Damn it Rei, how could you mess this up, if Kai finds out you were following him you might as well kiss his trust good bye'
Rei could see the city lights, he was almost there.
-------with Kai
Kai had just made it up the stairs to his hotel room. Quietly as possible he made his way into his and Rei's room as to not wake up the other teens in the room beside his. He pulled of his damp clothes and got dressed into a pair of black draw string pants and black t-shirt. 'at least the others are still asleep'
Kai flopped down onto his bed, he had run back to the hotel from the cliff and was still hot so he didn't bother with the covers. 'at least they don't know I was gone, wouldn't that be a treat trying to get Tyson off my back as to why I suddenly ran out of the hotel at 3am and snuck back in. The only person thet wouldn't bother me would be Rei'
The was the first time the black haired blader entered his mine since he got back into the city. He was so careful not to wake Tyson, Max and Kenny that he had forgotten the fact that he shared a room with the forth member of the team. Kai turned his head slowly in the direction of Rei's bed half scared that he would see those golden eyes starring back at him wish questions of where he had been, but there where no eyes, no questions....no Rei. "Rei?"
Kai got out of bed and looked around his room for any sign of Rei. He then made his way into the living room, the small kitchen, he ran into the bedroom with the sleeping teens, but no luck. Kai walled out of the bedroom almost in a daze, he felt weak in the knees so he leaned against the wall between the two bedrooms. 'at the cliff, when I heard the other I saw the faces, but when I heard Rei, the water was blank'
Kai slid down the wall into a sitting position with his hands around his legs. He had been caught and he knew it, he felt like a little kid that had broken a lamp and was waiting for his parents to come home. He rested his head in his arms. Crying seemed like a good idea right now and he probably would have if he still knew how. 'why would he follow me, I though out of all of them I could trust Rei, but it seems I can't trust anyone'
Kai jerked his head up, in an instant the fear from his eyes was replaced with one of pure hate. Something inside of him snapped and he was unable to think clearly. He ran into his room and got dressed back into his damp clothes. 'damn you Rei, you tricked me, I let you in, I let down my defenses for a second and this is my reward'
Kai grabbed Dranzer off the night stand and ran to the balcony just in time to see Rei running into site.
-----------with Rei
Rei could see the hotel in view. 'good, I'm almost there'
Once he reached the front steps of the hotel he leaned on the side of the building to catch his breath.
"....Rei"
Rei whipped his head around to find himself starting into a pair of dark crimson eyes.
Nother chapter down, any my 16th B-Day party is tomorrow, oh yeah. Lazer Tag here I come
sorry if not much happen or if its too short but I needed something to tie everything together.
For thoese that wanted this to be a one shot........don't read its just that simple
This was my first time at a angest fic or beyblade fic for that, I'm really glad that I got such good feed back, I was sure I would get at least one flame, oh and FYI I am not unstable or depressed, and I am not suicidal (so many times I read fics like this and they stop half way through cause there goning through depression), k?
Clothes: its all from the thrid season since I like the clothes from that season more, gotta luv that scarf.
Reviews kodoku Wolf I decided to write more cause I like were the story is going but I was going to make this a one shot so if anyone has any ideas or sugestions, I'm open. Your not the only one they asked for it to be a yaoi fic, I do read them at like them but I'm afraid that I would mess it up and if would be really really bad, I don't think I'm good enough to be able to pull one off but I might try it.
Girlie G thanks for reviewing this, I didn't think anyone who read my inuyasha fics would like this but I'm glad you liked it
Dancing Wolf again, luv to do yaoi, think I would mess it up, might try it. I did have a beta reader for my inuyasha fics but they were all comedy and I don't think they want to do this one so if anyone would like to be my beta reader I'm looking.
Tai-writer I'm glad you liked it, thats probly the best comment I ever got.
Yana18Mary Kate after this I do have an idea for another beyblade fic with Kai and Tala, thanks for the review, its always nice to hear ppl like ur stories
LAST TIME
Kai lowered his head and let his arms fall to his sides. He gave one last look into the water below and headed back to his team, no, not team, friends.
A figure watched the red eyed teen leave the cliff behind. "Kai.....let us in....."
Chapter 2
The black haired teen jumped down from his hiding place and walked towards the edge of the cliff were his captain stood just seconds before. 'Kai'
The rain had stopped but the water below still crashed against the rock face. 'This has been the fifth time I have caught you trying something like this'
Thunder could be heard in the back round and the clouds moved to reveal the night sky. 'you were so close this time, closer then you have ever been........and, I'm scared'
The moon shone its light on the youth below as he dropped down on his knees to the wet ground. "I'm scared that next time I won't be here to stop you!"
Rei put his hands on the ground to steady himself, his whole body was shaking. He was shaking from a mix of anger and fear. Angry at himself because he felt useless, some many times he had tried to talk to the crimson eyed blader but each time he was shut down. It seemed the harder he pushed the more determined Kai was to keep him out. He had built a wall around himself that even Rei could not even hope to break. Fear, that he would lose him.
'Kai.......why do you push your team away, they only want to help you, why can't you let us help you, why-'
Rei looked up at the moon who's light reflected the tear that appeared on his face. "Why won't you let me help you"
Unable to support himself on his arms he went into a sitting position. The clouds were nearly all gone by now. He sat on the edge of the cliff for a long time just watching the moon reflect on the water. 'I guess I should head back, the guys would freak out if they saw that I wasn't there in the morning, Tyson, Max and Kenny would freak, but Ka-'
Rei was slowly getting up off the grass incase his legs decided to take a little holiday, but he froze in place when his mind went to his captain. "shit"
Rei sprinted towards the hotel as fast as he could. Kai would be at the hotel any minute now. If Kai saw that he wasn't in his bed which he would cause they share the same room Kai would know that Rei followed him. Rei knew that Kai had heard him at the lake, that was the point, and unlike Tyson, Kai could put two and two together. 'Damn it Rei, how could you mess this up, if Kai finds out you were following him you might as well kiss his trust good bye'
Rei could see the city lights, he was almost there.
-------with Kai
Kai had just made it up the stairs to his hotel room. Quietly as possible he made his way into his and Rei's room as to not wake up the other teens in the room beside his. He pulled of his damp clothes and got dressed into a pair of black draw string pants and black t-shirt. 'at least the others are still asleep'
Kai flopped down onto his bed, he had run back to the hotel from the cliff and was still hot so he didn't bother with the covers. 'at least they don't know I was gone, wouldn't that be a treat trying to get Tyson off my back as to why I suddenly ran out of the hotel at 3am and snuck back in. The only person thet wouldn't bother me would be Rei'
The was the first time the black haired blader entered his mine since he got back into the city. He was so careful not to wake Tyson, Max and Kenny that he had forgotten the fact that he shared a room with the forth member of the team. Kai turned his head slowly in the direction of Rei's bed half scared that he would see those golden eyes starring back at him wish questions of where he had been, but there where no eyes, no questions....no Rei. "Rei?"
Kai got out of bed and looked around his room for any sign of Rei. He then made his way into the living room, the small kitchen, he ran into the bedroom with the sleeping teens, but no luck. Kai walled out of the bedroom almost in a daze, he felt weak in the knees so he leaned against the wall between the two bedrooms. 'at the cliff, when I heard the other I saw the faces, but when I heard Rei, the water was blank'
Kai slid down the wall into a sitting position with his hands around his legs. He had been caught and he knew it, he felt like a little kid that had broken a lamp and was waiting for his parents to come home. He rested his head in his arms. Crying seemed like a good idea right now and he probably would have if he still knew how. 'why would he follow me, I though out of all of them I could trust Rei, but it seems I can't trust anyone'
Kai jerked his head up, in an instant the fear from his eyes was replaced with one of pure hate. Something inside of him snapped and he was unable to think clearly. He ran into his room and got dressed back into his damp clothes. 'damn you Rei, you tricked me, I let you in, I let down my defenses for a second and this is my reward'
Kai grabbed Dranzer off the night stand and ran to the balcony just in time to see Rei running into site.
-----------with Rei
Rei could see the hotel in view. 'good, I'm almost there'
Once he reached the front steps of the hotel he leaned on the side of the building to catch his breath.
"....Rei"
Rei whipped his head around to find himself starting into a pair of dark crimson eyes.
Nother chapter down, any my 16th B-Day party is tomorrow, oh yeah. Lazer Tag here I come
sorry if not much happen or if its too short but I needed something to tie everything together.