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Cotton Candy
'Ughhh... What the crap happened, Dark?! ...Dark?' Daisuke Niwa had just awoken from his Satoshi induced nap, and at the moment, had no idea what had happened. But, as usual, Dark had to ruin his innocence.
As the dark haired theif wandered into his consious, Daisuke was worried and slightly disturbed. Dark was wandering around muttering to himself, occasionally blushing bright red and then muttering some more about 'bad, x-rated thoughts'. Daisuke was confused. 'Dark... What happened...?'
Dark suddenly started to grin maniacally, before yelling at Daisuke at the top of his lungs. 'DAISUKE AND CREEPY BASTARD, SITTING IN A TREE-- F-U-...erm, I mean... K-I-S-S-I-N-G! First c--'
Daisuke had heard enough. 'Ahh! What happened? What did I dooo?' The Niwa boy stumbled into a panic, forgetting that he looked like he was asleep to everyone else on the train. His legs and arms started flailing about as Dark sweatdropped.
'What do you mean, what did YOU do? You mean you don't remember what creepy bastard did? Boy, that was one hell of a love bite, and you don't remember?!'
...and it all came flooding back. 'Oh... Yeah.' Daisuke flushed. He squimed. He twitched.
He accidentally brushed his hand against Satoshi's.
Oh boy.
"So you're finally awake Niwa-kun."
"AHH!" Daisuke spasmed, throwing his hands up, as if to sheild his face. (which was currently reddish-purple from blushing)
As he realized that he was overreacting, he twiched again and lowed his arms, looking sheepish.
"Err... Hi."
Satoshi looked at him with what looked almost like a preditory glint in his eyes, contrasting with his emotionless voice.
"It's time to get off, Niwa-kun."
'Meep! Dark, help!' The poor boy was stuttering and looking around nervously, writhing under the older boy's hungry gaze.
'On your own, pal.' Dark appeared to go back to sleep.
Rather slowly, Daisuke pushed himself up from the seat, warily watching Satoshi from the corner of his eye.
'Who knows what that evil genious will pull next...' Dark was obviously awake again, and now cackling maniacally. Daisuke sweatdropped, still observing the blunette, whom had just taken off his glasses to clean off the lenses before putting them back on again. Hm... Suspisious.
Poor Daisuke was still so wrapped up in glancing over at Satoshi that he tripped over the seat and was sent careening backwards. 'AHH! I'm gonna fall!' Bracing himself for getting a faceful of ground, he didn't expect what happened next. Two slim arms slid around his waist, and hot breath once again tickled his ear.
'Dejavu..' Dark muttered, grinning.
Daisuke, whom was at the point of mental breakdown, wanted to cry. Why him? All he wanted was to go hooooommmmeee... So obviouly, he wasn't thinking.
"PLEEASSEE DON'T EAAATTT MEEEE!" He buried his head in Satoshi's chest, hoping that he would disapear then and there, so he didn't see the smirk that flashed across the blue-haired boy's face.
"It's time to get off the train, Niwa-kun..."
Daisuke stumbled through the isle, blushing, trying to regain control of his steps and his thoughts, most of which happened to be curtasy of Dark, who we shall decide is more perverted than you would ever want to know. '...and then his hand goes there, and you...'
'DARRRRKK! ENOUGH OF THAT!' Daisuke was ready to find something to hit his head with, and was so wrapped up he didn't hear a word of what the teacher said about 'staying with your partners and meeting back here as late as 10 at night', and so when Satoshi came over to him, (dampening the extremly 'I am so going to eat you!' look in his eyes so as not to scare the alreasdy traumatized redhead), the aforementioned redhead was banging his head against a large... chunk of wood?
"Niwa-kun, may I ask what you're doing?" Satoshi stood, staring, slightly worridly at the smaller boy, afraid for his sanity... But then, if he had to live with Dark in his head all the time, he was all ready cautious about his mental state. But, obviously, not cautious enough, seeing as inadvertadly molesting the adorable boy seemed to have become one of his hobbies. "The teacher said we could leave off.. On our own.. Now.." Daisuke has dropped the block of wood, sheepish and blushing. "So.. Niwa-kun, where to you want to go?"
Our little Daisuke-chan's mind was in a whirl, because where to turn when even your own mind was a traitor? 'ROLLERCOASTER!' Dark was hollering in his ear, but something else popped up once an awhile-- a whisper of 'Cotton candy stand..' with a very yummy mental image of Satoshi eating it.. Off his face.. Yummy... Even Dark was beginning to be tuned out as extremly not-allowed fantasies began to invade his mind. Cotton candied.. Satoshi...
"Niwa-kun?"
Shaking his head, Daisuke pulled himself out of the depths of his mind.
"Niwa-kun, your nose is bleeding.."
Blushing furiously, the redhead pulled out a tissue, and turning his back to Satoshi, fixed his problem, before turning backward.
"Anyway, Niwa-KUUUNN.. I asked you a question. Was that your answer?" The blue-haired bishonen smirked lightly, feathered hair brushing his eyes, glasses shining in the morning light.
Shaking his head furiously, Daisuke stopped ogoling his partner and frantically searched his mind for an answer. "Uh.. Rollercoaster! Yea, that's it!" He was so caught up in saying something, he didn't even know what he said. Ohh, boy. Dark begain cheering, saying things like 'YAY!' and 'I give you and creepy-bastard my blessing, if this is how much he muddles up your head!' Poor Daisuke doesn't even know what he said.
But it didn't take too long to find out.
Daisuke gulped. And shook. And writhed. He was standing in front of the biggest rollercoaster in the history of rollercoaster, any shred of pride or dignity gone, clinging to Satoshi like a lifeline. Satoshi of coarse, didn't mind, and if anyone looked at them funny, his patented Glare Of DeathTM scared them all away. When they got to the front of the line, he quietly asked the worker running the ride if they were allowed to ride with someone else in their lap, (while glaring), and the girl nodded, squealing under her breath and bouncing up and down muttering something like 'It's so CYUUUUTTEEE!' while Dark had to agree. Daisuke was too scared to notice and Satoshi chose to ignore her. He silently dragged the scareed, quivering redhead over to the ride and got on, spreading his legs and plopping Daisuke-chan in the middle of his lap, before buckling the seatbelt lightning-fast, so as not to give the boy a chance to escape. "This okay.. Daisuke... Chan?" He whispered in the blushing boy's ear as the car began to move. Daisuke had his eyes closed tight, and was holding onto Satoshi so hard that his knuckles were beginning to turn a strained white. But somewhere in his fuddled mind, he heard the 'chan' and blushed like hell. Still clinging, of coarse. The car began to gain speed as it richotted off the track, spinning up a large loop. Daisuke was crying by this time. Rolling his eyes, Satoshi quietly, turned Daisuke's face to face him, and Daisuke flushed heavier, still crying slightly. Slowly smirking, Satoshi quietly licked off all the tears on the younger boy's face. "Better?" The 'I'm going to eat you!' vibe was back in full force now, but Daisuke didn't have time to think about it as he buried his head in Satoshi's chest, and Satoshi almost didn't catch the red-head's answer.
"Yes.."
The rollercoaster was over in only a few seconds as they hurtled to an abrubt stop, unbuckled and lurched out of the wobbly car. Satoshi was holding onto a pale Daisuke, carrying the redhead bridal style off the ride, ignoring the call of 'GOOD LUCK!' and 'THE ALLY BEHIND THE COTTON CANDY STAND IS AN AWSOME MAKEOUT PLACE!' from the grinning wickedly girl running the ride. He quietly set the boy in his arms upright. "Why did you say that was what you wanted to do if you were going to be so scared, Niwa-kun?"
Daisuke blushed, some of the color returning to his white cheeks. "Erm.. Um.."
Satoshi sighed, blue bangs, shadowing his eyes. "Nevermind, Niwa-kun. Let's get something to eat." He grabbed the smaller boy by the hand and gently dragged him over to a cotton candy stand, and ordered ONE, not two, but ONE blue cotton candies. Daisuke blushed again. Satoshi took a bite, his slick, flexible tounge lightly licking the rest off of his pale, kissable lips that were lifted into an unbelievably sexy smirk. His light blue bangs hung over his gorgeous sapphire eyes, and light danced over his glasses lenses, one of his thin eyebrows lifted questioningly at the smaller boy. Daisuke lightly whiped the drool off of his chin and wondered where he could get a bucket of ice to stick down his pants. Before he knew it, even DARK had a nosebleed as he was cackling incessantly, still happy about his rollercoaster ride-- so happy, he had even been quiet for a while. But that might be because he had decided that this was better than a soap opera and wouldn't miss a second of it. While Daisuke was so vividly supplying himself with mental images, Satoshi took one look at him and snapped.
A predatory glint in his eye, Satoshi gently dragged Daisuke into a nearby allyway, still grasping the cotton candy in one hand.
"Erm.. Satoshi-kun?" Daisuke had long since lost the inner battle to call him 'Hiwatari-kun'.
What he got was anything but what he expected. Satoshi calmly took another bite of the cottoncandy before slamming Daisuke up against a wall with one hand, before dropping the cotton candy and placing the hand that was holding it on the other side of the small boy.
"How 'bout we go back to your original idea... Daisuke... Chan..."
And with that, Satoshi kissed him.
Daisuke's mind went blissfully blank around then, but before it could, he decided that amusement parks weren't all bad, after all. And that, of coarse, cotton candy had become his favorite food of all time. (Dark was sitting back, munching on popcorn at this time.)
Okay, WARNING HERE! What comes next is, indeed a full-blown, almost smutty makeout session between our favorite couple. If you get squeamish over that sort of thing, you might want to ignore this part, kyuu.. " What? I'm a fangirl.
Daisuke took his small hands, sticking them in the taller boy's pockets, pulling his hips to his so that there wasn't any air between them as Satoshi continued kissing him, over and over until the redhead's lips were lightly swollen and he was gasping for breath. Satoshi's tounge that Daisuke had been observing earlier was in his mouth, exporing every nook and cavern, barly letting a light moan get through from the back of Daisuke's throat. The bluenette pulled away from Daisuke's mouth before trailing kisses down his neck, making quick work of his shirt collar, and pulling the rest of the cursed thing off, tossing it to the ground as he nipped and bit and licked his way down the moaning and shivering younger boy's shoulder. He left Daisuke's neck in favor or his mouth, and once again licked at his lips in an attempt to get Daisuke to open his mouth, which he did, and once again practically shoved his tounge down the redhead's throat, not that he minded. Daisuke pulled Satoshi closer, his hands traveling up his back and then back down to tuck themselves in the taller boy's pants, letting his tounge writhe in his mouth, moans coming from deep in his throat.
Okay, the smut ends now. -is embarassed-
Dark was almost embarassed by now, hiding his face in his arms. 'Oh c'mon! The F-U-C.. Erm.. I mean K-I-S-S-I-N-G thing was just a jooookkkkeee!'
Well, it's safe to say that those two stayed there way past curfew.
Yay! It's done! -twitcheth- Is everyone happy now? Yay! I'm sorry for taking so long, I happen to be a lazy bum with writer's block. The plot in this story rolled over and died, I believe. Thank you for all your support, and I hope I lived up to everyone's expectations! I want to especially thank Aner Keram for being the last bit of support I needed to finish this! KUDOS! -glomp- ... -hands everyone plushies, pocky, and steaming bowls of instant ramen- Love you all! Thank you all so much for the reviews! -waves and runs off- THANNKKK J000!
Ja, minna-san,
Aimee
