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I'm a real pack rat when it comes to writing fiction. No matter how much I write, I always take parts I don't use and set them aside. One huge part that was taken out was a flashback that Zelda had of her, Link, and Navi fishing. She was thinking of the time when Link noticed her perfume that she made out of rose petals that fell off flowers in her garden. It's just before Link attacks Zelda for the first time.
The reason it was removed was because the humor felt really out of place and didn't seem to go with the story real well. But at the same time, it had a lot of charm to just delete it completely but was far to short to be made into a story. Finals are going on right now so I can't add the next section until next week. So instead, enjoy this little break.
One Month Ago
There has never been a clearer day than that month of September. Two figures sat under a large cherry tree. One held a large wooden rod while the other simply sat next to him. The tree's shadow lightly kissed their faces.
A red and white bobber floated on the water's surface.
Despite the beauty that stirred in the air, it was a horrible day to fish. Nothing was biting for the past two hours. Link fidgeted in his spot. He took his hand and popped his neck. His mind was desperate for any type of action. He was willing to even catch a minnow if it meant ending the dullness that sank in the time he was there. Zelda situated herself against the trunk. Her eyes were glued to her book. Her mind was totally ignorant of Link's awkward positions as he turned and twisted from sitting too long. Navi was just as worse as she was spawned on her back atop of Link's noggin like a dead dragonfly.
Zelda yawned as she plucked a leaf from the tree and set it in her spot. She straightened her dress as she pulled a small vile and placed some on her neck. Link rose an eyebrow as he watched her spread the lovely juice upon her neck.
Link turned toward her. His curiosity was desperate for anything new at that moment. "What is that? It looks like diluted red potion? Is it mosquito repellent?" he asked while grabbing the bottle. Navi stuttered as Link's sudden movement shook her from his head. Her body tumbled off his cranium. Link involuntarily held his other hand and caught her.
Zelda reached over took the bottle back. "No, I fashioned this perfume from the rose petals in my garden." Link reached over and pulled back her hair. He dipped his nose close and sniffed the side of her neck.
"So that's how you managed to smell like a flower field every time I see you." Navi giggled as he continued smelling her. He turned towards her and smiled. "I like it!" he grinned as he hastily reels in his line.
Zelda blushed. "You.do?" Link gently casts the line.
"AW! Shit, my bobber got caught on a log. Hey Navi, could you."
"I'm already on it, Link!" spoke Navi as she floated toward the snagged device.
Zelda turned back toward him while Link raised his head, trying to eye Navi as she attempted to pull his hook from the swollen fallen tree. "How do you like it?" mumbled Zelda as a cloud of bashfulness floated in her stomach. Link pulled his knuckle under his chin.
"It's strong. but not too strong. kind of like. I don't know. really husky. ," he spoke as he drew closer to it. ". you're probably going to wonder. but it kind've makes me feel more." he spoke as he laid his head against her. She could feel his breathing getting more rasped as his hands shook a little. ".drunk." he mumbled as he looked up at her.
Zelda began to wonder if Link actually knew what was happening to him. Her eyes quickly looked down for a second. She couldn't tell due to his tunic being so loose. She looked up at him, "You're sweating."
".yeah I know. I feel really warm too. I think I'm coming down with something. but that stuff smells so good." he replied back as he drew closer to her nuzzling like a deer to its fawn.
"I should wear it more often if I knew you liked it," she spoke as she crawled up in his lap. She could definitely feel him now. Link took his arms and wrapped them around her as he continued to smell her scent. Zelda thought to herself debuting whether she should make a move. Link seemed content alone at smelling her. Her head turned toward him; just when she was about to pull his head at hers.
"LINK! I GOT IT!!" screamed Navi as she stood on the log and held the hook up high.
".that's great Navi! Bring it back here!" shouted Link as he lets go of Zelda and picked up his rod.
Navi stood silently as a large rumble began to grow. Navi turned left and right as she watched a dragonfly float over the waters and suddenly disappearing from the surface. Her violet eyes gazed as a fin started to swim back and forth toward her.
She screamed as a giant thirty pound fish flew through the air, glistening in the sun, and swallowed her whole.
Link immediately shot up, dropping Zelda on the ground as he manned his rod. His hand quickly pulled the reel and rod as he attempted to bring the fish in. His muscles twitched as he heaved the fish ashore and pulled it off the hook. He picked up the large bass and pulled its mouth wide open. "Helllllllooooo," he shouted as he stuck his head in. ".hmmm, she's in there pretty deep." Link held the fish and somehow began to perform the Heimlich maneuver. Link gave it one last push causing the pink fairy to fly out the mouth and slamming straight into a rock.
Her limbs were spawned against the surface as Link walked over and peeled her body off like a sticker. She panted desperately as she sat on the ground on her hands and knees.
"Wow Navi.I didn't realize you made great bait!" smiled Link as he held the thirty-pounder while grinning.
Navi's eyes burned a bright red as she floated up and twisted her neck three-hundred and sixty degrees. "IF. you. DARE. USE ME AS BAIT AGAIN!!!!" she yelled while emitting a bright red.
Zelda sighed as she picked up her book and continuing on where she left off as the duo ran back and forth. Link skipped merrily in Kokiri glee with his bass while Navi zapped him with fire bolts.
I'm a real pack rat when it comes to writing fiction. No matter how much I write, I always take parts I don't use and set them aside. One huge part that was taken out was a flashback that Zelda had of her, Link, and Navi fishing. She was thinking of the time when Link noticed her perfume that she made out of rose petals that fell off flowers in her garden. It's just before Link attacks Zelda for the first time.
The reason it was removed was because the humor felt really out of place and didn't seem to go with the story real well. But at the same time, it had a lot of charm to just delete it completely but was far to short to be made into a story. Finals are going on right now so I can't add the next section until next week. So instead, enjoy this little break.
One Month Ago
There has never been a clearer day than that month of September. Two figures sat under a large cherry tree. One held a large wooden rod while the other simply sat next to him. The tree's shadow lightly kissed their faces.
A red and white bobber floated on the water's surface.
Despite the beauty that stirred in the air, it was a horrible day to fish. Nothing was biting for the past two hours. Link fidgeted in his spot. He took his hand and popped his neck. His mind was desperate for any type of action. He was willing to even catch a minnow if it meant ending the dullness that sank in the time he was there. Zelda situated herself against the trunk. Her eyes were glued to her book. Her mind was totally ignorant of Link's awkward positions as he turned and twisted from sitting too long. Navi was just as worse as she was spawned on her back atop of Link's noggin like a dead dragonfly.
Zelda yawned as she plucked a leaf from the tree and set it in her spot. She straightened her dress as she pulled a small vile and placed some on her neck. Link rose an eyebrow as he watched her spread the lovely juice upon her neck.
Link turned toward her. His curiosity was desperate for anything new at that moment. "What is that? It looks like diluted red potion? Is it mosquito repellent?" he asked while grabbing the bottle. Navi stuttered as Link's sudden movement shook her from his head. Her body tumbled off his cranium. Link involuntarily held his other hand and caught her.
Zelda reached over took the bottle back. "No, I fashioned this perfume from the rose petals in my garden." Link reached over and pulled back her hair. He dipped his nose close and sniffed the side of her neck.
"So that's how you managed to smell like a flower field every time I see you." Navi giggled as he continued smelling her. He turned towards her and smiled. "I like it!" he grinned as he hastily reels in his line.
Zelda blushed. "You.do?" Link gently casts the line.
"AW! Shit, my bobber got caught on a log. Hey Navi, could you."
"I'm already on it, Link!" spoke Navi as she floated toward the snagged device.
Zelda turned back toward him while Link raised his head, trying to eye Navi as she attempted to pull his hook from the swollen fallen tree. "How do you like it?" mumbled Zelda as a cloud of bashfulness floated in her stomach. Link pulled his knuckle under his chin.
"It's strong. but not too strong. kind of like. I don't know. really husky. ," he spoke as he drew closer to it. ". you're probably going to wonder. but it kind've makes me feel more." he spoke as he laid his head against her. She could feel his breathing getting more rasped as his hands shook a little. ".drunk." he mumbled as he looked up at her.
Zelda began to wonder if Link actually knew what was happening to him. Her eyes quickly looked down for a second. She couldn't tell due to his tunic being so loose. She looked up at him, "You're sweating."
".yeah I know. I feel really warm too. I think I'm coming down with something. but that stuff smells so good." he replied back as he drew closer to her nuzzling like a deer to its fawn.
"I should wear it more often if I knew you liked it," she spoke as she crawled up in his lap. She could definitely feel him now. Link took his arms and wrapped them around her as he continued to smell her scent. Zelda thought to herself debuting whether she should make a move. Link seemed content alone at smelling her. Her head turned toward him; just when she was about to pull his head at hers.
"LINK! I GOT IT!!" screamed Navi as she stood on the log and held the hook up high.
".that's great Navi! Bring it back here!" shouted Link as he lets go of Zelda and picked up his rod.
Navi stood silently as a large rumble began to grow. Navi turned left and right as she watched a dragonfly float over the waters and suddenly disappearing from the surface. Her violet eyes gazed as a fin started to swim back and forth toward her.
She screamed as a giant thirty pound fish flew through the air, glistening in the sun, and swallowed her whole.
Link immediately shot up, dropping Zelda on the ground as he manned his rod. His hand quickly pulled the reel and rod as he attempted to bring the fish in. His muscles twitched as he heaved the fish ashore and pulled it off the hook. He picked up the large bass and pulled its mouth wide open. "Helllllllooooo," he shouted as he stuck his head in. ".hmmm, she's in there pretty deep." Link held the fish and somehow began to perform the Heimlich maneuver. Link gave it one last push causing the pink fairy to fly out the mouth and slamming straight into a rock.
Her limbs were spawned against the surface as Link walked over and peeled her body off like a sticker. She panted desperately as she sat on the ground on her hands and knees.
"Wow Navi.I didn't realize you made great bait!" smiled Link as he held the thirty-pounder while grinning.
Navi's eyes burned a bright red as she floated up and twisted her neck three-hundred and sixty degrees. "IF. you. DARE. USE ME AS BAIT AGAIN!!!!" she yelled while emitting a bright red.
Zelda sighed as she picked up her book and continuing on where she left off as the duo ran back and forth. Link skipped merrily in Kokiri glee with his bass while Navi zapped him with fire bolts.