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Chapter 5, finally found you
Christian froze; the Duke was lying lifeless across the cobbled street. He turned towards number 10, Satine's house and saw the door was slightly open but nobody really seemed interested
"What happened" he asked a lady nearby
"We think he ran out from somewhere and the tram couldn't stop" the lady told him
"Thank you" Christian smiled and ran over to Satine's house.
He slowly pushed the door open and heard violent sobbing coming from inside, he walked into the living room and saw Satine curled up on the floor naked, her body shaking violently with her sobs, cuddling a shirt which Christian recognised as his own shirt which Satine would sleep in when they couldn't stay together in Montremarte
"Satine?" he whispered gently
"No" she whimpered "Please no, go away please"
Christian walked over to her and knelt next to her, he saw her body was battered and bleeding
"Satine" he whispered again "Satine darling it's me"
Satine lifted her face from his shirt and looked at him "Christian" she gasped
"I'm here sweetheart, its okay now" he looked at her face now bruised and tear stained, her hair now a mess, her eyes were red and puffy but something in her eyes seemed broken Satine lay on the floor staring at Christian; she couldn't believe he was really here especially now "What are you doing here?" she asked still sobbing
"I came to find you but the doctor said you had already left. Don't worry about that now"
"Thank you for finding me"
Satine shivered as a strong gust of wind came into the room and she curled up even tighter, Christian ever so gently lifted her onto the sofa just behind him and lowered his shirt she was holding over her naked body.
He gently kissed her forehead and walked back out into the hall to find where the draught was coming from and noticed the front door was open he took a quick look outside and saw the coroner taking the dukes body away. He shut the door and walked back to Satine, he felt something under his foot, looked down and saw her pink kimono lying a few feet away from where he found Satine.
He walked over to her and sat next to her, she looked so small and vulnerable cuddled up in his shirt he wanted to take her into his arms and never let go
"Satine darling" he whispered "Darling what happened"
Satine clung to him and began to sob again "I'm sorry Christian" she cried
"No I'm sorry, I shouldn't have left you" Christian said wiping her eyes and tenderly kissing her tears away "Satine I love you"
"I love you too Christian. I love you so much"
Christian pulled her into a tight embrace and kissed her hair
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Techie214: Thanks you for your review,
EwanRoxMySox: Here's the next part for you
Tani: Sorry I don't like cliff-hangers much either but it had to be done. Next parts up.
Chapter 5, finally found you
Christian froze; the Duke was lying lifeless across the cobbled street. He turned towards number 10, Satine's house and saw the door was slightly open but nobody really seemed interested
"What happened" he asked a lady nearby
"We think he ran out from somewhere and the tram couldn't stop" the lady told him
"Thank you" Christian smiled and ran over to Satine's house.
He slowly pushed the door open and heard violent sobbing coming from inside, he walked into the living room and saw Satine curled up on the floor naked, her body shaking violently with her sobs, cuddling a shirt which Christian recognised as his own shirt which Satine would sleep in when they couldn't stay together in Montremarte
"Satine?" he whispered gently
"No" she whimpered "Please no, go away please"
Christian walked over to her and knelt next to her, he saw her body was battered and bleeding
"Satine" he whispered again "Satine darling it's me"
Satine lifted her face from his shirt and looked at him "Christian" she gasped
"I'm here sweetheart, its okay now" he looked at her face now bruised and tear stained, her hair now a mess, her eyes were red and puffy but something in her eyes seemed broken Satine lay on the floor staring at Christian; she couldn't believe he was really here especially now "What are you doing here?" she asked still sobbing
"I came to find you but the doctor said you had already left. Don't worry about that now"
"Thank you for finding me"
Satine shivered as a strong gust of wind came into the room and she curled up even tighter, Christian ever so gently lifted her onto the sofa just behind him and lowered his shirt she was holding over her naked body.
He gently kissed her forehead and walked back out into the hall to find where the draught was coming from and noticed the front door was open he took a quick look outside and saw the coroner taking the dukes body away. He shut the door and walked back to Satine, he felt something under his foot, looked down and saw her pink kimono lying a few feet away from where he found Satine.
He walked over to her and sat next to her, she looked so small and vulnerable cuddled up in his shirt he wanted to take her into his arms and never let go
"Satine darling" he whispered "Darling what happened"
Satine clung to him and began to sob again "I'm sorry Christian" she cried
"No I'm sorry, I shouldn't have left you" Christian said wiping her eyes and tenderly kissing her tears away "Satine I love you"
"I love you too Christian. I love you so much"
Christian pulled her into a tight embrace and kissed her hair
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