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"Please remind me WHY THE HELL WE CAME HERE!" I glared at my sister.

All she did was burst out laughing. "You know" She took a breath so she wouldn't choke. "Exactly why we came here." She took another deep breath to fully recover from her out burst.

Glaring further at my little sister I reply "All we know is a name, and everyone in this bloody place knows him. It sounds like he will be a pompous moron who leads a bunch of cocky knights."

"And what the hell do you want me to do about it!" She looked at me and smirked.

"The only thing you can do to cure such a thing, Cut off his head." We both laughed knowing all to well that I would do it if he got on my nerves too much. It had already happened once before, why not do it again and rid the world of morons. We both carried on laughing for a while until my sister broke through her hysterical laughter.

"But then we shall be with out family won't we? And I don't think that's what father meant by helping him." She laughed again.

I smiled at her and replied, "You never know he might have wanted us to cure his pompous ass. And it doesn't sound to bad just you and me, for family. We could conquer our own lands and ravish the men." I burst out laughing and my sister just got worse.

"You know too well we aren't going to turn around and leave and do as we wish. We are doing this for father, how ever bad it is here. And don't tempt me. There may be men in that wall that you could amuse yourself with."

"Well its not like we ever listened to father anyway and plus they will all probably look like pigs, nose an all." Once again my sister laughed.

"Just shut it wills you! Its not like I made you come along with me is it? And we did occasionally listen to father"

I chuckled at my sister knowing full well it was on a rare occasion we did as we were told. A different matter of course when father was teaching us the skills of battle. "No you were just about to hold a knife to my neck to make me come here. Its not like I would leave all the fun to you if ever we actually run into any. God this place bores me."

"The only time you are not bored dear sister is if you have your enemy in front of you and some kind of weapon in your hand."

"To right who wouldn't love it." I looked around again keeping an eye out for anything. My sister had already done it but it didn't hurt to keep looking around. "Come on lets go I'm bored already. Lets go cure this pompous Arthur" my sister burst out laughing again and at the same time kicked our horses into a gallop heading for the wall.

After about three minutes of riding fast we came to a skidding stop in front of the big gates. "Put your hood up quick" I pulled mine up as quickly as my sister and then there came a call from the top of the wall. I looked up to see a group of solders with arrows directed straight at us. One shouted. "Who are you and what is your business for being here!"

I looked at my sister and she nodded back. "Open your gates! We came in search of a man known as Arthur, if he is here send him to us now!"

The solder that had asked the question turned slightly, I think towards another man that I couldn't see, to fetch the man or at least to do something.

"When you enter through the gates wait in the courtyard. My lord will decide whether he wishes to see you ." The solder called back down to us.

This is becoming rather irritating "Open your gates! Let us in. And tell your Lord we will not wait long!" The man disappeared behind the wall and shortly after the gates groaned open.

My horse sent a shiver from his shoulders across his whole body. I held on. He reared up slashing out his front hooves demonstrating how powerful he was to the solders that still stood watching us with there bows at there sides. He landed with a loud thud and gave a snort. The air was cold making the air he breathed out look like smoke, adding to the effect of his display. I laughed knowing full well he was showing off to the solders on top of the wall. I looked up to see them take a step back as did my sister. I looked at her to see her smile. Both horses moved in unison as they went under the gate and in to the courtyard. As soon as we passed the gate we both looked around. The sun was beginning to set so everywhere was covered in shadows. I could here people celebrating not to far away. The people already in the courtyard began to stare and watch our every move. I halted my horse first then my sister followed suit. We had stopped in the middle of the courtyard this was probably the best place to be if anything should happen this night.

Arthur's Pov.

It is good to be free. One man is free from the horrors of this world . Most of my knights came back from the last journey unhurt apart from one.

"Arthur! What will you do now you are free?" Gawain had interrupted nearly every conversation at the table so far, it's only right that he interrupts my thoughts as well.

"I don't know yet."

I heard a loud knock at the door and turned to face it. "Enter!" One of the guards from the gate walked through the doorway while still holding the door.

"My Lord, there are two strangers in the courtyard demanding you meet them at once. He said they would not wait long for you to come." He turned and was about to leave the room.

"Wait! Do you know who they are?"

"No My lord they gave us no names."

"What is there attire?"

"I couldn't see much, they are wearing long cloaks and their hoods cover their faces with shadows. There horses are of none I have seen on these shores before my lord. The horses are also wearing armour."

I looked at my friends and nodded, they all walked around the round table to stand near to me. I smiled at them all.

"Well, it's on the way to the ale." Bors said with humour clear in his voice. Everyone just laughed at his statement most of them saying it was true. I turned and walked out of the room. All of them following close behind me. I heard Galahad ask Lancelot to throw him one of his twin blades if any fighting broke out. I heard Lancelot reply with grab something of the wall when we walk pass the weapons that hung up on all the walls. They were all ready to be used in case one of the knights needed some sort of weapon quickly if they didn't have theirs with them. They also were used as decoration. I carried on walking and came out to the courtyard. Seeing the two strangers in the middle, still mounted. I slowed my pace down so I could look at them in detail. Both I saw had bows strapped to their backs. The long cloaks covered their faces with shadows as the guard had already told me. Their cloaks carried on down the back half of the horses. One horse was of a pitch-black colour as far as I could tell. I can't even see most of the horse. The other is a dark bay and both are big horses, they out stand any of ours yet still look as fast and more powerful. The horses had faceplates on, in the middle of their heads right between the eyes was a large horn with a blade along both edges. The other horse had a different sort of design but still had the blades on the horns. They were both intricately designed to look wonderful yet deadly all the same. The chest plates had the same sort of designs to the horns yet with out the blades. I stopped in front of them both and looked at each in turn were I could only guess were their eyes were. My knights stood behind me waiting.

"You asked for my attention now you have it, what do you want?"

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