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One safe place left.
Tenchi ran out of the compound. She stumbled across the pebbled path and through some bushes, breathing heavily. She was here again, the same island she thought she would never see again.
Tenchi ran and ran, she new which way to go. Well almost. Tenchi was running along side the river now. Not caring weather she was being followed or not, they wouldn't be able to catch her,
Running, running as fast as she could. Then she saw the tree which had some bark
Scraped off. She turned right and carried on running straight. She ran past some house, carefully keeping to the shadows of the trees.
She had been running for ten minutes when she came across a very large tree. At the base of the tree was a layer of Brambles bushes. This was new. She needed to find a way through this mess. Tenchi looked around, just making sure no one had followed her,
Coast was clear. Nobody about. Tenchi walked around the tree, until she found a low branch that she could just reach if she jumped. Tenchi jumped and grabbed the branch; she raised her feet and began swinging along the branches over the brambles.
On the other side of the brambles, there was a small hole a small person could easily fit through. She dropped onto the small edge and slid through the gap. Between the roots was a large uneven room.
There were lots of boulders and roots surrounding the small cave. In one corner resting on one flat side were a few small items. Clearly these hadn't been touched in a while. Covered in dust lay a teddy bear.
The teddy bear had belonged to Tenchis best friend. Hao had been her only true friend all her life. But in the end Hao had still been murdered, despite how much Tenchi had tried to protect her.
Tenchi had always been the bossier of the two. But Hao had always understood how she felt. Nether of them were popular, they always kept to themselves trying to keep a chin up.
Hao had been an orphan like Tenchi, so they new how each other felt. Hao had lost her entire family in a car accident. Two brothers and her mother and farther, neither of them had family that loved them truly so they both took a related look into each, thought each other as family.
When Hao and Tenchi first came to the island, they stumbled across this little cave. They originally came here to the house, but soon left after finding out someone had already taken that in as their head quarters.
So they found here and took refuge for a while. Until a group of boys who had always hated them found them. Tenchi and Hao trusted them when they said they were not going to hurt them, and let them in.
But this great regret of Tenchis still haunted her; Tenchis weapon had been a sword. A very sharp sword that now lay beside the teddy. At the time she hadn't touched it until then.
One of the boys pulled out a gun; in terror everyone fled the hideout. He chased the last remaining class mates until there was only her and Hao and him left. He had chased them through the woods.
Tenchi had brought the sword. She would do anything to protect Hao and herself, even murder.
Hao fell over; five minutes had been left until the game was over.
Hao had had a barrel put into her by this boy. Tenchis rage, her grief all of her pain bubbled up from within her. Her rage pursued her hand holding the blade to dig and push it into this boy 59 times. Long after he had died she was still ramming this weapon into his side.
Tears fell down Tenchis cheeks. The rage was coming back to her; Tenchi had run all the way back to the hideout carrying the dead body of Hao the sword and the teddies that belonged to herself and Hao.
Tenchi laid Hao down and placed Haos teddy down next to her bag and the sword. Tenchi couldn't bear being alone forever, so she took her own toy. Hugged it tight and waited next to Hao for the men to come and get her.
The teddy still had bloodstains all over it along with the blade. Tenchi picked up the bag, Haos bag and looked inside. Placed inside among the dust and bugs were Haos purse, a beginners reading book and card. Tenchi hadn't seen this before. She pulled it out.
On the front in big letters was "BEST FRIEND." With a little picture of two little girls holding hands. Tenchi opened up the card inside Tenchi read. "To Tenchi. Best friend ever. Love Hao. XXX" Tenchi eyes were streaming with tears. When had Hao made this?
Tenchi sat down looking at the card. After a few minutes she placed it back in the bag whipping her eyes. Tenchi opened her bag and pulled out a bottle of water. Bread rapped in cling film, a map and compass and an Uzi. A gun with four spare clips. This was her weapon.
Tenchi had her own handgun at home. She used to go to a shooting range so she would be prepared in case of an emergency. But she never thought she be using one for real. The thought was scary but she would only use it if she really needed it. She would only kill if she really had to.
Tenchi herd the sound of gunfire go off not far away. She grabbed the sword, she was just going to see what was going on, nothing more nothing less. She defiantly wasn't going to join in this stupid game again.
Tenchi hoisted herself out of the hole onto the ledge, She peeked her head over the bushes to see if anyone was about. No one about Tenchi Swung over the brambles and dropped on the other side Tenchi travelled low and between bushed, People where killing now, she didn't want to get caught up in the cross fire.
The gunfire stopped, Tenchi stopped outside that house she had passed on her way to the tree. She saw Suzzaki looking down at something on the floor. She heard a begging voice. " Please stop, we didn't do anything please, o god please!" Four shots went off the girls body was among five others. Suzzaki looked around, picking up any items that could come in use. Stored them in his pocket and left.
Tenchi grabbed her chance, ran along the back of the house and using its protection checked the bodies. All five had been girls. Tenchi didn't find anything useful but took a few bottles of water out of the backpacks.
Tenchi was just about to enter the forest when she heard more gunshots. Two more girls' flu out of the forest stopping dead in their tracks when they saw Tenchi. Suddenly Suzzaki came running out pointing his gun at Tenchi.
Tenchi looked at him, an almost daring look for him to shot her. The two girls took their chance one pulled out a gun and went for Suzzaki. He immediately loaded her chest with a round of bullets.
The other pulled out a stun gun and went for Tenchi. Tenchis natural instinct was to get the weapon out her hand. Tenchi tried to nock the gun out of her hand, which resulted in a very bad shock going through her hand.
Rage flared up inside Tenchi, She pulled out her sword, and struck the girl on her wrist, the sword slid through her wrist like needle on a thin piece of fabric. The girl shrieked in pain.
Tenchi felt happy, teach her to mess with Tenchi Kamasaki! The girl didn't give up; she took her other fist and tried to hit Tenchi in the stomach. Tenchi kicked her back onto the floor. That was it, she snapped. That was it no more misses nice! Tenchi raised the blade over her head, and began to slash at the child on the floor.
The pain, all the anger went out on this scared alone student. The normal grey uniform was now a deep blood red. This was pure joy to Tenchi seeing someone else in pain instead of herself. For once she wasn't the one on the receiving end, she didn't feel scared or alone anymore. The sword was her new friend. This felt so good to Tenchi, relieving all her stress and anger. It was like a breath of fresh air.
When Tenchi felt so much better she stopped. The girl was now nothing more than mush on the floor. Tenchi smiled down at the pile of blood, guts and shredded cloth on the floor.
She remembered that Suzzaki was still there. Tenchi looked up to see his face. He had a small grin. Tenchi whipped the blade on her black skirt then slid it into its holder that was tied around her waist.
Something clicked in Tenchis head. She had just killed someone. What really scared her was that she enjoyed it. Tenchi didn't want to be a murderer. To late now! A little voice flared into her head.
You're going to play and your going to win. This line was playing over and over in her head, She could win but she wasn't prepared to play. Maybe she could use Suzzaki. Yes, Get Suzzaki to kill everyone, and then you only have to kill one person. Make a deal with him.
"Hello." Tenchi said in a happy voice. " My name is Tenchi Kamasaki." Tenchi waved and put on her best smile. Suzzaki smiled at her. "Suzzaki Kemahra."
Suzzaki waved back the same grin placed in the middle of his face. Right he has told you his name, how to put the deal. But her went first. "We can help each other you know?" Tenchi smiled.
"I know exactly what you mean." Tenchi replied. She wasn't worried that he would kill her. She would get there first. "Lets make a deal." She said, Suzzaki nodded. "We DO NOT kill each other until everyone else is dead." He finished off. Tenchi nodded. "We gonna work together?" she questioned. "Yes"
Tenchi turned around and began to walk away. "Where we gonna stay?" she shouted back to him. "Your cave." Came a small voice behind her. She whirled around. "How do you know about that?" Suzzaki stopped and looked at her. One eyebrow raised.
"When you left the compound, I followed you, you know you're hard to follow!" Suzzaki smiled. "I was going to ask you then, but I saw you were upset, I left when you picked up the bag. You weren't going anywhere so I went to take a look around and came across the house." He shook his head in towards the house. "And ran into those girls."
Tenchi gave him a smile. "So you decided to kill them?" she threw her hand in the direction of the girls that lay dead on the floor. Suzzaki shrugged his shoulders with a sigh. "By the way your little cave is that way." He pointed towards the forest.
Tenchi stuck her tongue out. "I know I thought I would go the long way!" Suzzaki let out a loud bark laugh, "Yer sure whatever. Common" He turned around waited for Tenchi to walk beside him and they walked back into the forest.
One safe place left.
Tenchi ran out of the compound. She stumbled across the pebbled path and through some bushes, breathing heavily. She was here again, the same island she thought she would never see again.
Tenchi ran and ran, she new which way to go. Well almost. Tenchi was running along side the river now. Not caring weather she was being followed or not, they wouldn't be able to catch her,
Running, running as fast as she could. Then she saw the tree which had some bark
Scraped off. She turned right and carried on running straight. She ran past some house, carefully keeping to the shadows of the trees.
She had been running for ten minutes when she came across a very large tree. At the base of the tree was a layer of Brambles bushes. This was new. She needed to find a way through this mess. Tenchi looked around, just making sure no one had followed her,
Coast was clear. Nobody about. Tenchi walked around the tree, until she found a low branch that she could just reach if she jumped. Tenchi jumped and grabbed the branch; she raised her feet and began swinging along the branches over the brambles.
On the other side of the brambles, there was a small hole a small person could easily fit through. She dropped onto the small edge and slid through the gap. Between the roots was a large uneven room.
There were lots of boulders and roots surrounding the small cave. In one corner resting on one flat side were a few small items. Clearly these hadn't been touched in a while. Covered in dust lay a teddy bear.
The teddy bear had belonged to Tenchis best friend. Hao had been her only true friend all her life. But in the end Hao had still been murdered, despite how much Tenchi had tried to protect her.
Tenchi had always been the bossier of the two. But Hao had always understood how she felt. Nether of them were popular, they always kept to themselves trying to keep a chin up.
Hao had been an orphan like Tenchi, so they new how each other felt. Hao had lost her entire family in a car accident. Two brothers and her mother and farther, neither of them had family that loved them truly so they both took a related look into each, thought each other as family.
When Hao and Tenchi first came to the island, they stumbled across this little cave. They originally came here to the house, but soon left after finding out someone had already taken that in as their head quarters.
So they found here and took refuge for a while. Until a group of boys who had always hated them found them. Tenchi and Hao trusted them when they said they were not going to hurt them, and let them in.
But this great regret of Tenchis still haunted her; Tenchis weapon had been a sword. A very sharp sword that now lay beside the teddy. At the time she hadn't touched it until then.
One of the boys pulled out a gun; in terror everyone fled the hideout. He chased the last remaining class mates until there was only her and Hao and him left. He had chased them through the woods.
Tenchi had brought the sword. She would do anything to protect Hao and herself, even murder.
Hao fell over; five minutes had been left until the game was over.
Hao had had a barrel put into her by this boy. Tenchis rage, her grief all of her pain bubbled up from within her. Her rage pursued her hand holding the blade to dig and push it into this boy 59 times. Long after he had died she was still ramming this weapon into his side.
Tears fell down Tenchis cheeks. The rage was coming back to her; Tenchi had run all the way back to the hideout carrying the dead body of Hao the sword and the teddies that belonged to herself and Hao.
Tenchi laid Hao down and placed Haos teddy down next to her bag and the sword. Tenchi couldn't bear being alone forever, so she took her own toy. Hugged it tight and waited next to Hao for the men to come and get her.
The teddy still had bloodstains all over it along with the blade. Tenchi picked up the bag, Haos bag and looked inside. Placed inside among the dust and bugs were Haos purse, a beginners reading book and card. Tenchi hadn't seen this before. She pulled it out.
On the front in big letters was "BEST FRIEND." With a little picture of two little girls holding hands. Tenchi opened up the card inside Tenchi read. "To Tenchi. Best friend ever. Love Hao. XXX" Tenchi eyes were streaming with tears. When had Hao made this?
Tenchi sat down looking at the card. After a few minutes she placed it back in the bag whipping her eyes. Tenchi opened her bag and pulled out a bottle of water. Bread rapped in cling film, a map and compass and an Uzi. A gun with four spare clips. This was her weapon.
Tenchi had her own handgun at home. She used to go to a shooting range so she would be prepared in case of an emergency. But she never thought she be using one for real. The thought was scary but she would only use it if she really needed it. She would only kill if she really had to.
Tenchi herd the sound of gunfire go off not far away. She grabbed the sword, she was just going to see what was going on, nothing more nothing less. She defiantly wasn't going to join in this stupid game again.
Tenchi hoisted herself out of the hole onto the ledge, She peeked her head over the bushes to see if anyone was about. No one about Tenchi Swung over the brambles and dropped on the other side Tenchi travelled low and between bushed, People where killing now, she didn't want to get caught up in the cross fire.
The gunfire stopped, Tenchi stopped outside that house she had passed on her way to the tree. She saw Suzzaki looking down at something on the floor. She heard a begging voice. " Please stop, we didn't do anything please, o god please!" Four shots went off the girls body was among five others. Suzzaki looked around, picking up any items that could come in use. Stored them in his pocket and left.
Tenchi grabbed her chance, ran along the back of the house and using its protection checked the bodies. All five had been girls. Tenchi didn't find anything useful but took a few bottles of water out of the backpacks.
Tenchi was just about to enter the forest when she heard more gunshots. Two more girls' flu out of the forest stopping dead in their tracks when they saw Tenchi. Suddenly Suzzaki came running out pointing his gun at Tenchi.
Tenchi looked at him, an almost daring look for him to shot her. The two girls took their chance one pulled out a gun and went for Suzzaki. He immediately loaded her chest with a round of bullets.
The other pulled out a stun gun and went for Tenchi. Tenchis natural instinct was to get the weapon out her hand. Tenchi tried to nock the gun out of her hand, which resulted in a very bad shock going through her hand.
Rage flared up inside Tenchi, She pulled out her sword, and struck the girl on her wrist, the sword slid through her wrist like needle on a thin piece of fabric. The girl shrieked in pain.
Tenchi felt happy, teach her to mess with Tenchi Kamasaki! The girl didn't give up; she took her other fist and tried to hit Tenchi in the stomach. Tenchi kicked her back onto the floor. That was it, she snapped. That was it no more misses nice! Tenchi raised the blade over her head, and began to slash at the child on the floor.
The pain, all the anger went out on this scared alone student. The normal grey uniform was now a deep blood red. This was pure joy to Tenchi seeing someone else in pain instead of herself. For once she wasn't the one on the receiving end, she didn't feel scared or alone anymore. The sword was her new friend. This felt so good to Tenchi, relieving all her stress and anger. It was like a breath of fresh air.
When Tenchi felt so much better she stopped. The girl was now nothing more than mush on the floor. Tenchi smiled down at the pile of blood, guts and shredded cloth on the floor.
She remembered that Suzzaki was still there. Tenchi looked up to see his face. He had a small grin. Tenchi whipped the blade on her black skirt then slid it into its holder that was tied around her waist.
Something clicked in Tenchis head. She had just killed someone. What really scared her was that she enjoyed it. Tenchi didn't want to be a murderer. To late now! A little voice flared into her head.
You're going to play and your going to win. This line was playing over and over in her head, She could win but she wasn't prepared to play. Maybe she could use Suzzaki. Yes, Get Suzzaki to kill everyone, and then you only have to kill one person. Make a deal with him.
"Hello." Tenchi said in a happy voice. " My name is Tenchi Kamasaki." Tenchi waved and put on her best smile. Suzzaki smiled at her. "Suzzaki Kemahra."
Suzzaki waved back the same grin placed in the middle of his face. Right he has told you his name, how to put the deal. But her went first. "We can help each other you know?" Tenchi smiled.
"I know exactly what you mean." Tenchi replied. She wasn't worried that he would kill her. She would get there first. "Lets make a deal." She said, Suzzaki nodded. "We DO NOT kill each other until everyone else is dead." He finished off. Tenchi nodded. "We gonna work together?" she questioned. "Yes"
Tenchi turned around and began to walk away. "Where we gonna stay?" she shouted back to him. "Your cave." Came a small voice behind her. She whirled around. "How do you know about that?" Suzzaki stopped and looked at her. One eyebrow raised.
"When you left the compound, I followed you, you know you're hard to follow!" Suzzaki smiled. "I was going to ask you then, but I saw you were upset, I left when you picked up the bag. You weren't going anywhere so I went to take a look around and came across the house." He shook his head in towards the house. "And ran into those girls."
Tenchi gave him a smile. "So you decided to kill them?" she threw her hand in the direction of the girls that lay dead on the floor. Suzzaki shrugged his shoulders with a sigh. "By the way your little cave is that way." He pointed towards the forest.
Tenchi stuck her tongue out. "I know I thought I would go the long way!" Suzzaki let out a loud bark laugh, "Yer sure whatever. Common" He turned around waited for Tenchi to walk beside him and they walked back into the forest.