Sorry its short, but I need to drive tension

Elmer sat down on the steps outside of the hospital, breathing in fresh air between sobs. He removed his glasses and wiped the tears away just as his dad came up behind him.

"You alright son?" he asked, concerned.

"Yeh, just thinking bout mom and edgar." Elmer lied.

"No you're not." Louis answered. "you're not cos you only cry when its their birthdays or christmas."
"Am i not allowed to cry over them whenever i want?" elmer bluntly asked, placing his glasses back on.

"Are you gonna tell me what's really wrong or am i gonna have to ask around?" Louis asked, taking a seat beside him.

"I did something bad dad." Elmer sighed and Louis shook his head.

"What have you done?" He asked and elmer looked at the ground.

"I shouted at lona." he breathed and Louis let out a chuckle. "Laugh why dont you!"

"Sorry son, but i thought you were gonna say you killed someone or something." Louis laughed.

"You know how i feel about lona!" Elmer snapped.

"Yeah and you know how i feel about you're little 'crush'." louis eyed him suspiciously.

"If you cant accept who i've fallen in love with, then maybe i shouldnt be your son!" Elmer growled, standing up abruptly.

"Fallen in love with?" Louis chuckled, much to elmers anger. "Oh elmer, oh poor naive elmer."
"Well at least i'm not a rapist!" Elmer hissed, refurring to his older brothers shenanigans, leading up to his suicide.

"You dont talk about your brother like that!" Louis hissed back and elmer let out a laugh.

"It's true though isnt it? The way he made that poor girl whimper his name, even though she didnt know what she deserved to be raped for!! Thats why he commited suicide, not because med school was too much, but because he raped an innocent woman!!" elmer yelled before storming off back inside the building, bumping straight into who else but Lona.

"Elmer-" she began to say but he held up his hand in anger.

"Save it lona." he mumbled before walking away from her and was about to round the corner when stegman shoved a gun in his face, causing him to stop.

"No!" Lona screamed.

"Where is Hook?" Stegman asked with clenched teeth.

"I erm, in the bbbassemeent." Elmer stuttered, having never been so scared in his life.

"Good boy." Stegman answered before taking the gun away from elmer and walking off in search of Hook. Elmer looked back at lona for what seemed a lifetime before walking away again, leaving her what seemed alone in the hospital corridor, nurses and doctors walking past her, but she only looked through them. She knew she had to do something before it was too late, but what could she do?

Chris lay still next to hook until he asked her if she wanted another glass of wine. She mumbled a no in reply but he still got up to get himself a glass, leaving her to sit on the sofa alone.

"hook?" she whined and he called 'yeah' from the kitchen but she didnt answer so he waited for her reply but only got silence. He decided to leave it but when he walked back into the lounge area she finally spoke.

"I love you more than anything." she breathed and he gave a small smile.

"I know." he answered before taking his place on the sofa next to her. "And i love you more than anything."

"Right well, we got that cleared up." she answered in her usual quirky fashion.

"yep." hook mumbled before taking a sip of his wine. She didnt resume her place by side on the sofa, instead she sat a fair length away from him. "it's special."

She looked at him puzzled and slightly confused. "What is?"
"This is, our relationship, for 2 yrs you were my best friend, and for half that time i fancied you like hell." he answered. "you're special."
She leaned over to him and brushed her lips across his,renewing their passion and love and he pulled her towards him, lying backwards onto the sofa until he was laying flat with her on top of him. Suddenly the door slammed open, startling them and they jumped 5 ft apart. Stegman stumbled in with a gun in his hand, pointing it every which way.

"Steg, put the gun down!" Hook ordered and Chris screamed slightly.

But Steg didnt put his gun down instead he pointed it directly at Hook.

"I said i'd get you! You and your minions, for that little stunt with anestethesia report! You asshole!" he screamed and took the safety latch off the gun, his finger against the trigger, ready to pull. Chris watched in horror as the gun went off and the bullet hit hook. She screamed before dropping to her knees, leaning over hook's body.

"Haha, how'd ya like that?" Stegman laughed insanely and began to walk the way he came, leaving Hook bleeding heavily from his chest and chris sobbing as she began to do chest compressions.

"No, dont you god dam die on me!!" she screamed at his limp body. She lifted her hands from his chest, his blood dripping from her fingers. She reached for his pager from his belt strap and began to tap in something.

Dr Traff, please could you come to the basement right now, its an emergency, please. chris