Another poem

At school one day my teacher asked us to write a ballad I thought ok this might be fun but it was so boring my class made this really lame ballad for an example

It went something like this:

Sugar high, Skittles, mentos, yum

Toffee, tictacs, pop

Chocolate, dentist, candy, gum

Vixdrops, smarties, stop

The rhythm pattern is (for those who know what a ballad is sorry to bore):

3,2,2,1

2,2,1

3,2,2,1

2,2,1

I had no idea what to write about so I tried writing about anime I only got one verse than stoped cuz my mind went blank

Anime, manga, baxsets, cool

Trigun, hellsing, guns

Conventions, cosplay, music, school

Money, buystuff, tons

Ya lame I know

so I finally came up with a good ballad

I really think so any way but my class and my teacher on the other hand... well that was a different story ( they all thought I was going to cumit SUISIDE I mean what the hell why would I want to do that? I mean come on I have great friends hikaruofarrow, kodoku, toria, sammy, emma, neesan, telley, E-man, sasuke,sakura,ino,shinoare cosplayers I met at a convention I went to it)

But here was my ballad

Solitude, gives, my mind, much, peace

In this, sleepless, night

Afraid of, the dark, no ones, there

So I, try to, fight

Loneliness, consumes, all our, souls

Sorrow, finds me, there

So I run, to the,day light, coals

Sadness, destroys, care

Angel wings, that I, used to, fly

There is, so much, blood

My wings are, broken, so I, cry

In this, pain filled, flood ( this is my favorite one)

So as I, scream in, all this, pain

You just, sit there ,fun

I just lay, in the, falling, rain

Now I, try to, run

So I think, always, the same, thought

My mind, gives me, peace

To fulfill, this dream, my heart, sought

But now, I must, cease

Ya I know that was a little long but that's how it went ----

Afraid to, be forgotten

I'm afraid, to, sleep

So now I, hold you, in my, arms

Promiss, not to, leave

Well ok that one just popped into my head now

(not bad for some one who is writing this at.... Let me check the stove........ 3:30am !) looks around kitchen for coffee or anything with caffeine

I just read the story death and rebirth by Lain Mikado

Its such a good story and that's were I got the idea for my little one verse ballad above

Here is the quote I got it from its were gaare is talking to sonki (I love gaara he is my bishonen drools oh and sonki is the name of the girl in the story wishes naruto was real) here is the quote "That's what I thought," Gaara answered pulling her in tighter. "You're just scared. It's normal to be scared of something. Such as I fear to fall asleep. Shukaku will awaken if I do, and that is what I fear. You fear being alone, being forgotten... Am I right?"

'Sonki nodded her head in his arms."

I love that story sonki is the best toys nod in agreement (AUCK no lack of sleep is playing with my mind)

Well I g2g my mom is freaking because ive been on the computer all day and all night (the computer is my life because my tv does not work !)

Well sorry to bore any one but please review me and tell me what you thought of my ballad ok?

Well ja ne

SUGAR