Intermission. I know- it is possibly one of the most irritating things one can come across while on fanfiction: "OMG! Next chapter is up and it's…oh. It's intermission." Some of you may be asking: What exactly the hell is intermission?? Well, it's when you spare one chapter to answer any questions from reviewers, show your fave reviews, etc. It's pretty important to me, coz when I get reviews I feel like I'm letting someone down if I don't give any recognition. Unfortunately, I'm not going to put all of them up here- just the ones for which I squealed and went and told my mum about. But I always do decent reviews that would be worth publishing (lol), so I can't understand why people waste a whole review on: PLEASE UPDATE! Without any comments. If I am posting this now, I can definitely promise that the next chapter will be following shortly, so you needn't fret or yell at your computer or strangle your cat.
I want to ask you a question. Has anyone ever read a fan fiction, or even a book, that simply would not leave them alone after being read? I mean, I have found myself with such vivid images while reading fics that I feel as though I am really there. Problem is, I stay there after I close the window….and review…and shut down my computer. I simply cannot forget the story I read for days on end, and I end up like some kind of zombie still immersed in a story that should be long forgotten. I think that when a writer can do this- not get stuck in a story, I mean write a story that turns people into zombies- I think this is really amazing. I don't know if my story has done this to any of you, but I want to congratulate the myriads of writers that have managed to turn me into a lamp with a dead lightbulb. You rock and you're talented… and you probably have way too much time on your hands.
And now there is the sex scene issue. Obviously – as my story is rated R, even if it is for future chapters- I intended to have some form of sexual relation in this fic. But the problem is, I'm only 13 and I haven't done anything of the sort. Suddenly, I have found myself in the same situation as mintytoothpic (hers was one of the reviews for which I jumped for joy, but I'll get to that later)- whose name I hope doesn't mind being mentioned here- who is but a year older than myself and had no idea what sex was really like. I hope to come to a conclusion soon as to whether or not to have sex (not myself! IN MY STORY!), but I may need some your help (hint, hint, nudge, nudge!) So review and tell me what you think…!
Favourite Reviews.
Ok , like I said before, I'm not putting all of them up here- just the ones that I truly loved. So don't be disappointed if yours isn't up here (actually, if someone said that to me when my review wasn't posted, I would be extremely disappointed but anyway…) – you can, after all, always write more!!
OK, if you see your name on this list, it means your review made me more happy then I get just at the sight of a review, so well done!!
Lol Malfoy swallowing his pride v.
funny! Hermione's comment had me laughing so much the apologising for
disturbing him while he was commiting suicide-
excellent!!
Great chapter!! At least he apologiesed for his behaviour!!
It doesn't bother me whose POV you take in the chapters; i
luv it all the same!
I liked Hermione's tank top btw lol it sounded cool lol.
Cant wait for the longer chapters but plz update soon!!
Claire (or Granger-gurl-rox)
I really like this story... the attempted suicide scene was very appropriate... I just can't imagine what he's going through... and as silly as this sounds I really hope that, later on, Hermione and Draco form a deeper relationship and his feelings are healed... I can't stand to think of him hurting that bad... even if it is just a story... it's an amazing one! Please, update soon! Erilyn Rose
Disturbing or not, the last chapter was important. Likewise for this chapter. I really enjoy reading this story. You have talent, keep it up. :D atruwriter
i absolutely adore this story. and altho normally this would have been ooc u made the transition quite nicely and its realistic!! CARRY ON
Diamond-in-the-ruff
I really love your
story. I just started reading it and will be following the chapters from now
on. I dont quite like how you make the draco/hermione point of view parts, as many things get repeated,
and its sometimes hard to follow, but I still love the overall story, and I can
see how different peoples povs comes in handy.
medievalwarrior
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I read your whole fanfic. today and I think you are doing rather well. I really enjoy, I don't mind the whole cutting scene, I mean so many people do it now a days I think it would only be normal for someone in the school to try it. well I think you are doing a great job, keep up the good work!! I look foreward to reading the next chapter.
Enchanted Dragon
Yeah! It was good. And
Hermione did do the right thing because, A.) I would cry if the hottest
character died, and B.) Now they can kiss, and have a whole bunch of mini-Dracos and mini-Hermiones.
-Belle
omg! you must must MUST post like...NOW! im dying here! damn you! and your cliffhanger things! but seriously, i love the story so dont stop!
lilblufairy1289
u rock!! i
love ur story its so cool!! dont
u stop now i have to know what happens next! and dont u dare kill off draco!! but i think u should have made
them more hateful towards each other in the beggining
then readers would have less expected a romantic relationship. luv ya
im adding u and ur story to
my favs and putting ur
story on recommended reading and u on author alert list ;)
hope my review aint too long lol
harry-potter-fan145
OMG! Don't let Draco commit suicide! Will Hermione find him? She seems like a beacon of light for Draco now, especially with the insane letter he just received from Lucius. Please update soon. :) I love Draco/Hermione stories! ;)
Apollonia2
Lucius is insane, he should hold some regard to Narcissa, if it wasn't for her Draco wouldn't be alive to carry on his name.
Midnight Lilly
Kel Loves Snails,
I really really and i mean
really like how your stories going, it seems that Dracos
a bit ooc but i love him
nonetheless. I cant wait till the next chapter. Oh and
another thing, i wasnt
logged on when i was about to reveiw
the first time and it said you didnt resive annonmys (sp?) reveiws, If you want more reviews i
suggest you take that lock off since i know alot of people probably dont want
to get a...thingy...name...i guess i should say on the website since some people are just plain
lazy, the good thing also about getting anonomis reveiws is, well, more reveiws
but in the end it is all up to you, you are doing a fantastic job on this
story, keep it up,
with love, from one devoted author to another,
Beth
PS: thanks for alerting me of this problem, I hadn't realized and it was no intention of mine to actually block anonymous reviews! Please accept my apologies!
aw i loved this chapter it was really well written and i know what you mean about the reviews some people write some serious crap (which happens to be me on occasion) and then get three thousand reviews well anyway really good fic and i cant wait until you update
draco'slilgirl PS: I love your fic!
Hello!! So you reviewed my story and your review made me so happy i went to your bio page or whatever to get your email address so i could email you and tell you just how happy you made me when i saw you wrote a Draco/Hermione story so I went to check it out. Now usually I'm pretty pickie when it comes to what i will and will not read so don't think, oh, she says this to everyone because I most certainly do not. I love the beginning of this story. Very well done. Allison
PS: This made me squeal and act like some kind of deranged squirrel. Mintytoothpick, you were one of my idols at the time you reviewed, especially because you're only 1 year older then me!!
It's lovely. So emotional. Very, very good job :) I'm adding to my favorite on my PC and to my fanfiction favorite stories and author's list. :D
Twisted Atreyu
And of course, my best friend Lady of Masbolle! Arch, I loved EVERY SINGLE ONE of your reviews so I decided to just write a big giant thankyou on here instead of publishing them. EVERYONE, CHECK OUT HER FICS!
OK guys, you can expect the next chapter soon…sorry it's taking so long!! Love Kelliebean
