Hello! I've just experienced my FIRST Flame EVER!!!!
EVIL BITCH 2004-08-12 7 Anonymous
alrighty where to start, first of all mixing two fics was a really stupid idea and second i read this story (inuyasha) like a year ago meaning you stole it! except she wrote waay more then your lazy ass ever will. some people work hard to type these you know.then there is the spelling and grammar mistakes her fic had no mistakes.and whatz with the annoying voting never again:p STOP BLACKMAILING YOUR READERS YOU SHOULD BE THANKFULL THAT THE PERSON WHO REALLY WROTE THIS FIC IS 14 AND CAN'T TRACE YOU THEN SUE YOU! good bye see you in hell (CAUSE I'LL BE IN HEAVEN)stealing is a sin , spazing is not. (ps)you really think i'd give you my email
First off, who cares if I mixed two different Anime's together? I like it and that's what's important!! :)
Second, I DID not steal this idea, I just thought of it all on my own. I have NO ONE to really help me... and so what if I don't write/type a lot? So what?! I'm going to create a LOT of chapters!!! And I never even heard or read anything relatively close to what I have.
Yeah, I have grammar mistakes, so? I don't double check.. and its MY right to check or not, AND to post ANYTING at all :)
Annoying Voting?!?! Its for the reviewers to choose.... So I don't see a problem there...
Black Mailing? It wasn't like I WASN'T going to EVER continue the fic... I was just tired of people not reading the things I put AFTER the chapter... And, I've decided to do the fics, Make it Real and My Scars will be done first ok? Just don't expect them TOO soon....
Also, did the person NOT know that I'm ALSO 14 years old? Will I be going to Hell when I haven't ACTUALLY stolen ANYONE's idea?
Feh- Oh well.... I don't care, ok I must admit, the first 2 hours I was bitching a lot but, I'm fine with it now.
Why? Because the person who actually put that there must be REALLY stupid AND has a lot of time on their hands :)
(To the so called EVIL BITCH, Thank You for your nonsense and FALSE review! and if you ACTUALLY read ALL of this... You must be dumber then I thought to even come back to this fic...)
[Disclaimer:] I do not own Yu Yu Hakusho nor do I own Inuyasha and all of their charcters. I do own Reike, partially, she is NOT an OC, I only made up HER not who she is SUPPOSE to be. I also own the names and looks, Kaijun Moku Haijyinto, Siren Tamakino, Kiarra Naki, Shinto Kentara, Minasu Hosuko, Settouharu Takahoren, and Inakarei Hatoue (If I add him) I don't own who/what they ACTUALLY are. You'll find out later on in this story!
Pairings::
(Vote for one pair only in this section)
Kagome/Sesshoumaru: 91 =[First]
Kagome/Hiei: 65 =[Second]
oKagome/Kurama: 12 =[Decided to just make it Both]
Kagome shall NOT be with Yusuke, OR Koronue.
(Vote for one pair only in this section)
Sango/Hiei: 44 =[...... . WOAH....]
oSango/Kurama: 6 =[???]
Sango/Miroku: 15=[Second]
Sesshoumaru/Kagome/Hiei/Youko: 51 = [hmmm... this won, but still I need this up]
(Vote for one pair only in this section)
Hiei/Kagome/Sesshoumaru: 66 =[FIRST!, COME ON PEOPLE!!!!!!! VOTE!]
Sesshoumaru/Kagome/Kurama: 31 = [2nd!!VOTE!!! Its Both Youko and Suichi]
NO Yusuke/Kagome/Sesshoumaru. Sorry All!!!
(Vote for one pair only in this section)
Kurama/Sango/Miroku: 40 =[Interesting...]
oSango/Miroku/Yukina: 9 = [... OK??!?]
(Vote for one pair only in this section)
Kurama/Botan: 40= [Hmmm...Youko and Suichi are in the same package :)]
oSess/Botan: 1=[I must say... I kind of like this idea, but it's a bit late, and well, it doen't really match in this fic, but I'll put it in the voting polls.]
oInuyasha/Botan: 2=[hmmmmm..... I'll think about that....]
oMiroku/Botan: 1=[hmmmmmmm..........]
NO Hiei/Botan.
(Vote for one pair only in this section)
Yusuke/Keiko: 51 =[Uhhh...ok? Whatever!!]
NO Yusuke/Yukina. Too bad, it seemed REALLY interesting.
(Vote for Kikyo's Fate!!! Who shall she be killed by?)
Inuyasha Stays Alive YAY!!!!!!! I'm happy!
Kikyo is going to DIE but how shall she die?
(A)Kills herself? (B)Inuyasha kills her for hurting/mocking Kago or because she cased a spell on the shikon shard in his head?ect (C)Kagome kills her? (D)Sesshoumaru kills her for hurting/mocking Kagome ect... (E)Naraku kills her, just because she pisses him off? (F)Gets Killed by her Soul Gatherers G)Any others? Suggestions Welcome
Sesshoumaru shall NOT be a brotherly figure to Kagome...
Naraku shall be one-sided in love with Kagome/Kikyo both. But ends up not liking Kikyo anymore and goes after Kagome.
Kuwabara shall be tortured by Hiei as is NOW!!! :)
(Vote here if you'd like... its only Yuki/Touy)
Yukina/Touya: 17 = [YAY!! Love this!!]
Kuwabara Lost in everything... But I feel sorry for him. So he gets an OC!
(Please vote for this as well, though it'll take a lot of work!)
{{{ Alternative Ending: [So, People do read! The votes here are added below] }}}
-Alternative Ending Suggestions? : =
-(Suggested By: Star Protector Angel, Sesshoumaru/Kagome ONLY, others
alternated)=35
-(Suggested By:inudemoness247, Hiei/Kagome ONLY, others alternated)=26
-(Suggested By Multiple People, Hiei/Kago and Sess/kago, others alternated)=7
-(Greatly said by Kill-all-Flamers-210, ALL ALTERNATED!!!)=42
Votes for the NEXT story I'm going to work on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
First: Make it Real, Then My Scars, Who Said We Were Weak, The Souls of Our Heros, Our Actual Lives, My Life Ends Here, This has to Be a Dream, Humans Mikos, and Youkai, Heie's Lost Sister, and ummm.. Complete Hidden Truth is Last....
Not too late to choose but I've already finished the First Chapter of MIR so, Yeah... I'll post it later.
Last time in YuYu-0.0 was Yusuke's and Kurama's expressions. Everyone else didn't even see Hiei. They just thought Kuwabara was acting like usual.. Most couldn't even see the flame even though it would endanger their lives. They just suddenly felt cold and ran inside the school building.
Oh boy...... Has Kazuma Kuwabara done it NOW.......
Last time in Inuy- Sess/Kago/Rin/Jaken/Ah-Un="Huh? Since when did I ask you that?" asked Kagome, Sesshou raised a brow and noticed that she REALLY didn't know what he was talking about. But then, Kagome's eyes became pupil-less, "Lord Sesshoumaru, please answer MY question...."
Sang/Miro/Kila/Ship/Kaed=After about a good thirty minutes. It was almost pitch black, Thank God that the stars were out and see able. Sango and Miroku ran inside Kaede's hut to see a face that neither of them EVER wanted to see....
Kanna/Kagura/Naraku=Kanna flinched as he looked at Kagura. She didn't like it that he was hurting her. Kagura was her sister, and she hated that Naraku was trying to get Kagome and Kikyo, he already has Kikyo in his grasp, but Kagome... she had helped her-Kanna 2 months Ago="Hey YOU!!! Get away from Kanna!!" Yelled a very familiar voice, the voice of whom I was just thinking of.
Kagome.........
[Inu—K/S/R/J/A-U]
Sess could only stare at Kagome, 'What?... Why is she-' "Lord Sesshoumaru, my patience thins... Hurry up and answer the questions. Do you still want the Tetsusaiga?" Said 'Kagome' though her voice was now, seemingly much more mature and cold. Rin suddenly popped up out of no where and said, "Kago-chan!! More food please!!"
Kagome seemed to blanch but then she seemed to snap out of what ever she was in just earlier. She looked at Rin and smiled. "Help yourself Rin!" Rin squealed and ran off again. Then Kagome looked at Sesshou, "Uhhh... what just happened?" Sesshou merely glanced at her. He was confused, that was for sure, not that he'd let anyone know that the Great Sesshoumaru, Lord of the Western Lands was confused and didn't know the answer to this puzzle. It you could call it that.
"I myself do not know. You suddenly asked again, if I still wanted the Tetsusaiga. But your voice seemed a bit... different. " Kagome looked at him and says, "Eh?!? Really hmm... Earlier, I felt weird and saw a glowing figure. I think it was a woman. Strange though. She looks, familiar. I just can't place it where I-" Before Kagome could finish, Her eyes once again became blank as a red glow erupted from her, it froze everyone except for her and Sesshoumaru.
Sesshou looked around then snapped back at 'Kagome'. "What have you done?" 'Kagome' looked up, but this time her eyes weren't blank but they were green. He also noticed that she was in a different outfit. Not the same exact one earlier, the odd black clothes (Odd to Sesshy) she had on. But it changed into a more Feudal Era-like. Except, it seemed older then that. It was like Midoriko's. No, it WAS Midoriko's That same design and everything.
"I merely froze time my lord." She said as she closed her eyes. "Who are you?" he asked looking at her suspiciously. Her eyes snapped open and said,
"Midoriko... I am Midoriko, I have taken over Kagome's body for a short period of time."
"And why, exactly have you taken over her and how?" Sesshoumaru questioned staring at her more closely.
"Do you know that Kagome is not from this time? She is nearly 500 years into the future (Insert info about the future. Kagome and the well, Inuyasha's story. Midorikos story ect. ect)."
"Then the only reason she could pass through the well was because she was Kikyo's reincarnation and Inuyasha could as well, because he is connected to Kikyo the most? Is this what you are trying to-"
"-And she isn't Kikyo's reincarnation. Just that Kikyo's soul was taken into Kagome... "Said Midoriko ignoring what Sesshoumaru asked and all.
"How did I possess her? Because the Shikon jewel has been in her body long enough for part of my soul that was locked away in the jewel to slowly go into Kagome. Kikyo's soul was taken into her as well. When Kikyo died her soul was locked into the Shikon.
If it had been with her longer. Some of the demons would have gotten to her as well. That is why I revived Mistress Centipede. And made Kagome go to the well. I manipulated everything so that she wouldn't be taken over by the jewel like Kikyo has. She probably had sensed the danger of the jewel. Since every Guardian's time with the jewel in taken off by every three years.
Kikyo was Seventeen years old. And she herself knew it. The danger of having the jewel for another year. That is why she wanted Inuyasha to wish on it. So she'd be free and it would also force Inuyasha to have the burden of the jewel's later problems. Since it wasn't completely her birthday yet. Only the day, not the same time. I had to do what did to save her and the unsuspecting world.
But it seems that I messed up and forgot that Naraku was here. So now, I do not know what to do except train her. Perhaps that way, she'd be able to endure the jewel's corruption when she places it all together once again. I can train her in the elements. Pshycic and Life. Could you teach her the rest? Of course I would like for you to recruit the Three Princesses and Miko in your lands. Kayori the miko of the Pure and Dark Realm, Scythe the Kitsune of the Souless Earth Forest, Mara the Ice Apparition of the Icy Wind Mountains, and Shadow the Dark Flame of Shadows, and princess of the Shadow Realm.
They will probably be the best to also teach her ... of course you shall be teaching her right my Lord?"
Sesshoumaru looked at her and asked, "Why shall I want to do this for the wench? There is nothing for me to win out of all this..."
"My how wrong you are Sesshoumaru-sama. Do you know that I was the one that put a barrier around the Tetsusaiga? That is the reason why you couldn't touch it with out getting burned and Inuyasha couldn't pull it out. I choose Kagome to be the one to be able to pull it out, but all others with demon blood would basically burn. Though ones with human blood could touch it, yet not pull it out, nor use the sword.
Also, it was Kagome herself that saved herself that day when you attacked her with poison. She had, not knowing it of-course, added some of her miko powers into the Tetsusaiga, causing the blade to transform though slightly, but not to the demon eye, even. It changed right back after the attack was made.
And do to that. Only the one she choose, Inuyasha could wield it. If she were to want you to wield it, it wouldn't matter at all, if the barrier I created was there or not, you would be able to wield it with out getting hurt at all.
Not to mention, the only reason why Inuyasha would turn into a demon with out the tetsusaiga now is because he is without Kagome. It is like hen she sits him. He changes back because it was her to do it. The Tetsusaiga does the same thing, though less dirt-meeting-action. But it seems that Naraku has put a dark miko's power over the Tetsusaiga as well as the rosary around his neck. Kagome has no control over him. But he won't turn into a demon.
Since, now he will follow Kikyo ONLY and can only follow her. As long as Kikyo has power then the sword shall transform for him, oh yes, Kikyo no longer has power to do anything. Kagome's friends have done the job for us. And as long as Naraku lives this shall become a problem. Oh yes, please do tell Kagome that Inuyasha has a shard in the back of his head Naraku did something to it and so, Kagome couldn't sense the darn thing. Not to mention that he was tricked into all of this by Kikyo. Oh!! Yes, the Tetsusaiga. Do not forget to pick that up as well, it should be back at the forest about 2 miles away from the spot Kagome healed your arm.
Also, please take this, (Gives Sesshoumaru a bracelet, its golden with black roses etched into it. With Silver blue writing, that Sesshoumaru could just barely decipher, 'Everlasting World' ) This bracelet shall transfer you to a world were time doesn't exist. No matter now much time you stay there you neither age nor die. Even when you are attacked mercilessly, and are forced to drink poison. Nothing happens. Thought you DO feel pain, you still live.
Also, no matter HOW much time you spend inside of it. The outside world shall stay the same, it would only be one second's time since you had left. And inside of the world, I forgot to mention, are everlasting trees and fruits. No matter how much you eat of the fruits, it shall return and NEVER de-cay or whatever... And everything there shall remain pure, the water, no matter if you've bathed in it or not. It shall instantly be cleaned and drinkable. Weapons shall be provided.
As well as everything else you all might need. You MUST train Kagome. Or else... (sighs) Things shall get VERY complicated.. OH, looks like all of my time is up...
Please do as I say before everything shall repeat it's self. Good Bye My Lord, until next time, if there is a next time."
As Midoriko finished. Kagome came back. Though Sesshoumaru now was confused, 'What did she mean by... repeat it's self?' But quickly threw the thought a side as Kagome looked up at him. "Uhhh... what? I heard most of that conversation with Midoriko. But, what did she say about Inuyasha and the shard? Where is it? And how was it that I couldn't sense it? I heard everything else though about how you needed to train me and all."
Sesshou looked at her and said, "In the back of his head, and Naraku did something to it, what and how he did it, I know not. About your training... I merely guess that I will. In exchange for the Tetsusaiga of course. Since Inuyasha shall not be able to use it anymore. And get some rest. We travel the first thing when the sunrises."
Kagome cringed at the thought. It must be 2:00 am in the morning right now. Meaning the sun will rise in just a few hours. But not knowing were she was in the world, it could actually be any minute. Wasting no time at all. She grabbed Rin. Took a bath in a nearby stream in the village and put away everything. Then went right off to dream land after tucking Rin in.
[Inu—S/M/K/S/K]
No way... was what everyone thought as they looked at the face of non other than KIKYO. 'What the hell is she doing HERE of ALL places!??!' thought Sango as she felt her anger boil. Then she turned quickly to see if Kaede was still alive and then noticed, Kikyo still needed the support of her soul gatherers just to stand.
"What the HELL are you doing here K-I-K-Y-O?!?!" Sango yelled at the immobilized Tainted Miko as she said her name with clear hate in it. Kikyo merely took a glance at Sango and the rest of them and scoffed. "To get the spell off of course, though your timing is VERY hateful, I didn't even get to ask my dear sister to help me-"
This time Miroku came up to her and slapped her. "How could you do this when YOU yourself probably know that something bad might happen to your sister?! Do you want her to DIE?!?!" Once Miroku finished. Sango and the others were confused as Kikyo smirked. "Houshi-sama? What do you mean by that? How could she have known when she didn't read the scroll?"
"I can see it, she has the OTHER scroll. Do you know the actual reason I dropped the scroll? Because right as I opened it, I saw it, I saw her and the scroll, and HOW she got it as well. She got the scroll from Tsubaki's master long ago. Their WAS only ONE copy but. My grandfather also knew him. So he let someone outside of the family see it. They were good friends I presume. And did you see the blank part on the scroll? The smudged part? That is a spot where Kikyo herself touched HER scroll. Whatever happens to that scroll happens to this one. And vice-versa. So nothing will be missed."
"There was also a big blank spot separating the Theory and what my family and ancestors wrote their info in. Kikyo took off something. The part where ... I don't know... I can't remember, the last time I actually read it, I was 5 years old and even then I didn't read the whole thing, and I haven't opened it since."
Well, I did tonight, but, I don't know anymore... I just won't forgive you Kikyo... You are WILLING to sacrifice your little sister for an EXPERIMENT... am I right?! Your planning on Naraku to break the spell! That way, he won't be able to kill you... Am I right?!?" Miroku said VERY angrily.
But Sango and the rest were confused on everything that he said. When he was talking earlier, it only seemed that he was talking in a conversation only Kikyo and himself understood. To the others it sounded like mumbles and he kept saying odd things that they didn't understand, but it was in normal language. So they could understand it, yet NOT understand their meaning. It was confusing.
But they stopped trying to understand the meaning when Kikyo laughed such an ear splitting sound. It sounded loud, evil and really irritating. "Yes I was planning everything, and if my sister DID refuse. I would steal her soul. That stupid Red Soul Gatherer was a very irritating one. But now I have a whole army of them!! They could steal souls right from a mere walking mortal, or even demons. AHAHAHAHAaaaa.... I could kill you all with a mere command. Did you know that Kanna's mirror is made of the them? The design is from its blood, the reflection part, its eyes. And--"
Shippo stepped up, though he was still a little cautious of the Tainted Miko, "Ar... are you su-sure you ca-can even control th-them?!!? You have NO MORE POWER LEFT!! And you can't even stand!!" But he squealed in fright when she quickly snapped her head in his direction and glared. So he immediately ran behind Sango. And slowly peaked out. But quickly put his head back so that he couldn't see her.
Kikyo's glare was still set on the poor kitsune. But Sango got incredibly pissed and said, "STUP STARING AT SHIPPO!!! And also, what are you planning on NOW Kikyo-" But before she finished. Kikyo left right away. With the help of her soul gatherers of course. She must have seen Sango slowly getting her weapon so she retreated. "The coward..." said surprising from Miroku.
Kaede then blinked and said, "Aye.. Miroku? Sango? Do ye know what has happened to me? The last thing I remember is being in the forest looking for herbs- Where is Inuyasha and Kagome?" Miroku and Sango both tensed and Shippo just burst into tears. But Miroku immediately regained composer and said, "Lady Kaede, we must complete something immediately!!"
Kaede looked around confusedly but saw the determined look on Miroku's face and slwly nodded her head. 'What has happened to Miroku? He seems ... different, and more serious in his mission. I believe. And what has happened to Kagome and Inuyasha? Could they be in some sort of trouble? Or- ' But she was cut off from her thoughts as Shippo yelled out, "Lady Kaede please hurry!! Were already out here!!"
Kaede shook her head as she went out and saw that Miroku had drawn something in the sand.
An inu and behind it was a fan in the West, A wolf in the South, a kitsune in the East. And a weapon like Kohaku's crossed over a mirror in the North.
And right in the middle, looked like The Shikon Jewel and a Cresent Moon crossed over with the Kanji for Family was inside the Shikon Jewel. Sango looked at his work. It had great detail The dog looked like Sesshoumaru in his demon form except the makings were slightly different, the Cresent was the other way, and it had three jagged stripes that kissed it's cheeks. The wolf looked like one of Koga's except it was thinner and had a VERY long tail. The Kiktsune looked like Shippo's father(Like on the pelt that Maten of the Thunder Brothers had on, that was Shippo's father, and it was more, Alive looking.)
The mirror looked a bit too much like Kanna's and the weapon like Kohaku's, Then on to the sides of it, The North West Side had a boomerang like Sango's Then to the North East, It had astaff like Miroku's. South West was a Neko, South East was another Neko. But it looked different from the first. They were outside of the 4 demons. But not by much. Then on top of the North Mirror/Weapon was like a thunder rod. Like Souten's actually except it looked a bit more like Hitens. It was TOO detailed.
Kaede herself couldn't help but question, "Miroku, why have you drawn this? I can understand the Dog demon, though it doesn't look like Sesshoumaru entirely, though the others, I do not understand this at all." Kaede stopped questioning him when Miroku looked up and told Shippo to go to the fox. Sango to the boomerang, Kilala to the neko in the South West. He himself to the staff, and Kaede to go to the center.
(Yes the drawings are HUGE!! And everything points to a particular place.) In the South was Koga and his pals. And Souten was in the North flying on a cloud. Naraku along with Kagura, Kanna, and Kohaku are in a castle in the North. Inuyasha was in the West still. Sesshoumaru and Kagome were somewhere close to the center, yet still in the West. And a neko named Kirra (Key-ra) male, was in the South East.
Then Miroku took out a blank scroll and made a six point star like design crossing over the drawings with the North tip slightly higher then the rest so it touched Souten's Picture. Then The scroll seemed to come alive. They glowed green as words appeared on it, It still glowed, The words, were what made the scroll glow, small lights radiated off of it as it slowly started from the bottem, and slowly moved in one line tracing the star. Then it split into two forming the whole thing.
Then Miroku read it starting from were he first started putting the scroll down and were the words first appeared. Everything he read disappeared s he quickened his pace.
To be placed in Oblivion
No one made this choice themselves
Lock away motion
Lock away all emotions
Place this curse on The One
Unworthy of living
Unworthy of breathing
Not made to walk this Earth
Mistakes are not forgotten
Mistakes are not suppose to happen
Be banned from this world
Live in a world of Oblivion
Live in a World we call Hell
Burn
Burn, and never awake from this so called torture
Paralyzed with fear
Paralyzed with regret
Be powerless
Be worthless
Be nothing more then a mere weak insect
No one shall look at you
No one shall love you
No one shall acknowledge you
No one shall see you
No one will care you even exist at all
Die
Cry
Do whatever you want...
You can NOT escape this life
You can not escape anything worse then death
You won't even be able to forget your Sins
Your Sins of coming back to this world
Your Sins of creating our unbalanced life
Your Sins of hurting
Your Sins of Taking
Your Sins of Loving once again
You do not belong here
So you are to be punished
Punished and made into nothing more
Then a doll
A toy that can only hope that someone would
Notice them
To move them
To see them
Go away... GO AWAY TO YOUR OBLIVION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[How was that?!? I made it up!! Just now too, sorry But I just thought of something at the top of my mind, and I guess it sort of makes sense...]
As Miroku finished there was a VERY bright glow as all of them could hear screams.
One from Kikyo
One from Naraku
One from Inuyasha
One from... Kagome ...
[Inu—N/K/K- Kanna's POV]
Kagome? How, and why is it Kagome? Ah... THE SHARD!! She must have sensed it! Since, I'm not in the area of Naraku's barrier. But why is she helping me? She must be after the jewel shard.
Just as I thought of all his, Kagome shot two arrows at the demon killing it. Then she got the jewel shard that the demon had. "Are you ok Kanna?"
I was taken a back. Was she concerned about me?! No, she's trying to trick me.. Like she had with Kagura. With her little goodie goodie acts she manipulates them. Yes that's what she probably does. Now Sister Kagura only talks about her and Lord Sesshoumaru. I don't know what she sees in her.
All I see is a very confusing puzzle. I don't get it at all!
"Kanna?" Kagome once again said. I could see very clear emotions coming from her eyes. No!! she's trying to draw me in!! So I turned my head and noticed that I had a few scratches on my legs. More accurately, my kimono had a few holes in it, and blood was coming out... How did they get there though? ... maybe ... maybe when I was walking in those bus—
What I saw amazed me. Kagome looked at my scratches and got out a handkerchief. I flinched as she touched me and pulled my kimono up a little so she could see the wounds.. She then grabbed something her odd pack, then she said "Hold still this might sting a little..." I almost screamed in pain as the stuff touched me but it quickly stopped after she blew on it with care.
Then she wrapped the handkerchief around my wound and pulled my kimono back down. Then she smiled at me. I blushed and looked down. No one ever treated me like this before. Only sister Kagura treated me fairly. Along with Kohaku. But everyone else was so cruel. And Hakudoushi was weird, and everyone else scared me to Hell.
[Is it Hakudoushi? I never saw the whole thing, but I know that Hakudoushi appears later in the anime.]
h t t p : w w w . i n u – y a s h a . t h e m o o n . c o. u k / n / h a k u d o u s h i . p h p
[Also, OF-COURSE without ANY spaces Those are pictures of Hakudoushi and all others...]
"Why did you help me? And how did you find me?" I asked. She seemed taken a back that I spoke but, who could blame her? I hardly talked to anyone, It was only usually with Kagura that I talked. She smiled again and said, "I found you because of the shard in your mirror, and I helped you because I can tell that you, like Kagura, hate being Naraku's tools. So, your probably only following his orders right? I bet that you didn't want to actually kill all those people..."
Surprised... That's what I was. I uncharacteristically hugged her and cried.
After about five minutes my tears stopped and I gave the shard to her. I watched as she amazingly purified it. All she did was touch it too.
She smiled and gave me one last hug. She heard her name being called and said her good byes to me. "She you Kanna, and make sure Naraku doesn't know about this. Can you hide the scent? I don't know how, but I hopw you can. And don't worry! I'll save you, Kaura and Kohaku too! OH! Tell Kagura I said Hi!"
I myself smiled, only after she called sit and I heard a loud boom noise did I smile. Then I looked at the mirror, I quickly made it crack in many spots so it would seem that Inuyasha had already taken it. And I had left was the mirror. Then I saw Kagome's arrow. It was still inside. I took it out and made a duplicate. No one, not even Naraku knows that I can duplicate things.
I stored the arrow away and made it seem that I was overpowered by Kagome's arrow. I hid the scent and went back to Naraku's Castle. Why didn't Kagome ask where Naraku's Castle was? ... She is too kind hearted and she doesn't want to use...
I mused, maybe, she seems too nice to use me, or Kagura.
When I got back to Naraku's castle. I had my head low and 'looked' ashamed infront of Naraku. "You've failed?" "...yes..." "Kanna... Where did you get that handkerchief?" I nearly gasped, I had completely forgotten about it!!... I'm sorry Kagome...
"It's mine..." said Kagura. I was shocked but didn't show it. Why is she... Thank you sister...
"Yours? Then why does Kanna have it?" asked Naraku, very suspiciously. "I gave it to her, she must have used it to cover her wound" "...Leave..." Naraku said, satisfied with the answer yet still slightly suspicious. He had found out that Kanna could cover her scent. So that didn't puzzle him why he couldn't smell her scent, or the scent on the handkerchief. But shy did she do it is what Naraku wanted to know.
I and Kagura left immediately. "Its Kagome's am I right?" asked Kagura. I was shocked but looked up and said, "yes..." Kagura smiled and said, "Let me guess, she got you with a smile, a hug and the words "I promise to save you" or something like that right? She got me the same way. But I'm happy. I hope I can see her again. What about you Kanna?
"Yes... I want to see her again, but, not as enemies, as...... Friends..." Then I smiled at Kagurs. She was also shocked but she smiled back, "We better go now. And keep alive, and Keep Naraku from knowing about any of this." "Yes... We must. Otherwise, Naraku might use us as bait for her... And I wouldn't like that at all..."
Not At All...
(Back to the Present at Naraku's Keep)
Naraku had just screamed. Kagura slowly looked at him as he came back apart. "What?!? ... What happened?!?!" Kanna flinched and slowly looked up. His body seemed even more apart then before. His hold on Kagura loosened completely and she fell to the floor. She looked at Kanna and they both nodded. This was the perfect chance to get away.
So Kagura used her other ability, An ability like Kanna, Naraku hadn't known of. She healed herself and ran...
Kagura and Kanna ran as Naraku was occupied. But then, demon parts shot out at them. Kanna still at full power, used the arrow that she had saved. She duplicated it and sent multiple arrows at the body parts. She smiled as they purified the parts. How? Because there was still purification power on the original arrow.
Since Kanna's mirror sort of froze time inside of it. The arrow was basically frozen in one spot and kept all of its original power. But since it wasn't released right at her. She could use its power still. And since she could duplicate. The power on the arrow never deceased. She had unlimited amounts of purifying arrows now, at least unlimited until she ran out of strength, but since she hardly EVER uses her power. She had enough to take down a million demons.
But, that was just it. Naraku had been MADE of OVER a million demons. So she kept using the arrows until they got out of the castle which Kagura would take over. As they ran. They saw Kohaku, it seems that he had just wanted to know what all the noise was about. Knowing that one of Kagome's 'arrows' could break any spell/barrier ect. She got one and hit the spot where Kohaku's shard was.
The Jewel Shard purified surprisingly as Kohaku regained conscious and looked around confusedly. "Come on... Are you coming with us or not? We don't have much time!!" Kohaku just followed, not knowing anything else to do. Then they reached a door. A door where their hearts were held, well, memories for Kohaku. But they entered and saw...
Thousands of jars and such all over the room. And things that looked like eggs all over the room. When Kagura stepped forward. They all burst and out came an child of Naraku's.With not much time or energy, they fought blindly. Careful not to destroy any of the jars. But Kagura gave up, and used the Dance of the Dragon and destroyed over half of the jars. This, also, destroyed the half that we haven't fought yet.
As Kanna fired arrows. She didn't see one of the demons. It passed in between shadows so she didn't see it, since she was getting the bigger and flying demons. When the demon emerged from her shadow, "Kanna! Watch out!" she turned and her eyes widened in shock. But luckily. Kohaku sliced through it with his weapon.
"Are you ok Kanna?" She nodded but saw another demon behind him and pulled him down. Threw and arrow and ducked down as a swarm of Saimyoushou (Those Poisonous Insects Naraku gave to Sesshoumaru before though it means something else.) appeared and were buzzing around the room.
Kohaku blushed slightly as he saw Kanna on him but saw them. Three jars. One White, Red, and Green. "Kagura!! There over there!!!" Kagura saw them and quickly grabbed the jars. Then they ran out of the room. Kohaku quickly closed the doors, It would keep them in there. He somehow knew it would. You can only get in once without Naraku, but not be able to get out. Unless... Something... He couldn't remember.
But they got out, Kagura quickly plucked the two feathers from her hair and threw them up. One held, Kanna, and Kohaku. The other Kagura herself resided. They headed for Kaede's village immediately. Hoping that they could be safe there.
[YYH]
All that Yusuke and Kurama thought was, 'He's dead now... The poor moronic fool.' Hiei's eyes continued to glow red. Then pounced on Kuwabara and pulled out his katana. Yusuke deciding, it'd be best to cut in now yells out.
"WHAT THE HELL IS FUCKIN' WRONG WITH YOU KUWABARA!?!?!?!?!??!!?" questioned Yusuke who was deciding between laughing his head off or be even MORE freaked out then earlier for Kuwabara kissing Hiei. Yusuke looked between Hiei, who was just pulled off of Kuwabara by Kurama, and Kuwabara who was scared shitless.
"YOU DISGUSTING UGLY BABOON!!! I Swear I WILL KILL YOU!!!!" yelled Hiei was he struggled out of Kurama's grasp. Though he failed miserably, at least no one (other then the whole team) saw what had happened. School or 'Ningen Torture Facility' hadn't started yet, they WERE at Sairaiyuuki High, with Hiei in a Sakura Tree. Though Kuwabara suddenly popped up out of nowhere and started to hug everyone who was already at school.
The poor foolish moron.
(In Reikai)
It was dark. All you could see was a TV screen and a VCR with a tape inside. A girl with blue hair stared in horror at what was happening. And then a toddler with a JR. on his forehead sighed and looked back at the screen.
There was a girl with short raven hair on the screen and she had blue eyes. She was bleeding in five spots as she was seemingly protecting a demon behind her. Or actually two was more like it. It was-
But they never saw it because the lights went on revealing Koenma and Botan glaring at the ogre named George, who had messed up everything. Koenma immediately stopped the tape before it got even more ruined. "ARGH!! OGRE!!! Look what you did!!! Now this tape'll be messed up now!! Don't you know that the light messes this particular tape up?!?! What the HELL WERE YOU THINKING?!?!" yelled Koenma as he sucked on his pacifier non stop.
"So-Sorry sir, But I think I've found the girl on the screen's 'Reincarnation'!!!!!" Koenma quickly snatched the papers George was holding as his eyes widened. "Her name is K-" "BOTAN!!!!! GO TO YUSUKE'S SCHOOL AND DRAG YUSUKE AND THE OTHERS HERE IF YOU HAVE TO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JUST GET THEM HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Botan flinched with fright at his tone of voice. But quickly nodded and flew out of the room. She would have made a portal. But something or SOMEONE was messing around with the weather lately in the Spirit World. Everything was scrambled up. The other Ferry girls unfortunately were pretty much lost somewhere by trying to take their chances with the portals.
As she got out of the Palace like Place She was immediately soaked to the bone. She could barely fly. "Oh no... AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!" As a thunder bolt struck her and she fell through the clouds. She was nearly unconscious, but she had no choice but to create a portal and end up anywhere but as a pile of splattered things on the ground.
Where she ended up surprised her...
I know I said that the OC's would appear in this chapter... But I can't ... So instead it'll be in the next chapter ok?!?! I hope this is long enough! And doesn't have TOO much mistakes... Can anyone be my editor? Do they call them muses??
I don't know... So if anyone wants to, please email me., Look at my Look up ok? :)
THANKS!
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inudemoness247: sorry but I thought this chapter sucked :) So school already started for you? That sux oh well, I promise, you get to be in the fic, In the NEXT chapter.. Is it long enough? I hope so... This chapter seemed boring, but it had hints of who and who shall be paired together, thought... One or two you'll have to wait and find out :)
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A few Japanese words that I might use::
Daijobu Desuka?: Are you alright? ::Chotto Matte: Please Wait! ::Oi: Hey ::Hai: Yes :: Ano: Um ::Demo: But ::Iie: No ::Osuwari: Sit ::Gomen Nasai: Sorry :: Arigato Gozaimasu: Thank You! ::Kawaii: Cute ::Aisheteru: I love you :: Sumimasen: Excuse me ::Ja Ne: See Ya! ::Ja Ne Minna: See ya everyone! :: Ohayo: Morning ::Taijiya: Demon exterminator ::Houshi: Monk :: Miko: Priestess ::Inu: Dog ::Youkai: Demon ::Youki: Demon energy :: Okaa-San: mother ::Onee-Chan: Sister ::Oni-Chan: Brother :: Baka: Stupid, Idiot, Moron, ect. ::Teme: B$rd ::Yarou: B$rd :: Kuso: Damn, Shit ::Neko: Cat ::Kitsune: Fox ::Koorime: Ice apparition :: Onna: Woman ::Ningen: Human ::Ningenkai: Human World :: Makai: Demon World ::Reiaki: Spirit World ::Rekai Tantei: Spirit Detectives