Chibified- thankies for reviewing! I think he is too, just to let you know.
I don't really like the beginning of the story, nor this chapter. I'm going
to have to get some action in.
Iluvdance89- thanks for reviewing! Don't worry, farther in the story you'll
find out all about what is going on with Char.
In the coach, Ella's mind was filled with a sudden rush of new thoughts. Where would she go? Just them two? It didn't seem safe. Ella was confused just like she had been when she had the obedience curse, confused and she felt insignificant.
Kamillah fiddled with her fingers, sticking them in her mouth then laughing while looking out the window. Ella felt a yearning to pick her up and run back to the castle. But she couldn't. She was strong enough to resist this now. Ella felt her eyes tear up. Char didn't believe in Ella. Something was the matter with Char. He was totally out of character.
"Kamillah. What's up honey. Where should I go to, so I can escape Daddy and maybe he'll get his act straightened?" Ella said. Even though Kamillah wouldn't know where to go, she had to ask someone.
"Friend! Friend!" Kamillah said laughing, then grabbed her toes. She giggled and climbed around the seat. Her purple dress was fading and tears were everywhere. Ella laughed.
"What friend Kamillah. Char barely lets me out of the house when I'm pregnant. He's become so uptight these days. Especially since the death of his.nevermind Kamillah. You wouldn't understand, your only a baby!" Ella said, clutching Kamillah's shoulders.
They were passing towns people. Ella was getting really sad now. Soon they were in the woods. Farther from Char than Ella ever could be. Farther.then.
Ella drifted to sleep.
"Whe.where am I?" Ella asked as she lay in a small bed in a small room.
"Your at my house, of course." An mid-aged lady said. Ella yelped.
"Where's Kamillah?" Ella yelled.
"Outside with my daughter, silly, like I would just throw that adorable girl outside. I was driving in my carriage when another carriage stopped by mine. He yelled something about you giving birth. I knew a midwife, so I took you home with me. She gave birth to your child, and now you're here!" The lady said, laughing. She was plump, and seemed friendly.
"I.I had my baby. Whats.can I hold him!" Ella begged. She seemed somewhat frustrated that the lady hadn't told her earlier.
"Him? It's a girl!" The woman said, and Ella gasped.
"But Char.and.holy shit." Ella said She covered her mouth. Char was going to be so upset when she came back.
"Here she is!" The lady said. The baby cried.
"Oh my!" Ella said. The baby was so cute. "What should I name her!?"
"I don't know silly. She's not my baby!" The woman said. "I'll leave you two alone now."
"Hmm.Holly Elizabeth.Holly Elizabeth.Kamillah Elaine and Holly Elizabeth" Ella said, sighing. Soon she was back in a drifting sleep, with Holly laying beside her.
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Authors Note: How do you like my second chapter! I think it's quite crappy, but uh.I still need some motivation and ideas. But that'll probably come later when I'm writing. I was going to put ogres, but maybe later!
In the coach, Ella's mind was filled with a sudden rush of new thoughts. Where would she go? Just them two? It didn't seem safe. Ella was confused just like she had been when she had the obedience curse, confused and she felt insignificant.
Kamillah fiddled with her fingers, sticking them in her mouth then laughing while looking out the window. Ella felt a yearning to pick her up and run back to the castle. But she couldn't. She was strong enough to resist this now. Ella felt her eyes tear up. Char didn't believe in Ella. Something was the matter with Char. He was totally out of character.
"Kamillah. What's up honey. Where should I go to, so I can escape Daddy and maybe he'll get his act straightened?" Ella said. Even though Kamillah wouldn't know where to go, she had to ask someone.
"Friend! Friend!" Kamillah said laughing, then grabbed her toes. She giggled and climbed around the seat. Her purple dress was fading and tears were everywhere. Ella laughed.
"What friend Kamillah. Char barely lets me out of the house when I'm pregnant. He's become so uptight these days. Especially since the death of his.nevermind Kamillah. You wouldn't understand, your only a baby!" Ella said, clutching Kamillah's shoulders.
They were passing towns people. Ella was getting really sad now. Soon they were in the woods. Farther from Char than Ella ever could be. Farther.then.
Ella drifted to sleep.
"Whe.where am I?" Ella asked as she lay in a small bed in a small room.
"Your at my house, of course." An mid-aged lady said. Ella yelped.
"Where's Kamillah?" Ella yelled.
"Outside with my daughter, silly, like I would just throw that adorable girl outside. I was driving in my carriage when another carriage stopped by mine. He yelled something about you giving birth. I knew a midwife, so I took you home with me. She gave birth to your child, and now you're here!" The lady said, laughing. She was plump, and seemed friendly.
"I.I had my baby. Whats.can I hold him!" Ella begged. She seemed somewhat frustrated that the lady hadn't told her earlier.
"Him? It's a girl!" The woman said, and Ella gasped.
"But Char.and.holy shit." Ella said She covered her mouth. Char was going to be so upset when she came back.
"Here she is!" The lady said. The baby cried.
"Oh my!" Ella said. The baby was so cute. "What should I name her!?"
"I don't know silly. She's not my baby!" The woman said. "I'll leave you two alone now."
"Hmm.Holly Elizabeth.Holly Elizabeth.Kamillah Elaine and Holly Elizabeth" Ella said, sighing. Soon she was back in a drifting sleep, with Holly laying beside her.
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Authors Note: How do you like my second chapter! I think it's quite crappy, but uh.I still need some motivation and ideas. But that'll probably come later when I'm writing. I was going to put ogres, but maybe later!