AN: I am changing the name of my Fic!! Yes, it's true, the fic will be
renamed, and I need YOUR help to do it! Please submit a new name for the
fic if you review... please review...
AAN (Another Authors Note):I know, its been a LONG time since I've
updated.... Sucks doesn't it? I felt so guilty so I decided to write you guys
a chapter... a LONG chapter, since I love you all so much! 3
ON WITH THE STORY!! =+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+ Kristi awoke to the sound of the phone ringing the "Mission Impossible" theme. She answered it, trying not to sound too groggy. "Hello?" "Hey!" It was Zack. "Oh, hi. How are you?" she said, trying to sound extra-perky. "I'm alright thanks... I was wondering if you would like to go out today? I got some stuff planned if you do." "Ok! Ummm..... When?" Kristi answered "Could you come over soon?" Zack said, sounding hopeful. "Uh, ya sure, I'll be over soon! Love ya! Bye!" Kristi said quickly, bursting with excitement "ok, love you.... Bye!" He said unsurely... a little taken-aback by her excitement. Kristi turned off the phone and started getting ready. She looked out the window to a bright day, wondering what Zack had planed. =+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+= Kristi Finally rang the doorbell at Zack's place at about 11:00, wearing jean shorts, a hot pink top and a white zip-up sweater over that. Zack appeared at the door, in the middle of shoving his wallet in his pocket and hauling on his yellow sweater. "'Sgo" he said, his usual saying for "Let's go" They walked hand in hand until they reached the corner store. Zack pulled her into the store, telling her to pick out her favorite junk food. She returned to him at the checkout with two Multi-Flavored slushies. Zack placed two packages of Oreo Cookies and a table cloth on the counter, remembering that Kristi LOVED Oreo Cookies. After paying for their food, He led her to a beautiful waterfall. "Omigosh! This place is beautiful!!" Kristi squealed. She embraced him in a tight hug, letting go to let him spread out the striped tablecloth for them to sit on. Then, they just sat there for a while staring at the waterfall in silence.
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+= =+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+= is it short again? I wouldn't know..... it dosen't look short here, but I'm typing it on Microsoft word....... The font is probably bigger here..... ANYWAY, I am now going to reply to reviews!
Nessa's Ruby Slippers: Ok, I'll remember that next time.... Writes down Mooneyham, not Moodyham thank-you! I love to hear that its lovely!
Wiseoldman: hmm.... Did you read again? I hope so! Please review if you did!
saxistwriterchick thank-you! I think I should check out some of yer fics, do you have any?
Jewlkitten: Thanks for all the reviews! I try to add more to each chapter, but its hard! I don't have it all written out already. I write it in my free time, and post what I write, so its hard to make it longer without having you guys wait so long....
Jessierose: ya, as I said before, Its hard to make my chapters longer, coz I don't already have it all written out.
Pltzchen: ya, I'd like a beta reader...... it would be great! Please email me! That would be great!
Nessa's Ruby Slippers: Thanks, I thought it was a good twist too!! =]
Waterbug7its too bad you don't think its sad... like its sad, just not as sad..... I just didn't really want to kill off any of the main characters in the movie. I'm sure you will grow to know Kristi just as well as the others!
Kentten Sixty: hm, what can I say to you... hmm..... Screw off! My gosh, if you don't have anything else to do other than go around insulting other peoples stories, then you REALLY need a life....... MIGHT I ADD, YOU DON'T HAVE A STORY!!! My gosh, get a life!
CrazedMoonlight12: thanks a lot for the review! I love to hear from such cheery people! UNLIKE KENTTEN SIXTY, WHO NEEDS TO GET A LIFE, AND TRY WRITING HER OWN STORY..... ( lol, sorry, I got a little off track there!! =])
XDeepxsmokexpurplexfirex: gee, thanks a lot....... Might I add you only have one fic too? Ooh, look who's calling me bad!
ON WITH THE STORY!! =+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+ Kristi awoke to the sound of the phone ringing the "Mission Impossible" theme. She answered it, trying not to sound too groggy. "Hello?" "Hey!" It was Zack. "Oh, hi. How are you?" she said, trying to sound extra-perky. "I'm alright thanks... I was wondering if you would like to go out today? I got some stuff planned if you do." "Ok! Ummm..... When?" Kristi answered "Could you come over soon?" Zack said, sounding hopeful. "Uh, ya sure, I'll be over soon! Love ya! Bye!" Kristi said quickly, bursting with excitement "ok, love you.... Bye!" He said unsurely... a little taken-aback by her excitement. Kristi turned off the phone and started getting ready. She looked out the window to a bright day, wondering what Zack had planed. =+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+= Kristi Finally rang the doorbell at Zack's place at about 11:00, wearing jean shorts, a hot pink top and a white zip-up sweater over that. Zack appeared at the door, in the middle of shoving his wallet in his pocket and hauling on his yellow sweater. "'Sgo" he said, his usual saying for "Let's go" They walked hand in hand until they reached the corner store. Zack pulled her into the store, telling her to pick out her favorite junk food. She returned to him at the checkout with two Multi-Flavored slushies. Zack placed two packages of Oreo Cookies and a table cloth on the counter, remembering that Kristi LOVED Oreo Cookies. After paying for their food, He led her to a beautiful waterfall. "Omigosh! This place is beautiful!!" Kristi squealed. She embraced him in a tight hug, letting go to let him spread out the striped tablecloth for them to sit on. Then, they just sat there for a while staring at the waterfall in silence.
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+= =+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+= is it short again? I wouldn't know..... it dosen't look short here, but I'm typing it on Microsoft word....... The font is probably bigger here..... ANYWAY, I am now going to reply to reviews!
Nessa's Ruby Slippers: Ok, I'll remember that next time.... Writes down Mooneyham, not Moodyham thank-you! I love to hear that its lovely!
Wiseoldman: hmm.... Did you read again? I hope so! Please review if you did!
saxistwriterchick thank-you! I think I should check out some of yer fics, do you have any?
Jewlkitten: Thanks for all the reviews! I try to add more to each chapter, but its hard! I don't have it all written out already. I write it in my free time, and post what I write, so its hard to make it longer without having you guys wait so long....
Jessierose: ya, as I said before, Its hard to make my chapters longer, coz I don't already have it all written out.
Pltzchen: ya, I'd like a beta reader...... it would be great! Please email me! That would be great!
Nessa's Ruby Slippers: Thanks, I thought it was a good twist too!! =]
Waterbug7its too bad you don't think its sad... like its sad, just not as sad..... I just didn't really want to kill off any of the main characters in the movie. I'm sure you will grow to know Kristi just as well as the others!
Kentten Sixty: hm, what can I say to you... hmm..... Screw off! My gosh, if you don't have anything else to do other than go around insulting other peoples stories, then you REALLY need a life....... MIGHT I ADD, YOU DON'T HAVE A STORY!!! My gosh, get a life!
CrazedMoonlight12: thanks a lot for the review! I love to hear from such cheery people! UNLIKE KENTTEN SIXTY, WHO NEEDS TO GET A LIFE, AND TRY WRITING HER OWN STORY..... ( lol, sorry, I got a little off track there!! =])
XDeepxsmokexpurplexfirex: gee, thanks a lot....... Might I add you only have one fic too? Ooh, look who's calling me bad!