Captured Years And Holding Hanging

by Rowna Seria

A quick little view into the relationship of Remus and Sirius, with more to the words than what is said. It is somewhere between prose and poetry, so please read and tell me how I've done.

Captured Years And Holding Hanging

Captured all in a moment, the light and the darkness, consuming the whole, eating their souls and leaving the shells, this was the sorrow that grew from the Dark Time.

Years have passed, years have gone by, and the shells are still upon the earth, waiting to be filled again, filled by each other, filled with the others emptiness.

And they gladly cling to the past, to the present.

Holding tightly to faded dreams and vivid memories, hoping someday the world will turn out right, and expecting everything to end tomorrow.

Hanging on to an old love that couldn't seem to die, though it tried; a tiny candle in a gale burning like a lamp and hidden deep inside, hoping the vessel doesn't break before the storm is over.

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I think this is somewhat like prose, and I separated the sentences and they made a cool sequence. It's about Remus and Sirius and is just me writing all the feelings instead of a defined plot. Hopefully it's not too confusing....

Comments welcome