For those reviewers out there complaining about my paragraphing, I do
paragraph my work on word but when it is posted on the Internet it gets
mucked up.
Now I know there is a Preview/Edit page but for some reason it won't work
for me. So Sorry, but I can't.
Sincerely,
Sekhemnet (The author)
Sora and the Gang arrived in Traverse town just past midnight the following night. Sora had seen horrible things before, but nothing prepared him for what greeted them as they got out of the Gummy ship. Traverse Town was a wreck. After the Nephilim attack the place had been totally and utterly demolished. All that left of this once noble city was burning rubble and the occasional stray house. Nephilim roamed the street attacking any survivors and torturing them for pure entertainment. Sora, Donald and Goofy watched in dismay as a single blow from a Nephilim sword decapitated a child dressed in rags, 'What happened here?' Riku asked, 'After Sora was captured these things destroyed all in their path! The only thing that was really left standing was Ansem' s mansion and that was taken over by their lord.' Goofy explained, 'And this guy has Kairi right?' Sora asked, 'The seventh princess of heart... what are they up to?' Riku mumbled under his breath, 'I don't know, but whatever he's planning it can't be good' Donald quacked. Turning a corner they where surprised to find a group of Nephilim hacking violently at a shadowy figure. At first the creatures seemed to be winning when all of a sudden a burst of white light exploded from within and sent the Nephilim flying, 'What the?' Sora commented. As the smoke cleared the four could make out a short hooded figure, holding a Keyblade, 'Your Majesty!' Donald and Goofy fell of themselves. The figure turned its head and a white smile was shown from inside the hood. Reaching up the figure pulled back his hood to reveal King Mickey! 'Mickey mouse, what a pleasant surprise' Riku said monotonously and stepped forth, 'Mr Riku' Mickey replied, 'Still blind?' 'I see better than I used to' 'Your Majesty what are you doing here?' Goofy asked, 'Trying to find you of course!' Mickey replied, 'And boy oh boy is it good to see you!' He slapped his hands on Donald and Goofy's backs in a greeting, 'So what's going on here Mickey?' Riku asked,' I'm sure YOU know' 'I know as much as you Riku, The Nephilim have attacked Traverse town and Kairi has been kidnapped. The only knew piece of information I have found is that they came from a world by the name of Runeshine' 'Runeshine?' Sora asked, 'Come, it is not safe out here on the streets. We will talk more inside' Mickey said as he lifted up a manhole and jumped down. Donald and Goofy followed and then Sora and Riku entered too. They landed in a large pipe. Smelly green water rose to their waste and forced them to wade after Mickey, 'Uh King? Where are we going?' Donald asked, 'To the secret cavern, Leon is waiting' Mickey replied.
Five minutes later they found themselves stepping up on shore to see Leon, Yuffie and Aerieth sitting in a circle on large rocks talking, 'I see you found the others' Leon said to Mickey as he got up, 'Good to see you again Sora' 'Hiya Leon' Goofy waved, 'Now that the two have arrived we can continue with our plans' Yuffie said acknowledging Riku and Sora, 'I'm thinking that the only way to kill these monsters is to strike their home, Runeshine' Aerieth stated, 'What is this Runeshine?' Riku asked, 'Runeshine, Runeshine according to legend is the Heart of everything. It contains Al the secrets of the universe and is a prison to the greatest evil ever born- The Nephilim. For years it was protected by a force field, but it seems that they have broken through. Lucky we have a prophecy on our side' Leon said, 'Yes a Prophecy' Yuffie took over,' A prophecy handed down through the ages- telling of three chosen ones called the Unknown and a princess. Two who are able to wield their own Keyblades and the third- someone who has the ability to see into the future. We know that Sora is a Keyblade master and that YOU Riku are the seer as it where. We also have a sneaking suspicion that Kairi is the princess and Mickey is the second Keyblade wielder' 'And so first we must free Kairi...' Leon began but was broke off as a loud roar echoed through the tunnels, 'What the?' Leon growled. Suddenly a swarm of Locusts exploded into the room. They buzzed around and began to sting them with strange spikes on their rear ends, 'Oh no!' Leon groaned,' I've only ever heard of these things once, They are the calling card of the Nephilim King's chief warrior- Apollyon the Locust lord! Aerieth, Yuffie, Mickey Run! We'll take care of him!' The three scampered off as the locusts formed a tall shape. They dissolved into a solid form eight feet high with dark red eyes, sharp yellow teeth and bloodstained horns. The Creature was built like a tank and it wore nothing but a brown loincloth, 'I am Apollyon!' it said, 'And now...' 'You die!
Sora and the Gang arrived in Traverse town just past midnight the following night. Sora had seen horrible things before, but nothing prepared him for what greeted them as they got out of the Gummy ship. Traverse Town was a wreck. After the Nephilim attack the place had been totally and utterly demolished. All that left of this once noble city was burning rubble and the occasional stray house. Nephilim roamed the street attacking any survivors and torturing them for pure entertainment. Sora, Donald and Goofy watched in dismay as a single blow from a Nephilim sword decapitated a child dressed in rags, 'What happened here?' Riku asked, 'After Sora was captured these things destroyed all in their path! The only thing that was really left standing was Ansem' s mansion and that was taken over by their lord.' Goofy explained, 'And this guy has Kairi right?' Sora asked, 'The seventh princess of heart... what are they up to?' Riku mumbled under his breath, 'I don't know, but whatever he's planning it can't be good' Donald quacked. Turning a corner they where surprised to find a group of Nephilim hacking violently at a shadowy figure. At first the creatures seemed to be winning when all of a sudden a burst of white light exploded from within and sent the Nephilim flying, 'What the?' Sora commented. As the smoke cleared the four could make out a short hooded figure, holding a Keyblade, 'Your Majesty!' Donald and Goofy fell of themselves. The figure turned its head and a white smile was shown from inside the hood. Reaching up the figure pulled back his hood to reveal King Mickey! 'Mickey mouse, what a pleasant surprise' Riku said monotonously and stepped forth, 'Mr Riku' Mickey replied, 'Still blind?' 'I see better than I used to' 'Your Majesty what are you doing here?' Goofy asked, 'Trying to find you of course!' Mickey replied, 'And boy oh boy is it good to see you!' He slapped his hands on Donald and Goofy's backs in a greeting, 'So what's going on here Mickey?' Riku asked,' I'm sure YOU know' 'I know as much as you Riku, The Nephilim have attacked Traverse town and Kairi has been kidnapped. The only knew piece of information I have found is that they came from a world by the name of Runeshine' 'Runeshine?' Sora asked, 'Come, it is not safe out here on the streets. We will talk more inside' Mickey said as he lifted up a manhole and jumped down. Donald and Goofy followed and then Sora and Riku entered too. They landed in a large pipe. Smelly green water rose to their waste and forced them to wade after Mickey, 'Uh King? Where are we going?' Donald asked, 'To the secret cavern, Leon is waiting' Mickey replied.
Five minutes later they found themselves stepping up on shore to see Leon, Yuffie and Aerieth sitting in a circle on large rocks talking, 'I see you found the others' Leon said to Mickey as he got up, 'Good to see you again Sora' 'Hiya Leon' Goofy waved, 'Now that the two have arrived we can continue with our plans' Yuffie said acknowledging Riku and Sora, 'I'm thinking that the only way to kill these monsters is to strike their home, Runeshine' Aerieth stated, 'What is this Runeshine?' Riku asked, 'Runeshine, Runeshine according to legend is the Heart of everything. It contains Al the secrets of the universe and is a prison to the greatest evil ever born- The Nephilim. For years it was protected by a force field, but it seems that they have broken through. Lucky we have a prophecy on our side' Leon said, 'Yes a Prophecy' Yuffie took over,' A prophecy handed down through the ages- telling of three chosen ones called the Unknown and a princess. Two who are able to wield their own Keyblades and the third- someone who has the ability to see into the future. We know that Sora is a Keyblade master and that YOU Riku are the seer as it where. We also have a sneaking suspicion that Kairi is the princess and Mickey is the second Keyblade wielder' 'And so first we must free Kairi...' Leon began but was broke off as a loud roar echoed through the tunnels, 'What the?' Leon growled. Suddenly a swarm of Locusts exploded into the room. They buzzed around and began to sting them with strange spikes on their rear ends, 'Oh no!' Leon groaned,' I've only ever heard of these things once, They are the calling card of the Nephilim King's chief warrior- Apollyon the Locust lord! Aerieth, Yuffie, Mickey Run! We'll take care of him!' The three scampered off as the locusts formed a tall shape. They dissolved into a solid form eight feet high with dark red eyes, sharp yellow teeth and bloodstained horns. The Creature was built like a tank and it wore nothing but a brown loincloth, 'I am Apollyon!' it said, 'And now...' 'You die!