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Disclaimer: Everything you recognize I do not own, witch is pretty much everything.
Introduction
As you know in the 7th year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, Lily Evans finally said she would go out with James Potter, after he had been asking her out since they met in the first year. Sirius Black, James and Lily's best friend hasn't been spending much time with them since Lily and James have always been together. So I am going to take you into the story and tell you what happened after James and Lily started dating. Remus Lupin is also a close friend including Peter Pettigrew and Lily's friends Cheri and Millie. They were all were in Gryffindor
Chapter 1
"LILY! GET UP!" Millie yelled.
"I'm up, I'm up," Lily said.
"Its about time," scolded Millie. Lily sat up in bed and saw her best friend Millie rushing around the room looking for her brush. She looked over to the other side of the room and saw her other friend Cheri aiding the search.
"Lily have you seen my brush?" asked Millie.
" No, but here, use mine, " said Lily, getting hers out of the drawer. She handed Millie the brush.
"Thanks," said Millie as she ran into the bathroom. Lily got up and got dressed.
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"JAMES! GET OUT OF BED!" Sirius yelled.
"Damn! What time is it?" James said as he sprung out of bed.
"Calm down, its still early." Sirius said
"Ok cause I have to meet Lily before breakfast," said James. Sirius and Remus rolled their eyes. All he thought about now was Lily. Remus and Sirius was getting used to it though.
"So what are you and Miss Lily doing tonight?" Sirius joked.
"Shut up" James said as he threw a pillow at Sirius. They all got dressed and went down into the common room. They sat down on the couch and were talking when Remus realized that Peter was missing.
"Where's Peter?" he asked.
"I don't know," Sirius and James said in unison.
"Guess he got off to an early start," At that moment the three girls walked down the stairs. James sprang up (a/n- I know he springs a lot, lol!) and walked over to Lily and kissed her.
"Good morning sweetie" said James. Millie and Cheri started to giggle.
"Good morning James good morning guys," said lLly.
"Good morning girls, and can I say you all look beautiful this morning?" said Sirius. He was always the charmer.
"Morning Sirius morning Remus" they both said.
"Morning" said Remus.
"Lets go get breakfast" said Sirius. They all agreed and went down to breakfast. During breakfast they all talked and laughed.
After a day of classes, Lily and James walked back to the common room together. They sat on the couch cuddling and kissing while Sirius was in the corner flirting with Cheri. When Sirius and Cheri finally went up to bed, James and Lily were left alone in the common room. They talked for awhile and then went up to bed. When James went to his dorm, he noticed Sirius wasn't sleeping.
"What's wrong?" asked James.
"All you do now is spend time with Lily. We never ever play pranks on Snape anymore. What happened to you? What happened to James?" ________________________________________________________________________
Hey, Hope you enjoyed I know Sirius is being kinda dramatic Please review!
Cheri
Disclaimer: Everything you recognize I do not own, witch is pretty much everything.
Introduction
As you know in the 7th year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, Lily Evans finally said she would go out with James Potter, after he had been asking her out since they met in the first year. Sirius Black, James and Lily's best friend hasn't been spending much time with them since Lily and James have always been together. So I am going to take you into the story and tell you what happened after James and Lily started dating. Remus Lupin is also a close friend including Peter Pettigrew and Lily's friends Cheri and Millie. They were all were in Gryffindor
Chapter 1
"LILY! GET UP!" Millie yelled.
"I'm up, I'm up," Lily said.
"Its about time," scolded Millie. Lily sat up in bed and saw her best friend Millie rushing around the room looking for her brush. She looked over to the other side of the room and saw her other friend Cheri aiding the search.
"Lily have you seen my brush?" asked Millie.
" No, but here, use mine, " said Lily, getting hers out of the drawer. She handed Millie the brush.
"Thanks," said Millie as she ran into the bathroom. Lily got up and got dressed.
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"JAMES! GET OUT OF BED!" Sirius yelled.
"Damn! What time is it?" James said as he sprung out of bed.
"Calm down, its still early." Sirius said
"Ok cause I have to meet Lily before breakfast," said James. Sirius and Remus rolled their eyes. All he thought about now was Lily. Remus and Sirius was getting used to it though.
"So what are you and Miss Lily doing tonight?" Sirius joked.
"Shut up" James said as he threw a pillow at Sirius. They all got dressed and went down into the common room. They sat down on the couch and were talking when Remus realized that Peter was missing.
"Where's Peter?" he asked.
"I don't know," Sirius and James said in unison.
"Guess he got off to an early start," At that moment the three girls walked down the stairs. James sprang up (a/n- I know he springs a lot, lol!) and walked over to Lily and kissed her.
"Good morning sweetie" said James. Millie and Cheri started to giggle.
"Good morning James good morning guys," said lLly.
"Good morning girls, and can I say you all look beautiful this morning?" said Sirius. He was always the charmer.
"Morning Sirius morning Remus" they both said.
"Morning" said Remus.
"Lets go get breakfast" said Sirius. They all agreed and went down to breakfast. During breakfast they all talked and laughed.
After a day of classes, Lily and James walked back to the common room together. They sat on the couch cuddling and kissing while Sirius was in the corner flirting with Cheri. When Sirius and Cheri finally went up to bed, James and Lily were left alone in the common room. They talked for awhile and then went up to bed. When James went to his dorm, he noticed Sirius wasn't sleeping.
"What's wrong?" asked James.
"All you do now is spend time with Lily. We never ever play pranks on Snape anymore. What happened to you? What happened to James?" ________________________________________________________________________
Hey, Hope you enjoyed I know Sirius is being kinda dramatic Please review!
Cheri