Red rose here, back for another update! Wahoo! Yahoo! Ummm Zahoo? Yeah well I think I am slowly turning more insane than I already am, I have listened to the same song for hours, and I still love it. It's American Jesus by Bad Religion. And I swear that song will be stuck in my head for the rest of my life...IM SORRY LINKIN PARK! I still love them more than bad religion...alright then, lets move forward...not waste any more time, I KNOW! I am sooooo late in updating this, I just haven't been in the mood to write, at least not this fic but I am writing another great great fic......I am so shameless alirghty then is anyone still reading this part? Ummmm OMG there is a murderer behind you! Your fridge is on fire! Ummm BEWARE THE JACKALOPE!!!
Lakura- those guys in white coats...tsk tsk tsk (holds up some charred stethoscopes) they didn't have a chance...but wait, Kai! I thought you loved me! And billions of other fan girls...some point in your life you have to choose one of us, you playa...or...Kai clones! That would always be fun! But who would get the original...hmmm..................
Kerei Kitsune- I thought you were gonna get the detective...alright then, I'll take the out Smith and you take out Emma...I like the dress, perfect color, you think these shoes will go with it? (pulls out some high heels) Kai, this is totally you!
Alyssa Lin- poor, poor Kai, you can help me take care of Emma (Brings out flamethrower) near deaf situations...you gotta watch out for those, alright then, I'm glad you like the fic! Here's more.
K.C.- ummm no, he didn't, there are these people called doctors, they fix things like that
Fallen Pheonix- wow, I am very happy of what you think of my ficcy...I am pretty sure Kai is not gonna die in the end...I've already started reading your fics, and I'll be reviewing soon!
Bffimagine- all right, I'm updating! I'm glad you liked the story, and this chapter is gonna be a lot longer than the other ones.
Alrighty-o then lets move on Disclaimer- I do not own beyblade or any of the characters Or The Wildest Ride A History of Nascar, Home Depot, KFC, Dale Earnhardt cup, Chevy Tahoe, King of the Hill
ON WITH THE FICCY-Y!!!
Kai sat, staring off into the distance with the blanket still over him. The soft glow of the park lamps revealed to Ray how exhausted Kai really looked. His eye's were half closed and looked dull with deep dark circles under them, not like they usually are, soulful, alive, sometimes with the fires of hell burning in them "The fires of hell, that's a new one, I barely even get to see his eyes, they're closed almost all of the time..." Ray thought. He let go of Kai and stood up looking at the sky "I don't know what in the world they are doing to you in that hospital, Kai, but you look really tired...I think we should go home, you should get some rest and tomorrow you can explain what happened to the authorities"
"That little bitch, she'll lie her way out, and no one will believe me, again...that reminds me-" Kai looked up at Ray
"Nothing good ever started with that little bitch, so what happened, besides you getting the ass kicked out of you..." Ray smiled lightly.
"Why the hell is he acting all cheery like this...and smiling at me like that...he's staring at me! Am I some freak show now? But his eyes, they're really-." Kai shook the thoughts out of his head "Have to stay focused here" he said aloud.
"what?" Ray cocked his head sideways
"Nothing, and it's a long story..."
"You can tell me on the way home
"But I need to ask you something first..."
Emma was loving all the attention she was getting, everyone was fussing over her and she felt like the most important person in the world "But where did he get to? I can't wait to tell daddy what he did to me! He'll be on death row if I can help it! Men are just too easy to play around with...they are so dumb!" She thought.
"I just can't thank you enough! You really saved me! You're my hero!" She said to the driver.
"Just doin' my duty, miss. A man's always gotta look out for the ladies." He tipped his tan cowboy hat at her. He was wearing a plain white tee shirt, faded jeans with a enormous belt buckle in the shape of Texas.
"So, what's your name, kind sir?" her voice was dripping false sincerity.
"The name's Larry, Larry Dunheit, and yours?" Larry said and his texas accent.
"My name's Emma Smith" she wiped a fake tear from her eye.
"What's wrong?"
"Oh, its just that...my name was going to be Mrs. Bo Mendoza...but that awful man who tried to rape me...also killed my fiancée" She cried a little.
"That's despicable! I heard about that murder in the paper! You must be going through some awful rough times Miss Emma."
A man in a police officer approached Emma "Excuse me but, May I ask you some questions?"
"Sure, I'll do my best" she said.
"Alright, What time was it when the attack happened?" He asked.
"If I remember correctly...It was a little after 12."
"What were you doing out here at 12?"
"I was watering the plants in front of the hospital where my dear fiancée died..." She wiped her eyes again
"How sad, now what were you doing watering plants at 12?"
"Well ever since Bo died, I have been low on money so I had to work many jobs, so I took the night shift at the gardening shop..."
"Now what did Mr. Hiwitari do when you first saw him?"
"H-He came up behind me and said 'so here you are...I've been looking for you...' in the most evil voice and I tried to scream...but he put his hand over my mouth and...and..." she started to cry.
"I think she's had enough for now" Larry said.
"But I need to ask her some more questions..."
"I'm sure she'll still know in the morning, I really think she needs some rest after that horrible ordeal, don't you?"
"I understand, please come to the station sometime tomorrow morning, ok?" Emma nodded and the policeman walked away.
The crowd had thinned out and there were only a few people left at the scene, all being questioned or questioning. Larry was walking to his dark blue Tahoe when Emma stopped him.
"Ummm sir? Would you mind driving me home? I really don't want to walk home after what happened." Emma said.
"Well I would be honored, Miss." He said and tipped his hat again.
"god, that is so annoying" She thought "you are such a gentleman!" she said.
She walked to the SUV and Larry unlocked it, She stepped in and noticed "He's a Redneck!...I just have to ask him..." She saw the Dale Earnhardt memorial cup in his cup holder, a small model engine that said "Hemi" under it hanging from the mirror. The backseats were filled with wood, wood glue, hammers, she could swear it was like a portable Home Depot back there. And to top it all off, the whole place reeked of KFC and there was country music playing.
"Excuse me, but...what do you do for a living?" she asked
"I sell gills and grill accessories, greatest job in the world!" he exclaimed.
Emma could almost not contain herself, she was hysterically laughing in her head "That sounds great." She managed to say "I just love barbeques, the food is sooo good!"
"I know! What do you use to barbeque?" he asked.
She could only think of one quote "I sell propane and propane accessories" So she said "I Use propane, always"
"That's great, I use propane, it's a clean burning fuel and-." Larry kept on talking but Emma zoned out.
"Enough of this, I need to make my move, now I need to think of something that this guy will believe and will give that Mr. Kai death..." She nodded occasionally and said where to turn when she thought of something that might help. "It's just been so horrible, I knew Kai would hurt my Bo, I didn't know when but...Kai was always sending threatening letters to us saying he'll kill everyone close to us in the most horrible ways..." She cried a little more.
Larry was very shocked by the sudden change of subjects, he was enjoying talking about propane and eventually leading to what he read in The Wildest Ride A history of Nascar "That is awful, don't worry I'll make sure that man gets just what's coming to him!"
"I sure hope so ...but anything he gets will not take away the sorrow of my lost love..." she said and they pulled up at a large apartment building called The Whiffle Tree "Here's my place, thank you ever so much for everything"
"No need to thank me, now if you ever need me, call this number." Larry handed Emma a business card and she stepped out of the car, under the light of the apartments. Larry's Tahoe drove away and she looked at the card and smiled as she read it "Larry Dunhiet, Private Investigator" She looked up at the dark night sky "You are going down, Hiwitari." She thought.
Larry drove away and picked up his cell phone that was under the flip-up center armrest. He flipped open the phone, pressed a button on it and put up to his ear. He drove with one hand while waiting for the other line to pick up. When it finally did, a male voice answered it.
"Hello? Detective Smith? I have something that might be of some importance to you..." Larry fingered around under his seat for something at the stop light and found it. "It's a present to help you in the Hiwitari case, detective." He looked at the tape recorder in his hand and started the car at a green light.
Random person- I thought you said you would make this chapter "a lot longer than the other ones"
Me- ummmm shut up! (strangles random person) alrighty then ummmmmmm Yeah, I'll try to update sooner...I had a bit of a writer's block so I thought and thought and thought and I came up with an idea, write about some other characters!
Random person 2- which is why this chappie sucked!!!
Me- NO!!!! (strangles random person 2) so please review-
Random person 3- you have to change your disclaimer to include the Tahoe, KFC, King of the Hill, the Nascar book, Home Depot- Me- Where in hell's name do you keep coming???? (strangles RP #3) Oh shit (sees an army of random people)
RP #457- And you should still change the SUV to that other Chevy
RP#92384- And why did Larry lie about his job when he told her the private eye thing anyway Me- (takes up arms with a whole bunch of guns) DIE!!! MWHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Please review! HAHAHAHAHA!!!
BYE-S ALL!!!!!!
Lakura- those guys in white coats...tsk tsk tsk (holds up some charred stethoscopes) they didn't have a chance...but wait, Kai! I thought you loved me! And billions of other fan girls...some point in your life you have to choose one of us, you playa...or...Kai clones! That would always be fun! But who would get the original...hmmm..................
Kerei Kitsune- I thought you were gonna get the detective...alright then, I'll take the out Smith and you take out Emma...I like the dress, perfect color, you think these shoes will go with it? (pulls out some high heels) Kai, this is totally you!
Alyssa Lin- poor, poor Kai, you can help me take care of Emma (Brings out flamethrower) near deaf situations...you gotta watch out for those, alright then, I'm glad you like the fic! Here's more.
K.C.- ummm no, he didn't, there are these people called doctors, they fix things like that
Fallen Pheonix- wow, I am very happy of what you think of my ficcy...I am pretty sure Kai is not gonna die in the end...I've already started reading your fics, and I'll be reviewing soon!
Bffimagine- all right, I'm updating! I'm glad you liked the story, and this chapter is gonna be a lot longer than the other ones.
Alrighty-o then lets move on Disclaimer- I do not own beyblade or any of the characters Or The Wildest Ride A History of Nascar, Home Depot, KFC, Dale Earnhardt cup, Chevy Tahoe, King of the Hill
ON WITH THE FICCY-Y!!!
Kai sat, staring off into the distance with the blanket still over him. The soft glow of the park lamps revealed to Ray how exhausted Kai really looked. His eye's were half closed and looked dull with deep dark circles under them, not like they usually are, soulful, alive, sometimes with the fires of hell burning in them "The fires of hell, that's a new one, I barely even get to see his eyes, they're closed almost all of the time..." Ray thought. He let go of Kai and stood up looking at the sky "I don't know what in the world they are doing to you in that hospital, Kai, but you look really tired...I think we should go home, you should get some rest and tomorrow you can explain what happened to the authorities"
"That little bitch, she'll lie her way out, and no one will believe me, again...that reminds me-" Kai looked up at Ray
"Nothing good ever started with that little bitch, so what happened, besides you getting the ass kicked out of you..." Ray smiled lightly.
"Why the hell is he acting all cheery like this...and smiling at me like that...he's staring at me! Am I some freak show now? But his eyes, they're really-." Kai shook the thoughts out of his head "Have to stay focused here" he said aloud.
"what?" Ray cocked his head sideways
"Nothing, and it's a long story..."
"You can tell me on the way home
"But I need to ask you something first..."
Emma was loving all the attention she was getting, everyone was fussing over her and she felt like the most important person in the world "But where did he get to? I can't wait to tell daddy what he did to me! He'll be on death row if I can help it! Men are just too easy to play around with...they are so dumb!" She thought.
"I just can't thank you enough! You really saved me! You're my hero!" She said to the driver.
"Just doin' my duty, miss. A man's always gotta look out for the ladies." He tipped his tan cowboy hat at her. He was wearing a plain white tee shirt, faded jeans with a enormous belt buckle in the shape of Texas.
"So, what's your name, kind sir?" her voice was dripping false sincerity.
"The name's Larry, Larry Dunheit, and yours?" Larry said and his texas accent.
"My name's Emma Smith" she wiped a fake tear from her eye.
"What's wrong?"
"Oh, its just that...my name was going to be Mrs. Bo Mendoza...but that awful man who tried to rape me...also killed my fiancée" She cried a little.
"That's despicable! I heard about that murder in the paper! You must be going through some awful rough times Miss Emma."
A man in a police officer approached Emma "Excuse me but, May I ask you some questions?"
"Sure, I'll do my best" she said.
"Alright, What time was it when the attack happened?" He asked.
"If I remember correctly...It was a little after 12."
"What were you doing out here at 12?"
"I was watering the plants in front of the hospital where my dear fiancée died..." She wiped her eyes again
"How sad, now what were you doing watering plants at 12?"
"Well ever since Bo died, I have been low on money so I had to work many jobs, so I took the night shift at the gardening shop..."
"Now what did Mr. Hiwitari do when you first saw him?"
"H-He came up behind me and said 'so here you are...I've been looking for you...' in the most evil voice and I tried to scream...but he put his hand over my mouth and...and..." she started to cry.
"I think she's had enough for now" Larry said.
"But I need to ask her some more questions..."
"I'm sure she'll still know in the morning, I really think she needs some rest after that horrible ordeal, don't you?"
"I understand, please come to the station sometime tomorrow morning, ok?" Emma nodded and the policeman walked away.
The crowd had thinned out and there were only a few people left at the scene, all being questioned or questioning. Larry was walking to his dark blue Tahoe when Emma stopped him.
"Ummm sir? Would you mind driving me home? I really don't want to walk home after what happened." Emma said.
"Well I would be honored, Miss." He said and tipped his hat again.
"god, that is so annoying" She thought "you are such a gentleman!" she said.
She walked to the SUV and Larry unlocked it, She stepped in and noticed "He's a Redneck!...I just have to ask him..." She saw the Dale Earnhardt memorial cup in his cup holder, a small model engine that said "Hemi" under it hanging from the mirror. The backseats were filled with wood, wood glue, hammers, she could swear it was like a portable Home Depot back there. And to top it all off, the whole place reeked of KFC and there was country music playing.
"Excuse me, but...what do you do for a living?" she asked
"I sell gills and grill accessories, greatest job in the world!" he exclaimed.
Emma could almost not contain herself, she was hysterically laughing in her head "That sounds great." She managed to say "I just love barbeques, the food is sooo good!"
"I know! What do you use to barbeque?" he asked.
She could only think of one quote "I sell propane and propane accessories" So she said "I Use propane, always"
"That's great, I use propane, it's a clean burning fuel and-." Larry kept on talking but Emma zoned out.
"Enough of this, I need to make my move, now I need to think of something that this guy will believe and will give that Mr. Kai death..." She nodded occasionally and said where to turn when she thought of something that might help. "It's just been so horrible, I knew Kai would hurt my Bo, I didn't know when but...Kai was always sending threatening letters to us saying he'll kill everyone close to us in the most horrible ways..." She cried a little more.
Larry was very shocked by the sudden change of subjects, he was enjoying talking about propane and eventually leading to what he read in The Wildest Ride A history of Nascar "That is awful, don't worry I'll make sure that man gets just what's coming to him!"
"I sure hope so ...but anything he gets will not take away the sorrow of my lost love..." she said and they pulled up at a large apartment building called The Whiffle Tree "Here's my place, thank you ever so much for everything"
"No need to thank me, now if you ever need me, call this number." Larry handed Emma a business card and she stepped out of the car, under the light of the apartments. Larry's Tahoe drove away and she looked at the card and smiled as she read it "Larry Dunhiet, Private Investigator" She looked up at the dark night sky "You are going down, Hiwitari." She thought.
Larry drove away and picked up his cell phone that was under the flip-up center armrest. He flipped open the phone, pressed a button on it and put up to his ear. He drove with one hand while waiting for the other line to pick up. When it finally did, a male voice answered it.
"Hello? Detective Smith? I have something that might be of some importance to you..." Larry fingered around under his seat for something at the stop light and found it. "It's a present to help you in the Hiwitari case, detective." He looked at the tape recorder in his hand and started the car at a green light.
Random person- I thought you said you would make this chapter "a lot longer than the other ones"
Me- ummmm shut up! (strangles random person) alrighty then ummmmmmm Yeah, I'll try to update sooner...I had a bit of a writer's block so I thought and thought and thought and I came up with an idea, write about some other characters!
Random person 2- which is why this chappie sucked!!!
Me- NO!!!! (strangles random person 2) so please review-
Random person 3- you have to change your disclaimer to include the Tahoe, KFC, King of the Hill, the Nascar book, Home Depot- Me- Where in hell's name do you keep coming???? (strangles RP #3) Oh shit (sees an army of random people)
RP #457- And you should still change the SUV to that other Chevy
RP#92384- And why did Larry lie about his job when he told her the private eye thing anyway Me- (takes up arms with a whole bunch of guns) DIE!!! MWHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Please review! HAHAHAHAHA!!!
BYE-S ALL!!!!!!