Review section~~~
Swtaznpnaigirl48- I'm so happy you think it's a cool story! I love to keep people guessing. Keep reviewing!
Robin's-hope- See I know what your talking about. I don't want to make them to long but yet to short! But it's always a mixture when it comes to me! And there has to be a litttttlllleee bit of humor because Witch Hunter Robin is very deep and I thought it should be a little bit of everything. And I will be updating soon!
Wake-Robin- You thought it was interesting! And I like dramatic but not to much!
Firewitch666- I like your name! Very different! And I'm happy you like my story!
The-devil's-child- I know. But it's the peoples vote. And I want to make this story to everyone's liking!
Gabrielle Madden-Lovato- I like your name as well! Very pretty! And I like Robin with him more then the next person but like I said its up to the reviews.
Gypsy: Thanks for the reviews. Even that little bit of reviews makes me happy! UMMMMMMM lets see here. This will also be a very dramatic chapter okay! Lots of cussing and lots of anger! Yea just the way I like it! Also if your review is not on here, I'm sorry but I posted it when you must of sent a review so I will try and put you in next time! Also I want you guys to keep reviewing! Also the story I recommend is Coffee and Doughnuts by golden-sama!
~-~-~-~-~ Last time ~-~-~- "Okay wrap it up then." Amon began when a big blaze of fire was suddenly seen.
"Robin! Was that you!" Amon yelled over the speaker and the where house.
"Amon hel-"Robin yelled but was cut off.
Amon ran around the where house. "Robin! Robin where are you! Karasuma did you find her?" Amon yelled out.
"No Amon. She was taken." Karasuma whispered behind him. "All they left was her communicator."
Mistaken Identity
Part 2- I'll Kill you!
Amon and Karasuma soon returned to the STN-J but it was a very dead silence in the air on the way back up in the elevator. They yet to get in contact with anyone, not ready to say what happened at the where house.
'How did I let this happen? I'm the leader .. I'm her trainer .... I'm the one that loves her. But what do I do! I let her get taken!' Amon thought soon hitting the side of the elevator startling Karasuma. And so there would be a bent up mark on the wall that would show that Amon cares for Robin that much.
"Amon." Karasuma started but was cut silent when the elevator doors soon opened up. They knew what they had to do. Amon and Karasuma exited silently which showed something was up to the rest of the STN-J.
Michael was secretly searching about the people Robin told them about. But Zaizen was always watching him so he barley had chances to look up anything. And so far it wasn't going good. Michael was such deep thought he didn't notice that Amon had returned.
"Amon where's Robin?" Sakaki asked. Those three words cut the inside of Amon's heart and felt like it was stuck in the blender. That's when Michael went out of trance.
"Robin was kidnapped." Amon said in his emotionless voice.
Michael was the first one to rise up the conversation to be turned into something worse.. "What do you mean she's kidnapped."
"We split up and she was knocked off guard. We couldn't get to her in time." Karasuma joined in.
A moment of silence took over yet again.
Michael slowly walked up to Amon. And then suddenly grabbing him by his collar and started yelling. "You were supposed to watch her! This is Robin god dammit! She's not as experienced as you! Damn you Amon!" Michael yelled. Everyone tried to break it up but there was no use.
"She's not a child Michael! I thought she could handle herself! Just because she gives you more attention then others doesn't mean that you're the one who cares about her the most!" Amon yelled back. This was the breaking point of both hearts of the two. Michaels face became beet red with anger. So he let it out by punching Amons face. But Amon didn't punch back he just put his hand over his check that was now red that was slowly turning blue. A gasp came from everyone. Right when the fight was about to make world war three look like a cat fight, Michaels computer began to beep. Michel gave Amon a glare and then went back to his computer.
A small screen appeared and a man was there in the front.
"I'm sorry this is a restricted area. Please sign off this page." Micheal said.
"I don't think its wise to kick me off. You see I would like to let you know that your little Mariaha, is here with us today." The man spoke. Amon ran over to the computer.
"Where's Robin you basterd." Michael said.
The man gave an eerie smile and took a step to his left. There, right there was the woman that owns the heart of both of them. She had a torn up wedding dress on. But it was horrible, it actually caused tears to come to Michaels eyes. Blood was all over the dress she wore. Her hair was let down while blood came down her nose and her left eye was black and blue. Michael put his fingers to the screen hoping that he would be able to touch her cheek make the pain come to him and out of Robin.
"Now were going to play 3 questions shall we? Are you going to burn all the records you have on me?" The man asked.
"No. Were going to hunt you down and make you pay!" Michael yelled.
The man shook his head. "Wrong answer." He slowly walked over to Robin holding a small cutting knife. And slowly cutting her cheek. "No!" Michael yelled hearing Robins small whimpering. She was awake but you couldn't tell since she was wearing a blindfold. She just hung there from the chains on the wall.
"Second question. Will you forget Mariaha here and send us back to Italy."
"She's not Mariaha. You have the wrong person." Amon said behind Michael.
"Wrong answer again." He brought the knife to her arm and slowly cutting down again. Robin yelled in pain. "Last question." But Robin cut him off yelling. "This is Yukasha Hasho! Hes the one who killed-"she was slapped hard across the face. "Shut up wench! Third and finale question! Do you think you can get here in time to save your poor Mariaha!" he yelled stabbing her side then her other side right in front of everyone.
Robin yelled out in pain one last time before going unconcess.
"Michael do you have the coordinates of where she's at?" Amon asked.
"Yes. I do and I'm going to save her."
"But Michael you cant leave!" Dojima whispered.
"We all need to leave." Amon said.
"Why? You can go-"Sakaki tried to say.
"They know where were at!" Michael yelled. And on cue a wall was blown down and out came 5 men in suites holding guns. Real guns. Guns furred all around while the STN-J members ducked to the floor hoping the firing would soon stop. Amon took out his orbo gun and steadied himself over the desk and began shooting them one at a time.
"I'll hold them off, go get Robin." Karasuma said taking the position where Amon was. Amon nodded as the rest of them ran off into the stairs. They ran down all 7 levels when 2 more men came around the corner. Luckily they were both crappy shooters and only shot Dojima's leg. Sakaki picked up Dojima and continued running with the others to the parking deck.
"Sakaki, take Karasumas car and get Dojima to the hospital." Amon order. Sakaki obeyed and gently placed her on the passengers seat. He started the car and drove at top speed. Amon took his car and went the other way off to the coordinates that Michael also had. Michael was quick to think though. He took Sakakis motorcycle knowing it would be faster. He used to own one so it was no trouble passing Amon not to far along while flipping him off.
"Damn kid!" Amon yelled. And the race to Robin was on. Michael was ahead far ahead while Amon was taking the shorter rout to get there faster. He knew this town like the back of his hand.
Michael seen the building right on the verision. He speed up a little more. Right when he was going to be the first to get there, Amon came from no where and got there first, jumping out of his car already in the building. Michael on the other hand got there right when Amon was in the building.
Amon slowly approached making sure that no one was around. When the building was abandon he ran to each room looking for Robin. He yelled. "Robin!"
Michael knew where she was thou, and was on the run again and soon approaching the room, he slowly opened the door to see that Robin was on the floor unconcess. He slowly walked towards her. Amon ran into the doorway to see Robin as well. Tears formed into his eyes. He fell to his knees next to Robins torn up body.
"Robin" they both wishperd. But so much emotion was bubbling up on Michael. Anger, love, hate so much that he just said out in the open. "This is your fault."
Amon was taken back by what he said. "What? What do you mean it's my fault."
"You should have never let her out of your site. You know she knew them! That should have been a dead give away! Listen here. I'm going to let you take Robin to the hospital but don't come 2 feet near me after that." Micheal finished while picking up Robins fragile body. And slowly walked over to Amon and placed her into his arms.
"Michael this is not over."
"I know."
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Gypsy: Finally! See I didn't want to put a big cliffhanger! Because I hate to be really mean so yea. And also make sure to read Coffee and Doughnuts! Not much to tell but also you guys also much love the strokes and the vines as well as AFI. Because their music rocks and I have this things about dark guys with long hair. Amon! *drools* I love that look.
*****Sneak peak on the next chapter of Mistaken Identity. Pain*****
"I love you."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
That's all you get and you never know who it is!
MWAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHHAHAAH I decided I needed to make sure I had the upper hand in the end.
Swtaznpnaigirl48- I'm so happy you think it's a cool story! I love to keep people guessing. Keep reviewing!
Robin's-hope- See I know what your talking about. I don't want to make them to long but yet to short! But it's always a mixture when it comes to me! And there has to be a litttttlllleee bit of humor because Witch Hunter Robin is very deep and I thought it should be a little bit of everything. And I will be updating soon!
Wake-Robin- You thought it was interesting! And I like dramatic but not to much!
Firewitch666- I like your name! Very different! And I'm happy you like my story!
The-devil's-child- I know. But it's the peoples vote. And I want to make this story to everyone's liking!
Gabrielle Madden-Lovato- I like your name as well! Very pretty! And I like Robin with him more then the next person but like I said its up to the reviews.
Gypsy: Thanks for the reviews. Even that little bit of reviews makes me happy! UMMMMMMM lets see here. This will also be a very dramatic chapter okay! Lots of cussing and lots of anger! Yea just the way I like it! Also if your review is not on here, I'm sorry but I posted it when you must of sent a review so I will try and put you in next time! Also I want you guys to keep reviewing! Also the story I recommend is Coffee and Doughnuts by golden-sama!
~-~-~-~-~ Last time ~-~-~- "Okay wrap it up then." Amon began when a big blaze of fire was suddenly seen.
"Robin! Was that you!" Amon yelled over the speaker and the where house.
"Amon hel-"Robin yelled but was cut off.
Amon ran around the where house. "Robin! Robin where are you! Karasuma did you find her?" Amon yelled out.
"No Amon. She was taken." Karasuma whispered behind him. "All they left was her communicator."
Mistaken Identity
Part 2- I'll Kill you!
Amon and Karasuma soon returned to the STN-J but it was a very dead silence in the air on the way back up in the elevator. They yet to get in contact with anyone, not ready to say what happened at the where house.
'How did I let this happen? I'm the leader .. I'm her trainer .... I'm the one that loves her. But what do I do! I let her get taken!' Amon thought soon hitting the side of the elevator startling Karasuma. And so there would be a bent up mark on the wall that would show that Amon cares for Robin that much.
"Amon." Karasuma started but was cut silent when the elevator doors soon opened up. They knew what they had to do. Amon and Karasuma exited silently which showed something was up to the rest of the STN-J.
Michael was secretly searching about the people Robin told them about. But Zaizen was always watching him so he barley had chances to look up anything. And so far it wasn't going good. Michael was such deep thought he didn't notice that Amon had returned.
"Amon where's Robin?" Sakaki asked. Those three words cut the inside of Amon's heart and felt like it was stuck in the blender. That's when Michael went out of trance.
"Robin was kidnapped." Amon said in his emotionless voice.
Michael was the first one to rise up the conversation to be turned into something worse.. "What do you mean she's kidnapped."
"We split up and she was knocked off guard. We couldn't get to her in time." Karasuma joined in.
A moment of silence took over yet again.
Michael slowly walked up to Amon. And then suddenly grabbing him by his collar and started yelling. "You were supposed to watch her! This is Robin god dammit! She's not as experienced as you! Damn you Amon!" Michael yelled. Everyone tried to break it up but there was no use.
"She's not a child Michael! I thought she could handle herself! Just because she gives you more attention then others doesn't mean that you're the one who cares about her the most!" Amon yelled back. This was the breaking point of both hearts of the two. Michaels face became beet red with anger. So he let it out by punching Amons face. But Amon didn't punch back he just put his hand over his check that was now red that was slowly turning blue. A gasp came from everyone. Right when the fight was about to make world war three look like a cat fight, Michaels computer began to beep. Michel gave Amon a glare and then went back to his computer.
A small screen appeared and a man was there in the front.
"I'm sorry this is a restricted area. Please sign off this page." Micheal said.
"I don't think its wise to kick me off. You see I would like to let you know that your little Mariaha, is here with us today." The man spoke. Amon ran over to the computer.
"Where's Robin you basterd." Michael said.
The man gave an eerie smile and took a step to his left. There, right there was the woman that owns the heart of both of them. She had a torn up wedding dress on. But it was horrible, it actually caused tears to come to Michaels eyes. Blood was all over the dress she wore. Her hair was let down while blood came down her nose and her left eye was black and blue. Michael put his fingers to the screen hoping that he would be able to touch her cheek make the pain come to him and out of Robin.
"Now were going to play 3 questions shall we? Are you going to burn all the records you have on me?" The man asked.
"No. Were going to hunt you down and make you pay!" Michael yelled.
The man shook his head. "Wrong answer." He slowly walked over to Robin holding a small cutting knife. And slowly cutting her cheek. "No!" Michael yelled hearing Robins small whimpering. She was awake but you couldn't tell since she was wearing a blindfold. She just hung there from the chains on the wall.
"Second question. Will you forget Mariaha here and send us back to Italy."
"She's not Mariaha. You have the wrong person." Amon said behind Michael.
"Wrong answer again." He brought the knife to her arm and slowly cutting down again. Robin yelled in pain. "Last question." But Robin cut him off yelling. "This is Yukasha Hasho! Hes the one who killed-"she was slapped hard across the face. "Shut up wench! Third and finale question! Do you think you can get here in time to save your poor Mariaha!" he yelled stabbing her side then her other side right in front of everyone.
Robin yelled out in pain one last time before going unconcess.
"Michael do you have the coordinates of where she's at?" Amon asked.
"Yes. I do and I'm going to save her."
"But Michael you cant leave!" Dojima whispered.
"We all need to leave." Amon said.
"Why? You can go-"Sakaki tried to say.
"They know where were at!" Michael yelled. And on cue a wall was blown down and out came 5 men in suites holding guns. Real guns. Guns furred all around while the STN-J members ducked to the floor hoping the firing would soon stop. Amon took out his orbo gun and steadied himself over the desk and began shooting them one at a time.
"I'll hold them off, go get Robin." Karasuma said taking the position where Amon was. Amon nodded as the rest of them ran off into the stairs. They ran down all 7 levels when 2 more men came around the corner. Luckily they were both crappy shooters and only shot Dojima's leg. Sakaki picked up Dojima and continued running with the others to the parking deck.
"Sakaki, take Karasumas car and get Dojima to the hospital." Amon order. Sakaki obeyed and gently placed her on the passengers seat. He started the car and drove at top speed. Amon took his car and went the other way off to the coordinates that Michael also had. Michael was quick to think though. He took Sakakis motorcycle knowing it would be faster. He used to own one so it was no trouble passing Amon not to far along while flipping him off.
"Damn kid!" Amon yelled. And the race to Robin was on. Michael was ahead far ahead while Amon was taking the shorter rout to get there faster. He knew this town like the back of his hand.
Michael seen the building right on the verision. He speed up a little more. Right when he was going to be the first to get there, Amon came from no where and got there first, jumping out of his car already in the building. Michael on the other hand got there right when Amon was in the building.
Amon slowly approached making sure that no one was around. When the building was abandon he ran to each room looking for Robin. He yelled. "Robin!"
Michael knew where she was thou, and was on the run again and soon approaching the room, he slowly opened the door to see that Robin was on the floor unconcess. He slowly walked towards her. Amon ran into the doorway to see Robin as well. Tears formed into his eyes. He fell to his knees next to Robins torn up body.
"Robin" they both wishperd. But so much emotion was bubbling up on Michael. Anger, love, hate so much that he just said out in the open. "This is your fault."
Amon was taken back by what he said. "What? What do you mean it's my fault."
"You should have never let her out of your site. You know she knew them! That should have been a dead give away! Listen here. I'm going to let you take Robin to the hospital but don't come 2 feet near me after that." Micheal finished while picking up Robins fragile body. And slowly walked over to Amon and placed her into his arms.
"Michael this is not over."
"I know."
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Gypsy: Finally! See I didn't want to put a big cliffhanger! Because I hate to be really mean so yea. And also make sure to read Coffee and Doughnuts! Not much to tell but also you guys also much love the strokes and the vines as well as AFI. Because their music rocks and I have this things about dark guys with long hair. Amon! *drools* I love that look.
*****Sneak peak on the next chapter of Mistaken Identity. Pain*****
"I love you."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
That's all you get and you never know who it is!
MWAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHHAHAAH I decided I needed to make sure I had the upper hand in the end.