Waiting for A Miracle Prologue

A young girl of 13 with smoky brown hair walks around, serving food to hungry customers. Many would think that she had abusive parents, to be working in a place like the "Barrel of Rum", covered in cuts and bruises.

But no, this girl doesn't have abusive parents; her mother was quite kind to her, in fact. Her father is unknown. But no, this young girl's family is dead. She doesn't have an abusive family, but what she has is just as close. Veralidaine Sarrasri, better known as Daine, has an abusive employer.

Arin, her employer, bullied her and hurt her relentlessly. Why doesn't she leave, you ask? Well, her has her family. Her family is dead, though, isn't it? Well, you're right. Her family is dead. Only her horse, Cloud remains.

Arin took away her bow, her supplies, Cloud, everything she owns. Which isn't much, seeing as bandits burned down her home. This is the story of the girl with the sorrow-filled stormy blue gray eyes, stubborn chin, and smoky brown hair. This is the story of Veralidaine Sarrasri.

Sorry for the super short chapter. Just a Prologue.... Other Chapters will be longer, I assure you! Yeah.Um, I'll update this soon, just need to get it all down...

Anyways, review! Should I keep going or abandon?