This fic is now officially going under rewrite.
I decided to change some events, but the course of the fic will still be the same and I hope this rewrite made things a little better.
Just to let you guys know, I have a new format.
"speech"
thoughts
This is my first fic, so go easy on me kay?
A/N: I'm not fully going to introduce the characters since you may already know some of them. I'm really sorry, but I'm trying to make this fast because I got my hours cut of the computer.
Disclaimer: Never owned it. Never will.
Prologue
by Xyez Nikali a.k.a. limelie
Akane had just woken up on her bed, she suddenly had felt strange, like something was missing; but she just shook of the feeling instead. When a realization of horror came to her,Ranma had told her that he was leaving the night before that he would be leaving soon. She noticed a note laying in front of her on her blanket; she quickly grabbed it and started reading. It said:
Dear Akane,
I want you to know I loved you very much, but I never had enough courage to tell you.
I have left Nerima, and I will never return in fear of hurting you more than I have now. I have left for China in hopes of curing my curse and maybe just I will come back, for now, I don't want to get your hopes up, I also have another reason for leaving. I also wanted to escape the chaos I attract and the people I hurt along with it. I will try my best to send you letters to keep you informed on how I am doing. Please don't try to follow me for you might be injured by chaos that follows me everywhere.
P.S. Please don't tell anyone where I have gone, it will only cause more trouble for me. Please do not think I went with Shampoo, for I have no feeling for her only you.
With all my heart,
Ranma Saotome
Tears fell down Akane's cheeks as she read the letter. "Ranma no baka, I really loved you I really did. Why did you have to leave..." Akane choked a sob.
Though someone in China had reached his destination, it was place covered by different pools, each having a bamboo pole in the middle. The place was very littered with these springs that you may think that they were puddles after a great storm passed. Jusenkyo Springs, the place where animal and humans alike get cursed into another being. This place was where Saotome Ranma had desperately sought to come in peace to be cured.He had already spotted the guide and would ask him where the Spring of the Drowned Man was. The boy was wearing a red Chinese top and black kung fun pants. He had a pigtail and stunningly beautiful blue-gray eyes. The poor lad, as we all know, had fallen into the Spring of the Drowned Girl, he was tobe cursed forever in transforming from one gender to another.
The guide had immediately recognized the youth and said the spring had been destroyed by an unknown reason, but had pointed out to him there was another spring that could maybe cure him.
Ranma lost no time and ran to the spring that could possibly cure him. Before he jumped in though, hewhispered in a hopeful tone,"Akane, I may really maybe able to go back to you.",with the determination evident in his eyes and courage to face whatever the outcome of his dive was, he jumped in.
A moment later, the drenched soul finally resurfaced, and saw his reflection on the reflective surface of the spring. He felt uneasy for some reason, at the back of his mind, his thoughts were telling him to look in front of him instead of his reflection on the magical liquid.
He fainted as he now knew why, he saw in front of him his female form face to face, blinking strangely at him for a momentand she had a brown furry tail lashing behind her.
The red haired girl was confused, she had thought that the curse was finally permanent, she was, or she formerly thought of herself as a he, was looking at her mirror image. An opposite mirror image in fact, it was her male self staring back at her pale onyx pools which were her eyes. In fact, they were in the same pool, staring each other intently and then, she too fainted.
As they fainted, their heads lightly hit the soil on their sides of the cursed pool resulting to quickly wearing away some of the humus and the wind weathering the rest and slowly guiding the mystical fluid of the two other pools on their opposite ends into their own puddle of magic.
As the magic of the spring took effect on their bodies, a soft aquamarine glow emitted from the pool. The fat guide had noticed this display of magic, he quickly rushed to the cursed pool to see thr case.
...o0o0o...
Somewhere in the sky, higher above the clouds was a temple. The beauty was amazing, itrivaled the Taj Mahal over in it's stricking picturesque site, maybe even more wonderful than it. Standing at and edge of the holy structure, two figures look down on earth. One of them very much looked like and elf, he had pointed ears and was slightly stout, his head sprouted two short green antennas.He was a bit shorter than the man beside him. The elf-sized man, or child in his case, held a staff. I looked like a sheperd's staff, and yet, it was quite unique. Now, the man beside him had a turban on, maybe with aspectacular sky blue jewel in center of it. He quite pointed ears, he was wearing a tact genie out fit. He had black skin and slightly thick red lips.
"Dende, would you suppose we tell Goku about this?" The genie like figure asked. Mr. Popo walked on another edge of the constrution of the tiled floor of the Lookout.
"Yes, maybe we should Mr. Popo." Agreeing to the idea, he had a concetrated look on his face, it also had a mix of shock and urgency.
Goku... Goku... are you there? Goku...
The man named Goku was on a remote island, he had gone there to to train. He was with a man slightly shorter than himself, the man had flamed shaped hair and wore a type of alien armor on him. He looked somewhat arrogant, contrasting the man with him who had slightly, or should we say, less spikier hair than. He had a face of joy and some excitement.
I'm here Dende, what is it? As he was assumed to be, he asked cheerfully. He was answering back telepathicly to his green friend.
I'm sensing two saiyans somewhere east from the look out. Dende sighed. It was good that he was able to reach the saiyan.
WHAT! I thought we were the only saiyans left!? Shocked, he yelled the reply back in his mind. His face formed a reaction of surprise, which in turn, took Vegeta's attention.
Alright Dende, I'll go look for the saiyans. Goku jumpstarted hi ki and floated up.
"Sorry Vegeta, I guess I have to go." Goku looked apologetically at Vegeta.
"Wait! Where are you going? What happened? I demand to know!" Vegeta, as usual, his temper had risen again.
"Dende told me that two new saiyans were just sighted in the east." Goku beckoned the prince to follow, he headed en route to east.
"All right then, let's head out."
And with that they flew off to the land of the dragon, where they would find to newly transformed saiyans.
...oOoOo...
Ranma began to return to consciousness, his vision was blurry, his head ached.
The female Ranma stirred, she had an unusual feeling, like she was different.
Ranma's eyes widened to what he saw next. Sitting beside him was his female body, only covered by a blanket. She had onyx eyes now, not to what he used to own as blue poolsin that form.
He was panicked, a thousand thoughts raced his mind.
"What happened!? Tell me what happened!?" Ranma nearly strangled the guide, he was undoubtly anxious.
He noticed something, he spotted that a brown rope swishing behind him. Ranma looked behind him, the rope suddenly coiled onto his waist. He checked it's source, it was coming from him, it was a tail all along, just what he saw on his red haired counter part. "Where's the mirror?" Ranma spoke quietly, it was like athreatening tone. Almost like he would stop at nothing to kill you.
"What you say sir?" The guide asked, not knowing he was at risk.
The martial artist gritted his teeth, "Where's the mirror damn it?!"
The guide quivered, he shakily pointed to his left, "It is at the other room sir..."
"Thank you." Ranma headed for the door, he faced the mirror when he came in. What happened to me... Ranma touched his cheek. What happened... Staring straight at him was not the violet eyed youth he knew. Like his female counterpart, he now onyx eyes, his hair, it was now slightly standing on it's own. No...
Ranma immediately rushed to the guide immediately, "What happened to me!?" he was yelling, fear and anxiety were evident in his tone.
The guide shakily replied to the lad, "Well good sir, I don't know exactly how, but I only pointed you the Spring of the Drowned Alien Twins, which after, I could tell you to cut of your tail sir. I am mistaken, it seems you have mixed the spring water, you know an alien, that and you have now ahave twin sister. the magic of the three springs have combined to make you two new beings. Each with a unique ki, but that good sir, you must find out yourself."
"What? You mean we're now different people with each a unique ki of our own." The female Ranma had somehow recovered from her shock.
"Yes ma'aam, but the uniqueness is different, you somehow the yin and yang in you now..."
"And that means..." the male Ranma had his arms crossed in a corner, thinking deeply about this situation.
"Good sir, you no longer what you were, you now a different person in this world."
A/N: So waddya think of this chappie. I accept constructive criticism but not flames. Hope ya guys enjoyed this fic. Don't forget. R&R!!!
A/N: I'd also appreciate if you guys emailed me some ideas. I just got hit by writer's block after I wrote.
This is limelie, Ja Ne!!!
