Bakurasveela: I'm back and this fic for those of you who didn't review this fic is slightly better and FYI the whole first chapter is going to be first person the other chapter I'm not sure so enjoy! And these little captions are Maria's thoughts [].And also her narration.

Chapter1: Remorse

[I'm Maria Rivera; I'm 16 years old. My life use to be good .Need I point out that it use to be good. I was an honor role student, had tons of friends and I was CEO of industrial illusions. But I assume that God wasn't satisfied with my happiness .

Three of my best friends, Kisara, Akira, and chidori were beaten .... No slaughtered on my property. Needless to say the authorities as well as the whole city accused me for their deaths. I paid each fine and my company is on the verge of bankruptcy. I wanted to apologize at the funeral; even though I didn't kill them. But I was enabled to, the bodies disappeared nay vanished from the morgue in which they were held. And since I supposedly killed them they blamed me for their disappearance.

My remaining friends left me then and there, except for one. Bakura. He didn't abandon me. But then I made the foolish mistake ...... I was going to the corner grocery store; it was dark and it was cold. Those demons pulled me into the alley .... One of them pulled a gun on me the other had a waiting dagger in his hands. I refused their petty requests. All I can remember was the feeling of someone shielding me and the sound of gunshots. The demons left me with my dear friend and rescuer Bakura dead in my arms.]

I suppose things can't get any worse now can they. I am now on my way to Bakura's funeral to pay my respects and possibly give him a good slap for leaving me. For my feelings, I hate to admit it have matured. I arrive at the funeral. I am not surprised that I receive many a cold stare. The man I have identified as Bakuras father approached me.

"Where's my boy ...... what did you do to my boy you demon!" yelled mr.Bakura. "Wh-what do you mean". "you know perfectly well what I mean you took his body from the morgue just like your previous victims you monster!" screamed Mr.Bakura. He was so enraged that he had to have others restrain him.

"But I-I didn't ... I swear" I said as began to back away. "I told ryou not to bother with scum like you! But no he said you were different; that you just needed another chance! Now it's time some one put you in your place!" said mr.Bakura as he freed himself from the others grip. He then reached into his coat pocket and pulled out a small hand gun. "I suggest you start running, this gun has ten bullets by the time I'm done with you each one will be mounded in your vile flesh" he said as he shakily held the gun.

Maria looked around to see if anyone would help her. She was shocked to see the look of absolute support in every single pair of eyes. Maria ran outside in her high heels not noticing the brutal rain. The rain began to get heavier with every passing second. Even over the sound of the pouring rain she could still hear mr.bakura right behind her shouting a mixture of death threats and insults. Maria turned corners and ran down alleys in hope to escape the crazed father. Maria had reached a dead end emphasis on dead .

"Now I have you" said mr.Bakura as he took aim. "Please .... I swear I'd never harm bakura..". "Don't you dare say his name! Every word you drips poison and reeks of malice . You lured my son that way ... now I'll make sure you never speak again... This is for you ryou ". Tears welled in Maria's eyes .

[Somebody... ....anybody help me please..]

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And also forgot to put on the top I don't own yugioh.