Tami—Dude, you're going to write a TEN-LINE review on how much you HATE my
story and claim that it's not FLAME!? I understand that you're opinionated
and I respect that, but if you really hate a story that much, DON'T REVIEW
IT and spare me! Save it for a school topic or something! If you think my
morals are wrong by changing Bianca's age, lemme tell you of another one of
my morals: if you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at
all. I mean, I'm not asking for a perfect review, I'm just asking that
nobody rants for a million lines about the flaws in what I've written.
Besides, there are a thousand more stories out there with the same coupling
with Phoebe/Jason and Richard/Paige—go scream at them but lay off of me,
because I had the idea and came up with it on my own, just like they did. I
did not copy—nobody did! We all just have the same ideas!
WitchBitch—MWHAHA! You can't flee with Drew to Jamaica cuz I've already got him hiding there with ME!! (I wish, lol)
Nemesis' Arrow—I think we shall be seeing future Chris, but I don't think I'll bring him back to his past/their future again. It's a little too complicated...; )
Charmed Fan—Wow, you're good at predicting things!! Yay!!
The Magic Bringer—Isn't being addicted to something a little...unhealthy? Lol, I don't care, I'm addicted to fanfic myself!! (crazy twisted grin at pic of drew on the wall)
Charmed Melinda Halliwell—Yes, I think I'm running low on the juice for good cliffies...Maybe I should go fill up my tank at a gas station...Or I could kidnap Drew Fuller in his sleep for inspiration!! Thanks for your reviews!
xjelliepotatoex—Yes, I brought in some more Piper/Leo love because it seems that the deprivation from this was tearing several peeps apart! Lol!
ChArMeDcRaZiChIcK—Tell me how the birthday goes!! Ooo, put Drew on the cake! (Hey, I can dream!!)
rafiki and Bubblz—(bows down) You were the only ones that gave me a cookie!! Thank you both! I appreciate it! (munches on invisible cookies) ME WANT MORE!!
Faith and Kata Malfoy—I liked writing the annoyed-Chris scene myself! All I had to do was think about how CERTAIN people (cough cough my family) invade my personal space a lot and think about what I would've done!
melissa—He cut his shoulder rapid accelerating to get Wyatt outta the way of da car! (even though I was ever so tempted to kill Wyatt off and end it there, lol). Hey, I hate those end-of-the-season cliffies, too...(rips hair apart and shrieks)
skinnyfat-dude—Of course I like Charmed! Why else would I be writing this fic!? Lol...people ask the WEIRDEST questions sometimes...But I can't say I haven't asked freaky questions myself before!
DrewFullerFan4Life—I'm glad that I was finally able to post all these stories! Hey, are you still on IM?
Thank you very much also to the people I don't have time to respond to (my lil sis is back!!):
star, Crimson Amber, Shadow-Black-Panther, buffspike, Piper xox Leo, BlueRMillie, DarcyM, X3, Evelyn Perry/Lady Eva, Nautica7mk, Cat, AK8.
Disclaimer: I still don't own Charmed, but I'm sure that my athame will change the producers' minds!!
Okay, here's the story:
"NO!" Chris screamed.
"Chris, orb everyone down into the kitchen—NOW!"
Chris hesitated for moment, then flicked his nose three times at Bianca in signal. She nodded, shimmering away, and Chris, in turn, orbed away with Colin, Mel, and Prue. Present Leo orbed with Piper to follow them, but Phoebe and Paige stayed behind to watch the fight.
It wasn't going so well for the remaining Charmed Ones. The first demon had Phoebe cornered, throwing energy blasts at her; the same was happening to Paige, who was desperately trying to repel the attacks too.
"They're gonna—" present Phoebe cut herself off. The two demons banded together and formed a massive fireball with their powers combined, throwing it at their future forms. When the smoke cleared, it was apparent by the forms of their mangled bodies that they were dead.
((()))
Piper and Leo surveyed their surroundings. Apparently Chris' signal redirected them to the P3, where he thought they'd be safer.
"You said it would be okay," Prue whispered, going near hysterics. "This is not what I call okay, Bianca!"
"I know, but Prue...Life isn't always fair, alright?" She turned around, opening her mouth to say something to Chris, but stopped. "What's wrong?" she asked.
Chris was shaking, sitting on a chair and still drenched head to toe in water. "Nothing...Dude, could someone turn off the air conditioning? It's really cold in here."
"Chris...the heater's on," said Bianca, walking closer to him. "Are you really that cold? How long were you out there in the rain?"
He shrugged. "I don't know..." he muttered between his chattering teeth. "But it's COLD."
"I'll turn on the heat," Mel offered, eager to do something and take her mind off of the latest attack on the manor.
"Th-thanks," Chris replied.
Bianca sat down beside him, looking at him intently. His face was pale and glinted with sweat even in the dim light as he shook. They all sat down on the floor in silence before Chris spoke. "It's been fifteen minutes...it should be safe by now, but I want the younger three to stay here just in case. We don't know—" He gulped inadvertently—"what we'll find."
They nodded in agreement and Chris and Bianca shimmered and orbed into the foyer.
Bianca was the first to scream. "They're dead!" she shrieked. "They're dead, they're dead—What the hell are we gonna do?"
"I don't know!" Chris burst, crying himself. They stood over the bodies for several seconds before Chris gasped up and shot back up. "The demons are gone," he said in an eerie, distant voice. "The little kids!"
"Damn it, you're right!" They left the manor for the P3, and as Chris predicted, the demons were already there—attacking.
"Chris! Bianca!" Colin screamed, protecting the girls inside his bubble shield that was quickly fading under the pressure of the demons' attacks. "We can't hold them much longer!"
"Hey, you ugly demon-people!" Chris said desperately. "Come get me!"
He started rapid accelerating around the room to confuse them, stopping every now and then to catch his breath. Colin let his shield down in exhaustion and he and Mel orbed away. Bianca ran to shimmer with Prue, but seconds too late—
The demon hit her and she crumbled to dust before anyone could do anything to save her.
A/N—I know this was a REALLY short chappie, but I have to leave soon...
WitchBitch—MWHAHA! You can't flee with Drew to Jamaica cuz I've already got him hiding there with ME!! (I wish, lol)
Nemesis' Arrow—I think we shall be seeing future Chris, but I don't think I'll bring him back to his past/their future again. It's a little too complicated...; )
Charmed Fan—Wow, you're good at predicting things!! Yay!!
The Magic Bringer—Isn't being addicted to something a little...unhealthy? Lol, I don't care, I'm addicted to fanfic myself!! (crazy twisted grin at pic of drew on the wall)
Charmed Melinda Halliwell—Yes, I think I'm running low on the juice for good cliffies...Maybe I should go fill up my tank at a gas station...Or I could kidnap Drew Fuller in his sleep for inspiration!! Thanks for your reviews!
xjelliepotatoex—Yes, I brought in some more Piper/Leo love because it seems that the deprivation from this was tearing several peeps apart! Lol!
ChArMeDcRaZiChIcK—Tell me how the birthday goes!! Ooo, put Drew on the cake! (Hey, I can dream!!)
rafiki and Bubblz—(bows down) You were the only ones that gave me a cookie!! Thank you both! I appreciate it! (munches on invisible cookies) ME WANT MORE!!
Faith and Kata Malfoy—I liked writing the annoyed-Chris scene myself! All I had to do was think about how CERTAIN people (cough cough my family) invade my personal space a lot and think about what I would've done!
melissa—He cut his shoulder rapid accelerating to get Wyatt outta the way of da car! (even though I was ever so tempted to kill Wyatt off and end it there, lol). Hey, I hate those end-of-the-season cliffies, too...(rips hair apart and shrieks)
skinnyfat-dude—Of course I like Charmed! Why else would I be writing this fic!? Lol...people ask the WEIRDEST questions sometimes...But I can't say I haven't asked freaky questions myself before!
DrewFullerFan4Life—I'm glad that I was finally able to post all these stories! Hey, are you still on IM?
Thank you very much also to the people I don't have time to respond to (my lil sis is back!!):
star, Crimson Amber, Shadow-Black-Panther, buffspike, Piper xox Leo, BlueRMillie, DarcyM, X3, Evelyn Perry/Lady Eva, Nautica7mk, Cat, AK8.
Disclaimer: I still don't own Charmed, but I'm sure that my athame will change the producers' minds!!
Okay, here's the story:
"NO!" Chris screamed.
"Chris, orb everyone down into the kitchen—NOW!"
Chris hesitated for moment, then flicked his nose three times at Bianca in signal. She nodded, shimmering away, and Chris, in turn, orbed away with Colin, Mel, and Prue. Present Leo orbed with Piper to follow them, but Phoebe and Paige stayed behind to watch the fight.
It wasn't going so well for the remaining Charmed Ones. The first demon had Phoebe cornered, throwing energy blasts at her; the same was happening to Paige, who was desperately trying to repel the attacks too.
"They're gonna—" present Phoebe cut herself off. The two demons banded together and formed a massive fireball with their powers combined, throwing it at their future forms. When the smoke cleared, it was apparent by the forms of their mangled bodies that they were dead.
((()))
Piper and Leo surveyed their surroundings. Apparently Chris' signal redirected them to the P3, where he thought they'd be safer.
"You said it would be okay," Prue whispered, going near hysterics. "This is not what I call okay, Bianca!"
"I know, but Prue...Life isn't always fair, alright?" She turned around, opening her mouth to say something to Chris, but stopped. "What's wrong?" she asked.
Chris was shaking, sitting on a chair and still drenched head to toe in water. "Nothing...Dude, could someone turn off the air conditioning? It's really cold in here."
"Chris...the heater's on," said Bianca, walking closer to him. "Are you really that cold? How long were you out there in the rain?"
He shrugged. "I don't know..." he muttered between his chattering teeth. "But it's COLD."
"I'll turn on the heat," Mel offered, eager to do something and take her mind off of the latest attack on the manor.
"Th-thanks," Chris replied.
Bianca sat down beside him, looking at him intently. His face was pale and glinted with sweat even in the dim light as he shook. They all sat down on the floor in silence before Chris spoke. "It's been fifteen minutes...it should be safe by now, but I want the younger three to stay here just in case. We don't know—" He gulped inadvertently—"what we'll find."
They nodded in agreement and Chris and Bianca shimmered and orbed into the foyer.
Bianca was the first to scream. "They're dead!" she shrieked. "They're dead, they're dead—What the hell are we gonna do?"
"I don't know!" Chris burst, crying himself. They stood over the bodies for several seconds before Chris gasped up and shot back up. "The demons are gone," he said in an eerie, distant voice. "The little kids!"
"Damn it, you're right!" They left the manor for the P3, and as Chris predicted, the demons were already there—attacking.
"Chris! Bianca!" Colin screamed, protecting the girls inside his bubble shield that was quickly fading under the pressure of the demons' attacks. "We can't hold them much longer!"
"Hey, you ugly demon-people!" Chris said desperately. "Come get me!"
He started rapid accelerating around the room to confuse them, stopping every now and then to catch his breath. Colin let his shield down in exhaustion and he and Mel orbed away. Bianca ran to shimmer with Prue, but seconds too late—
The demon hit her and she crumbled to dust before anyone could do anything to save her.
A/N—I know this was a REALLY short chappie, but I have to leave soon...