Not 'till the sun sets Part 3
By: Miyoko
Author's notes: This is part three of Not 'till the sun sets!! Gosh, it's almost ending already. but I made another story, it's called "If there wouldn't be you and me" it's also S+S and filled with all the goody angsty stuff we all like!!!!
Anyway, thanks for all those who reviewed mah story. moon, Umi, CardPrincess, Li Star and UnDiNe. you are all the best!!! Thankies anyways..
Now on with it!! ____________________________________________________________________________ ________________
Sakura stood there, watching Sakura and Marian talked. She smiled, at leas t Syaoran was over with his moody self. She could maybe ask him about it. She slowly walked towards them, placing one foot above another carefully.
"Ohayou, Syaoran-kun, Marian-san."
The two faced towards her, they had been cut off from a seemingly important discussion. She could hint the annoyance in Marian's eyes.
"Good morning, Sakura." Marian greeted back.
Syaoran stared at her blankly.
"Can I talk with you, Syaoran? I mean, I just want to ask you about yesterday" She asked timdly.
Syaoran looked at her, seemingly surprised.
"Talk? Are you sure, Kinomoto?" Syaoran scoffed.
Sakura was shocked. She stared at Syaoran who was looking at her mockingly.
"How could you, Syaoran. I --- I thought.what's happening." Sakura stammered.
She couldn't even finish one sentence. Tomoyo who was gladly taping her became worried and went to them.
"Hey, what's happening here?" she asked.
Tomoyo saw Sakura's puzzled face then turned to Syaoran then to Marian and eyed her suspiciously.
She placed an arm around Sakura and patted her back.
"Are you okay, Sakura?"
Sakura's eyes welled with tears. Kinomoto. Had she heard right? Did Syaoran really call her that. And his voice, it was as if mocking her, challenging her. She couldn't even look at him now. She thought everything was fine. She was wrong when she said that everything was going to be okay. Deeply wrong. And Marian, so cold. How could she talk with Syaoran if he's like that now? Does she know something?
Too much. She couldn't hear anything from the real world. Only faint whispers. Tomoyo was asking her something. No, nothings okay anymore. I have to get out of here.
Sakura turned and ran away from the group. Tomoyo looked at her worriedly, then turned to Syaoran.
"What's the matter with you, Li?"
Syaoran just laughed. So full of mockery, so infuriating. She couldn't stand it anymore.
*SLAP!*
"I said what's wrong with you!" Tomoyo cried. She had slap Syaoran's cheek; it was now imprinted with her hand. Syaoran became sober, eventually, and touched his face. It stung as his fingers made contact with his skin. He looked down at the person who did it. She was teeming with anger. Pitiful.
He grabbed her wrist and drew her near.
"Don't you ever do that again." Syaoran said under gritted teeth, and then shoved Tomoyo away. She staggered back, and clutched painfully at her wrist which was bruised by his hand.
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Tomoyo's hand still hurt. She had trouble writing because of it. Curse him. She looked at Sakura, she was awfully quiet. Her eyes confused. Then she looked at Syaoran, he looked perfectly fine at this angle. Yet when you go to him, he would burn up.
Sakura had been thinking all day. She still couldn't understand. Why had this happen all of a sudden? She hadn't done wrong, had she?
"Sakura."
Sakura turned, was there just someone who called her? It didn't seem Syaoran.
"Sakura."
There it is again. Everyone around was doing something else.
"Sakura."
Suddenly, everything went black, leaving her alone in the midlle.
"Sakura."
"Who are you! Show yourself!" she demanded. She was growing in fear, but she held on.
A man. There was a man in front of her now. He was the one who called her.
"Sakura."
"Clow-sama?" she asked, and took a step forward.
He smiled.
Sakura bowed before him, a sign of respect to show his greatness.
"The card had escaped, card mistress."
Sakura, looked at her puzzled. The everything went bright, her sight cleared. She was in the park, nearly sunset. She was gripping her wand in hand, and Shoaran was in front of her. Pain in his eyes.
"Shaoran!" Sakura gasped and ran towards him. But he fell down limp, eyes blank and dull. Sakura bent down and shook him.
Suddenly a girl appeared in front of them. She shot an energy bolt to Shaoran and he writhed in pain, yet his eyes showed no emotion.
Sakura shrieked and called the powers of firey, but before she could even take the card, the girl was infront of her. The girl's eyes were silver, like bright metals in sockets. Her hair was long and light, showing resemblance to Yukito's hair, but with more luster. She seemed awfully familiar, but she couldn't tell who.
Suddenly, everything went dark (again), leaving Sakura and Shaoran in the park. She ran to where he was. Cold.. Tears rimmed in her eyes and called to him, but he didn't flinch. He lay there lifeless and pale. ______________________________________
Sakura cried, but a warm hand laid on her shoulder. She looked up to see who it was. Clow Reed.
"What was all that?"
"A dream."
"Yes. a dream."
"Is it true?"
"It may happen, yes. But if you do something. It can be prevented."
"Will Shaoran die?"
"It depends on you, Card Mistress."
"What's happening to him now? Why is he so mean to everyone?"
"Apparently, he is under a spell. You must seal the card, not 'till the sun sets tomorrow. Or else."
"Or else what Clow-sama? And who is the card?
"So full of questions, young one. Go and find the answers for yourself. Now, you need to go back, but remember, only true love can set him free.."
And at that, everything dissolved in front of Sakura's vision. She found her self back into the class. She felt an immense power near; she looked around, yet everything seemed normal. She glanced over at Shaoran, his face the same as before.
"I need to talk to him." she thought. -----------------------------------------------------
Author's Notes: ehehehe. please don't kill me. (well actually, you can't! BWAHAHAHA!!!) anyway, I'm sorry if this is soooo short. I mean, I did promise to make a long one. but you won't review, gimme inspirations people!!! Is my writing that bad! If not, does my story suck? Please let me know!
Yeah, also I'm wondering. Is Meteor Garden that good? I mean, a lot of people told me that it was. especially in HK. Their(F4) music is quite good, (infact I'm listening to them right now) but Meteor Garden will be showing here in our place sometime next week.. Is it good?
_____MIYOKO a.k.a. Shalafi
Author's notes: This is part three of Not 'till the sun sets!! Gosh, it's almost ending already. but I made another story, it's called "If there wouldn't be you and me" it's also S+S and filled with all the goody angsty stuff we all like!!!!
Anyway, thanks for all those who reviewed mah story. moon, Umi, CardPrincess, Li Star and UnDiNe. you are all the best!!! Thankies anyways..
Now on with it!! ____________________________________________________________________________ ________________
Sakura stood there, watching Sakura and Marian talked. She smiled, at leas t Syaoran was over with his moody self. She could maybe ask him about it. She slowly walked towards them, placing one foot above another carefully.
"Ohayou, Syaoran-kun, Marian-san."
The two faced towards her, they had been cut off from a seemingly important discussion. She could hint the annoyance in Marian's eyes.
"Good morning, Sakura." Marian greeted back.
Syaoran stared at her blankly.
"Can I talk with you, Syaoran? I mean, I just want to ask you about yesterday" She asked timdly.
Syaoran looked at her, seemingly surprised.
"Talk? Are you sure, Kinomoto?" Syaoran scoffed.
Sakura was shocked. She stared at Syaoran who was looking at her mockingly.
"How could you, Syaoran. I --- I thought.what's happening." Sakura stammered.
She couldn't even finish one sentence. Tomoyo who was gladly taping her became worried and went to them.
"Hey, what's happening here?" she asked.
Tomoyo saw Sakura's puzzled face then turned to Syaoran then to Marian and eyed her suspiciously.
She placed an arm around Sakura and patted her back.
"Are you okay, Sakura?"
Sakura's eyes welled with tears. Kinomoto. Had she heard right? Did Syaoran really call her that. And his voice, it was as if mocking her, challenging her. She couldn't even look at him now. She thought everything was fine. She was wrong when she said that everything was going to be okay. Deeply wrong. And Marian, so cold. How could she talk with Syaoran if he's like that now? Does she know something?
Too much. She couldn't hear anything from the real world. Only faint whispers. Tomoyo was asking her something. No, nothings okay anymore. I have to get out of here.
Sakura turned and ran away from the group. Tomoyo looked at her worriedly, then turned to Syaoran.
"What's the matter with you, Li?"
Syaoran just laughed. So full of mockery, so infuriating. She couldn't stand it anymore.
*SLAP!*
"I said what's wrong with you!" Tomoyo cried. She had slap Syaoran's cheek; it was now imprinted with her hand. Syaoran became sober, eventually, and touched his face. It stung as his fingers made contact with his skin. He looked down at the person who did it. She was teeming with anger. Pitiful.
He grabbed her wrist and drew her near.
"Don't you ever do that again." Syaoran said under gritted teeth, and then shoved Tomoyo away. She staggered back, and clutched painfully at her wrist which was bruised by his hand.
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Tomoyo's hand still hurt. She had trouble writing because of it. Curse him. She looked at Sakura, she was awfully quiet. Her eyes confused. Then she looked at Syaoran, he looked perfectly fine at this angle. Yet when you go to him, he would burn up.
Sakura had been thinking all day. She still couldn't understand. Why had this happen all of a sudden? She hadn't done wrong, had she?
"Sakura."
Sakura turned, was there just someone who called her? It didn't seem Syaoran.
"Sakura."
There it is again. Everyone around was doing something else.
"Sakura."
Suddenly, everything went black, leaving her alone in the midlle.
"Sakura."
"Who are you! Show yourself!" she demanded. She was growing in fear, but she held on.
A man. There was a man in front of her now. He was the one who called her.
"Sakura."
"Clow-sama?" she asked, and took a step forward.
He smiled.
Sakura bowed before him, a sign of respect to show his greatness.
"The card had escaped, card mistress."
Sakura, looked at her puzzled. The everything went bright, her sight cleared. She was in the park, nearly sunset. She was gripping her wand in hand, and Shoaran was in front of her. Pain in his eyes.
"Shaoran!" Sakura gasped and ran towards him. But he fell down limp, eyes blank and dull. Sakura bent down and shook him.
Suddenly a girl appeared in front of them. She shot an energy bolt to Shaoran and he writhed in pain, yet his eyes showed no emotion.
Sakura shrieked and called the powers of firey, but before she could even take the card, the girl was infront of her. The girl's eyes were silver, like bright metals in sockets. Her hair was long and light, showing resemblance to Yukito's hair, but with more luster. She seemed awfully familiar, but she couldn't tell who.
Suddenly, everything went dark (again), leaving Sakura and Shaoran in the park. She ran to where he was. Cold.. Tears rimmed in her eyes and called to him, but he didn't flinch. He lay there lifeless and pale. ______________________________________
Sakura cried, but a warm hand laid on her shoulder. She looked up to see who it was. Clow Reed.
"What was all that?"
"A dream."
"Yes. a dream."
"Is it true?"
"It may happen, yes. But if you do something. It can be prevented."
"Will Shaoran die?"
"It depends on you, Card Mistress."
"What's happening to him now? Why is he so mean to everyone?"
"Apparently, he is under a spell. You must seal the card, not 'till the sun sets tomorrow. Or else."
"Or else what Clow-sama? And who is the card?
"So full of questions, young one. Go and find the answers for yourself. Now, you need to go back, but remember, only true love can set him free.."
And at that, everything dissolved in front of Sakura's vision. She found her self back into the class. She felt an immense power near; she looked around, yet everything seemed normal. She glanced over at Shaoran, his face the same as before.
"I need to talk to him." she thought. -----------------------------------------------------
Author's Notes: ehehehe. please don't kill me. (well actually, you can't! BWAHAHAHA!!!) anyway, I'm sorry if this is soooo short. I mean, I did promise to make a long one. but you won't review, gimme inspirations people!!! Is my writing that bad! If not, does my story suck? Please let me know!
Yeah, also I'm wondering. Is Meteor Garden that good? I mean, a lot of people told me that it was. especially in HK. Their(F4) music is quite good, (infact I'm listening to them right now) but Meteor Garden will be showing here in our place sometime next week.. Is it good?
_____MIYOKO a.k.a. Shalafi