Title: Stand or Fall
Summary: See chapter 1
Disclaimer: Still lays no claim to them only in my dreams.
A/N: This fic is still waiting for my beta to show up so forgive any mistakes. All reviews are welcome all flames will be given to my evil gift from Sauron aka my dog.
Now on to the reviewers!
Kaorethien: Yes this fic will be even more evil than the last! I am glad you have joined me for this one! Thanks!
Hobbitsrfun: Dani! Finally I have heard from you. Now gimme your fic and thanks for reviewing mine.
Narya Silver Fox: As to your question on who is this person it is answered in this chapter. As for the angst yes there will be LOTS and LOTS.
Annaiual: Thanks! I am glad you are one of the few who read my last one and is now reading this one.!
Ymmas Sirron: WOO HOO! I am evil and it shall become more evil! I am so glad you are reading my fic for your reviews make writing it all the more fun. Thanks!
Firniswin: Here is more for you and thanks!
Now that all reviews have been answered I think I shall go on with the fic.
Chapter 4
The three elf lords rode hard stopping from time to time to read the signs of where they might have gone. Thranduil suddenly halted. Celeborn noticing this halted Elrond.
"What is it? What do you sense?"
"The trees speak. They say that danger lies yet ahead."
The other two sat in complete silence. They could hear the whistling of the wind through the forest. They tried to drown out the soft chirping of the nearby birds and the rustle of the leaves as they swept across the ground. They sat and listened to what the trees had to say. Thranduil honed in to hear what they spoke of. He gasped as he heard of the evil they spoke.
"Come, let us not tarry any longer. I think they are all in grave danger, and we need to go with all haste."
The other two exchanged worried glances and all three picked up the pace of the ride.
Elladan moaned as the darkness left him and he tried to open his eyes. He was met by only more pain as his head swam with dizziness. Elrohir's face twisted in anger as Elladan was dumped upon the ground.
"If you are awake then you can walk!" I have grown tired of carrying you anyway. With a thud Elladan landed on the ground his legs not yet wary enough to support him. Elrohir rushed to his brother and leaned down to him.
"Come, gwador nin, you can lean on me." Elladan looked into the eyes of his twin and gave him a nod of thanks. This being done he scanned to see where Estel and Legolas were. He spotted them Estel being carried and Legolas stumbling along. Neither one looked well, and Estel's tunic was blood stained.
"What do you want with us!" Elladan spoke his anger outweighing all rational thought. Elrohir looked to him as if to quiet him. With the sound of his voice Estel stirred and moaned. This seemed to further Elladan's anger.
"I ask again, who are you and what do you want with us!"
The haggard woman turned to him and slowly made her way to him. She grabbed him by his hair. My name is Renmiel, but you do not have to worry about remembering it, for you shall not live to repeat it to anyone. I seek out all who are close to Lord Elrond, and as I said the prince is just an added bonus."
"Why do you seek out those close to Lord Elrond, and how are you sure we are they?" Elladan said now, fire raging behind his eyes.
"I have watched you for many years. I was always around. You shall pay for all the past transgressions. For once I loved your family, but now I have only hate for the lands of Lorien and Imladris. Galadriel and Elrond, and their almighty realms. They chose long ago this fate when they brought so much death and destruction to elves. Always helping the plight of men. No concern for their own race. Well my entire family was eradicated and theirs shall suffer the same fate. He will not see his precious sons again. It will be especially fun to watch his human son dwindle between life and death before I finally watch him take his last dying breath."
Legolas was filled with intense rage. "How dare you blame Lord Elrond for what happened, it was not his fault! It is a sad thing that your family died, but do not blame him or the land of Lorien. Many elves and men died that day, all in a valiant fight for good."
"What do you know of it!? You speak of things you know nothing about." She walked back over to him and delivered a swift kick. Legolas doubled over but quickly regained his composure. "I see you can take punishment well, wood-elf. Let us see if your human companion can as well."
With this she strode over to the now semiconscious Estel and pulled him up by the hair of his head. He could smell her rancid breath as she stared into his eyes.
"Well the sleepy one awakes," This produced slight laughter from her other men. "I still wonder why Elrond took you in, but he always had a soft heart for humans. Pity he shall not see you again." With this she drew from her tunic a dagger. The glint of the blade shown clearly in Estel's eyes.
Even though he tried to steel his fear he shivered with it. He was not prepared for it when she drove it into his leg. He yelled out and his head once again fell forward. His breathing ragged and tinged with the fight to stay conscious.
This drove the twins over the edge. How dare she hurt their brother. They both struggled against their bonds. Elrohir broke free from his captor and ran headlong into Renmiel. The rage inside him blocked out all rational thought. Renmiel screeched as she fell upon the ground. She regained her footing and came up and delivered a sharp blow to Elrohir's head with the hilt of the dagger. Elrohir fell at her feet blood pouring from the gash now in his head.
"Teach this elf some manners!" As Renmiel watched two of her men swiftly converged on the elf kicking and beating him. Elrohir's body convulsed with each new hit to his body, till finally it didn't move at all.
Elladan now stood sobbing. His brother how...why this could not be happening. "Oh Valar why!" he exclaimed. "Ro please wake up," he said still trying to choke back the sobs which consumed him now. Elrohir did not, however, move and Renmiel turned to the others.
"Come, leave him for the beasts. We should move on and linger here no longer." The men started out of the clearing with Legolas staring mouth gaping open as Elladan screamed in protest to his fallen brother. Estel did not even realize what had occurred as he had once again let the darkness take him. The three were marched and carried on as the shrill cries were heard throughout the forest as Elladan called to his brother to no avail, for Elrohir was not going to hear him.
*it was not that evil was it*
says hmmmmmm maybe it was
okies see you next time!
Summary: See chapter 1
Disclaimer: Still lays no claim to them only in my dreams.
A/N: This fic is still waiting for my beta to show up so forgive any mistakes. All reviews are welcome all flames will be given to my evil gift from Sauron aka my dog.
Now on to the reviewers!
Kaorethien: Yes this fic will be even more evil than the last! I am glad you have joined me for this one! Thanks!
Hobbitsrfun: Dani! Finally I have heard from you. Now gimme your fic and thanks for reviewing mine.
Narya Silver Fox: As to your question on who is this person it is answered in this chapter. As for the angst yes there will be LOTS and LOTS.
Annaiual: Thanks! I am glad you are one of the few who read my last one and is now reading this one.!
Ymmas Sirron: WOO HOO! I am evil and it shall become more evil! I am so glad you are reading my fic for your reviews make writing it all the more fun. Thanks!
Firniswin: Here is more for you and thanks!
Now that all reviews have been answered I think I shall go on with the fic.
Chapter 4
The three elf lords rode hard stopping from time to time to read the signs of where they might have gone. Thranduil suddenly halted. Celeborn noticing this halted Elrond.
"What is it? What do you sense?"
"The trees speak. They say that danger lies yet ahead."
The other two sat in complete silence. They could hear the whistling of the wind through the forest. They tried to drown out the soft chirping of the nearby birds and the rustle of the leaves as they swept across the ground. They sat and listened to what the trees had to say. Thranduil honed in to hear what they spoke of. He gasped as he heard of the evil they spoke.
"Come, let us not tarry any longer. I think they are all in grave danger, and we need to go with all haste."
The other two exchanged worried glances and all three picked up the pace of the ride.
Elladan moaned as the darkness left him and he tried to open his eyes. He was met by only more pain as his head swam with dizziness. Elrohir's face twisted in anger as Elladan was dumped upon the ground.
"If you are awake then you can walk!" I have grown tired of carrying you anyway. With a thud Elladan landed on the ground his legs not yet wary enough to support him. Elrohir rushed to his brother and leaned down to him.
"Come, gwador nin, you can lean on me." Elladan looked into the eyes of his twin and gave him a nod of thanks. This being done he scanned to see where Estel and Legolas were. He spotted them Estel being carried and Legolas stumbling along. Neither one looked well, and Estel's tunic was blood stained.
"What do you want with us!" Elladan spoke his anger outweighing all rational thought. Elrohir looked to him as if to quiet him. With the sound of his voice Estel stirred and moaned. This seemed to further Elladan's anger.
"I ask again, who are you and what do you want with us!"
The haggard woman turned to him and slowly made her way to him. She grabbed him by his hair. My name is Renmiel, but you do not have to worry about remembering it, for you shall not live to repeat it to anyone. I seek out all who are close to Lord Elrond, and as I said the prince is just an added bonus."
"Why do you seek out those close to Lord Elrond, and how are you sure we are they?" Elladan said now, fire raging behind his eyes.
"I have watched you for many years. I was always around. You shall pay for all the past transgressions. For once I loved your family, but now I have only hate for the lands of Lorien and Imladris. Galadriel and Elrond, and their almighty realms. They chose long ago this fate when they brought so much death and destruction to elves. Always helping the plight of men. No concern for their own race. Well my entire family was eradicated and theirs shall suffer the same fate. He will not see his precious sons again. It will be especially fun to watch his human son dwindle between life and death before I finally watch him take his last dying breath."
Legolas was filled with intense rage. "How dare you blame Lord Elrond for what happened, it was not his fault! It is a sad thing that your family died, but do not blame him or the land of Lorien. Many elves and men died that day, all in a valiant fight for good."
"What do you know of it!? You speak of things you know nothing about." She walked back over to him and delivered a swift kick. Legolas doubled over but quickly regained his composure. "I see you can take punishment well, wood-elf. Let us see if your human companion can as well."
With this she strode over to the now semiconscious Estel and pulled him up by the hair of his head. He could smell her rancid breath as she stared into his eyes.
"Well the sleepy one awakes," This produced slight laughter from her other men. "I still wonder why Elrond took you in, but he always had a soft heart for humans. Pity he shall not see you again." With this she drew from her tunic a dagger. The glint of the blade shown clearly in Estel's eyes.
Even though he tried to steel his fear he shivered with it. He was not prepared for it when she drove it into his leg. He yelled out and his head once again fell forward. His breathing ragged and tinged with the fight to stay conscious.
This drove the twins over the edge. How dare she hurt their brother. They both struggled against their bonds. Elrohir broke free from his captor and ran headlong into Renmiel. The rage inside him blocked out all rational thought. Renmiel screeched as she fell upon the ground. She regained her footing and came up and delivered a sharp blow to Elrohir's head with the hilt of the dagger. Elrohir fell at her feet blood pouring from the gash now in his head.
"Teach this elf some manners!" As Renmiel watched two of her men swiftly converged on the elf kicking and beating him. Elrohir's body convulsed with each new hit to his body, till finally it didn't move at all.
Elladan now stood sobbing. His brother how...why this could not be happening. "Oh Valar why!" he exclaimed. "Ro please wake up," he said still trying to choke back the sobs which consumed him now. Elrohir did not, however, move and Renmiel turned to the others.
"Come, leave him for the beasts. We should move on and linger here no longer." The men started out of the clearing with Legolas staring mouth gaping open as Elladan screamed in protest to his fallen brother. Estel did not even realize what had occurred as he had once again let the darkness take him. The three were marched and carried on as the shrill cries were heard throughout the forest as Elladan called to his brother to no avail, for Elrohir was not going to hear him.
*it was not that evil was it*
says hmmmmmm maybe it was
okies see you next time!