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You are a great writer by the way.
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glad ya like meh quotes and ya are a great writer. As long as famous
writers like Ya and TLPhoenix read this Ih'm happy it got some
support.
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: Last Transmission:
"To bad we can't kill Them," Tenshi hissed.
"Yet," Wathair giggled.
Insane laughter filled the room.
: End Last Transmission:
: Sending Transmission:
"Ty I made Kira wait because of the Other Topics but now we need to
speak of Rights," Alia said.
"Why Kira would we need to speak of Rights," Tyson asked.
"Thea called you HER brother and I told her she had lost that Right,"
Kira growled.
By the hissing you would of thought Thea had killed some one.
"By the Gods girl, YOU ARE NOT MY SISTER," Tyson yelled.
"Yes I am by blood," Thea yelled back.
"If you are my Sister then why weren't you there when Theresa beat me,
starved me, and everything else, oh wait you were you helped her, you
are not my sister you are my Brood-Mate," Tyson screamed.
Thea looked as if she had been slapped.
Dragoon stepped forward and hugged Tyson and led him out of the room
whispering sweet nothings in his ears.
Kira turned to Thea and growled, "How dare you after all he has done
for you how dare you."
Thea cried, "what has he done killed my Keeper and turned my son away
from me, killed our mother, almost broke our father and grandfather."
"You don't get it, he was almost raped and killed by his mother so he
defend himself, Your father and grandfather didn't give a about Ty or
so it seemed," Wathair started.
"And your Keeper was cheating on you and when Ty found out you should
of seen him, he gave your son a choice between Death's Embrace,
Joining the Clan, or Joining Voltaire, this is his Choice, Ty still
loves you, you know but you hurt him you almost Broke him, in some
ways he still loves Theresa." Kira finished.
"Alright that's enough," Kai ground out.
"Enough of what Infltrati," Trene hissed.
"I have no idea what is going on," Kai hissed.
"Aw does the Infltrati want to know his superiors pasts," Tenshi
cooed.
Wathair snickered then hissed, "Does the poor ikle baby want to know
does he does he."
They both laughed coldly and Tyson entered the room w/ Dragoon hold
his hand.
"What's so funny," Tyson asked.
"The Infltrati wants to know our Pasts Ty Tenshi an' Wathair were just
having a lil' fun," Kira said.
"Fine I'll start," Tyson said.
"What," the Clan yelled.
: ALRIGHT KIDIEES AND THOSE WHO LIKE HAPPY LIVES TURN BACK NOW IF YOU
WANT YOUR SANITY TO STAY INTACT THIS IS THE REALLY BAD PART NOTHING
GRAPHIC BUT BAD B.A.D:
"Several Millennium ago there were Gods. They lived in happiness with
their leader Katari and her husband Helet. They got the bright Idea to
create the Spri or bit-beast, as they are now known. First they made
Shali Vote he had no true form as he was their First but then they got
the even brighter idea to make more so we then got Daisti Deiy Lord of
Demons, Winti Canat Lord of Whales, Seespa Corni Lady of Snakes, Fary
FontiFe Lord of Fariys, Asenta Cospi Lady of Angels, Wartana Centa
Nort Lord of Wolves, Hasta Norco Lady of Those with Hoves, Getah Gorta-
Gamp Lady of Aligators, IsCanta Corto Lord of Insects, Falono Phto
Lord of Horses, Ursa ContaVei Lord of Bears, Mani Ceti-Cona Lord of
Monkeys, Gifa Cotini Lady of Griffins, Sisi Canta Lord of Salamaders,
Kanda Nonta Lord of Turtles, Akan Netha Lord of Bats, Tista Nantoni
Lady of Cats, Kena Tony Lord of Dragons, and Faci Tonti Lady of
Phonixes.
They were not even the Lord or Lady of something or other till a
Century or so later when They asked Their creators to make more so
they became EdriContrni The Elder Council. The Newly Created were the
direct Ancestors of those you see here and the Spri of the Majestics,
All-Stars, and White Tigers and Wolborg.
Then more were created and They are the Bit-Beasts of the World and
all others in existence.
For Centuries the Spri all lived in harmony but all was not well Helet
had gotten in his brain to control the Spri and was banished and
became Helet, The Lonly One, God of Chaos. He then created Humans to
control and he did but was fought by The Gods and the Spri but in a
last ditch effort he anchored himself here but to take most of Him
with Them as the Gods were weakening They sacrificed there bodies to
take him and They still fight and Those Loyal to Them still fight.
He became strongest twice and twice he was pushed back.
But the EdriContrni forgot of Their Creators deeds and quested for
power as Helet did before Them.
But The Story doesn't end there no now Those-Who-Pushed-Him-Back tell
there stories.
15 Years ago a child was born his mother and sister hated and beat him
while his father was an Archeologist and his grandfather naïve. At one
he was discovered by Dragoon and Dranzer and was immediately trained
to become one of them. At two he received his first kiss by Dragoon.
At three he was almost raped and killed by his mother, that was his
first kill to his mother, he to discovered Demon; Pharo; and rescued
Kira. At four he found the Cali and Spri. At five he participated in
his second raid, lost his virginity to Dragoon, and discovered the
Elimi. 24 hours later found him tortured and raped by Voltaire and
Boris another 24 saw him rescued. At seven he found the Cspa and by
the time he turned 11 he had killed several hundred people and
tortured still thousands. At 12 he was forced to return to his
"family" and was forced to 'act his age.'
His name Tyson Granger."
Kira picked up before there was a chance to comment, " when I was 3 my
brother was born two years later we were kidnapped. A year later I was
kidnapped again on a raid, by then I didn't know who my brother was I
knew I was an older sister I tried to become that for Tyson even going
as far as attacking Dragoon till we came to an understanding when I
was eight. I met Alia at nine and made love at 10. When Tyson was
forced to leave I became the leader of the Clan by the time I was 14 I
had had killed several hundred people and tortured still thousands."
Tyler said, " I was born then Tyson saved me he gave me the choice and
I realized how the Clan and the Deathren operated and chose to help my
uncle."
Tenshi started, "I had lost my virginity at two as did Hikari and Yami
to our father we were then pimped out but saved by Tyson."
Spri started, "I was captured by Voltaire at 2 and was experimented on
I was made to learn how to control emotions and attack people with
them."
Fari said, "I was captured at 2 and was made to control fire."
Winair said, "I am Fari's cousin and captured at 2 and was made to
control wind."
Trene said, "I was captured at 2 and was made to control earth."
Wathair said, " I am Trene's cousin and was captured at 2 I was made
to control water and was tortured the most because water is the
element of emotion. We didn't realize the others existed till the raid
where we worked together."
Spri finished, "Wathair was the most reluctant to join us and was very
formal probably because by 10 she was effectively insane but had such
a hard grip on her self you couldn't notice."
Dragon started, "We too were captured, I was 2 and was forced to grow
Dragon wings."
Angel said, "I was captured at 2 as well and forced to grow Angel
wings."
Wolf said, "I was captured at 2 and forced to grow claws and teeth as
they thought I was useless they gave me some wolf instincts forced me
to roam the forest for a few years and then tortured me."
"We too fought together at the same raid and joined up," Dragon
stated.
"We were born and trained as Assassins we killed our first person at 2
and met the Spri at 12 and went with them we didn't know each other
then met Tyson and swore to guard him since," Pharo said.
"Next how to rescue the Holders," Demon said.
"Wait I remember Thea saying Tyson doesn't Care for the Holders," Kira
said coldly.
"What," both Dragoon and Tyson growled.
"For your information the Tase are my Bond-Mates," Tyson hissed.
"The easiest thing to do is to go in raid formation calling the Others
as well." Angel said.
"I want the Humans to see how we operate we could have the White
Tigers Bey guard Them along with Tethra she isn't a fighter," Wolf
growled.
Tethra didn't argue which surprised the Breakers.
"I don't want Geia or Wolborg involved," Alia said.
"Why not I can fight and I'm older Little Sister," Geia hissed.
"Yes but look at you, you are worried about Tala your emotions will
interfere," Alia growled.
"Um. stupid question wouldn't Tyson's emotions interfere," Max asked.
"They will or They wont if Tyson doesn't fight he will kill me anyway
he has never let his emotions interfere before," Alia said.
"Fine but if you get hurt I will know and I will not be happy," Geia
hissed.
"Ohh. Alia has an overprotective brother, alert, alert." Wathair and
Tenshi taunted.
"Shut it," Alia hissed.
"We have to go people after words the Court is in session," Tyson
growled between giggles.
: End Transmission:
Anyone confused yet?
Look at what I capitalize and the way I word things and the subtle
words you don't notice at first glance and keep them in mind they have
hidden meanings or larger meanings then what are comprehended.
You can of course guess.
If ya 'ave any suggestions make 'em.
: Explanations:
Brood-Mate: Related by blood alone. So that was an insult like saying
I don't care about you, you are only a relation not my family. I made
up this term because can you imagine the Cspa call their Father
family. Think of this being associated with Harry Potter and his
"Family."
Keeper: Another term for Soul-Mate but more possessive so Draco is
Harry's Keeper, Ron is Hermione's, Dragoon is Tyson's est., est.,
est..
Bond-Mates- A term for Friends.
Yes Geia and Alia are related they all are distantly related somehow
and will be told how which will take a REALLY LONG TIME.
Note: I have no Idea what Family is called so for now it is going to
stay family. Also The Clan is FAMILY. If you haven't noticed some are
related and Tenshi, Wathair and Tyson are really close. Another thing
I may spell Wathair this or Wathiar, which do you prefer.
: Quote:
Personal (as in mine {sixth paragraph of Death Song [one of my
poems]}): For Time's will is nay seen As is Fear's Scream
Personal (as in mine {2 lines in Phoenix Song [another poem I have
like 50 pages of typed poems]}: And it all stays the Same In the
Phoenix Song.
You can give me Quotes and I'll add them to the story somewhere.
You can guess what my Quotes mean if they are cryptic and mine are sometimes (:
: End Quote:
TLPhoenix Forever: Ih'm glad Ih confused ya and Ih'm glad ya like it.
You are a great writer by the way.
Nancys-little-Obsession: Alright breathe, BREATHE. Good girl now Ih'm
glad ya like meh quotes and ya are a great writer. As long as famous
writers like Ya and TLPhoenix read this Ih'm happy it got some
support.
: Reviews Completed:
: Last Transmission:
"To bad we can't kill Them," Tenshi hissed.
"Yet," Wathair giggled.
Insane laughter filled the room.
: End Last Transmission:
: Sending Transmission:
"Ty I made Kira wait because of the Other Topics but now we need to
speak of Rights," Alia said.
"Why Kira would we need to speak of Rights," Tyson asked.
"Thea called you HER brother and I told her she had lost that Right,"
Kira growled.
By the hissing you would of thought Thea had killed some one.
"By the Gods girl, YOU ARE NOT MY SISTER," Tyson yelled.
"Yes I am by blood," Thea yelled back.
"If you are my Sister then why weren't you there when Theresa beat me,
starved me, and everything else, oh wait you were you helped her, you
are not my sister you are my Brood-Mate," Tyson screamed.
Thea looked as if she had been slapped.
Dragoon stepped forward and hugged Tyson and led him out of the room
whispering sweet nothings in his ears.
Kira turned to Thea and growled, "How dare you after all he has done
for you how dare you."
Thea cried, "what has he done killed my Keeper and turned my son away
from me, killed our mother, almost broke our father and grandfather."
"You don't get it, he was almost raped and killed by his mother so he
defend himself, Your father and grandfather didn't give a about Ty or
so it seemed," Wathair started.
"And your Keeper was cheating on you and when Ty found out you should
of seen him, he gave your son a choice between Death's Embrace,
Joining the Clan, or Joining Voltaire, this is his Choice, Ty still
loves you, you know but you hurt him you almost Broke him, in some
ways he still loves Theresa." Kira finished.
"Alright that's enough," Kai ground out.
"Enough of what Infltrati," Trene hissed.
"I have no idea what is going on," Kai hissed.
"Aw does the Infltrati want to know his superiors pasts," Tenshi
cooed.
Wathair snickered then hissed, "Does the poor ikle baby want to know
does he does he."
They both laughed coldly and Tyson entered the room w/ Dragoon hold
his hand.
"What's so funny," Tyson asked.
"The Infltrati wants to know our Pasts Ty Tenshi an' Wathair were just
having a lil' fun," Kira said.
"Fine I'll start," Tyson said.
"What," the Clan yelled.
: ALRIGHT KIDIEES AND THOSE WHO LIKE HAPPY LIVES TURN BACK NOW IF YOU
WANT YOUR SANITY TO STAY INTACT THIS IS THE REALLY BAD PART NOTHING
GRAPHIC BUT BAD B.A.D:
"Several Millennium ago there were Gods. They lived in happiness with
their leader Katari and her husband Helet. They got the bright Idea to
create the Spri or bit-beast, as they are now known. First they made
Shali Vote he had no true form as he was their First but then they got
the even brighter idea to make more so we then got Daisti Deiy Lord of
Demons, Winti Canat Lord of Whales, Seespa Corni Lady of Snakes, Fary
FontiFe Lord of Fariys, Asenta Cospi Lady of Angels, Wartana Centa
Nort Lord of Wolves, Hasta Norco Lady of Those with Hoves, Getah Gorta-
Gamp Lady of Aligators, IsCanta Corto Lord of Insects, Falono Phto
Lord of Horses, Ursa ContaVei Lord of Bears, Mani Ceti-Cona Lord of
Monkeys, Gifa Cotini Lady of Griffins, Sisi Canta Lord of Salamaders,
Kanda Nonta Lord of Turtles, Akan Netha Lord of Bats, Tista Nantoni
Lady of Cats, Kena Tony Lord of Dragons, and Faci Tonti Lady of
Phonixes.
They were not even the Lord or Lady of something or other till a
Century or so later when They asked Their creators to make more so
they became EdriContrni The Elder Council. The Newly Created were the
direct Ancestors of those you see here and the Spri of the Majestics,
All-Stars, and White Tigers and Wolborg.
Then more were created and They are the Bit-Beasts of the World and
all others in existence.
For Centuries the Spri all lived in harmony but all was not well Helet
had gotten in his brain to control the Spri and was banished and
became Helet, The Lonly One, God of Chaos. He then created Humans to
control and he did but was fought by The Gods and the Spri but in a
last ditch effort he anchored himself here but to take most of Him
with Them as the Gods were weakening They sacrificed there bodies to
take him and They still fight and Those Loyal to Them still fight.
He became strongest twice and twice he was pushed back.
But the EdriContrni forgot of Their Creators deeds and quested for
power as Helet did before Them.
But The Story doesn't end there no now Those-Who-Pushed-Him-Back tell
there stories.
15 Years ago a child was born his mother and sister hated and beat him
while his father was an Archeologist and his grandfather naïve. At one
he was discovered by Dragoon and Dranzer and was immediately trained
to become one of them. At two he received his first kiss by Dragoon.
At three he was almost raped and killed by his mother, that was his
first kill to his mother, he to discovered Demon; Pharo; and rescued
Kira. At four he found the Cali and Spri. At five he participated in
his second raid, lost his virginity to Dragoon, and discovered the
Elimi. 24 hours later found him tortured and raped by Voltaire and
Boris another 24 saw him rescued. At seven he found the Cspa and by
the time he turned 11 he had killed several hundred people and
tortured still thousands. At 12 he was forced to return to his
"family" and was forced to 'act his age.'
His name Tyson Granger."
Kira picked up before there was a chance to comment, " when I was 3 my
brother was born two years later we were kidnapped. A year later I was
kidnapped again on a raid, by then I didn't know who my brother was I
knew I was an older sister I tried to become that for Tyson even going
as far as attacking Dragoon till we came to an understanding when I
was eight. I met Alia at nine and made love at 10. When Tyson was
forced to leave I became the leader of the Clan by the time I was 14 I
had had killed several hundred people and tortured still thousands."
Tyler said, " I was born then Tyson saved me he gave me the choice and
I realized how the Clan and the Deathren operated and chose to help my
uncle."
Tenshi started, "I had lost my virginity at two as did Hikari and Yami
to our father we were then pimped out but saved by Tyson."
Spri started, "I was captured by Voltaire at 2 and was experimented on
I was made to learn how to control emotions and attack people with
them."
Fari said, "I was captured at 2 and was made to control fire."
Winair said, "I am Fari's cousin and captured at 2 and was made to
control wind."
Trene said, "I was captured at 2 and was made to control earth."
Wathair said, " I am Trene's cousin and was captured at 2 I was made
to control water and was tortured the most because water is the
element of emotion. We didn't realize the others existed till the raid
where we worked together."
Spri finished, "Wathair was the most reluctant to join us and was very
formal probably because by 10 she was effectively insane but had such
a hard grip on her self you couldn't notice."
Dragon started, "We too were captured, I was 2 and was forced to grow
Dragon wings."
Angel said, "I was captured at 2 as well and forced to grow Angel
wings."
Wolf said, "I was captured at 2 and forced to grow claws and teeth as
they thought I was useless they gave me some wolf instincts forced me
to roam the forest for a few years and then tortured me."
"We too fought together at the same raid and joined up," Dragon
stated.
"We were born and trained as Assassins we killed our first person at 2
and met the Spri at 12 and went with them we didn't know each other
then met Tyson and swore to guard him since," Pharo said.
"Next how to rescue the Holders," Demon said.
"Wait I remember Thea saying Tyson doesn't Care for the Holders," Kira
said coldly.
"What," both Dragoon and Tyson growled.
"For your information the Tase are my Bond-Mates," Tyson hissed.
"The easiest thing to do is to go in raid formation calling the Others
as well." Angel said.
"I want the Humans to see how we operate we could have the White
Tigers Bey guard Them along with Tethra she isn't a fighter," Wolf
growled.
Tethra didn't argue which surprised the Breakers.
"I don't want Geia or Wolborg involved," Alia said.
"Why not I can fight and I'm older Little Sister," Geia hissed.
"Yes but look at you, you are worried about Tala your emotions will
interfere," Alia growled.
"Um. stupid question wouldn't Tyson's emotions interfere," Max asked.
"They will or They wont if Tyson doesn't fight he will kill me anyway
he has never let his emotions interfere before," Alia said.
"Fine but if you get hurt I will know and I will not be happy," Geia
hissed.
"Ohh. Alia has an overprotective brother, alert, alert." Wathair and
Tenshi taunted.
"Shut it," Alia hissed.
"We have to go people after words the Court is in session," Tyson
growled between giggles.
: End Transmission:
Anyone confused yet?
Look at what I capitalize and the way I word things and the subtle
words you don't notice at first glance and keep them in mind they have
hidden meanings or larger meanings then what are comprehended.
You can of course guess.
If ya 'ave any suggestions make 'em.
: Explanations:
Brood-Mate: Related by blood alone. So that was an insult like saying
I don't care about you, you are only a relation not my family. I made
up this term because can you imagine the Cspa call their Father
family. Think of this being associated with Harry Potter and his
"Family."
Keeper: Another term for Soul-Mate but more possessive so Draco is
Harry's Keeper, Ron is Hermione's, Dragoon is Tyson's est., est.,
est..
Bond-Mates- A term for Friends.
Yes Geia and Alia are related they all are distantly related somehow
and will be told how which will take a REALLY LONG TIME.
Note: I have no Idea what Family is called so for now it is going to
stay family. Also The Clan is FAMILY. If you haven't noticed some are
related and Tenshi, Wathair and Tyson are really close. Another thing
I may spell Wathair this or Wathiar, which do you prefer.
: Quote:
Personal (as in mine {sixth paragraph of Death Song [one of my
poems]}): For Time's will is nay seen As is Fear's Scream
Personal (as in mine {2 lines in Phoenix Song [another poem I have
like 50 pages of typed poems]}: And it all stays the Same In the
Phoenix Song.
You can give me Quotes and I'll add them to the story somewhere.
You can guess what my Quotes mean if they are cryptic and mine are sometimes (:
: End Quote: