I feel so sad. /cries/ I've only gotten ONE review. Come on people. Am I really that bad of a writer? You can tell me it's bad. I'll fell better knowing how you feel and that I got reviews.
This chapter is for 'Queen-Kay'! Your review has made me so very happy. I will read and review every chapter in every story you have written as soon as I get the time.
Disclaimer: If I owned $100,000,000 dollars, I would buy Inuyasha.
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"Yumiii..."
Blackness. Really blueness. There was small, white lights flashing all around me. I was puzzled. We had fallen down the ancient well. Hadn't we?
"Umph." I frantically looked around myself for my best friend. We had... we had landed in the same well we had fallen into. That was all I could really gather in my current state. I had landed on my back and it smarted from landing harshly on the cold, hard ground.
"Die! Whatever you are." I sat up and regretted it immensely. A giant, dead creature thing that looked like a black spider with twenty legs laid two yards from my feet.
"Ahh!" A look of pure disgust came across my face as I jumped up and plastered myself to the well wall. My best friend allowed a rare giggle to escape at that. But, her face instantly turned back to its solemn, grave appearances as she stood next to the dead creature.
"It looks like those demons in my school books." Yumi knelt down and examined the deceased object. I stood against the wall of the well, keeping my distance. No way no earth was I going near that thing. I knew Yumi would be disappointed at me for being a coward, but anyone in their right mind wouldn't be doing what that silver hair beauty was doing. She had sliced the creature open with her Shinai that she keep on her at all times.
"It looks like it has a similar build to that of a true spider. Yet... it has many more legs," Yumi's icy voice stated as she begun to look up the well.
"How will we get out of here? There's no ladder," I dared asked the deep in thought Yumi as she looked at a vine. As if I knew that was coming she pointed and said,
"We climb." She began to climb and I awkwardly followed. I was unsure that this vine would support us both. It surprising did though as we climbed inch by inch up the vine. So I took my chances and reached for Yumi's rear.
"Baka!" Yumi swiftly kicked her foot down on my face. I lost grip of the vine and started to fall. Yumi hung onto the vine and reached for my arm. I grabbed hold, relief rushing though my body. Falling down the well again was not something I felt like doing at the moment.
Suddenly Yumi stopped, as she reached the top of the dark, old well.
"My, My. We really aren't in Tokyo anymore."
"Huh?"
"Take a look." Yumi jumped out of the well and lent a long arm down for me to grab. Her long silver hair hung over as she gave me a reassuring smile, before pulling me out of the well. I stood in shock. That's why she had smiled at me. It was rare as well, unless she felt I needed it. I took a gasping breath, while taking in my surroundings. Trees. Bushes. Grass. More trees. Nothing like the rocky paved ground that was Yumi's yard. The well shine was gone and the air held an odd, freshness to it.
"Where are we?" I looked at Yumi praying she knew. But, she stood there refusing to allow herself to admit she didn't know.
"We'll look around. Keep a eye open for people." Yumi toke charge right away as she always did. I was glad too. I was a follower, not a leader. That was Yumi's job.
"Okay, but what about that?" My eyes went round as dinner plates in fear. Two giant wolfs stood in front of us four yards away. Shaggy, gray fur wolfs. Pit less, hungry, yellow eyed, small, bear size wolfs.
"Akira stand back," Yumi, told me as she grabbed her Shinai and stood ready to fight.
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Sorry this chapter is a little less intense. I wanted to portray Akira and as you can see I did a semi-poor job at it. To let you know I wanted Akira to be Yumi's best friend, a pervert like his father, and calm, but not as much as Yumi. I tried though, I really did.
I want you to all know I put extreme work into this story. But, I want to make something clear. I made up the bath Kimonos.
Dictionary
Shinai- a bamboo sword used in kendo
Baka- idiot
This chapter is for 'Queen-Kay'! Your review has made me so very happy. I will read and review every chapter in every story you have written as soon as I get the time.
Disclaimer: If I owned $100,000,000 dollars, I would buy Inuyasha.
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"Yumiii..."
Blackness. Really blueness. There was small, white lights flashing all around me. I was puzzled. We had fallen down the ancient well. Hadn't we?
"Umph." I frantically looked around myself for my best friend. We had... we had landed in the same well we had fallen into. That was all I could really gather in my current state. I had landed on my back and it smarted from landing harshly on the cold, hard ground.
"Die! Whatever you are." I sat up and regretted it immensely. A giant, dead creature thing that looked like a black spider with twenty legs laid two yards from my feet.
"Ahh!" A look of pure disgust came across my face as I jumped up and plastered myself to the well wall. My best friend allowed a rare giggle to escape at that. But, her face instantly turned back to its solemn, grave appearances as she stood next to the dead creature.
"It looks like those demons in my school books." Yumi knelt down and examined the deceased object. I stood against the wall of the well, keeping my distance. No way no earth was I going near that thing. I knew Yumi would be disappointed at me for being a coward, but anyone in their right mind wouldn't be doing what that silver hair beauty was doing. She had sliced the creature open with her Shinai that she keep on her at all times.
"It looks like it has a similar build to that of a true spider. Yet... it has many more legs," Yumi's icy voice stated as she begun to look up the well.
"How will we get out of here? There's no ladder," I dared asked the deep in thought Yumi as she looked at a vine. As if I knew that was coming she pointed and said,
"We climb." She began to climb and I awkwardly followed. I was unsure that this vine would support us both. It surprising did though as we climbed inch by inch up the vine. So I took my chances and reached for Yumi's rear.
"Baka!" Yumi swiftly kicked her foot down on my face. I lost grip of the vine and started to fall. Yumi hung onto the vine and reached for my arm. I grabbed hold, relief rushing though my body. Falling down the well again was not something I felt like doing at the moment.
Suddenly Yumi stopped, as she reached the top of the dark, old well.
"My, My. We really aren't in Tokyo anymore."
"Huh?"
"Take a look." Yumi jumped out of the well and lent a long arm down for me to grab. Her long silver hair hung over as she gave me a reassuring smile, before pulling me out of the well. I stood in shock. That's why she had smiled at me. It was rare as well, unless she felt I needed it. I took a gasping breath, while taking in my surroundings. Trees. Bushes. Grass. More trees. Nothing like the rocky paved ground that was Yumi's yard. The well shine was gone and the air held an odd, freshness to it.
"Where are we?" I looked at Yumi praying she knew. But, she stood there refusing to allow herself to admit she didn't know.
"We'll look around. Keep a eye open for people." Yumi toke charge right away as she always did. I was glad too. I was a follower, not a leader. That was Yumi's job.
"Okay, but what about that?" My eyes went round as dinner plates in fear. Two giant wolfs stood in front of us four yards away. Shaggy, gray fur wolfs. Pit less, hungry, yellow eyed, small, bear size wolfs.
"Akira stand back," Yumi, told me as she grabbed her Shinai and stood ready to fight.
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Sorry this chapter is a little less intense. I wanted to portray Akira and as you can see I did a semi-poor job at it. To let you know I wanted Akira to be Yumi's best friend, a pervert like his father, and calm, but not as much as Yumi. I tried though, I really did.
I want you to all know I put extreme work into this story. But, I want to make something clear. I made up the bath Kimonos.
Dictionary
Shinai- a bamboo sword used in kendo
Baka- idiot