Ok well this is my first story on this sn so tell me what you think of It
good or bad.
Sry about any spelling problems I hate spelling.
Well the setting of this story start will Kagome already being controlled
through a jew shard in-planted into her neck. A new Demon named Itusiti is
controlling her. The story will start now.
(Inuyasha is sitting in the corner eating Ramon noodles that Kagome brought him. Shippo is out just gathering supplies for there next journey from Keada. Miroku and Sango(already married) are off laying on a hill side. Kirara is near where they are rooming around in a meadow. Kagome (already controller by the shard)is just sitting there wait for her to be commanded something.)
Inuyasha- (calm mellow voice) Kagome what are you thinking about right now.
(Kagome gets up and walks away, Inuyasha still siting there now with a puzzled look)
Inuyasha-(angry tone of voice)damn, I was just trying to help her out)
(Inuyasha stands up walks out of the door looks around and then see Kagome me walking to the forest of no return. He runs after her and trys not to get seen to see what she is doing. Kagome keeps walking until she sees find the time tree. Inuyasha still following her has a puzzled look walks out behind Kagome.)
Inuyasha-(soft tone trying to comfort her) Kagome what is wrong?
Kagome-( quickly responding with very angry tone) get up next to the time tree
(Inuyasha walks over there confused. Inuyasha turns around to find Kagome has a arrow strung to her bow aimed at him.)
Inuyasha-(soft tone trying to calm her down) Kagome what is wrong?
Kagome-(Itusiti speaks through Kagome) you don't know who I am do you?
(Inuyasha starts to run towards Kagome's taken over body)
Kagome-(Itusiti still talking through her) back up or I will shot you now you belong in your rightful place.
Inuyasha-where is that?
Kagome-(Inusiti still there) where Kikyuo put you over 50 years ago
(Inuyasha has flash backs of when this happened)
Inuyasha-(try to get Kagome to snap out of the spell) Kagome I know you don't want too do this
(Kagome strums a second arrow to her bow)
Inuyasha-(soft tone bearly can be heard) Kagome why?
(Kagome let both arrows fly they come apart aimed for Inuyasha's Shoulders)
Inuyasha-(quickly with a very mellow tone) I love you Kagome
(Right at that moment the arrows hit Inuyasha pinning him the tree once again and the sacred shard fell out of Kagome and she was out of the control of the demon. She ran to Inuyasha now pinned to the tree and tried to pull the arrows out not being able to because of how much emotion that she was going though she leaned on him and started to cry Inuyasha waking up looked and Kagome and said for her to go get Kikyuo. Kagome worried that he might blow her off for Kikyuo went off the find her.)
end of part 1 If you would like me too right more then I just want 5 or more reviews
(Inuyasha is sitting in the corner eating Ramon noodles that Kagome brought him. Shippo is out just gathering supplies for there next journey from Keada. Miroku and Sango(already married) are off laying on a hill side. Kirara is near where they are rooming around in a meadow. Kagome (already controller by the shard)is just sitting there wait for her to be commanded something.)
Inuyasha- (calm mellow voice) Kagome what are you thinking about right now.
(Kagome gets up and walks away, Inuyasha still siting there now with a puzzled look)
Inuyasha-(angry tone of voice)damn, I was just trying to help her out)
(Inuyasha stands up walks out of the door looks around and then see Kagome me walking to the forest of no return. He runs after her and trys not to get seen to see what she is doing. Kagome keeps walking until she sees find the time tree. Inuyasha still following her has a puzzled look walks out behind Kagome.)
Inuyasha-(soft tone trying to comfort her) Kagome what is wrong?
Kagome-( quickly responding with very angry tone) get up next to the time tree
(Inuyasha walks over there confused. Inuyasha turns around to find Kagome has a arrow strung to her bow aimed at him.)
Inuyasha-(soft tone trying to calm her down) Kagome what is wrong?
Kagome-(Itusiti speaks through Kagome) you don't know who I am do you?
(Inuyasha starts to run towards Kagome's taken over body)
Kagome-(Itusiti still talking through her) back up or I will shot you now you belong in your rightful place.
Inuyasha-where is that?
Kagome-(Inusiti still there) where Kikyuo put you over 50 years ago
(Inuyasha has flash backs of when this happened)
Inuyasha-(try to get Kagome to snap out of the spell) Kagome I know you don't want too do this
(Kagome strums a second arrow to her bow)
Inuyasha-(soft tone bearly can be heard) Kagome why?
(Kagome let both arrows fly they come apart aimed for Inuyasha's Shoulders)
Inuyasha-(quickly with a very mellow tone) I love you Kagome
(Right at that moment the arrows hit Inuyasha pinning him the tree once again and the sacred shard fell out of Kagome and she was out of the control of the demon. She ran to Inuyasha now pinned to the tree and tried to pull the arrows out not being able to because of how much emotion that she was going though she leaned on him and started to cry Inuyasha waking up looked and Kagome and said for her to go get Kikyuo. Kagome worried that he might blow her off for Kikyuo went off the find her.)
end of part 1 If you would like me too right more then I just want 5 or more reviews