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Briseis led Achilles down many long stone corridors, to her rooms. They walked in Silence, Achilles was awed at what this woman, she was risking everything for him. Briseis stopped and pushed open a pair of large wooden doors, to reveal a very delicate room, decorated with a color scheme almost entirely dedicated to blue. Briseis, smiled it was just as she left it. She stepped into the room and let the door shut behind her. Briseis turned and faced Achilles.
She laid a sweet and tender kiss on his lips, and looked deeply into his crystal blue eyes. Achilles leaned in a kissed her again, he ran his tongue along her lips and she opened her mouth, inviting him to explore. Her shifted his position to make the kiss more comfortable, as her arms snaked around his waist. The kiss was long and passionate, finally Briseis broke away panting lightly.
"We probably should get some sleep..."
Achilles silenced her with a mischievous glint in his eye and another loving kiss. He scooped her up in his arms and carried her towards the large bed. He laid her gently down and leaned into to lay a gentle kiss on her mouth and then trailed kisses down her neck. Sending shivers down her spine. How she loved this man! Achilles slipped Briseis dress off of her shoulders and continued to explore her flesh with his mouth.
Briseis slipped Achilles top of over his head and gently scratched his back making whimpering noises as he turned his attentions towards her breasts. She felt Achilles hand roaming lower and lower. Slipping her dress completely off, it slithered to the ground. Achilles groaned her name in the increasing passion. Briseis slipped her hands into Achilles waistband and pulled his toga skirt away. They lay together hugging for a short time reveling in the feel of flesh on flesh. Achilles raised himself and entered Briseis in a slow and gentle way. He now understood the difference between sex and making love.
Achilles gently penetrated Briseis rhythmically until they were both more than satisfied. Achilles pulled back the covers of the bed and slipped himself and Briseis underneath. Achilles smiled warmly as Briseis snuggled up to his side. It was amazing how she fitted just right next to his body; he leaned over and kissed her temple before drifting of into a peaceful sleep.
Briseis awoke the next morning to a cold bed. She sat up quickly and looked around. She flopped back onto the pillow and sighed with relief when she saw Achilles sitting next to the bed watching her. Achilles leaned forward and planted a kiss on her forehead.
"I believe we have an important meeting with your Uncle, perhaps you should rise from your slumber?"
Briseis threw an overstuffed pillow at him and Achilles ducked for cover.
"Turn around then so I can get up and dressed,"
Achilles laughed at this, she was amazing! She gave herself to him completely physically and emotionally but she was still shy.
"Turn please," Briseis insisted.
Achilles walked over to the window and gazed out over the gardens of Troy; it was undeniably a beautiful place.
Briseis slipped out of bed and walked over to the wardrobe; she selected a simple toga of pure white, she knew it was her Uncles favorite. Briseis slipped it on over her head and headed for to the bedside table where a basin of water had been placed. She splashed herself with water and refreshed her self. She walked to the widow Achilles was standing at and wrapped her arms around his waist and kissed the nape of his neck, but skittered away before he could return the affection.
Briseis reached out and snapped a small cluster of white and blue flowers and weaved them delicately in her hair. She turned to face Achilles.
"Beautiful," he whispered.
"We should get going, Priam is in a much more pleasant mood in the mornings,"
Achilles took Briseis by the arm and they walked together towards the Kings office. Briseis was sure they would have a better chance of convincing the King in private. He did not have to like Achilles, just accept what he could do for Troy and how she felt about him.
Briseis gave a look to Achilles as they stoop hand in hand in front of the huge bronze door that led to Priam's office. Achilles kissed her briefly on the mouth.
"For courage," he soothed.
They push open the doors and stepped inside.
Briseis led Achilles down many long stone corridors, to her rooms. They walked in Silence, Achilles was awed at what this woman, she was risking everything for him. Briseis stopped and pushed open a pair of large wooden doors, to reveal a very delicate room, decorated with a color scheme almost entirely dedicated to blue. Briseis, smiled it was just as she left it. She stepped into the room and let the door shut behind her. Briseis turned and faced Achilles.
She laid a sweet and tender kiss on his lips, and looked deeply into his crystal blue eyes. Achilles leaned in a kissed her again, he ran his tongue along her lips and she opened her mouth, inviting him to explore. Her shifted his position to make the kiss more comfortable, as her arms snaked around his waist. The kiss was long and passionate, finally Briseis broke away panting lightly.
"We probably should get some sleep..."
Achilles silenced her with a mischievous glint in his eye and another loving kiss. He scooped her up in his arms and carried her towards the large bed. He laid her gently down and leaned into to lay a gentle kiss on her mouth and then trailed kisses down her neck. Sending shivers down her spine. How she loved this man! Achilles slipped Briseis dress off of her shoulders and continued to explore her flesh with his mouth.
Briseis slipped Achilles top of over his head and gently scratched his back making whimpering noises as he turned his attentions towards her breasts. She felt Achilles hand roaming lower and lower. Slipping her dress completely off, it slithered to the ground. Achilles groaned her name in the increasing passion. Briseis slipped her hands into Achilles waistband and pulled his toga skirt away. They lay together hugging for a short time reveling in the feel of flesh on flesh. Achilles raised himself and entered Briseis in a slow and gentle way. He now understood the difference between sex and making love.
Achilles gently penetrated Briseis rhythmically until they were both more than satisfied. Achilles pulled back the covers of the bed and slipped himself and Briseis underneath. Achilles smiled warmly as Briseis snuggled up to his side. It was amazing how she fitted just right next to his body; he leaned over and kissed her temple before drifting of into a peaceful sleep.
Briseis awoke the next morning to a cold bed. She sat up quickly and looked around. She flopped back onto the pillow and sighed with relief when she saw Achilles sitting next to the bed watching her. Achilles leaned forward and planted a kiss on her forehead.
"I believe we have an important meeting with your Uncle, perhaps you should rise from your slumber?"
Briseis threw an overstuffed pillow at him and Achilles ducked for cover.
"Turn around then so I can get up and dressed,"
Achilles laughed at this, she was amazing! She gave herself to him completely physically and emotionally but she was still shy.
"Turn please," Briseis insisted.
Achilles walked over to the window and gazed out over the gardens of Troy; it was undeniably a beautiful place.
Briseis slipped out of bed and walked over to the wardrobe; she selected a simple toga of pure white, she knew it was her Uncles favorite. Briseis slipped it on over her head and headed for to the bedside table where a basin of water had been placed. She splashed herself with water and refreshed her self. She walked to the widow Achilles was standing at and wrapped her arms around his waist and kissed the nape of his neck, but skittered away before he could return the affection.
Briseis reached out and snapped a small cluster of white and blue flowers and weaved them delicately in her hair. She turned to face Achilles.
"Beautiful," he whispered.
"We should get going, Priam is in a much more pleasant mood in the mornings,"
Achilles took Briseis by the arm and they walked together towards the Kings office. Briseis was sure they would have a better chance of convincing the King in private. He did not have to like Achilles, just accept what he could do for Troy and how she felt about him.
Briseis gave a look to Achilles as they stoop hand in hand in front of the huge bronze door that led to Priam's office. Achilles kissed her briefly on the mouth.
"For courage," he soothed.
They push open the doors and stepped inside.