What's Different on the Other Side

By melaniemelmelgirl

Chapter Eleven- Long Walks and Writing Homework

Disclaimer: Poor young children like me can't afford Cardcaptor Sakura. Okay so I'm not a young child, but I AM poor (no allowance….. L.)

Author's Note: Boy have things been busy lately!!! On Sunday, today, and tomorrow, I have been scuba diving, so I'm really tired, and don't always feel like

writing. But today I'm not so tired, so I decided to write some more. And boy. I got 22 reviews so far for the last chapter. WOW. You guys never cease to

amaze me. Some review replies:

XtopangelX- Thanks!!! I'm glad you thought so!!!

Ukari-chan- Tee hee thanx!!

sakura cherry syaoran wolf- Aww thanks!!! I think that's right, too.

Aznpals- He he I know Eriol's the classic boyfriend, Tomoyo's the nervous girlfriend. Except that they're not a couple. Yet.

Neko-Yuff16- Thanks!!! Don't worry, that's okay!!! See I'm updating!!!

melon-heart- I know!!! The last chappie was dedicated to ET, as many people were starting to demand it!! Eriol-san is

indeed quite the charmer!! Thanks for your review!!!

White-LK- Sorry they aren't longer chapters, I just have a short attention span!! But I get a lot of creative inspirations, so

I update often!!!

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kawaiitenshi- Yes they are short, but three words: SHORT ATTENTION SPAN. That's what I have. Sorry, but I'm

glad you like it!!!

s.i.m.5- wow you're real name is very long and very unique!!! Are you Japanese? Cuz it's a verryyyy kewel name!!!

pinky- Yes I lubbbbbbbbb Inuyasha!!! No I haven't written any Inuyasha stories….yet, anyhow. It took me four years

of being a CCS fan just to write a fanfic!! But as soon as I get a verrrrrry good inspiration, you'll bet I'm gonna write one!!!

azn anime addict47- aww you're lovely too!!! Purple that's sparkly is my fave as well!!!You're welcome, I put the glossery in cuz some people aren't familiar with Japanese phrases.Gomen or gomen nesai DOES mean that you're sorry. Wow you're like me!!! I check all my faveFanfics after school too, except that it's still summer for me here!! Who hoo I'm off 'tilSeptember first!!! Oh well I like school AND the fact I'm going to be a sophomore!!! kirara nieko yasha- Wow. The review you sent me was probably the nicest, sweetest review I've ever had. I agree, "Serena and Molly's Great Sleepover Adventure" WAS cheesy. But come on. Iwas ELEVEN. I sixth grader for cryin out loud!!! Thanks so much!!! And when I have some freetime on my hands, I WILL check out that Inuyasha fanfic you recommended to me!! For someone whohad never written a review before, I say, you sure know how to make a teen author very happy!!Like I have said before in previous chappies, I WILL NOT stop writing this fanfic till it's complete.I even made a BLOOD OATH with my computer!!! And do you think that I would break a BLOOD OATH??!!Nosireeebob!!! This story WILL be complete, even if it takes up the rest of my high school career!!!Bwahahaha ahem sorry I am a bit dramatic at times......well thanks again, rock on!! nek0- he he kewel nicknames and you were right it's Eriol hiragizawa, lol!! AND YOU ARE TOO SMART!!!NEVER SAY YOU ARE DUMB NEVER!!! Whoo I luve milk, that's right!!! linangel1992- lol thanks. Whew those review replies took a whole half hour!! Now I'm almost too tired to write the story,but not quite. So enjoy everyone, despite the fact that this is draining all my remaining strength. Eriol put his arm around Tomoyo as they walked through the forest. Boy, was it lovely at night!! "This is such a lovely evening, and even more lovely now that I have someone to spend it with." Eriol said. "Oh, yah, it's pretty, thanks." Tomoyo said, turning a crimson glow. "Would you like to take a rest?" he asked. "Oh, sure, that would be nice," Tomoyo said. As if out of nowhere, Eriol pulled out a picnic basket, and set it on the ground. He set out the blanket, and set up a little array of cookies and pretzels on two plates, and pulled out a canteen of fresh hot chocolate, and two mugs. "I thought you might be a bit hungry," he said. As if on cue, Tomoyo's stomach rumbled. Blushing, she said, "uh....yah." Eriol sat a sparkly purple satin cushion on the blanket, and motioned for her to sit down. (boy, he's sure well prepared!) Tomoyo sat down as directed. Eriol opened the canteen and poured some in a sparkly purple mug for Tomoyo ( ).

"Arigatou," Tomoyo said.

"No problem, I enjoy entertaining a lady as beautiful as you," he said, grinning sexily.

"Uhh..yah." she said, blushing even more.

She brought the mug up to her lips and took a small sip.

"Mmmm…delicious!!!" she said.

"Taste the cookies, I made them myself!" he said.

She nibbled on one.

"Wow, you're quite the cook!!"

"Thank you, my sister Nuriko taught me back when we lived in England."

"She must have been a good cook".

"Yes, very good indeed."

Tomoyo smiled and tried some pretzels.

They were good as well.

The two of them sat there for the next half hour, eating cookies and pretzels, drinking hot chocolate, telling each other more about themselves,

and having a wonderful time.

Tomoyo checked her watch.

Oh no, it was already midnight!!!

And she had school tomorrow!!!

"Eriol-san, I am so sorry, but I have to go home now!!!"

"No problem, my lady", he said.

He gathered up the stuff, and as mysteriously as it appeared, it vanished.

Hand in hand, they walked back to the Daidouji mansion.

Soon, too soon in Tomoyo's mind, they reached her front door.

"Thank you Eriol-san, I had a marvelous time."

"No problem. I enjoyed your presence," he said.

Suddenly, and unexpectedly, he bent over and kissed her gently but spectacularly on the lips.

After they pulled away, seconds later, (much to Tomoyo's dismay), she blushed and said goodbye.

"I'll call you later Tomoyo, I really will!!!" he said.

Laughing, Tomoyo waved, and went inside her house.

'What a women', Eriol thought, and walked away.

Laying on her bed, Tomoyo recalled the day's events.

She had woken up early to work on a project with Sakura, had three tests, was saved by prince charming,

had ice cream with him, and took a walk with him. Eriol even kissed her.

Blushing, Tomoyo touched her lips where he had kissed her.

Ahh.

What a great kisser Eriol-san was…..

Wait a second.

'No. I should not be thinking these thoughts right now. I have homework to do, and I need to get to sleep.'

But try she might, she just could not pay attention.

She sighed, giving up, and went to sleep.

Little did she know it, her dreams would only be about Eriol that night.

Across town, at the Kinomoto residence, Sakura was up late working on her Writing homework.

She had to write a haiku.

Simple enough, right?

Except that she had writer's block.

'Oh well. I'll just scribble some words down', she thought.

"Okay, here it goes:

Special feelings are present,

Beautiful yet sad.

I wonder why they are here.

"Eh, close enough," she said.

And with that, she closed her eyes and went to sleep.

Short I know. Note to all those who entered the "Eriol's Last Name" contest will have their name in upcoming chapters.

I plan AT LEAST 25 chapters for this story, at the rate its going at. Well later!!! Luve melaniemelmelgirl.