let me just say, I am x-tremely happy with the feedback, i just hope this sequel lives up to the Heartbreaks standard, which has 300 reviews, im a little proud of that. Neways, I have to say this, cuz I am a caring sister(yeah right) but my little bro is thirteen and just registered as a member. His pename is Dragonskin Fool, and if you like Series of Unfortunate events, pleez check him out, even though he doesnt have much written yet. So back to the fic, thank you for all your reviews.
now this chap is dedicated to...
~Silhouetted Shadow-thank you for your review, I'm glad you liked Heartbreaks, and I hope you also like this one!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~moezy-chan-thank you so much for your support and review, im glad you still like the suspense from my writting, thank you so much!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~kb-thank you for your review, I hope I still keep you in suspense*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~Laserai-wow, wow, i just have to say wow!Thank you, that is touching.WOW! I am speechless, wow! thank you so much, that is so...wow! I'm very touched and I'm still at lost for words. Thank you, that was real sweet!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~ Flying Star *TLTSI*-thank you so much! I'm glad that you think im a good writer, thank you so much! i really appreciate that even after hearbreaks, you still read my fics, thank you!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~writer of love 17-thank you so much for reviewing! im really glad that you look foward to my fic, thank you!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~Sanity-Stealing-Lawn-Gnome-thank you so much for reviewing! im glad you like this fic, cause, i had my doubts, thank you so much!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~Darkfire-thank you for the roses, they're so pretty! thank you so much, i wanted to include more of BB and Raven in this fic, thank you. Now here are some roses in my fav colors!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~chibi-naiome-good to know your still into my fic! thank you so much! im glad your still here for each chapter i put up! thank you!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~Star Light-lol! thanks, I wnated some BBRAV scene and i felt that was the perfect way to start off the second chapter! Thank you, im glad you feel that way about this fic!oh, and brothers are real annoying! they woke me up at 6am!!! SIX AM!!!i felt like screaming and im not a morning person so.....yeah, im getting off topic, sorry.*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~Sakura of the Ninjitsu-thank you for reviewing!Im glad you enjoyed Heartbreaks, and Im extremely glad you like this story. it sounds like her,(if i think i know who your thinking......did that make sense)but its a whole new character!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~skyhopper-thank you for your review, im glad you enjoyed the story!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~mi/ri-LOL LOL LOLOMG! u guys are freakin hilarious! thank you that review, im still crackin up!thank you so much!*sends you both blue and yellow roses*
~~*Starlight*~-thank you for reviewing, im glad you enjoy my fics that much, and i luv your reviews, they are very sweet and encouraging, thank you!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~aquatmarine -thank you so much!hope you enjoy this chapter!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
okey-dokey, sorry for the long-mumbo update, but here's the thrid chappie, please dont hurt me!
New Identity
Promises
"Don't worry, I will assist you!" Starfire told the girl nervously, hoping she wouldn't flee.
"You will..y-you will h-help?" the girl cried, a hint of hope dashed on her pale face. Her blue eyes were slowly gaining back focus as they stared at Starfire.
"Of course, but you must follow me," Starfire said gently.
"Don't take me back! Pl-pl-please!"the girl broke into sobs.
"Who is this...this person you need assistance from? Starfire asked the distressed girl as she was slowly approaching her with caution.
"Just helkp me please," the girl whispered when Starfire was close enough to see the girl had a butterfly shaped bithmark on the corner of her right eye.
"I will, I promise," Starfire whispered back.
The girl collasped in her arms.
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"So, you gonna apologize to Raven?" Robin asked Beasstboy while they were playing the new game Cyborg bought that evening, AutoRacer 202 X-TREME. Cyborg nearly stopped to see Beastboy's reaction to Robin's question. Beastboy looked annoyed, but then had the expression that the question did nothing to even make him think.
"I have no idea what you're talin' about," Beastboy announced as he tried to make a swift trick move to slide in past Cyborg's Auto Racer.
"I think Robin means about you being jealous of Aqualad and going all nutso with Raven and-"Cyborg was going on.
"Alright," Beastboy interrupted him with a pained expression on his face. "I get it."
"Well, are you?"Robin asked.
"Only if she does, because she also messed up and all, and she has to apologize to me first if she wants me to apologize!" Beastboy yelled out, forgetting to beat Cyborg or Robin. Then he sat down and got even more annoyed at the fact he lost at the game.
"Arghh!" Beastboy cried out in fustration and was trying to leave the room. Unfortunately, he was oushed down to the floor by Starfire.
"That's it! I bet if I was Aqualad, people wouldn't keep putting me down to the floor! Now if you guys wouldn't mind-"
"Beastboy! Forgive me, I am truly sorry! I was not able to see you!" Starfire apologized.
"Well, I am just in a very ba-hey, who's that?" Beastboy's tone changed from anger to curiousity.
Robin and Cyborg abondoned their game and saw Starfire with a pale skinny girls in her arms.
"Please, can someone assist me?" Starfire pleaded, her green eyes turning glossy.
"Here," Cyborg took away the girl from the arms of the Tamaranian girl. He carefully placed the unknown girl on the couch.
"Star, where did you find her?" Robin asked his upset girlfriend(a/n:almost as weird as saying the word boyfriend, but not as much). He looked over to the stranger who was obviously unconscious. A doubtful look crossed his blue eyes, that were currently unmasked.
"I was visiting the cemetary and I heard a strange voice. Then I spotted her, she seemed very, very..."Starfire's voice cracked.
"Yes?" Robin asked her to continue. Starfire just shook her head and started to cry. Robin turned back to look at Cyborg and Beastboy, who were looking confused. Robin nodded his head to the direction of the door, and the two Titans received the message and left the distressed couple. Robin knelt down to Starfire's level and placed his hand on her shoulder, in hopes of slightkly comforting her.
"Shh, it's okay," Robin tried to soothe her. He then placed both arms around her.
"I just..." Starfire was trying to speak in between sobs, her voice higher than usual from all the crying. "I just, she was all, how could someone from a wonderful planet do this to a young girl?"
"I don't know, Star," Robin tried to answer her.
"She seemed so...so, so hurt, I could almost feel her pain,"Stafire hugged herself, almost as if she were shivering from the cold.
"Do you even know who she is?"
"No, but...but, I needed to h-he-help her!"
"Why did she need help?"
"She was sobbing, and asking to be away from a person, she didn't want to go back," Starfire explained.
"But Star, we can't just take in strangers," Robin tried to tell her, but all of a sudden she became defensive.
"You took me in when I needed help! And you didn't even know who I was, or where I was from!" Starfire pushed away Robin's arms and stood up (by the way, i dont know for sure how Star and Robin met, but I'm basing this bit on a fic I made, if you're interested in reading, check my profile ^-^). She couldn't believe it. Robin was supposed to be able to understand her.
"Yeah, but that was different," Robin stood up as well.
"How?" Starfire asked him.
"I knew you needed help, and I trusted that you weren't a villian, but we don't knw who this girl is."
"Well, Robin, I trust her, and she needs my help. If you say you trust me, then trust the girl," Starfire looked back at the girl who was breathing shallowly.
Robin sighed and looked up at the ceiling. He knew that he couldn't win this arguement, no matter what he said. He knew that Starfrie had a point, and she seemed passionate on helping this new girl.
"Alright, she can stay, if you want her to," he finally said.
Starfire's glossy red eyes suddenly brightened and beamed at him. Robin's doubts washed away for that moment when she smiled at him.
"Thank you, Robin," she went up to him and kissed him on the cheek.
"Yeah, no problem," Robin smiled sheepshily. "But Star, why are you so into helping her?"
Starfire looked at him with a confused look. "Into helping? How am I 'into'?"
"Oh, no, how come you are passionate on helping her?" Robin forgot about Starfire not knowing a bit of the Earth slang.
Starfire hust looked at the girl lying on the sofa, then back at Robin.
"I promised her."
Robin nodded his head, showing that he understood.
"Ahhh! Where am I? Please, somebody please help me!" the girl woke up with such sudden surprise, Robin and Starfire jumped. The girl's eyes were wide open, and she started to take sharp breaths.
"No, please, don't panic, it's me," Starfire went up to her, hoping to calm her down.
The girl must've have recognized Starfire, because she stopped screaming. Instead she looked over at Robin suspiciously. Robin eturned the look.
"Who is he?" the girl no longer had a scared tone, but instead had a hint of anger and suspicion.
"He is a friend," Starfire explained. The girl still wouldn't give Robin a friendly gaze.
"I don't trust him," the girl said bluntly. Robin made a noise that was a cross between a scoff and a snicker. He muttered something under his breath, but Starfire was only able to catch the word, 'too'.
"He is very good, he's my, my boyfriend," Starfire and Robin both blushed. "And he once helped me when no one else would."
"He looks too much like..." but the girl just stopped herself from answering.
"My name is Starfire," Starfire decided to fill in the awkward silence."What is your name?"
"I am Callisto," the girl responded in a friendlier tone towards Starfire. "Callisto Bouvier."
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okay, sorry for the long update! pleez review!
~Celi
now this chap is dedicated to...
~Silhouetted Shadow-thank you for your review, I'm glad you liked Heartbreaks, and I hope you also like this one!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~moezy-chan-thank you so much for your support and review, im glad you still like the suspense from my writting, thank you so much!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~kb-thank you for your review, I hope I still keep you in suspense*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~Laserai-wow, wow, i just have to say wow!Thank you, that is touching.WOW! I am speechless, wow! thank you so much, that is so...wow! I'm very touched and I'm still at lost for words. Thank you, that was real sweet!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~ Flying Star *TLTSI*-thank you so much! I'm glad that you think im a good writer, thank you so much! i really appreciate that even after hearbreaks, you still read my fics, thank you!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~writer of love 17-thank you so much for reviewing! im really glad that you look foward to my fic, thank you!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~Sanity-Stealing-Lawn-Gnome-thank you so much for reviewing! im glad you like this fic, cause, i had my doubts, thank you so much!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~Darkfire-thank you for the roses, they're so pretty! thank you so much, i wanted to include more of BB and Raven in this fic, thank you. Now here are some roses in my fav colors!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~chibi-naiome-good to know your still into my fic! thank you so much! im glad your still here for each chapter i put up! thank you!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~Star Light-lol! thanks, I wnated some BBRAV scene and i felt that was the perfect way to start off the second chapter! Thank you, im glad you feel that way about this fic!oh, and brothers are real annoying! they woke me up at 6am!!! SIX AM!!!i felt like screaming and im not a morning person so.....yeah, im getting off topic, sorry.*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~Sakura of the Ninjitsu-thank you for reviewing!Im glad you enjoyed Heartbreaks, and Im extremely glad you like this story. it sounds like her,(if i think i know who your thinking......did that make sense)but its a whole new character!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~skyhopper-thank you for your review, im glad you enjoyed the story!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~mi/ri-LOL LOL LOLOMG! u guys are freakin hilarious! thank you that review, im still crackin up!thank you so much!*sends you both blue and yellow roses*
~~*Starlight*~-thank you for reviewing, im glad you enjoy my fics that much, and i luv your reviews, they are very sweet and encouraging, thank you!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
~aquatmarine -thank you so much!hope you enjoy this chapter!*sends you blue and yellow roses*
okey-dokey, sorry for the long-mumbo update, but here's the thrid chappie, please dont hurt me!
New Identity
Promises
"Don't worry, I will assist you!" Starfire told the girl nervously, hoping she wouldn't flee.
"You will..y-you will h-help?" the girl cried, a hint of hope dashed on her pale face. Her blue eyes were slowly gaining back focus as they stared at Starfire.
"Of course, but you must follow me," Starfire said gently.
"Don't take me back! Pl-pl-please!"the girl broke into sobs.
"Who is this...this person you need assistance from? Starfire asked the distressed girl as she was slowly approaching her with caution.
"Just helkp me please," the girl whispered when Starfire was close enough to see the girl had a butterfly shaped bithmark on the corner of her right eye.
"I will, I promise," Starfire whispered back.
The girl collasped in her arms.
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"So, you gonna apologize to Raven?" Robin asked Beasstboy while they were playing the new game Cyborg bought that evening, AutoRacer 202 X-TREME. Cyborg nearly stopped to see Beastboy's reaction to Robin's question. Beastboy looked annoyed, but then had the expression that the question did nothing to even make him think.
"I have no idea what you're talin' about," Beastboy announced as he tried to make a swift trick move to slide in past Cyborg's Auto Racer.
"I think Robin means about you being jealous of Aqualad and going all nutso with Raven and-"Cyborg was going on.
"Alright," Beastboy interrupted him with a pained expression on his face. "I get it."
"Well, are you?"Robin asked.
"Only if she does, because she also messed up and all, and she has to apologize to me first if she wants me to apologize!" Beastboy yelled out, forgetting to beat Cyborg or Robin. Then he sat down and got even more annoyed at the fact he lost at the game.
"Arghh!" Beastboy cried out in fustration and was trying to leave the room. Unfortunately, he was oushed down to the floor by Starfire.
"That's it! I bet if I was Aqualad, people wouldn't keep putting me down to the floor! Now if you guys wouldn't mind-"
"Beastboy! Forgive me, I am truly sorry! I was not able to see you!" Starfire apologized.
"Well, I am just in a very ba-hey, who's that?" Beastboy's tone changed from anger to curiousity.
Robin and Cyborg abondoned their game and saw Starfire with a pale skinny girls in her arms.
"Please, can someone assist me?" Starfire pleaded, her green eyes turning glossy.
"Here," Cyborg took away the girl from the arms of the Tamaranian girl. He carefully placed the unknown girl on the couch.
"Star, where did you find her?" Robin asked his upset girlfriend(a/n:almost as weird as saying the word boyfriend, but not as much). He looked over to the stranger who was obviously unconscious. A doubtful look crossed his blue eyes, that were currently unmasked.
"I was visiting the cemetary and I heard a strange voice. Then I spotted her, she seemed very, very..."Starfire's voice cracked.
"Yes?" Robin asked her to continue. Starfire just shook her head and started to cry. Robin turned back to look at Cyborg and Beastboy, who were looking confused. Robin nodded his head to the direction of the door, and the two Titans received the message and left the distressed couple. Robin knelt down to Starfire's level and placed his hand on her shoulder, in hopes of slightkly comforting her.
"Shh, it's okay," Robin tried to soothe her. He then placed both arms around her.
"I just..." Starfire was trying to speak in between sobs, her voice higher than usual from all the crying. "I just, she was all, how could someone from a wonderful planet do this to a young girl?"
"I don't know, Star," Robin tried to answer her.
"She seemed so...so, so hurt, I could almost feel her pain,"Stafire hugged herself, almost as if she were shivering from the cold.
"Do you even know who she is?"
"No, but...but, I needed to h-he-help her!"
"Why did she need help?"
"She was sobbing, and asking to be away from a person, she didn't want to go back," Starfire explained.
"But Star, we can't just take in strangers," Robin tried to tell her, but all of a sudden she became defensive.
"You took me in when I needed help! And you didn't even know who I was, or where I was from!" Starfire pushed away Robin's arms and stood up (by the way, i dont know for sure how Star and Robin met, but I'm basing this bit on a fic I made, if you're interested in reading, check my profile ^-^). She couldn't believe it. Robin was supposed to be able to understand her.
"Yeah, but that was different," Robin stood up as well.
"How?" Starfire asked him.
"I knew you needed help, and I trusted that you weren't a villian, but we don't knw who this girl is."
"Well, Robin, I trust her, and she needs my help. If you say you trust me, then trust the girl," Starfire looked back at the girl who was breathing shallowly.
Robin sighed and looked up at the ceiling. He knew that he couldn't win this arguement, no matter what he said. He knew that Starfrie had a point, and she seemed passionate on helping this new girl.
"Alright, she can stay, if you want her to," he finally said.
Starfire's glossy red eyes suddenly brightened and beamed at him. Robin's doubts washed away for that moment when she smiled at him.
"Thank you, Robin," she went up to him and kissed him on the cheek.
"Yeah, no problem," Robin smiled sheepshily. "But Star, why are you so into helping her?"
Starfire looked at him with a confused look. "Into helping? How am I 'into'?"
"Oh, no, how come you are passionate on helping her?" Robin forgot about Starfire not knowing a bit of the Earth slang.
Starfire hust looked at the girl lying on the sofa, then back at Robin.
"I promised her."
Robin nodded his head, showing that he understood.
"Ahhh! Where am I? Please, somebody please help me!" the girl woke up with such sudden surprise, Robin and Starfire jumped. The girl's eyes were wide open, and she started to take sharp breaths.
"No, please, don't panic, it's me," Starfire went up to her, hoping to calm her down.
The girl must've have recognized Starfire, because she stopped screaming. Instead she looked over at Robin suspiciously. Robin eturned the look.
"Who is he?" the girl no longer had a scared tone, but instead had a hint of anger and suspicion.
"He is a friend," Starfire explained. The girl still wouldn't give Robin a friendly gaze.
"I don't trust him," the girl said bluntly. Robin made a noise that was a cross between a scoff and a snicker. He muttered something under his breath, but Starfire was only able to catch the word, 'too'.
"He is very good, he's my, my boyfriend," Starfire and Robin both blushed. "And he once helped me when no one else would."
"He looks too much like..." but the girl just stopped herself from answering.
"My name is Starfire," Starfire decided to fill in the awkward silence."What is your name?"
"I am Callisto," the girl responded in a friendlier tone towards Starfire. "Callisto Bouvier."
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okay, sorry for the long update! pleez review!
~Celi
