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Lenora and Ryan tumbled down the fire escape as fast as possible. They had no clue where in New York City they were, if they were in NYC at all. They made their way to a main street and darted into one of the shops. It was a small shop that sold bowler hats. "I know where we are!" Ryan practically shouted, "We're in Brooklyn. If we go a couple of blocks north, we'll get to the Brooklyn DO". A wave of relief washed over Sunshine. "Let's go" she said and they left the small shop, "We need to find Gabrielli, and soon. The longer he has the ring the less chance we have of getting it back." They lapsed into silence, both thinking of how to get back the ring. "Do you have any idea where we were?" Lenora asked suddenly, stopping. "I dunno. It mighta been a hotel, or newspaper office, or bank. I have no clue" "We need to find out" Sunny said adamantly "You wanna go back there?" Ryan asked, looking at Sunny as if she had sprouted a second head. "My mother didn't die so that her ring could go on Gabrielli's at finger" she said vehemently. Realizing their was no way to dissuade her, they turned around and made their way back. They took a longer route, hoping not to be noticed. They found the building they were looking for and craned their necks to see how high it went. It was maybe 8 or 10 stories high, and as ornate on the outside as it was on the inside. "Should we go around front and knock?" Ryan said, a bit sarcastically. Lenora shot him a dirty look. "We need to get in without being noticed." She said to herself, pondering this latest task. She looked at the gaudy trim on the windows and a smile spread across her face. "Fee like doing a little climbing?" she asked sweetly. She explained her plan to Ryan. It was suicidal, at best, but it was their only hope. Lenora grabbed the molding on the nearest window and, with Ryan's help, hoisted herself onto the ledge. Her feet found their gripping and she steadied herself. Ryan did the same. Sunny made a grab for the top part of the window, but failed. She tried again and caught it with her fingertips. She readjusted her handhold and hauled her body up. They did this until they were on the fifth floor. Ryan noticed an open window two over, and soon the pair were inside and ornate office. "Jackpot!" Lenora whispered. Ito was Gabrielli's office. The pair looked over the filed on his desk and ascertained that it was a hotel they were in. The letterhead read "Waldorf" on the top (a/n: I know, I know, just shoot me ;) ). They tore the office apart, looking for anything that might be of use. They found a silver plated 9mm Glock pistol in the bottom drawer. Lenora tucked this into her pants and pulled her shirt over it. She also found two more clips (a/n: did they even have glocks with clips back then?) and put them into her pocket. Ryan found a whole file on the ring, complete with a history of it and all of its owners. Ryan folded this in half and tucked the wad into his pocket. They spent a good fifteen minutes in the office before they heard sounds. Ryan swore softly as he looked for a place to hide. They settled for the armoire (a/n: corny and cliché, I know!). Just as the latch clicked on the closet, the door opened. ". finally got the ring" came a voice, heavy with a Sicilian accent. "Congratulations" came the second voice. Something clicked in Lenora's head. She recognized that voice, but from where?? "I couldn't have gotten it without you, you have the ever lasting support of the Gabrielli family" came the first voice, obviously belonging to Mr. Gabrielli, "as well as the ten thousand dollars I promised". There was the sound of something being put onto the large oak table, and the small click of two locks as they were opened. There was a scraping as the briefcase was turned around. "As always, a pleasure doing business with you, Mr. Gabrielli. If you need anything else, don't hesitate to call" the sickening realization hit Lenora full on. "I will, Morris. You were always a good kid. Give my regards to your dear mother for me, okay?" The person talking to Gabrielli was Mikey!( The same Mikey that had worked for her father!) Gabrielli might not call him that, but it *was* him, Lenora would recognize that voice anywhere. "Goodbye, and thank you" the briefcase was closed and Morris left, closing the door behind him. Fuming, Lenora grabbed the pistol from her belt and came out of the closet. She cocked the gun as she pointed it at Gabrielli's head. "What the-?" came the man's confused voice. Lenora moved so that she was facing him. The years of lonliness came flooding back to her, as did the memories. When all the other girls were learning noe to curl their hair and wear makeup, she was learning how to "improve headlines". She knew more aboy the paper business than she did about being a girl. He had robbed her of a mother, then he had taken the thing her mother had loved most (other than her daughter) "Give me the ring" came her low growl. She saw Gabrielli reach down to the bottom drawer, "I'm surprised that you don't recognize your own gun" she said coolly. "I'll say it one more time: Give me the ring" The old Sicilian took the ring off his finger and held it out. Ryan grabbed it and put it on. "Why?" Lenora asked, "Why is this ring so important to you?" This took the old man by surprise. "It's beautiful," he said honestly "That's it?" Lenora said incredulously, "The reason you killed my mother is because 'its beautiful'?" Gabrielli looked confusedly at the girl standing before him, who had his own pistol aimed at his head. "I never killed anyone for that ring. I bought it from the nephew of my cousin's wife." "Mikey?" "Who is Mikey? I bought it from a man named Morris Delancy"