AN: It seems I have a fan!!! This is A LOT better than a review. You go Niki. You have the right to feel appreciated and special because you are. You were my first review! Therefore, you receive special treatment. You have the protection of Boo... "Why not you?" You ask. Well... I can't fight well twiddles fingers and I don't have very good teeth. ... starts to whisper I'm kind of a wussy. But, that is besides the point. Boo will protect those that read and review. Just whistle and he will come and save you. Oh, yeah. . .. I DON'T OWN KH. IF I DID, THOUGH, I WOULD MAKE IT ALL ABOUT RIKU. smiles dreamily NOTHING ABOUT THE OTHER CHARACTERS! Ahem. Here's the rest..... Oh, and I am not an Englash expert (I got a B in my last english class, when I got only A's up until this class....the teacher didn't like me. I can understand the math, but.... oops, I'm babbling). If you find any errors or anything of the sort... I try. That's all that matters, so don't bother correcting me. I hate people correcting me. So, if you correct me... I send Boo. BWAHAHAHAHA!
I keep forgetting things: blah, blah, blah Those arrow marks (doesn't know what they are called... me englash illiterate) indicate thoughts or sometimes feelings (I guess).
To you Niki holds up a shot of rum, even though she isn't of age :
sigh I feel appreciated. And special. I liked the chapter. It was very well done. And Riku's armor sounded cool. Keep writing.-niki :)
Chapter 3
Visions
"I can't let anyone else interfere..." I whispered in my sleep. It was dawn. I put out both hands to find the ground still below me even though it didn't feel like it. I pushed myself up onto my elbows, next my whole body, soon I was standing. Swaying, I looked around. Everything was out of focus and the next moment clear. The world was spinning with flashes of light. It seemed as if some drug was taking over my brain. Holding my hand to my head, I made my way quietly through my mother's room to the bathroom. Closing the door, I leaned upon the sink and looked into the medicine cabinet's mirror. To my horror, I found some weird person and it was me! My eyes were black and blue, there were bruises on my cheeks, and the dried blood was caked on my lips and nose. Unreal and distorted it seemed. Pulling up my shirt, I found welts so black that you would have figured I was African. I gasped when I saw my hand, which was still bleeding steadily from a bone deep cut. The light spun behind me. Gasping, I fell to the floor and tried to breathe before I puked over and over into the toilet. My thoughts wandered over to escape as I sat rocking on the hard linoleum floor.
Getting up rather steadily, using the sink and toilet for support, I walked into my mother's room grabbed the scarf and sunglasses from atop her dresser. I fell over twice trying to reach my sister's and my dresser. Frantically, I fumbled through the clothes. She was never this bad! I started to sob but found the breathing hard. The fact that I might need to be conscious to pull this off, kept me going. I grabbed one of my cheap hoodies, and pulled it over my head.
I want to go to the ocean. Yes, that is where I will go. Maybe she won't find me there. Some how I made it down the stairs and onto the sidewalk. People eyed me funny while I staggered along the streets with a scarf, hoodie, and sunglasses on.
"It was almost the end of summer! Why is she wearing that?" I could hear them mutter. People nudged each other as I made my way down the streets onto a bus.
I sat in the seat nearly losing consciousness twice. Its funny how things can happen just like that. The bus stopped. It was the beach. I got off, ignoring the concerned look of a elderly Asian woman from across me. I walked a few paces before I suddenly grew tired. I looked a my pant leg and there was blood fresh upon the fabric. I sighed and thought of what mom would do to me when I got home. For now I just want to have peace. To help people. Heck! How can I do that when I can't even help myself?
"Simple and Clean is the way,
That your making me feeeel tonight.
It's hard to let it gooooo,"--- (C) OF SQUARESOFT (BEFORE IT BECAME SQUARE-ENIX) AND UTADA HIKARU --- I groggily sang, while practically crawling to the water. I sat right at the edge and let the water soak my lower half, as I looked up into the sun. Flashes of black filled my vision, a ship flew in the sky towards a weird looking star. Standing up, I tried to look closer. I still couldn't see. Why couldn't I see???? The world spun. The dark waves said something about Heartless returning. The previous bird chirped at me in my head. Laughing, I let the waves become bigger and bigger. I dropped into darkness.
I felt something sucking me, pulling me. Nothing mattered now. Why is it sooooo cold??? There were black shapes now around me with yellow eyes. An authoritative voice said something to them in the blackness. They advanced on me slowly. I turned around looking for assistance. None was there. Suddenly, it was white and the darkness disappeared. My heart filled with peace and hope. I smiled as closed my eyes, safe for once in my life.
"Sleep. This universe needs your help, wielder. I will aid you on your way."
"Dad?" I whispered. It sounded like him. WHY DID IT SOUND LIKE HIM?! I had visions of my smiling, black-haired, dark-eyed father. He was singing something and smiling to me. I felt a tear drop, as I pictured his large arms engulfing me in a hug.
"I will always protect you..." He said.
I then remembered why he left. He went into the army to fight in WWIII and he never returned. That is when all went wrong. Suddenly, fear overcame me as I realized that he would leave me again.
"Don't leave me, dad!"
Riku was aboard the ship and off before he knew it. Mickey looked at Minnie.
"How did you get out?"
"I am glad that Riku didn't ask," he sighed deeply and turned towards Minnie. Grabbing her hands he said, "a girl from a VERY distant world helped us. She wanted us out so bad that she had a gate open in there. I found the gate and we got out. Nothing more to it.. though, I feel that there is SO much more to it... Riku didn't mention it before, but... he has a wing that he hid from me. A mark from the pact with darkness he had made and broken. Now, that girl is a substitute for the missing keyblade master. She will come shortly," he said in a rush while his eyes stared up and out into the garden into the heavens.
"She is the epitome of goodness herself. I hope to meet her. An angel of light, she will liberate the other worlds from their own darkness. I wish her well on her journey."
Minnie knew not to interrupt, so she just kept quiet. She knew what her husband's ability did, and it hurt him when he had to see things he didn't want to. His visions just came out of nowhere no matter where or who or what. The bad ones came more often than not, unfortunately, unlike the good ones.
'There is more to this girl, because why did a grimace cross his features? Has she suffered?' Minnie thought absently. Shrugging, she just hugged him glad that he was back. She rested her head against his chest as his arms encircled her.
AN: Gonna go watch new Inu-yasha. Review. Enough said.
I keep forgetting things: blah, blah, blah Those arrow marks (doesn't know what they are called... me englash illiterate) indicate thoughts or sometimes feelings (I guess).
To you Niki holds up a shot of rum, even though she isn't of age :
sigh I feel appreciated. And special. I liked the chapter. It was very well done. And Riku's armor sounded cool. Keep writing.-niki :)
Chapter 3
Visions
"I can't let anyone else interfere..." I whispered in my sleep. It was dawn. I put out both hands to find the ground still below me even though it didn't feel like it. I pushed myself up onto my elbows, next my whole body, soon I was standing. Swaying, I looked around. Everything was out of focus and the next moment clear. The world was spinning with flashes of light. It seemed as if some drug was taking over my brain. Holding my hand to my head, I made my way quietly through my mother's room to the bathroom. Closing the door, I leaned upon the sink and looked into the medicine cabinet's mirror. To my horror, I found some weird person and it was me! My eyes were black and blue, there were bruises on my cheeks, and the dried blood was caked on my lips and nose. Unreal and distorted it seemed. Pulling up my shirt, I found welts so black that you would have figured I was African. I gasped when I saw my hand, which was still bleeding steadily from a bone deep cut. The light spun behind me. Gasping, I fell to the floor and tried to breathe before I puked over and over into the toilet. My thoughts wandered over to escape as I sat rocking on the hard linoleum floor.
Getting up rather steadily, using the sink and toilet for support, I walked into my mother's room grabbed the scarf and sunglasses from atop her dresser. I fell over twice trying to reach my sister's and my dresser. Frantically, I fumbled through the clothes. She was never this bad! I started to sob but found the breathing hard. The fact that I might need to be conscious to pull this off, kept me going. I grabbed one of my cheap hoodies, and pulled it over my head.
I want to go to the ocean. Yes, that is where I will go. Maybe she won't find me there. Some how I made it down the stairs and onto the sidewalk. People eyed me funny while I staggered along the streets with a scarf, hoodie, and sunglasses on.
"It was almost the end of summer! Why is she wearing that?" I could hear them mutter. People nudged each other as I made my way down the streets onto a bus.
I sat in the seat nearly losing consciousness twice. Its funny how things can happen just like that. The bus stopped. It was the beach. I got off, ignoring the concerned look of a elderly Asian woman from across me. I walked a few paces before I suddenly grew tired. I looked a my pant leg and there was blood fresh upon the fabric. I sighed and thought of what mom would do to me when I got home. For now I just want to have peace. To help people. Heck! How can I do that when I can't even help myself?
"Simple and Clean is the way,
That your making me feeeel tonight.
It's hard to let it gooooo,"--- (C) OF SQUARESOFT (BEFORE IT BECAME SQUARE-ENIX) AND UTADA HIKARU --- I groggily sang, while practically crawling to the water. I sat right at the edge and let the water soak my lower half, as I looked up into the sun. Flashes of black filled my vision, a ship flew in the sky towards a weird looking star. Standing up, I tried to look closer. I still couldn't see. Why couldn't I see???? The world spun. The dark waves said something about Heartless returning. The previous bird chirped at me in my head. Laughing, I let the waves become bigger and bigger. I dropped into darkness.
I felt something sucking me, pulling me. Nothing mattered now. Why is it sooooo cold??? There were black shapes now around me with yellow eyes. An authoritative voice said something to them in the blackness. They advanced on me slowly. I turned around looking for assistance. None was there. Suddenly, it was white and the darkness disappeared. My heart filled with peace and hope. I smiled as closed my eyes, safe for once in my life.
"Sleep. This universe needs your help, wielder. I will aid you on your way."
"Dad?" I whispered. It sounded like him. WHY DID IT SOUND LIKE HIM?! I had visions of my smiling, black-haired, dark-eyed father. He was singing something and smiling to me. I felt a tear drop, as I pictured his large arms engulfing me in a hug.
"I will always protect you..." He said.
I then remembered why he left. He went into the army to fight in WWIII and he never returned. That is when all went wrong. Suddenly, fear overcame me as I realized that he would leave me again.
"Don't leave me, dad!"
Riku was aboard the ship and off before he knew it. Mickey looked at Minnie.
"How did you get out?"
"I am glad that Riku didn't ask," he sighed deeply and turned towards Minnie. Grabbing her hands he said, "a girl from a VERY distant world helped us. She wanted us out so bad that she had a gate open in there. I found the gate and we got out. Nothing more to it.. though, I feel that there is SO much more to it... Riku didn't mention it before, but... he has a wing that he hid from me. A mark from the pact with darkness he had made and broken. Now, that girl is a substitute for the missing keyblade master. She will come shortly," he said in a rush while his eyes stared up and out into the garden into the heavens.
"She is the epitome of goodness herself. I hope to meet her. An angel of light, she will liberate the other worlds from their own darkness. I wish her well on her journey."
Minnie knew not to interrupt, so she just kept quiet. She knew what her husband's ability did, and it hurt him when he had to see things he didn't want to. His visions just came out of nowhere no matter where or who or what. The bad ones came more often than not, unfortunately, unlike the good ones.
'There is more to this girl, because why did a grimace cross his features? Has she suffered?' Minnie thought absently. Shrugging, she just hugged him glad that he was back. She rested her head against his chest as his arms encircled her.
AN: Gonna go watch new Inu-yasha. Review. Enough said.
