AN: More reviews. I like reviews. I don't own KH or Riku or any other chars connecting to KH or Disney. But, I will someday! Bwahahahahahahahaa!
----0000----The following review has been submitted to: Embracing Hearts Chapter: 10 From: Chirea(AKA)Kinko ()Nice chap! Dat was funny.. She's alittle bother to riku..thats funny..well i cant say he doesn't deserve it. Well nice chap, now allow me to read the next chapter.kinko
----0000----The following reviews have been submitted to: Embracing Hearts Chapter: 11 From: Chirea(AKA)Kinko Hahahaha Tessa is alittle whinner. POor riku.hes a little freak, and hes also jealous (thats funny and sad) cant wait til the next..Good job!KInko From: zygh Its good...real good...ok just a question and a idea(your lucky since I have very few "ideas") Q. At the end did she take Riku spot?now the idea...you should kinda maybe remove the the Authors note chapter...maybe...just an that your back from the festival and your little vacation thing...
AN: Thank you, Kinko. That's all I can say. I am at a loss for words at your praise. You get free cookies and you still have Boo as your protector. Now, there is another reviewer that gets Boo's protection! BTW. I don't own Boo really. Bioware owns him. Okay, now to Zygh. For your question:
A. No, she didn't take his spot. Umm, lemme find an excerpt. --- "....I sat, disappointed, at the seat right beside his.....(then).. I sat down in my vacated seat, and saw a planet approaching...." I hope that answers your question, unless I misunderstood it. I tend to do that.
For the idear, now. That is a good idea. I probably would have left it up till I died. When I update this. I will take it down. Thank you all!
"God Bless, everyone."-- as Timothy would say. (I think it was him...argh. I have the worst memory ever created.)
NOTE: THIS WORLD WAS SUPPOSEDLY 'DESTROYED' BUT IN ALL ACTUALITY, IT WASN'T. CONFUSED? WELL, I DECIDED THAT IT WAS TOO GOOD OF A WORLD TO BE DESTROYED, AND I HATE IT WHEN THEY JUST GET RID OF DISNEY WORLDS WITHOUT MY PERMISSION (DARN YOU KH FOR THAT). I LOVE DISNEY TOO MUCH. SNIFF
Chapter 11
China
The planet seemed small from a distant but as we enclosed upon it, I realized that things aren't always what they seem. From a distance, you could see a wall stretching all around the world. It seemed like a barrier. There were simple buildings askewed upon the surface. The houses weren't located on the mountains, but before them on the plains. There were valleys and rivers flowing through a ethereal landscape. Only one word could describe this: beautiful.
"Where are we?"
"Hmmm. I am not sure. Let's check the navigator."
"Yeah, yeah," I ran to the exit after we had just barely landed. A green field with bamboo trees awaited me. I had never seen bamboo up close before. I walked out of the ship to follow along a rugged path for a while. It was obviously an old trail, but it seemed new. It wasn't overgrown with weeds, but was clean cut. I knelt down near the path by some dandelions. Assessing the bamboo trees and scenery, I calculated that this was an area near or in China. But wouldn't that mean that my town was here too? We had a China in our world, but this one doesn't seem like the China I grew up with. It was more... backward. There were no cars, or cities. Just simple villages, from what I could see. This was China, but not the real China.
Closing my eyes, I shut out my confusing thoughts. I held a dandelion before my face, made a wish, and blew with one breath until all seeds were gone. I watched then waft into the air to find a place to nest then grow. I sighed in elation because I had never seen such a beautiful sight in my whole life. Except for my new born baby sisters- ignoring the gruesome details of birth.
The grass was soft underneath my knees and the sun was warm. Nothing could be this perfect. The mountains were covered with fog, but you could still see their proud peaks piercing through like swordpoints. Looking at the mountains, I noticed twin peaks. They were joined near the top, but separate enough to be their own mountain. Suddenly, I thought of my girls. Their mischievous smiles, bright green eyes, and red hair. They were too alike, but one had a birthmark in the shape of a heart on her neck. They were such cute little babies. I practically raised them on my own. I watched them grow into the girls they are today, unlike our real mother. In a way, they were 'my' children.
A bird chirped interrupting my thoughts. Shaking my head, I stood up slowly to still gather in the sights. Someone cleared their throat behind me. Whirling around, I found Riku standing there awkwardly.
"Well, I found out where we are. After I had to look where you were taking off to, I might add," I noticed the hint of irritation in his voice. "I found that we are in some world called, China."
"Oh, yeah. I kind of figured that." I dusted off my pant legs and added, "I couldn't help myself from wandering off. After all, it IS pretty here."
"Not for long. I guess there is an army to the north."
"Really? Well, let's go see. Maybe we can find some more accessories or hidden treasures."
"I guess, but I was thinking that this would be a good place to train you for a while. It seems to have many open areas, so we don't have to worry about anyone getting injured."
"Are you mocking me, sir?" I asked mischievously.
"If you think- Oof." I tried to hit him with my keyblade, but he apparently anticipated the attack. Using one hand, he caught it a couple of inches from his chest. If he didn't catch it, I probably would have tried to stop it before it cleaved him in half. That is why I could never be a good warrior. I would be afraid of actually hurting a person and I would never follow through. A breeze whispered through the trees carrying a melody of their own.
"Nice, but you need to get a better stance, and don't hesitate. I can take care of myself."
"How do I know what a good stance is? Oh, wait. Lemme try." I shifted into a awkward position of my arms out straight in front and my legs even with each other. "How about this one? I think this one is fine."
"Hmmm. Well, I guess I will have to teach you the right way," my legs were suddenly up in the air and my back hit the ground with such a force that made me lose my breath. The air wasn't coming into my lungs. I failed to breathe for several seconds. Finally, I gasped like a fish back in water after a short trip into air. Still, I had trouble evening out my breaths.
"I-can't-breathe," I stated through gasps. Riku looked down at me with amusement. "You just lost your breath for a moment," he smiled. "All right, come on. One, two, three, breathe."
"Fuck-you," I said between gasps. How could he know that I was prone to hyperventilate? Even if he didn't know that, he was still to blame. Riku looked down at me confused.
"What does that mean?" Widening my eyes, I finally maintained a semi-control of breath and slowly said, "it means..... Ah, nevermind."
"Why do you use that expression so much? What does it mean?" He was sincere. He probably guessed that it was an insult, but still its meaning eluded him. He was innocent in a lot of ways, but then.. not. After all, Riku DID know how to kill someone.....
----0000----The following review has been submitted to: Embracing Hearts Chapter: 10 From: Chirea(AKA)Kinko ()Nice chap! Dat was funny.. She's alittle bother to riku..thats funny..well i cant say he doesn't deserve it. Well nice chap, now allow me to read the next chapter.kinko
----0000----The following reviews have been submitted to: Embracing Hearts Chapter: 11 From: Chirea(AKA)Kinko Hahahaha Tessa is alittle whinner. POor riku.hes a little freak, and hes also jealous (thats funny and sad) cant wait til the next..Good job!KInko From: zygh Its good...real good...ok just a question and a idea(your lucky since I have very few "ideas") Q. At the end did she take Riku spot?now the idea...you should kinda maybe remove the the Authors note chapter...maybe...just an that your back from the festival and your little vacation thing...
AN: Thank you, Kinko. That's all I can say. I am at a loss for words at your praise. You get free cookies and you still have Boo as your protector. Now, there is another reviewer that gets Boo's protection! BTW. I don't own Boo really. Bioware owns him. Okay, now to Zygh. For your question:
A. No, she didn't take his spot. Umm, lemme find an excerpt. --- "....I sat, disappointed, at the seat right beside his.....(then).. I sat down in my vacated seat, and saw a planet approaching...." I hope that answers your question, unless I misunderstood it. I tend to do that.
For the idear, now. That is a good idea. I probably would have left it up till I died. When I update this. I will take it down. Thank you all!
"God Bless, everyone."-- as Timothy would say. (I think it was him...argh. I have the worst memory ever created.)
NOTE: THIS WORLD WAS SUPPOSEDLY 'DESTROYED' BUT IN ALL ACTUALITY, IT WASN'T. CONFUSED? WELL, I DECIDED THAT IT WAS TOO GOOD OF A WORLD TO BE DESTROYED, AND I HATE IT WHEN THEY JUST GET RID OF DISNEY WORLDS WITHOUT MY PERMISSION (DARN YOU KH FOR THAT). I LOVE DISNEY TOO MUCH. SNIFF
Chapter 11
China
The planet seemed small from a distant but as we enclosed upon it, I realized that things aren't always what they seem. From a distance, you could see a wall stretching all around the world. It seemed like a barrier. There were simple buildings askewed upon the surface. The houses weren't located on the mountains, but before them on the plains. There were valleys and rivers flowing through a ethereal landscape. Only one word could describe this: beautiful.
"Where are we?"
"Hmmm. I am not sure. Let's check the navigator."
"Yeah, yeah," I ran to the exit after we had just barely landed. A green field with bamboo trees awaited me. I had never seen bamboo up close before. I walked out of the ship to follow along a rugged path for a while. It was obviously an old trail, but it seemed new. It wasn't overgrown with weeds, but was clean cut. I knelt down near the path by some dandelions. Assessing the bamboo trees and scenery, I calculated that this was an area near or in China. But wouldn't that mean that my town was here too? We had a China in our world, but this one doesn't seem like the China I grew up with. It was more... backward. There were no cars, or cities. Just simple villages, from what I could see. This was China, but not the real China.
Closing my eyes, I shut out my confusing thoughts. I held a dandelion before my face, made a wish, and blew with one breath until all seeds were gone. I watched then waft into the air to find a place to nest then grow. I sighed in elation because I had never seen such a beautiful sight in my whole life. Except for my new born baby sisters- ignoring the gruesome details of birth.
The grass was soft underneath my knees and the sun was warm. Nothing could be this perfect. The mountains were covered with fog, but you could still see their proud peaks piercing through like swordpoints. Looking at the mountains, I noticed twin peaks. They were joined near the top, but separate enough to be their own mountain. Suddenly, I thought of my girls. Their mischievous smiles, bright green eyes, and red hair. They were too alike, but one had a birthmark in the shape of a heart on her neck. They were such cute little babies. I practically raised them on my own. I watched them grow into the girls they are today, unlike our real mother. In a way, they were 'my' children.
A bird chirped interrupting my thoughts. Shaking my head, I stood up slowly to still gather in the sights. Someone cleared their throat behind me. Whirling around, I found Riku standing there awkwardly.
"Well, I found out where we are. After I had to look where you were taking off to, I might add," I noticed the hint of irritation in his voice. "I found that we are in some world called, China."
"Oh, yeah. I kind of figured that." I dusted off my pant legs and added, "I couldn't help myself from wandering off. After all, it IS pretty here."
"Not for long. I guess there is an army to the north."
"Really? Well, let's go see. Maybe we can find some more accessories or hidden treasures."
"I guess, but I was thinking that this would be a good place to train you for a while. It seems to have many open areas, so we don't have to worry about anyone getting injured."
"Are you mocking me, sir?" I asked mischievously.
"If you think- Oof." I tried to hit him with my keyblade, but he apparently anticipated the attack. Using one hand, he caught it a couple of inches from his chest. If he didn't catch it, I probably would have tried to stop it before it cleaved him in half. That is why I could never be a good warrior. I would be afraid of actually hurting a person and I would never follow through. A breeze whispered through the trees carrying a melody of their own.
"Nice, but you need to get a better stance, and don't hesitate. I can take care of myself."
"How do I know what a good stance is? Oh, wait. Lemme try." I shifted into a awkward position of my arms out straight in front and my legs even with each other. "How about this one? I think this one is fine."
"Hmmm. Well, I guess I will have to teach you the right way," my legs were suddenly up in the air and my back hit the ground with such a force that made me lose my breath. The air wasn't coming into my lungs. I failed to breathe for several seconds. Finally, I gasped like a fish back in water after a short trip into air. Still, I had trouble evening out my breaths.
"I-can't-breathe," I stated through gasps. Riku looked down at me with amusement. "You just lost your breath for a moment," he smiled. "All right, come on. One, two, three, breathe."
"Fuck-you," I said between gasps. How could he know that I was prone to hyperventilate? Even if he didn't know that, he was still to blame. Riku looked down at me confused.
"What does that mean?" Widening my eyes, I finally maintained a semi-control of breath and slowly said, "it means..... Ah, nevermind."
"Why do you use that expression so much? What does it mean?" He was sincere. He probably guessed that it was an insult, but still its meaning eluded him. He was innocent in a lot of ways, but then.. not. After all, Riku DID know how to kill someone.....
