Max-lets see if this formats any better

Ivan-SURE it will

Erk-stop trying to be sarcastic --

Ivan-who said i'm trying

Isaac-now you too jus- yes no yes yes no yes

Max-umm on with the fic

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Isadora sighed as she seemed stuck. The snow around her horses feet
would not let her go far. She watched the wyvern Lord and the 3 Falco
sisters ride off. She was glad she didn't need an earth seal for she
had just become a paladin. She looked back on Harkens gift before he
left with the late Lord Elbert.

"Isadora ,I promise when I return, that we will be wed after my duties
will be fulfilled"said harken holding her hands. Isadora was worried
over him leaving but she knew he must live up to his duty. "Harken
you won't forget that promise will you?" she asked her light blue eyes
searching his own soft brown ones. "of course not,and do not forget meand here is a token to ensure it." He said this placing in her hand an
embroidered item. She gasped realizing the worth of the item he had
given to her. His lips met hers the sun quickly begining to rise from
the depths of the morning mists. They had heard marcus's harsh call forElberts gaurd to finish their preparations. The moment of breif passion fled from them as the horn blowing met their ears. Harken grabbed his pack and sword and rushed out waving to Isadora. The young Lord Eliwood waved to his father unbeknowst his father wouldn't return to his home. She clutched the Knights crest as she watched him go away.

He was only supposed to be gone two weeks , her mind thought as the snow began to slack. The strange boy with green hair suddenly called to them. "This is your chance to engage the enemy the snow is stoppinghurry forward!" She rushed onward bypassing the lady Ninian and the Lord Eliwood. As she rounded a double corner stopping suddenly enemies appearing. It was not the enemies that stopped her though. It was him.The man she had thought had been dead. "Harken?" She said her lance nearly falling from her hands. This couldn't be Harken though she thought. His soft eyes were gone now replaced by hard emotionless ones. Suddenly he came straight at her his sword raised. She had no time to pick up her lance so she unsheathed her sword trying to block and dodge Harkens four lightning fast attacks. She backed off as Oswin the general came forward.

Harken passed by a lone swordsmaster leaving from the premises he was heading toward. Harken ignored him rushing towards the fortress. As he arrived he saw a small group of soldiers he believed was the black fang and called out ", Lord Elbert I shall avenge you from the black fang scum." He headed towards a blue haired paladin paying no attention to her face , his sword seeking. suddenly a gian man swathed in armour stepped between the two them. "Sir Harken is that not you?" Harken tried to ignore him about to attack before he said "are you not a knight of pherae?" Harken stopped before saying "yes that is I ,leave me be to avenge my comrades and dead Lord."

"Harken you will be failing your duty if you die"

"I will take many with me to pave the way to fulfill me duty"

"But your Lord has need of you Lord Eliwood does!"

Harken stopped ,his head reeling.

"Lord Eliwood is here?"

Isadora was confused and angry. So it was Harken and he had attacked
her. Shake caught sight of her and called her to help Raven and Wallace in the corner battling knights,falco riders and a general because they needed to have another axe user. She rode past raven and immediately whirled her axe urging her horse forward slamming it into the opposing knight carmine hues flowing onto the weapon staining it crimson. Shake called her from the other side of the wall yelling "YES! good crit Isadora!!!" Isadora had no idea what a crit was but shake referred to them as extremely strong and struck in the right place. She didn't care as long as her anger was let out. She then proceeded to twirl her axe again speeding towards a falco knight dispatching her in the same manner. Suddely she couldn't go on any more. Then Harken came up to her.

He had realized what he had done when he had talked to Oswin about Lord Elwiood. "Harken.."said Isadora seeing him.

"Isadora.."

"What have you been up to Harken,tell me! for a month you did not

return to pherae, you sent no word.. where did you go forgetting your

duties as a knight of pherae?"

"I am sorry, it was all... the fault of my recklessness. How will I be

punished?"

Isadora was shocked she couldn't believe what she was hearing. Tears
began to flow down her face "punished? Harken do you understand at all what you have done? do you know what trouble your absence has caused pherae? Have you any idea I..... i was so worried" she said
wishing she would stop her crying wishing she didn't feel the anger or

sadness inside her. Harken on the other hand could feel guilt welling
up inside of him. He knew he was wrong in what he had done.

"Isadora..please do not cry, I cannot stand to see your beuatiful face
weep so. I.. I have given you much reason to worry"

Isadora thought damn right you have , and was about to tell him but

he obviously wasn't done.

"Please.. Please forgive me."

"No. I cannot forgive you.not after worrying so much. never."

"I am sorry" Harken said sadly walking away from her as shake suddenly called him to his side.

The battle seemed to go swiftly for Isadora. She ignored the critical
hit that Jerme , the enemy assassin, had hit harken with and left him
severely injured. She picked up the hero crest from the chest alone
and sat petting her horse here tears staining it's mane.

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Max-that was a little angsty o.o;; i usually don't do angst o.o;;

Shake-MAN THAT WAS GREAT!!

Max- --;; OH HARKEN!!!!

Harken-what where oh hey shake COME HERE YOU LOOK DELICOUS!!!

shake-AHHHHHHHH

Isadora- why did you make me mad at hakren-chan max ;;

Erk-rigggghhhttt well r&r

Max-and don't kill me cause i haven't updated anything in forever .

writers block which i'll be writing a humour story on soon o.o;;

max R&R FLAMES WILL BE USED TO COK FOOD for Max,garet,and wil who

are starving

Garet-we'd rather starve than get flames though!