"Excuse me! Move please. Please move! I am on official Titan business!"
I pushed my way through the crowed grounds of the Dreamland themed carnival. I didn't really see how it related to dreams but that's what it was called. Maybe because the person who named it was under the delusion that carnivals are fun.
I looked up to the Ferris wheel and shudder. Don't you people know that carnies assemble these rides in like a matter of hours?!? Dose that sound safe to you?
Carnies. I shuddered at the thought of them. Carnies are way worse than circus freaks. I shuddered again and began my search for Jinx.
Oh god, did that Ferris wheel just wobble? No... I just imagined it. How can anyone go on these rides? So fucking dangerous!! The Ferris wheel was starting to freak me out so I backed away from it, running right into... a mime.
Not the kind of mime that blows up, oh no, that would make things too fun. No, it was the kind of mime that you just want to kill. His face was powdered white and his hair was combed with black dye. He had black eyeliner surrounding his bright blue eyes and his shirt was striped black and white. He rubbed his head from the collision.
"I hate mimes" I informed him very friendlily. He traced a mock tear on his face, but then recognized me as the superhero I am. He grabbed me and pulled me into a huge crowed of people under a huge banner that read 'Dreamland'. The crowd gasped and laughed when they saw me.
"Is that Naomi?"
"What's she doing?"
"Is she apart of the show?"
"She doesn't look to happy about it."
And happy I wasn't. The mime put his hands up and pretended to put me in a box. I glared daggers at him and tried to walk away, but he 'lassoed' me and followed.
"Stop you stupid mime!" I yelled as he pretended that I was very heavy and hard to push. The crowd burst out laughing. The mime put his hands on his hips and silently mocked me, blinking his eyes ditzily.
"Sock him Naomi!" Someone called. How I wished I could, but I couldn't risk an assault charge. I cant just go around socking people. Unless... Are mimes really considered people? I don't think so... More like freaks of nature. Maybe if he comes a little closer I can make it look like an accident.
Suddenly I heard a ripping noise. I looked up and saw the banners ropes breaking. The crowd screamed as the huge banner dropped like a huge blanket on top of the crowd. I used this distraction to escape. I ducked behind one of the food stalls.
"He a friend of yours?" I looked up in surprise to see Jinx, leaning coolly against another food stall. She smirked and I knew instantly who had caused the banner to fall.
"You need to leave," I commanded returning the nasty look. "You cant just cause trouble-"
"Oh is THAT what they told you? Trouble? No. Its not trouble, just a small bit of fun." She upturned her nose at me, "Not that fun is anything YOU would know about." I felt my defiance rise up inside me.
"Trust me witch bitch, I know fun."
"Yes, I'm sure."
"I do!"
"You titans, all walk around like you've got sticks up your asses."
"That's not true." Suddenly she turned her head, "See that guy over there?" I looked and saw a man with a hot dog, shaking a ketchup bottle, trying to get the ketchup to come out.
"Watch," Jinx commanded. She raised a hand lazily and the ketchup exploded out of the bottle and onto the man wife. She called him a pig and slapped him with her purse. I rolled my eyes,
"Armature." I looked to a popcorn cart. I concentrated on the flame that was popping the kernels and intensed it. The heat caused the lid to explode off and sent popcorn raining down. Little boys came running up with her mouths wide open, catching the popcorn in their mouths. Jinx clapped her hands softly.
"Good, but I believe I could do better.
Suddenly, Dreamland became more of a nightmare.
The petting zoo's fence 'broke' and sheep, goats, small horses, and chickens ran wild.
The balls from the basket toss to bounce from the walls, hitting the person who threw them.
A soda machine exploded, drenching everyone in a five-foot radius with sticky soda. Arcade games malfunctioned, spraying game coins at the people playing them.
"Watch this." Jinx said mysteriously. We slunk to a cotton candy machine. A man was standing at the spinning pot, twirling a paper stick gathering the spun sugar. Jinx blinked one eye and the corner of the mans shirt got caught in the spinning pot. He yelped as the machines gears caught his shirt and started to wind him in. His assistant slammed her fist on the safety button and the machine stopped. The mans shirt was almost completely ripped off. Jinx cracked up and I found myself giggling as well. It was kinda funny. And no one was really getting hurt, right?
"Lets ride a ride." Jinx said.
"I can't exactly be seen with you. Remember?" I reminded her. She smiled and pushed me into a costume stall. I immerged seconds later in a long brown trench coat. I took the pigtail holders out of my hair and looked in the mirror. Perfect. No one would know it was me unless they really looked at me. Most people know us by our uniforms; people are less likely to recognize me in normal clothing.
"Perfect," Jinx purred slightly on the purr in perfect. She pulled me away from the costume stall.
"Wait! You have to pay for that!" Called the old lady who ran the stall.
"Oh, of course." I turned to pay the woman, but Jinx giggled insanely and pulled me away.
"You don't have to pay! You save this city every fucking day!! They OWE it to you." That makes sense I suppose. It is just a trench coat. We ran off, I felt a little bad for the poor dear who ran the stall. I'll send the money to them tomorrow. Yeah... that's it
"So, lets ride the Ferris wheel!"
The Farris wheel? Carnies! It's not safe! I shuddered. Jinx cut in front of the entire line of people waiting. Smirking as the people yelled angrily she stood at the very front.
"Hey, aren't you the criminal-" The ticket taker began, but Jinx swore horribly at him and grabbed my hand. She rushed to the nearest seat on the wheel and sat me down next to her.
"Hey! You kids have to get off! I'll call the police!" The ticket taker yelled.
"I think you out of luck." Jinx whispered softly. She lazily blinked one eye and the wheel magically started spinning slowly. I looked to the ground and saw the man looking up at us and yelling. I lost every trace of sense in my mind.
"Make it go faster!" She nodded, smiling and the Ferris wheels controls started sparking and smoking. The wheel gave a lurch as its spinning quickened. Other people on the ride started screaming as the wheel span faster and faster. I screeched in delight and held on to the seat for dear life. Jinx sat calmly, with her arms crossed smiling proudly.
I looked out of the window and saw the ticket man furiously pressing buttons, trying to get the ride to stop. He finally succeeded and started letting people off car by car. People came stumbling out, looking sick. The long line for the Ferris wheel quickly dissolved as people left to look for a safer ride. Jinx looked at me and I nodded.
She held on to me as we silently flew down and scrambled off. I panted, smiling as the adrenalin from the terrifying ride still coursed powerfully in my veins giving me a chillingly hot feeling. Jinx genuinely smiled and admitted that maybe I didn't have such a stick up my ass. Well that's good to know.
We went off in search of other rides to tamper with.
The roller coasters chain broke and went plummeting out of control, unable to be stopped.
The chair lifts cable snapped, sending the chairs zooming down the track.
The bumper cars malfunctioned and stared crashing into one another at tremendous speed.
The speakers that played carnival music mysteriously started playing inappropriate songs over and over. Jinx and I danced to the racy lyrics in the fun house with all the mirrors broken. I skipped as we exited the fun house but Jinx seemed...board.
As we stepped out into the bright sun her eyes widened as she set her sights on a new target. The merry go round.
"Jinx no." I looked at the little children sitting on the horses, going up and down. She ignored me and continued walking in the direction of the kiddy ride.
"Jinx! NO!" I grabbed her arm, "There are little kids on that ride! They could fall off and get hurt."
"I don't care. It will be funny." I looked at her like she was a crazy fugitive escaping from the law. Which she was.
"No, that will NOT be funny." She looked discussed at me.
"Like I said, don't have a sense of humor."
"No, I just know when things stop being funny." I shed my trench coat. "And things have stopped being funny. She looked concerned for a moment, then sneered,
"Aren't you forgetting something little hero? I still got my sights on that merry go whatever. You attack, and those little kids get the ride of their lives."
I looked at the merry go round. I couldn't risk Jinx hexing the ride. There were to many innocent lives at stake. I glared at her, unmoving, daring her to attack.
"Azerath Meterion Zinthos!" An entire soda machine hurled out of nowhere and nearly hit Jinx. She bounded out of the way hissing angrily. Robin and Raven surrounded her, looking confused.
"Naomi! You never came back from the-" Robin narrowed his eyes at Jinx, who stood coolly with one hand on her hip, sneering nastily.
"Naomi? Why did it take you three hours to track down Jinx?" Robin asked suspiciously.
"Ohh, is THAT what she was supposed to be doing?" Jinx voice rang out like bells, "No Robin, your little hero was assisting me with my chaos." Robin turned to stare disbelievingly at me.
"Naomi? What the fuck is she talking about? She's lying right?" I didn't reply.
"Naomi, please tell me she was lying."
"Nope," Said Jinx cheerfully. Suddenly the ticket man from the Ferris wheel rushed up to us yelling,
"There they are! There the two that caused the Ferris wheel to malfunction!" Robin looked to me, and his expression hardened. I was completely shocked.
"No! I didn't! I mean... she did! I mean... I didn't mean too..."
I have never seen Robin angrier in my entire life. He was gritting his teeth and a temple in his forehead was popping out with rage. His hands were clamped into fists at his side and even though I couldn't see Robin's eyes, I knew that they were furious.
"Robin? I... I'm sorry." I said in a small voice. Jinxes face was lit up in glee, hopping that Robin would attack me.
"Get. In. The. Car." Robin hissed, so angry he could hardly get the words out. I backed away from him and cowered in the direction in the parking lot. I looked over my shoulder and saw Robin trying to smooth things over with the Ticket taker man while Raven bent down and picked up my stolen trench coat. I found the car and sat down heavily in the back seat.
How could I have been so stupid? How could I have been so fucking stupid? How could I let Jinx manipulate me like that? I was stupid stupid stupid. I banged my head on the window, hopping that it would kill me. Unfortunately it didn't. Maybe if I turn my head slightly to the right and bang it hard enough...
I heard Ravens and Robins distressed voices outside the car.Raven gently opened the passenger door and sat down, casting a nervous look at Robin who threw open the drivers side of the door and slammed it shut behind him.
Even his driving was angry. Slamming on his brakes at stop signs. Turning corners so sharply I had to put my hand out to keep from falling.
The first few minutes of the ride were silent. Suddenly he pulled over to the side of the road and slammed on the brakes and turned to face me.
"WHAT THE FUCK WERE YOU THINKING?!?!"
"I... I guess I want."
"No shit!! What the HELL would possess you to pull that kind of shit?!?!" I felt sick with shame. I hung my head, refusing to look at Robin.
"It just... started out so innocent. At fist it was just making a ketchup bottle squirt ketchup on a lady. Then Jinx slowly made it worse and I didn't realize it. I'm sorry."
"Saying you're sorry doesn't change a god damn thing."
He looked to my face and sighed and rubbed his face tiredly. He looked so old. Like someone who had to grow up in too soon. Having to become an adult before you were even were a child. He looked at me with the face of a tired old man who had already seen enough pain for three lifetimes.
"I just don't know what to do with you Naomi."
I gasped, thinking he was suggesting throwing me off the team.
"No, no, no, no." Raven said quickly, reassuring me I was still on the team, "But Naomi, I...just...don't know what to think. I want to defend you somehow but I just don't know how."
I felt like I was going to throw up. I didn't deserve her to defend me. I don't deserve anything.
"I just don't know what to do with you." Robin murmured soft as he started up the car and took to the road once more. "I just don't know how to make you see." All was quiet for a few minutes.
"We had to let Jinx go, you know."
"What?"
"It would have been hypocritical to send her to jail and not to the same for you."
"I'll go to jail!" I was desperate for a punishment. Anything so Robin could forgive me. Robin shook his head.
"We can't afford that kind of publicity. I could smooth over things with the carnival workers, but a Titan doing jail time could ruin our image forever." He sighed, again looking old,
"But Naomi? Do you understand? I don't know what to do. I can punish you. I'm not your father. I don't have the authority to ground you or whatever. I have to be able to rely on you to be able to control yourself. I know that's a lot to ask, for you to give up your childhood, but we cannot be children; we have to act like adults. It's expected."
Then the anger flared up in him again.
"What if you had hurt someone?!?! What if an old man had a heart attack on that Ferris wheel you and your little "pal" fucked with?!?! Would you be having fun then?!?"
My insides felt crumbly. I had let everyone down and I don't know how to make it better.
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StArRy- kinda a sad chapter, but I felt like I needed a chapter to prove that Naomi is still only human, and every human makes mistakes. A huge mistake, but I could see how Jinx could trick her into coming along for the chaos. I tried REALLY hard to get Jinxes personality right. But it's hard; she hasn't had a lot of airtime.
Now to answer some review questions!! Ta da!!
Raven The Sorceress- no, I don't think there going to be sex in it. I'm not planning any anyway. And yeah, I kinda left the part open where Naomi was going home to talk to BB, but yeah they started going out after that.
NavynBabyBlueSuedeShoes- I just wanted to say that your review was really nice. Really long and really nice. That's the best kind!!! I'm glad you understand my style of writing (someone has too!!) And I'm glad you like my story! It just made my day!
boogalaga- Wow. I wrote the dream and I didn't really think about it, but it dose kinda symbolize her life. WOW! Here's to the observant!
Marshmello Da Strawberry Cow- What a very interesting name.
The Anime kid and Chaos Girl- what? What monkey?
Raven A. Star-still reviewing for every chapter! Yay!
I pushed my way through the crowed grounds of the Dreamland themed carnival. I didn't really see how it related to dreams but that's what it was called. Maybe because the person who named it was under the delusion that carnivals are fun.
I looked up to the Ferris wheel and shudder. Don't you people know that carnies assemble these rides in like a matter of hours?!? Dose that sound safe to you?
Carnies. I shuddered at the thought of them. Carnies are way worse than circus freaks. I shuddered again and began my search for Jinx.
Oh god, did that Ferris wheel just wobble? No... I just imagined it. How can anyone go on these rides? So fucking dangerous!! The Ferris wheel was starting to freak me out so I backed away from it, running right into... a mime.
Not the kind of mime that blows up, oh no, that would make things too fun. No, it was the kind of mime that you just want to kill. His face was powdered white and his hair was combed with black dye. He had black eyeliner surrounding his bright blue eyes and his shirt was striped black and white. He rubbed his head from the collision.
"I hate mimes" I informed him very friendlily. He traced a mock tear on his face, but then recognized me as the superhero I am. He grabbed me and pulled me into a huge crowed of people under a huge banner that read 'Dreamland'. The crowd gasped and laughed when they saw me.
"Is that Naomi?"
"What's she doing?"
"Is she apart of the show?"
"She doesn't look to happy about it."
And happy I wasn't. The mime put his hands up and pretended to put me in a box. I glared daggers at him and tried to walk away, but he 'lassoed' me and followed.
"Stop you stupid mime!" I yelled as he pretended that I was very heavy and hard to push. The crowd burst out laughing. The mime put his hands on his hips and silently mocked me, blinking his eyes ditzily.
"Sock him Naomi!" Someone called. How I wished I could, but I couldn't risk an assault charge. I cant just go around socking people. Unless... Are mimes really considered people? I don't think so... More like freaks of nature. Maybe if he comes a little closer I can make it look like an accident.
Suddenly I heard a ripping noise. I looked up and saw the banners ropes breaking. The crowd screamed as the huge banner dropped like a huge blanket on top of the crowd. I used this distraction to escape. I ducked behind one of the food stalls.
"He a friend of yours?" I looked up in surprise to see Jinx, leaning coolly against another food stall. She smirked and I knew instantly who had caused the banner to fall.
"You need to leave," I commanded returning the nasty look. "You cant just cause trouble-"
"Oh is THAT what they told you? Trouble? No. Its not trouble, just a small bit of fun." She upturned her nose at me, "Not that fun is anything YOU would know about." I felt my defiance rise up inside me.
"Trust me witch bitch, I know fun."
"Yes, I'm sure."
"I do!"
"You titans, all walk around like you've got sticks up your asses."
"That's not true." Suddenly she turned her head, "See that guy over there?" I looked and saw a man with a hot dog, shaking a ketchup bottle, trying to get the ketchup to come out.
"Watch," Jinx commanded. She raised a hand lazily and the ketchup exploded out of the bottle and onto the man wife. She called him a pig and slapped him with her purse. I rolled my eyes,
"Armature." I looked to a popcorn cart. I concentrated on the flame that was popping the kernels and intensed it. The heat caused the lid to explode off and sent popcorn raining down. Little boys came running up with her mouths wide open, catching the popcorn in their mouths. Jinx clapped her hands softly.
"Good, but I believe I could do better.
Suddenly, Dreamland became more of a nightmare.
The petting zoo's fence 'broke' and sheep, goats, small horses, and chickens ran wild.
The balls from the basket toss to bounce from the walls, hitting the person who threw them.
A soda machine exploded, drenching everyone in a five-foot radius with sticky soda. Arcade games malfunctioned, spraying game coins at the people playing them.
"Watch this." Jinx said mysteriously. We slunk to a cotton candy machine. A man was standing at the spinning pot, twirling a paper stick gathering the spun sugar. Jinx blinked one eye and the corner of the mans shirt got caught in the spinning pot. He yelped as the machines gears caught his shirt and started to wind him in. His assistant slammed her fist on the safety button and the machine stopped. The mans shirt was almost completely ripped off. Jinx cracked up and I found myself giggling as well. It was kinda funny. And no one was really getting hurt, right?
"Lets ride a ride." Jinx said.
"I can't exactly be seen with you. Remember?" I reminded her. She smiled and pushed me into a costume stall. I immerged seconds later in a long brown trench coat. I took the pigtail holders out of my hair and looked in the mirror. Perfect. No one would know it was me unless they really looked at me. Most people know us by our uniforms; people are less likely to recognize me in normal clothing.
"Perfect," Jinx purred slightly on the purr in perfect. She pulled me away from the costume stall.
"Wait! You have to pay for that!" Called the old lady who ran the stall.
"Oh, of course." I turned to pay the woman, but Jinx giggled insanely and pulled me away.
"You don't have to pay! You save this city every fucking day!! They OWE it to you." That makes sense I suppose. It is just a trench coat. We ran off, I felt a little bad for the poor dear who ran the stall. I'll send the money to them tomorrow. Yeah... that's it
"So, lets ride the Ferris wheel!"
The Farris wheel? Carnies! It's not safe! I shuddered. Jinx cut in front of the entire line of people waiting. Smirking as the people yelled angrily she stood at the very front.
"Hey, aren't you the criminal-" The ticket taker began, but Jinx swore horribly at him and grabbed my hand. She rushed to the nearest seat on the wheel and sat me down next to her.
"Hey! You kids have to get off! I'll call the police!" The ticket taker yelled.
"I think you out of luck." Jinx whispered softly. She lazily blinked one eye and the wheel magically started spinning slowly. I looked to the ground and saw the man looking up at us and yelling. I lost every trace of sense in my mind.
"Make it go faster!" She nodded, smiling and the Ferris wheels controls started sparking and smoking. The wheel gave a lurch as its spinning quickened. Other people on the ride started screaming as the wheel span faster and faster. I screeched in delight and held on to the seat for dear life. Jinx sat calmly, with her arms crossed smiling proudly.
I looked out of the window and saw the ticket man furiously pressing buttons, trying to get the ride to stop. He finally succeeded and started letting people off car by car. People came stumbling out, looking sick. The long line for the Ferris wheel quickly dissolved as people left to look for a safer ride. Jinx looked at me and I nodded.
She held on to me as we silently flew down and scrambled off. I panted, smiling as the adrenalin from the terrifying ride still coursed powerfully in my veins giving me a chillingly hot feeling. Jinx genuinely smiled and admitted that maybe I didn't have such a stick up my ass. Well that's good to know.
We went off in search of other rides to tamper with.
The roller coasters chain broke and went plummeting out of control, unable to be stopped.
The chair lifts cable snapped, sending the chairs zooming down the track.
The bumper cars malfunctioned and stared crashing into one another at tremendous speed.
The speakers that played carnival music mysteriously started playing inappropriate songs over and over. Jinx and I danced to the racy lyrics in the fun house with all the mirrors broken. I skipped as we exited the fun house but Jinx seemed...board.
As we stepped out into the bright sun her eyes widened as she set her sights on a new target. The merry go round.
"Jinx no." I looked at the little children sitting on the horses, going up and down. She ignored me and continued walking in the direction of the kiddy ride.
"Jinx! NO!" I grabbed her arm, "There are little kids on that ride! They could fall off and get hurt."
"I don't care. It will be funny." I looked at her like she was a crazy fugitive escaping from the law. Which she was.
"No, that will NOT be funny." She looked discussed at me.
"Like I said, don't have a sense of humor."
"No, I just know when things stop being funny." I shed my trench coat. "And things have stopped being funny. She looked concerned for a moment, then sneered,
"Aren't you forgetting something little hero? I still got my sights on that merry go whatever. You attack, and those little kids get the ride of their lives."
I looked at the merry go round. I couldn't risk Jinx hexing the ride. There were to many innocent lives at stake. I glared at her, unmoving, daring her to attack.
"Azerath Meterion Zinthos!" An entire soda machine hurled out of nowhere and nearly hit Jinx. She bounded out of the way hissing angrily. Robin and Raven surrounded her, looking confused.
"Naomi! You never came back from the-" Robin narrowed his eyes at Jinx, who stood coolly with one hand on her hip, sneering nastily.
"Naomi? Why did it take you three hours to track down Jinx?" Robin asked suspiciously.
"Ohh, is THAT what she was supposed to be doing?" Jinx voice rang out like bells, "No Robin, your little hero was assisting me with my chaos." Robin turned to stare disbelievingly at me.
"Naomi? What the fuck is she talking about? She's lying right?" I didn't reply.
"Naomi, please tell me she was lying."
"Nope," Said Jinx cheerfully. Suddenly the ticket man from the Ferris wheel rushed up to us yelling,
"There they are! There the two that caused the Ferris wheel to malfunction!" Robin looked to me, and his expression hardened. I was completely shocked.
"No! I didn't! I mean... she did! I mean... I didn't mean too..."
I have never seen Robin angrier in my entire life. He was gritting his teeth and a temple in his forehead was popping out with rage. His hands were clamped into fists at his side and even though I couldn't see Robin's eyes, I knew that they were furious.
"Robin? I... I'm sorry." I said in a small voice. Jinxes face was lit up in glee, hopping that Robin would attack me.
"Get. In. The. Car." Robin hissed, so angry he could hardly get the words out. I backed away from him and cowered in the direction in the parking lot. I looked over my shoulder and saw Robin trying to smooth things over with the Ticket taker man while Raven bent down and picked up my stolen trench coat. I found the car and sat down heavily in the back seat.
How could I have been so stupid? How could I have been so fucking stupid? How could I let Jinx manipulate me like that? I was stupid stupid stupid. I banged my head on the window, hopping that it would kill me. Unfortunately it didn't. Maybe if I turn my head slightly to the right and bang it hard enough...
I heard Ravens and Robins distressed voices outside the car.Raven gently opened the passenger door and sat down, casting a nervous look at Robin who threw open the drivers side of the door and slammed it shut behind him.
Even his driving was angry. Slamming on his brakes at stop signs. Turning corners so sharply I had to put my hand out to keep from falling.
The first few minutes of the ride were silent. Suddenly he pulled over to the side of the road and slammed on the brakes and turned to face me.
"WHAT THE FUCK WERE YOU THINKING?!?!"
"I... I guess I want."
"No shit!! What the HELL would possess you to pull that kind of shit?!?!" I felt sick with shame. I hung my head, refusing to look at Robin.
"It just... started out so innocent. At fist it was just making a ketchup bottle squirt ketchup on a lady. Then Jinx slowly made it worse and I didn't realize it. I'm sorry."
"Saying you're sorry doesn't change a god damn thing."
He looked to my face and sighed and rubbed his face tiredly. He looked so old. Like someone who had to grow up in too soon. Having to become an adult before you were even were a child. He looked at me with the face of a tired old man who had already seen enough pain for three lifetimes.
"I just don't know what to do with you Naomi."
I gasped, thinking he was suggesting throwing me off the team.
"No, no, no, no." Raven said quickly, reassuring me I was still on the team, "But Naomi, I...just...don't know what to think. I want to defend you somehow but I just don't know how."
I felt like I was going to throw up. I didn't deserve her to defend me. I don't deserve anything.
"I just don't know what to do with you." Robin murmured soft as he started up the car and took to the road once more. "I just don't know how to make you see." All was quiet for a few minutes.
"We had to let Jinx go, you know."
"What?"
"It would have been hypocritical to send her to jail and not to the same for you."
"I'll go to jail!" I was desperate for a punishment. Anything so Robin could forgive me. Robin shook his head.
"We can't afford that kind of publicity. I could smooth over things with the carnival workers, but a Titan doing jail time could ruin our image forever." He sighed, again looking old,
"But Naomi? Do you understand? I don't know what to do. I can punish you. I'm not your father. I don't have the authority to ground you or whatever. I have to be able to rely on you to be able to control yourself. I know that's a lot to ask, for you to give up your childhood, but we cannot be children; we have to act like adults. It's expected."
Then the anger flared up in him again.
"What if you had hurt someone?!?! What if an old man had a heart attack on that Ferris wheel you and your little "pal" fucked with?!?! Would you be having fun then?!?"
My insides felt crumbly. I had let everyone down and I don't know how to make it better.
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StArRy- kinda a sad chapter, but I felt like I needed a chapter to prove that Naomi is still only human, and every human makes mistakes. A huge mistake, but I could see how Jinx could trick her into coming along for the chaos. I tried REALLY hard to get Jinxes personality right. But it's hard; she hasn't had a lot of airtime.
Now to answer some review questions!! Ta da!!
Raven The Sorceress- no, I don't think there going to be sex in it. I'm not planning any anyway. And yeah, I kinda left the part open where Naomi was going home to talk to BB, but yeah they started going out after that.
NavynBabyBlueSuedeShoes- I just wanted to say that your review was really nice. Really long and really nice. That's the best kind!!! I'm glad you understand my style of writing (someone has too!!) And I'm glad you like my story! It just made my day!
boogalaga- Wow. I wrote the dream and I didn't really think about it, but it dose kinda symbolize her life. WOW! Here's to the observant!
Marshmello Da Strawberry Cow- What a very interesting name.
The Anime kid and Chaos Girl- what? What monkey?
Raven A. Star-still reviewing for every chapter! Yay!
