Disclaimer: I do not own Shaman King
I like you to know that this story is being reedited, as the grammar and content as well as some of the spelling is very shocking and nearly gave me a heart attack when i reread it about two years after i made it "
I also decided to delete the Japanese words as they don't seem to have an effect on the story whether they're there or not.
I can post the old one because I will save the old version as it was the original even though it was terrible cries
The way I do it is, I edit the chapter and click Save as so that I have two version the new one called, Anna's sister (1), Anna's sister2 (1) so on so forth
I hope you enjoy it, this fanfic was created….like…..I think 4 years ago?
And yes I know the character is a Mary Sue, I finally had the chance to update the newer chapters after reading a very good constructive critism at a lil site that really good and amusing at talking about marysues in Shaman King, (no offense to the creator, I really did enjoy the critism and other things because alot of them are quite true) that reminded me of my terrible grammer and my need to quickly update the chapters with ones i have "revamped" about a year ago, after that no more Anna's Sister, consider the part 3 officially incomplete I rather spend my time writing for self inserts at or actually fics, though this story is a marysue, it is my first fanfic ever so it has this…somewhat special place in my heart
Manta arrived at the house entrance panting heavily. As usual Yoh came out to greet him with Ren, who was staying over, trailing behind him. Yoh was puzzled at the strange expression of his friend's face, of course it was usual for Manta to look shock and run whenever he meets a ghost that materializes out of nowhere, but this time, it was different"Hello, you look like you just seen a ghost." Yoh commented, smiling down. Manta almost wanted to glare at his –extremely relaxed- friend. "Very funny Yoh-kun."
"Sorry so what happened?"
"Something almost scary." The short boy replied
"You got a C in your tutorial class?"
"No."
"Then what?" Yoh asked again, perplexed, surely there couldn't be anything more strange than that.
"While going to your home, I realized that I was almost late and started running and you know I wouldn't want to keep Anna waiting, but I must have gotten really distracted because I crashed into someone without knowing they were there."
Yoh smiled gently, "Now how could you have done that? It's more likely, you'll see someone long before they see you, because you know…you're small and short." Manta groaned, "Yoh-kuuuuuuuuun." He whined. Yoh gave a short laugh, "Okay, sorry Manta, go on."
"The girl, turned around, asked me warmly with a apologetic smile, whether I was alright or not, she gave me her hand and helped me up, apologized again and went off."
"And?" asked Ren.
"That's it." Manta answered sheepishly, of course he had not explained the whole situation to them, so at the current moment, the "something strange happening" seemed abit pathetic.
"That's it!?" Ren growled loudly. Manta sweatdropped, "No there's more…"
"That was what was so amazing!? That was pathetic!"
"Ahh let him finish, Ren."
"Ehehehe…..well…. you know Anna right?"
"Yea?"
"She doesn't apologize, she doesn't help, she knocks me down and she rarely smiles right?"
"Yea."
"Well….it was her that I crashed into."
Silence realmed the front yard.
At the Crow Cemetery
Amidamaru sighed as he looked over to his friends, Mosuke and Bason, still asleep from drinking far too much sake(rice wine), apparently Yoh decided to offer them a treat while Anna's back was turned. Amidamaru, on the other hand, thought that was a very bad choice of celebration of something that didn't exist. He guessed that it was only Yoh that thought celebrating a clear night sky was reasonable.Unfortunately, a clear night sky is very frequent.
His quiet thoughts were interrupted by a quiet scuffling of shoes on the paved stones of the cemetery. He turned around. He almost wanted to disperse right here and there, the (almost) dreaded fiancée of
"Miss Anna, why are you here?." He stuttered. Yoh wasn't here, so why was Anna?
The girl turned around and faced Amidamaru. She seemed surprised that the spirit was even there. "Sorry, you must have mistaken me." She replied softly, grinning somewhat knowledgably at the samurai spirit. "I'm not Anna, but it was nice meeting you, even though it has been only a brief 30 seconds." Just as quickly and silently she came, she disappeared from the spot.
Amidamaru looked at the empty area where the girl stood only moments before, in confusion, he must have been rusty at reading facial expression, surely it was just a girl that just looked extremely like the ice queen. What was he thinking, Anna may have developed a nice personality.
"This is interesting," Amidamaru thought amusingly to himself. A loud snore reminded of his first priority. "I'll have to wake them, it's almost time to go back. Anna is not going to like this."
Hope you like the revised version of Anna Sister
