celwriter: Thank you to all of the people who have reviewed. It helps me to know that I am not the only person who believes that my story is original and creative. It also helps me to presevere in my efforts to continue writingf chapters.
But enough with the cheesy stuff, here's the next chapter.
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Chapter 16
"Hello, Mr. Rainey."
"I told you to leave, Shooter," Mort firmly replied.
"I told you that I'd come back once you'd cooled off. I've come to warn you about Miss Rainey."
"Now, I told you not to hurt her."
"And I won' without your permission, but she's gonna take you for granted. She's already thinkin' bout leavin'." Mort thought about the way Cel had looked at Richard. "You even saw how much she liked that Depp kid." Mort shook his head.
"I told you to leave and never come back."
"I don know if ya really wanna do that, Mister Rainey. `Cuz when Miss Rainey leaves you won have nothin'."
"She will not leave me, Shooter, but I hope you will."
`Oh, she'll leave, alright, and you and I both know it. She and Richard or some other guy. You're jealous, Mister Rainey, just like you were jealous of Ted. If you couldn have Amy, then neither could he. Why don you do the same with Miss Rainey?"
The plan seemed great to Mort at first. He loved Celeste and was jealous of Richard. All he had to do was make sure that Richard or any other guy ever got her. But neither would he. The idea struck him, he wasn't trusting Cel and if he really loved her, shouldn't trust her?
"No, Shooter, I love Cel and I trust her," he told Shooter, "And I don't trust you!"
"You trusted Amy, didn you? Look what she did to you."
"Celeste is different. She loves me back."
"Does she? How do you know that she isn like Amy and that Richard isn like Ted?" He paused and Mort did not respond. "Ya don, Mister Rainey. Now listen to me."
"No. I think that I'll give Cel the benefit of the doubt. There is a chance that she's not like Amy and I'll give her that chance."
"Alright, Mister Rainey, but if you go'a changing your mind, I'll be here." With that, Shooter left. Mort sat outside a while longer, thinking. Cel wasn't like that, was she?
Meanwhile, inside, Cel began work on part two of her plan.
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celwriter: Will Mort trust her? I know, but you don't so keep r&ring.
But enough with the cheesy stuff, here's the next chapter.
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Chapter 16
"Hello, Mr. Rainey."
"I told you to leave, Shooter," Mort firmly replied.
"I told you that I'd come back once you'd cooled off. I've come to warn you about Miss Rainey."
"Now, I told you not to hurt her."
"And I won' without your permission, but she's gonna take you for granted. She's already thinkin' bout leavin'." Mort thought about the way Cel had looked at Richard. "You even saw how much she liked that Depp kid." Mort shook his head.
"I told you to leave and never come back."
"I don know if ya really wanna do that, Mister Rainey. `Cuz when Miss Rainey leaves you won have nothin'."
"She will not leave me, Shooter, but I hope you will."
`Oh, she'll leave, alright, and you and I both know it. She and Richard or some other guy. You're jealous, Mister Rainey, just like you were jealous of Ted. If you couldn have Amy, then neither could he. Why don you do the same with Miss Rainey?"
The plan seemed great to Mort at first. He loved Celeste and was jealous of Richard. All he had to do was make sure that Richard or any other guy ever got her. But neither would he. The idea struck him, he wasn't trusting Cel and if he really loved her, shouldn't trust her?
"No, Shooter, I love Cel and I trust her," he told Shooter, "And I don't trust you!"
"You trusted Amy, didn you? Look what she did to you."
"Celeste is different. She loves me back."
"Does she? How do you know that she isn like Amy and that Richard isn like Ted?" He paused and Mort did not respond. "Ya don, Mister Rainey. Now listen to me."
"No. I think that I'll give Cel the benefit of the doubt. There is a chance that she's not like Amy and I'll give her that chance."
"Alright, Mister Rainey, but if you go'a changing your mind, I'll be here." With that, Shooter left. Mort sat outside a while longer, thinking. Cel wasn't like that, was she?
Meanwhile, inside, Cel began work on part two of her plan.
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celwriter: Will Mort trust her? I know, but you don't so keep r&ring.
